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wah wah...bohat khoob. ...................
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dono ashaar behad hi gehre aur inter-related haiN jo har aam insaan se juDe bayaanaat karte haiN.............

dheroN dheroN daad.................
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beti ke janam pe na ho pashemaaN!
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janam : birth
Waaaaaahhhhhh!!!!! kya baat hai Hassan bhai...ek kidwi sachhai hai ye....dheron daad




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ek adnaa si koshish... meri bhii

arey insaan! tu kitnaa hai pashemaan?
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pashemaanoN meN uNkaa kya hisaab hai
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(*commoner, aam aadmii; **hidden, closed behind veil)

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9th September 2014, 04:34 AM
Zarraa sahab ,Aadeil sahab aur Hassan bhai aap teeno ka tah-e-dil se shukrguzar hun aap ne baada word based mere last sher par itni acchhii clarifications di aur hum kam ilmi logon ko seekhne ka mauka diya ...thanx a lot




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"pashemaaN ho ke apne haal par tu roye,
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9th September 2014, 09:18 AM
karo zindagi apni sar-bulandh* iis tarah se saraa-e-faani** main

k farishte bhi hojaye pashemaan*** aagosh-e-maut main lene se pehle

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karo zindagi apni sar-bulandh* iis tarah se saraa-e-faani** main
k farishte bhi hojaye pashemaan*** aagosh-e-maut main lene se pehle
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karo zindagi apni sar-bulandh* iis tarah se saraa-e-faani** main
k farishte bhi hojaye pashemaan*** aagosh-e-maut main lene se pehle
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wahhhh......aapki urdu par pakad bahut acchi hai

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waaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!! Di,

dilse nikle iis jazbaat pe hamaare dil se dheroN dheroN daad.......

duaaoN ke saath....
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Waaaahhhhhhh! umda sher adil...............

Welcome to fusooN di bahot achcha laga aapko yahaN dekhkar

Waaaahhhh! di bahot khoob zabardast sher se shuruwat kii aapne...dheron daad.

Shukriya Naaz...aap sab ne meri himmat badai hai

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Shukriya Anant ji...aap sab se housla pakar accha lag rha hai..ab aage bhi kuch likhne ki himmat aayegi

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aadaab !

sab se pehly to ma'zrat keh binaa ijjazat madakhlat ker rahaa hoN kiyoN keh na to mai shayar hoN or naa hi koi adeeb , lughat se lafz dhoondh ker appke saamny pesh ker rahaa hoN ho sakta hai appki koi madad ho jaaey

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Mujeebsaab,

ye SDC ek baRi si open University hai aur hum sab unke chhatr aur phir ye to sabhii kii classroom hai to aap ka haqq bantaa hai yahaaN aa kar apnii raye denaa .......

hameN to achchhaa lagaa ki aapne iis savaal pe apnii opinion dii aur ye hamaare liye ek aur lafz ko sikhne aur samajhne ka zaryaa banaa

aapne aapke ilm ke zariye behad hi khubsurat tarike se karam aur karm ke maanii sajhaaye haiN....

maine bhii ek lughat se hi iis lafz ko istemaal kiya tha... aur vahaaN usske maanii 'deed' or 'act' diya gayaa tha , vaise maiN yahaaN pe lafz kaaj ka bhii istemaal kar saktaa hooN jisse sher meN koii bhii baRi tabdirii nahiN hogii...

Hassanbhai aur Mujeebsaab,
aap dono kaa bahot bahot shukriya....

aur Mujeebsaab ye pathshalaa jitnii hamaarii hai usse kaii guna aapkii bhii hai, toh maazraat khwaah ho ke hameN sharminda mat kijiye.... hum to chaahte haiN ki iis thread pe zyaadaa se zyaadaa members aate raheN aur iis qadr apne ilm se iise roshan karte raheN......

duaaoN ke saath,
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"pashemaaN ho ke apne haal par tu roye,
tuje apni ek ek be-waffai jab yaad aaye..!!
-Sunita Virender
waaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!
di,

aapne aate hi ek se ek jauhar hameN nazraane ke taur pe pesh kiye....

bahot hi achchhaa lagaa ki aap ne yahaaN sirkat kii......

aur urdu to di hamaari bhii koii khaas nahi hai

bas thoRi bahot zubaani aati hai aur baaki toh lughat zindaabaad

bas yuN hi aati rahiyegaa aur nazraane lekar...


