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NAMASTE MADHU JI,, HAMARA NUMBER KAB AAYEGA,, saare sawal seniors ne hi pooch liye,, hame kuch baakhi h nahi raha puuchne k liye,, phir bhi Bhot jald hamare sawal bhi hazir hoonge,,, is thread ko padh kar achcha lagraha hae,,,,
   
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NAMASTE MADHU JI,, HAMARA NUMBER KAB AAYEGA,, saare sawal seniors ne hi pooch liye,, hame kuch baakhi h nahi raha puuchne k liye,, phir bhi Bhot jald hamare sawal bhi hazir hoonge,,, is thread ko padh kar achcha lagraha hae,,,,
Namskaar sabhat khan jii..
aap behichak kabhi bhi apne sawaal pooch sakte hain..sawalon jawabon ka silsila to lagatar chalta hee rahega..to behtar hai aap sawaal post kar dein..vaqt aane par main jawaab de doongi...



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Chand sawaalaat Madhu saahiba ki khidmat me.n....... ye alag baat hai ke aapke pichle jawab mujhe mutmaeen naa kar sake.... magar is ummeed se aage badh raha hoon ke is baar mujhe aap behatar mann aur shaaant chitt se soch samajh kar jawaab djiyegaa...


1) Urdu ke puraane shaayaroN me aapke pasandeedaa shaayar kon hain aur kyon..... zaahir si baat hai ke har shaayar ka koi role model hota hai aap kinhe padhnaa pasand kartee hain.... aapko unki shaayri me kyaa khaas adaa pasand hai....


2) Aapke hisaab se shaayrii ya ghazal kahane me urdu lughaat ke kyaa hamiyat hain..... kyaa urdu jaane binaa bhi shaayri ya ghazal kahii ja saktii hai..... apki kyaa raay hai is baare me.......


3) kanpur ke mashhoor shaayar kaun hue hain..... kyaa aapne kabhi inkaa kaam padhaa hai koi khaas adaa hai inki shaayrii me kyaa... hame rubaroo karaaengeee to behad khushii hogee.....

4) aap aaj se 5 saal ke baad khud ko kahaan dekhtee hain shayrii ki duniyaa me.n.... kyaa aapne shaayrii ke liye kuch future plan kiye hain like publishing a book, or participating in mushaayraa etc..... agar kabhi mauqaa milaa to aap mushayre me apne kalaam padhiyegaa......

5) aapke hisaab se ek ghazal ke kya kya mukhya hisse hote hain... ek ghazal ko behatar banane ke liye hame kin cheeon ki zaruurat padtee hai.... agar aapkii nazar me hame is sawaall ka jawaab milegaa to bahot kuch seekhne milegaa hame....


ummeed kartaa hoon mere sawaal aapko zaada pareshaan nakarenge aur aap jald inke jawaabon ke saath hamare samne aaiyegaa...

khush rahiye..... aur interview enjoy Karte rahiye....


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Adaab shaad jee....
sabse pahle to maafi chahti hoon ki..bahut der se reply kar pa rahi hoon aapko....
Aur shukraguzar hoon ki apne mujhe in sawalon ke kabil samjha....wakai aapke sawalon ne mujhe shayri ko ek alag nazariye se dekhne ke liye prerit kiya....
aap jante hain ki shayri ki duniya me nayi hoon main..aur jo bhi seekha yahiin se seekha..bahut anubhavi nahi hoon main..par fir bhi aapke sawalon ke sath insaaf karne ki koshish ki hai...

1.urdu ke purane shayron ki baat karein tamaam shayr hain jinka naam shayri ki duniya me bade adab se liya jata hai....
maine sabko padhne ka saubhagya to hasil nahi kiya hai..
haan par kuch naam aise hain jinhe kuch bahut padha hai maine unme me ek naam dr.bashir bdra ji ka hai..unhe jab bhi padha maine..bade hee saaf seedhe lahje me badi gahri baat kah jate hain...unki ye baat bahut pasand hai mujhe...unki shayri padhne ke liye zaroori nahi ki urdu ke bade bade shabdon ka gyaan ho aapko...aur is tarah vo aam logon se connect ho pate hain..

