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ik safar me koii dobaaraa nahii luTT saktaa,
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27th August 2015, 03:57 AM
Khilte hi TooT jane ka gul ko jo Der lage
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waaaaahhhhhh nihaaytee khoob.......................
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Waah waah.........bahut khoob. Fakhri ji....
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27th August 2015, 08:45 AM
mujhe mujh se milaati jaa rahii hai,
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mujhe mujh se milaati jaa rahii hai,
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Waaaaah!Umda janaab......
Khoob pasand aaya ye sher....
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27th August 2015, 11:49 AM
TU MUJHE QAID NA RAKH PAYEGA, SUN LE SAIYYAD
KHUD PE AAYA TO MAIN UD JAUNGA PINJRA LE KAR
Hasan Fatehpuri sahab
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
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TU MUJHE QAID NA RAKH PAYEGA, SUN LE SAIYYAD
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waahn waaah waaaaahhhhhhhhh kkyaa baat hai behad khoob sher pesh kiya hai aapne Zainy saahibaa.....kamaal hi kamaal nazar aa raha hai is shher me.....
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TU MUJHE QAID NA RAKH PAYEGA, SUN LE SAIYYAD
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Waaaah.....Lajwaab.....simply superb........
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28th August 2015, 02:03 AM
In mushkilo.N se itna ghabra na mere dost
Jugnu to liye phirte hei.N angaare badan mei.N
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28th August 2015, 07:26 AM
Tu Kyun hain pareshan Aye Qatar mere
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28th August 2015, 09:38 AM
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khoob sher pesh kiyaa janaab.................... bahut ummdah
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28th August 2015, 09:49 AM
khud aag de ke apne nasheman ko aap hii,
bijlee se inteqaam liyaa hai kabhii kabhii.....
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Tu Kyun hain pareshan Aye Qatar mere
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Fakhri ji...
Ashiq ji...
Waaah.....bahut khoob sher kahe aap dono ne......
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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28th August 2015, 11:37 AM
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khud aag de ke apne nasheman ko aap hii,
bijlee se inteqaam liyaa hai kabhii kabhii.....
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Waaahhhh!!
Bahut khoob sher share kiya shaad sahab.......
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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28th August 2015, 09:33 PM
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2nd September 2015, 12:14 PM
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-NM
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-NM
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7th September 2015, 11:08 AM
waah bahut khoob sharing di.......
kisi din meri ruswaii ka ye karan na ban jayei
tumhara shahar se jana mera beemar ho jana..
munnawar rana..
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7th September 2015, 11:21 AM
-Bashir Badr ji
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7th September 2015, 03:18 PM
badan se rooh jati hai to bichati hai safe maatam
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Sabaa ji welcome to sdc....
Waaaaahhhh kya sher pesh kiya hai....bahut hee khoob...
.pls write not mine..if it is not yours...
Aate rahiye.....
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7th September 2015, 03:37 PM
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Saba kiyani ji bahut khoob Javed Akhtar sahab ki Ghazal ka ye sher bahut hi behtareen share kiya hai aapne....
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7th September 2015, 03:40 PM
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जब से चला है पता साजिशों का,
दिल कातिलों का दहलने लगा है ।
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8th September 2015, 10:57 AM
baare duniya me raho gam zada ya shaad raho
aisa kuch kar ke chalo yaan ki bahut yaad raho..
meer taqi mir
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waaahhhhh nayaab sher pesh kiyaa hai Madhu ji...................
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waaahhhhh nayaab sher pesh kiyaa hai Madhu ji...................
salaamat rahen
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Shukriya shaad ji............................
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8th September 2015, 06:02 PM
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Waah waah.!!..bahut khoob mast sahab.......
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8th September 2015, 07:54 PM
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waaaaaaaah bohat khoob !!
Hamare aane ka tha har lamha intezar,
Ajj unko humse milne ki fursat nahi,
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waaaaaaaah bohat khoob !!
Hamare aane ka tha har lamha intezar,
Ajj unko humse milne ki fursat nahi,
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Kya baat! Kya baat!........bahut khoob sher share kiya zainy sahiba....
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ham agar arz kareNge to siqayat hogi"
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honth kuch kah nahi pate..gala bhi baith jata hai.
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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9th September 2015, 11:28 AM
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wahhhhhhhhh dil se pasand aaya yeh sher...........bahut khoob.
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