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9th September 2014, 10:21 AM
lafz karm ko tabdiil karke 'kaaj' kiyaa hai......
raaye kii ummeed rahegiii
arey insaan! tu kitnaa hai pashemaan?
kare bad* kaaj** jab bhii, zudd-pashemaan***?
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Waaaahhhhhhh! umda sher adil...............
Ananthji & Naaz,

aap dono kaa bahot bahot shukriya, iis hausla afzaaee ke liye....

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Hassanbhai
daad ke liye phirse shukriya
ab lafz karam ke maanee jahaaN tak maiN samjhaa hooN to wo ehsaan hai jaise rehmo karam karnaa. Aur karm ka matlab hai act or deed. Ye meri Urdu kii kam aqlii bhii ho sakti haiN. Vaise aise masle uTHaate rahiyega taaki hamaare ilm meN muzaafaa hota rahe
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aadaab !

sab se pehly to ma'zrat keh binaa ijjazat madakhlat ker rahaa hoN kiyoN keh na to mai shayar hoN or naa hi koi adeeb , lughat se lafz dhoondh ker appke saamny pesh ker rahaa hoN ho sakta hai appki koi madad ho jaaey

karam = sakhawat , bakhshish , naik amal , sharafat

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karm = amal , faSl , naSeeb , Qismat
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Mujeebsaab,

ye SDC ek baRi si open University hai aur hum sab unke chhatr aur phir ye to sabhii kii classroom hai to aap ka haqq bantaa hai yahaaN aa kar apnii raye denaa .......

hameN to achchhaa lagaa ki aapne iis savaal pe apnii opinion dii aur ye hamaare liye ek aur lafz ko sikhne aur samajhne ka zaryaa banaa

aapne aapke ilm ke zariye behad hi khubsurat tarike se karam aur karm ke maanii sajhaaye haiN....

maine bhii ek lughat se hi iis lafz ko istemaal kiya tha... aur vahaaN usske maanii 'deed' or 'act' diya gayaa tha , vaise maiN yahaaN pe lafz kaaj ka bhii istemaal kar saktaa hooN jisse sher meN koii bhii baRi tabdirii nahiN hogii...

Hassanbhai aur Mujeebsaab,
aap dono kaa bahot bahot shukriya....

aur Mujeebsaab ye pathshalaa jitnii hamaarii hai usse kaii guna aapkii bhii hai, toh maazraat khwaah ho ke hameN sharminda mat kijiye.... hum to chaahte haiN ki iis thread pe zyaadaa se zyaadaa members aate raheN aur iis qadr apne ilm se iise roshan karte raheN......

duaaoN ke saath,
Adil
Thankyou Mujeeb bhai... thankyou Adil bhai....

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karo zindagi apni sar-bulandh* iis tarah se saraa-e-faani** main
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*glorious
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Waaaaaahhhhhh! umda, ajkal jo female foeticide horaha hai bahot hi dukh ki baat hai betiyaaN to roshnii hoti haiN ghar ki barkat hoti haiN pata nahiN maa baap kaise itne berehem hojate hain duniya meiN aaney ke pehle hi in nanhi kaliyoN ko masal detey haiN bahot khoob sher kaha PS
Naaz.. tum ne aik bohat hi ghamgheen muDay per baat
shuru ki hai..... mujhe to sun ke hi dukh hota hai, loG pata nahi aisa karte
kese haiN... bas Allah se dua hai ke un nanhi kaliyoN ki hifazat kare (ameen)

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"pashemaaN ho ke apne haal par tu roye,
tuje apni ek ek be-waffai jab yaad aaye..!!
-Sunita Virender
waaaaah! waaah! Baaji.... 2 misroN meiN aap ne poori
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waqai qaabil-e-tehseen hai Baajii... be-had umdaaH.. be-had khoob...