2.mujhe lagta hai...ghazal kahne me urdu ki ahmiyat ko kisi example ki zaroorat nahi hai vaise..
ghazal aur urdu ka sang..diye aur bati jaisa hai...
urdu language ki tahzeeb aur mithaas ghazal ko aur bhi dilkash banati hai..
aur yoon dekhein to rozmarra me bhi ham urdu ke kai alfaaz istemaal karte hain..
typical hindi me ghazal mere hisaab se to nahi kahi ja sakti....

3.jEe imaandari se kahoon to aapke sawaal se pahle maine kabhi janne ki koshish nahi ki kanpur ke mashhoor shayar kaun hain..ek baar fir se aapka shukriya..
abhi bhi jo ek naam samne aaya vo hai jauhar kanpuri ka..uunka ek kalaam share kar rahi hoon..

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Ummeed hai pasand aayega aapko..

4..aaj se 5 saal baad bas itna hee chahti hoon ki...meri mehnat aur shayri se muhabbat rang laye aur ghazal ki bareekiyaan seekh sakoon main...
apni muqammal shayri ki book zaroor publish karwana chahoongi..agar doston ki duayein huyi aur allah ka karam raha to...
mushayere me mera jana shayad hee kabhi ho..aur sunne ka mauka mila kisi mushayere ko live to bahut achchi baat hogi..par khud apne kalaam padhne ke baare me kabhi nahi socha maine...

5...mEri nazar se aap kya seekenge shaad jee..ye to aapka badappan hai jo ye sawaal poocha aapne mujhse..
meri nazar me ghazal ki jaan hote hain khyaal...aur ehsaas..
fir radeef jo ghazal ka mood set karta hai..aaur qafiya uski khoobsoorti me chaar chaand lagata hai....
kisi khoobsoorat ehsaas ko jab radeef aur qafiye ke dayre me lete guye ek particular behr me likhte hain..to ek mukkamal sher janm leta hai..
aur aise kai sher milkar ek khoobsoorat ghazal banate hain..

abhi bahut kuch seekhna baki hai janaab par fir bhi meri nazar se jo jawaab sahi lage vo maine aapko likhne ki koshish ki hai...
kahiin chook huyi ho to aap mujhe correct zaroor karein....
Aur ek baar fir shukriya jo aap apne sawaalon ke zariye shayri ke alag pahlu me le gaye..aaur isi bahane mujhe kuch aur baatein seekhne ko mili..
abhi ijazat dijiye...

Aate rahiye.....



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meri nazar me kisi bhi aurat ko ye poorA adhikaar hona chahiye ki vo kab aur kaise...job pursue karna chahati hai...isme selfish hone jaisi koi baat nahi..balki ye to achchi baat hai ki koi aurat financly bhi strong ho...jo log aisa sochte hai ye unki apni negative soch hai.....
haan bachchon ke baad uske upar bachchon ki responsibility aa jati hai...mera personal view hai ki ek certain umra tak bachchon ka bhi poora hak hota hai maa ke pyaar par....isiliye aksar maa hee ye samjhauta karti hai ki job nahi karni..halaan ki uske kai option hain ab..kafi leaves bhi milti hain...office cruch ek achcha tareeka hai..
Family members ko bhi zaroor support karna chahiye is baare me...agar life partner ka poora support ho to ye safar asaan ho jata hai.aur office aur ghar bakhoobi sambhala ja sakta hai.......
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Adaab shaad jee....
sabse pahle to maafi chahti hoon ki..bahut der se reply kar pa rahi hoon aapko....
Aur shukraguzar hoon ki apne mujhe in sawalon ke kabil samjha....wakai aapke sawalon ne mujhe shayri ko ek alag nazariye se dekhne ke liye prerit kiya....
aap jante hain ki shayri ki duniya me nayi hoon main..aur jo bhi seekha yahiin se seekha..bahut anubhavi nahi hoon main..par fir bhi aapke sawalon ke sath insaaf karne ki koshish ki hai...

1.urdu ke purane shayron ki baat karein tamaam shayr hain jinka naam shayri ki duniya me bade adab se liya jata hai....
maine sabko padhne ka saubhagya to hasil nahi kiya hai..
haan par kuch naam aise hain jinhe kuch bahut padha hai maine unme me ek naam dr.bashir bdra ji ka hai..unhe jab bhi padha maine..bade hee saaf seedhe lahje me badi gahri baat kah jate hain...unki ye baat bahut pasand hai mujhe...unki shayri padhne ke liye zaroori nahi ki urdu ke bade bade shabdon ka gyaan ho aapko...aur is tarah vo aam logon se connect ho pate hain..