Aagay bhi meHfil-e-fusoon-e-alfaaz meiN aap ke jalwoN ka muntazir rahooN ga!

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Waaaaaahhhhhh!!!!! kya baat hai Hassan bhai...ek kidwi sachhai hai ye....dheron daad
Sir bohat bohat shukriyaaH pazeraayi ke liye .... I'm obliged!

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Zarraa sahab ,Aadeil sahab aur Hassan bhai aap teeno ka tah-e-dil se shukrguzar hun aap ne baada word based mere last sher par itni acchhii clarifications di aur hum kam ilmi logon ko seekhne ka mauka diya ...thanx a lot
anything for you boss..............! stay blessed.

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karo zindagi apni sar-bulandh* iis tarah se saraa-e-faani** main
k farishte bhi hojaye pashemaan*** aagosh-e-maut main lene se pehle
*glorious
**mortal world
***embarrassed
waaaahhh! Ananth sir.... bohat khoob...
lekin maiN aap ke sher ko iss taraH lonH ga ke bandaH iss taraH zindagi
guzaaray ke saray us ke husn-e-akhlaaq ke taabay hooN!.. aur woH hur
dil azeez ho........ insanooN meiN bhi aur farishtoN meiN bhi... aur
jahaN tak meri kam-aqli hai farishtay pashemaaN nahi hotay.....
socch aacchi hai lekin thodi si alteration honi chaiye.. farishta lafz
istemaal na kareN...... mere hisaab se! aur aagay aap behtar
samjhtay haiN.....

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9th September 2014, 10:45 AM
Ghalibsaab ke ek sher kii buniyaad per niche mera sher....
rahe kyuN mera qaatil bhii pashemaan apnii harkat par
ye khuuN hai behte rehta hai kabhii dil se kabhii sar se

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lafz karm ko tabdiil karke 'kaaj' kiyaa hai......
raaye kii ummeed rahegiii
arey insaan! tu kitnaa hai pashemaan?
kare bad* kaaj** jab bhii, zudd-pashemaan***?
(*buraa; **kaam; ***repenting too soon)
now sounds good....

wahhh bohat aaalaaa... dherooN daad ...

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Ghalibsaab ke ek sher kii buniyaad per niche mera sher....
rahe kyuN mera qaatil bhii pashemaan apnii harkat par
ye khuuN hai behte rehta hai kabhii dil se kabhii sar se

--Adil

Darey kyuN mera qaatil kya rakhaa hai uskii gardan par
ye khuuN jo chashm-e-tar se umr-bhar yuN dum-ba-dum nikle

-- Mirza 'Ghalib' saab


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rahe kyuN mera qaatil bhii pashemaan apnii harkat par
ye khuuN hai behte rehta hai kabhii dil se kabhii sar se

--Adil
waaaahh! Adil bhai... kia taanay baanay bunay haiN..
Bohat umdaaH... aur ghalib saheb ki tarz pe sher kehna waqai lutf deta hai!
iss meiN koi shak nahi...... dherooN daad is qaabil-e-daad sher ke liye....

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karo zindagi apni sar-bulandh* iis tarah se saraa-e-faani** main

k farishte bhi hojaye pashemaan*** aagosh-e-maut main lene se pehle

*glorious
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***embarrassed
Agree with hassan sahab...regarding this sher

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Ghalibsaab ke ek sher kii buniyaad per niche mera sher....
rahe kyuN mera qaatil bhii pashemaan apnii harkat par
ye khuuN hai behte rehta hai kabhii dil se kabhii sar se

--Adil

wah wah...bohat khoob ..ek se badhker ek sher hain...

Subhan Allah. ..superb



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Ek adna sa sher meri taraf se

Tere darde dil ka sabab ban chuki huuN
Mohabbat pe apni pashemaan huN meiN



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waaaahhh! Ananth sir.... bohat khoob...
lekin maiN aap ke sher ko iss taraH lonH ga ke bandaH iss taraH zindagi
guzaaray ke saray us ke husn-e-akhlaaq ke taabay hooN!.. aur woH hur
dil azeez ho........ insanooN meiN bhi aur farishtoN meiN bhi... aur
jahaN tak meri kam-aqli hai farishtay pashemaaN nahi hotay.....
socch aacchi hai lekin thodi si alteration honi chaiye.. farishta lafz
istemaal na kareN...... mere hisaab se! aur aagay aap behtar
samjhtay haiN.....
hmmmmmmmmmmmm.....
ye lafz 'farishte' aur unkaa pashemaan hona mujhe bhii khatak rahaa tha ....

par uspe kuchh aur raaye dene se pehle maiN Ananthji kii baat samajhnaa chaahtaa tha jo wo yahaaN bayaan karnaa chaahte haiN.

chaliye hassanbhai, aapne ab jab mudda uTHaa hi liyaa hai to, Ananthji se pehle iiskii interpretation dekh lete haiN.. shaayad unkii zehn meN kuch aisii baat ho jo hameN na samajh aayee ho ?

Toh Ananthji, aap ko kathgare meN aanaa paRegaa


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Ek adna sa sher meri taraf se

Tere darde dil ka sabab ban chuki huuN
Mohabbat pe apni pashemaaN huN meiN
waaaahhh! Zainy saheba.......
be-had umdaaH khayaal hai .. aur kia khoob adaaigi hai.. dherooN daad!

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now sounds good....

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waaaahh! Adil bhai... kia taanay baanay bunay haiN..
Bohat umdaaH... aur ghalib saheb ki tarz pe sher kehna waqai lutf deta hai!
iss meiN koi shak nahi...... dherooN daad is qaabil-e-daad sher ke liye....
...............
Hassanbhai,

aapka shukriya jo aapko hamaare dono aashaar behad pasand aaye.....

khush rahiye.. aabaad rahiye... aur milte rahiye
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Agree with hassan sahab...regarding this sher




wah wah...bohat khoob ..ek se badhker ek sher hain...

Subhan Allah. ..superb
aapka behad maskuur-o-mamnoon hooN, Zainysahibaa...

duaaoN ke saath..
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Waaaahhhhhh! bahot khoob dear behad umdaa

Agar tum misra e saani se last word 'meiN' nikaal do to sher ke maani to nahiN badlenge lekin sher aur nikar jaegi...just a suggestion other members opinion is most welcomed
shukriyah naaz..

"Main" word extra hi hai per sher ko behr me fit karne ke liye add kiya hai...

kuch aur sochti huun....



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Ek adna sa sher meri taraf se

Tere darde dil ka sabab ban chuki huuN
Mohabbat pe apni pashemaan huN meiN
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9th September 2014, 11:23 AM
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waaaahhh! Zainy saheba.......
be-had umdaaH khayaal hai .. aur kia khoob adaaigi hai.. dherooN daad!
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shukriyah aadeil sahab. ..............



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9th September 2014, 11:24 AM
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Waaaahhhhhh! bahot khoob dear behad umdaa

Agar tum misra e saani se last word 'meiN' nikaal do to sher ke maani to nahiN badlenge lekin sher aur nikar jaegi...just a suggestion other members opinion is most welcomed
Naaz,
tumhaari ye baat sahi hai ki 'maiN' lafz nikaal dene se sher aur bhii nikhar jaataa hai, magar ye karne se beher TuT jaatii hai kyuN ki ek baRi taktii kam ho jaati hai .....


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9th September 2014, 11:29 AM
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Just too good......umda khayaal u always surprise us dear
Thanks a lot.....
You are a great inspirer, aur tunhaarii iisii tarah kii hausla afzaaee se maiN yahaaN pe dera jamaa deta hooN

bas yuN hi aati raho... AUR KUCHH sher kaa fusooN bhii chalaao...


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9th September 2014, 11:36 AM
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mai koi pashemaani wala kaam nahin karti isliye dimag mein koi sher nahin araha hai :d
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