2.mujhe lagta hai...ghazal kahne me urdu ki ahmiyat ko kisi example ki zaroorat nahi hai vaise..
ghazal aur urdu ka sang..diye aur bati jaisa hai...
urdu language ki tahzeeb aur mithaas ghazal ko aur bhi dilkash banati hai..
aur yoon dekhein to rozmarra me bhi ham urdu ke kai alfaaz istemaal karte hain..
typical hindi me ghazal mere hisaab se to nahi kahi ja sakti....

3.jEe imaandari se kahoon to aapke sawaal se pahle maine kabhi janne ki koshish nahi ki kanpur ke mashhoor shayar kaun hain..ek baar fir se aapka shukriya..
abhi bhi jo ek naam samne aaya vo hai jauhar kanpuri ka..uunka ek kalaam share kar rahi hoon..

दिल दुखा कर आजमा कर या रुला कर छोडना
हमने सीखा ही नहीं अपना बना कर छोडना

ताके दुनिया यह न समझे हम में दूरी हो गयी
साथ जब भी छोडना तो मुस्कुरा कर छोडना

है तरीके और भी मुझसे बिछड़ने के लिए
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कुछ न याद आये मुझे इतनी पिला कर छोडना

तेल के बदले हमें चाहे लहू देना पड़े
अपनी फितरत है चिरागों को जला कर छोडना

कुफ्र है अहसास-ऐ-मायूसी थकन है बुजदिली
आंसू की डौर को मंजिल पे जा कर छोडना

Ummeed hai pasand aayega aapko..

4..aaj se 5 saal baad bas itna hee chahti hoon ki...meri mehnat aur shayri se muhabbat rang laye aur ghazal ki bareekiyaan seekh sakoon main...
apni muqammal shayri ki book zaroor publish karwana chahoongi..agar doston ki duayein huyi aur allah ka karam raha to...
mushayere me mera jana shayad hee kabhi ho..aur sunne ka mauka mila kisi mushayere ko live to bahut achchi baat hogi..par khud apne kalaam padhne ke baare me kabhi nahi socha maine...

5...mEri nazar se aap kya seekenge shaad jee..ye to aapka badappan hai jo ye sawaal poocha aapne mujhse..
meri nazar me ghazal ki jaan hote hain khyaal...aur ehsaas..
fir radeef jo ghazal ka mood set karta hai..aaur qafiya uski khoobsoorti me chaar chaand lagata hai....
kisi khoobsoorat ehsaas ko jab radeef aur qafiye ke dayre me lete guye ek particular behr me likhte hain..to ek mukkamal sher janm leta hai..
aur aise kai sher milkar ek khoobsoorat ghazal banate hain..

abhi bahut kuch seekhna baki hai janaab par fir bhi meri nazar se jo jawaab sahi lage vo maine aapko likhne ki koshish ki hai...
kahiin chook huyi ho to aap mujhe correct zaroor karein....
Aur ek baar fir shukriya jo aap apne sawaalon ke zariye shayri ke alag pahlu me le gaye..aaur isi bahane mujhe kuch aur baatein seekhne ko mili..
abhi ijazat dijiye...

Aate rahiye.....



Madhu jii.........

bhai waahhhh...... maan gaye aapko...... jis khoobsurtii se aap ghazal likhttii hain usii andaaz me aap sawaalon ke jawaab bhii de rahii hain, wahi sanjeedgee wahi thahraaw aur wahii zahniyat...... kamal hai......

is baar to kkahnaa padegaa ke main bahot mutassir huaa aapke is anndaaz se aur beshaq ye jjawaab aapko shaayrii ki gahraai tak le gaye honge, magar in sawaalon ko poochne ka bhii ek maksad thaa.... aur mujhe khushii hui hai ke aap us maksad ko pooraa kar chukii hai , merii pareeksha me aap safal huii hain....

Allah aapko khoob taraqqee de khoob naam roshan kijiye, aur khoob mehnat kijiye......

aapka hamaare saath yahaan honaa, hamare liye saubhagya hai......

judee rahiyegaa hamaare saath isi nivedan ke saath filhaaal prasthaan karna chahungaa...... khayaal rakkhen apnaa...



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Madhu jii.........

bhai waahhhh...... maan gaye aapko...... jis khoobsurtii se aap ghazal likhttii hain usii andaaz me aap sawaalon ke jawaab bhii de rahii hain, wahi sanjeedgee wahi thahraaw aur wahii zahniyat...... kamal hai......

is baar to kkahnaa padegaa ke main bahot mutassir huaa aapke is anndaaz se aur beshaq ye jjawaab aapko shaayrii ki gahraai tak le gaye honge, magar in sawaalon ko poochne ka bhii ek maksad thaa.... aur mujhe khushii hui hai ke aap us maksad ko pooraa kar chukii hai , merii pareeksha me aap safal huii hain....

Allah aapko khoob taraqqee de khoob naam roshan kijiye, aur khoob mehnat kijiye......

aapka hamaare saath yahaan honaa, hamare liye saubhagya hai......

judee rahiyegaa hamaare saath isi nivedan ke saath filhaaal prasthaan karna chahungaa...... khayaal rakkhen apnaa...



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Imtihaan pass kar liya hamne are waaah.... akhir teacher itne achvhe honge to...student ko to mehnat karni hee padegi...
Thank u so much for your kind words shaad jii..
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Adaab shaad jee....
sabse pahle to maafi chahti hoon ki..bahut der se reply kar pa rahi hoon aapko....
Aur shukraguzar hoon ki apne mujhe in sawalon ke kabil samjha....wakai aapke sawalon ne mujhe shayri ko ek alag nazariye se dekhne ke liye prerit kiya....
aap jante hain ki shayri ki duniya me nayi hoon main..aur jo bhi seekha yahiin se seekha..bahut anubhavi nahi hoon main..par fir bhi aapke sawalon ke sath insaaf karne ki koshish ki hai...

1.urdu ke purane shayron ki baat karein tamaam shayr hain jinka naam shayri ki duniya me bade adab se liya jata hai....
maine sabko padhne ka saubhagya to hasil nahi kiya hai..
haan par kuch naam aise hain jinhe kuch bahut padha hai maine unme me ek naam dr.bashir bdra ji ka hai..unhe jab bhi padha maine..bade hee saaf seedhe lahje me badi gahri baat kah jate hain...unki ye baat bahut pasand hai mujhe...unki shayri padhne ke liye zaroori nahi ki urdu ke bade bade shabdon ka gyaan ho aapko...aur is tarah vo aam logon se connect ho pate hain..

2.mujhe lagta hai...ghazal kahne me urdu ki ahmiyat ko kisi example ki zaroorat nahi hai vaise..
ghazal aur urdu ka sang..diye aur bati jaisa hai...
urdu language ki tahzeeb aur mithaas ghazal ko aur bhi dilkash banati hai..
aur yoon dekhein to rozmarra me bhi ham urdu ke kai alfaaz istemaal karte hain..
typical hindi me ghazal mere hisaab se to nahi kahi ja sakti....

3.jEe imaandari se kahoon to aapke sawaal se pahle maine kabhi janne ki koshish nahi ki kanpur ke mashhoor shayar kaun hain..ek baar fir se aapka shukriya..
abhi bhi jo ek naam samne aaya vo hai jauhar kanpuri ka..uunka ek kalaam share kar rahi hoon..

दिल दुखा कर आजमा कर या रुला कर छोडना
हमने सीखा ही नहीं अपना बना कर छोडना

ताके दुनिया यह न समझे हम में दूरी हो गयी
साथ जब भी छोडना तो मुस्कुरा कर छोडना

है तरीके और भी मुझसे बिछड़ने के लिए
क्या ज़रूरी है कोई तोहमत लगा कर छोडना

होश बाकी रह गए तो जी नहीं पाऊँगा मै
कुछ न याद आये मुझे इतनी पिला कर छोडना

तेल के बदले हमें चाहे लहू देना पड़े
अपनी फितरत है चिरागों को जला कर छोडना

कुफ्र है अहसास-ऐ-मायूसी थकन है बुजदिली
आंसू की डौर को मंजिल पे जा कर छोडना

Ummeed hai pasand aayega aapko..

4..aaj se 5 saal baad bas itna hee chahti hoon ki...meri mehnat aur shayri se muhabbat rang laye aur ghazal ki bareekiyaan seekh sakoon main...
apni muqammal shayri ki book zaroor publish karwana chahoongi..agar doston ki duayein huyi aur allah ka karam raha to...
mushayere me mera jana shayad hee kabhi ho..aur sunne ka mauka mila kisi mushayere ko live to bahut achchi baat hogi..par khud apne kalaam padhne ke baare me kabhi nahi socha maine...

5...mEri nazar se aap kya seekenge shaad jee..ye to aapka badappan hai jo ye sawaal poocha aapne mujhse..
meri nazar me ghazal ki jaan hote hain khyaal...aur ehsaas..
fir radeef jo ghazal ka mood set karta hai..aaur qafiya uski khoobsoorti me chaar chaand lagata hai....
kisi khoobsoorat ehsaas ko jab radeef aur qafiye ke dayre me lete guye ek particular behr me likhte hain..to ek mukkamal sher janm leta hai..
aur aise kai sher milkar ek khoobsoorat ghazal banate hain..

abhi bahut kuch seekhna baki hai janaab par fir bhi meri nazar se jo jawaab sahi lage vo maine aapko likhne ki koshish ki hai...
kahiin chook huyi ho to aap mujhe correct zaroor karein....
Aur ek baar fir shukriya jo aap apne sawaalon ke zariye shayri ke alag pahlu me le gaye..aaur isi bahane mujhe kuch aur baatein seekhne ko mili..
abhi ijazat dijiye...

Aate rahiye.....
Hats off ma'am....
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Respect!
Thank you...
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Next set of Questions:-

1. Do you believe life after death?

2. Agar aapke paas million dollars ho to aap kya karenge?

3. Jab bahut dukhi hote haiN to sabse pehle kis ki yaad aati hai?

4. Koi khushi milne par sabse pehle kis ke sath share karna pasand karte haiN?

5. Has a song ever made you cry?

6. Name three things in nature you find most beautiful?

7. Last time jhoot kab bola tha aur kyun aur kiske liye?

8. Name your favourite food?

9. What are you afraid to lose the most?

10. What kind of people you like or dislike?

11. What's the bravest thing you've ever done?

12. Who can always cheer you up?

filhaal itne hi haiN ...

Lijiye...main hazir hoon..katghare me fir se...to ye rahe jawaab.....
1. jee..haan..mujhe yakeen hota hai..hhalan ki zyada nahi socha na padha is bare me...fir bhi..

2.sari...duniya ghoomna chahoongi....
Aur safar me zaroorat mand mile use daan bhi karti jaungi..thode achvhe kaam bhi kar loongi isi bahane......

3.yaad kisi ki nahi aati bas sochne ki koshish karti hoon ki Is
Dukh ki vajah kya hai..akhir mujhse kuch to galti huyi hogi jo dukh mila.....akele rahna pasand aata hai us vaqt.

4..depend karta hai khushi kaisi hai...aagar ghar se related hai to ghar pe sabse pahle..varna freinds...

5..bahut sare hain...unme se ek hai..tare zameen movie ka...tujhe sab hai pata meri maa..

6...bachchon ki muskaan..
Gulab ke phool..
Ugta hua sooraj..

7..last time jhoot bola tha...apne bete ke liye..
uski hee bhalai ke liye..
aksar bolna padta hai..
usi se hee..

8. Sab kuch veg mein..
Khaaskar kuch mumma ke hathon ka mil jaye..
jo ab kam milta hai..

9. Khushi...mere apno ki.....aur bhagwaan ka ashirwaad..

10. people I like...jo jhooth na bole...jo ho vahi dikhayein..
no banawtipan..

I dislike...dikhawa karne wale...jhooth bolne wale log..
Aise log jinhe apni khushi ke aage kuch nahi dikhta..

11. ek baar bachpan me zinda saanp ke upar se kood gayi thi...

12.mY daughter........aur romantic ghazalein....

Aage bhi aate rahein...
ijazat dein..
khush rahein....



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Madhu ji chand sawaal aur pesh karta hoon...............


1) agar shaayaraa na hoteen to kyaa hoteeN........?




2) hum ko maaloom hai jannat ki haqeeqat lekin
dil ke KHush rakhney ko GHalib ye KHayaal achhaa hai
~Ghalib


is sher ko aap kis nazar se dekhtii hain..... wese bahot se debate hue hain is ek sher me, par main aapka aazaad nazariyaa is sher ke baare me jaannaa chaahungaa......





3) kisii ek shaayar ke mizaaj me kyaa cheez common honii chahiye, aapko kyaa lagta hai shaayar kaise hote hain......??



4) aaj ke shaayaron me kise padhnaa pasand kartee hain..... ??



shukriyaa..... filhaal itne hi..


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Lijiye...main hazir hoon..katghare me fir se...to ye rahe jawaab.....
1. jee..haan..mujhe yakeen hota hai..hhalan ki zyada nahi socha na padha is bare me...fir bhi..

2.sari...duniya ghoomna chahoongi....
Aur safar me zaroorat mand mile use daan bhi karti jaungi..thode achvhe kaam bhi kar loongi isi bahane......

3.yaad kisi ki nahi aati bas sochne ki koshish karti hoon ki Is
Dukh ki vajah kya hai..akhir mujhse kuch to galti huyi hogi jo dukh mila.....akele rahna pasand aata hai us vaqt.

4..depend karta hai khushi kaisi hai...aagar ghar se related hai to ghar pe sabse pahle..varna freinds...

5..bahut sare hain...unme se ek hai..tare zameen movie ka...tujhe sab hai pata meri maa..

6...bachchon ki muskaan..
Gulab ke phool..
Ugta hua sooraj..

7..last time jhoot bola tha...apne bete ke liye..
uski hee bhalai ke liye..
aksar bolna padta hai..
usi se hee..

8. Sab kuch veg mein..
Khaaskar kuch mumma ke hathon ka mil jaye..
jo ab kam milta hai..

9. Khushi...mere apno ki.....aur bhagwaan ka ashirwaad..

10. people I like...jo jhooth na bole...jo ho vahi dikhayein..
no banawtipan..

I dislike...dikhawa karne wale...jhooth bolne wale log..
Aise log jinhe apni khushi ke aage kuch nahi dikhta..

11. ek baar bachpan me zinda saanp ke upar se kood gayi thi...

12.mY daughter........aur romantic ghazalein....

Aage bhi aate rahein...
ijazat dein..
khush rahein....
Interesting ...

Chalen jee... here goes a rapid fire round...


1) Do you think that you are strong?


2) What is your least favorite thing in the world?


3) Who do you miss most right now?


4) Have you ever been on radio or television?


5) Are you a dare devil?


6) Have you ever told a secret you swore you wouldn't?


7) Have you ever misused a word and it sounded absolutely stupid?


8) Do you think there is a pot of gold at the end of the rainbow?


9) How do you release anger?


10) What was your favorite toy as a child?


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Namak halaal mein Amitabh Bachchan ek dialog bolta hai...
I eat English, I sleep Emglish , I talk English , I walk English ....

Kya aap ka bhi poetry mein aisa hi haal hai ... Sabzi lete hue ek sher zahan mein aya , bola bai do minute ruko main abhi aatti huN.. gaye aur sher likh ke wapis aa gaye subzi lene ..

Khana banate ek sher jehan mein aya ... subzi reh gayi chulhe pe ,,, hum gaye aur sher likh ke aye .....itne meiN subzi jal gayeee

Dining table pe aap apne unke sath khane baithe .. tau shure ho gaye ..arz kiya hai ...Apni nazm / Ghazal sunaee aur bola ab aap shuru ker sakte hai dinner.

Ya aap ke pass maids hain yeh kam kerne ko ,,,,,

Aap ka ek hi shok hai Poetry , Poetry and Poetry..

Kya aap itne passion se poetry karti hai , ya rafta rafta

Poetry ke elawa aap ke kuch aur shauk hot Zaroor bataiyega ..


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Namaskaar sanjay jee...
khushi huyi ki aap ek homemaker ki daily routine se poori tarah wakif hain..aur ek mother ki responsibility usse bhi kahiin badhkar 24×7 job hai jisme na koi leave hai na half day...

aapke sawaal ka ek hee jawaab aaya mere zahan me ki jahaan chaah vahaan raah........priorities ke hisaab se cheezein manage ho jati hain..aur apne shauk ko vaqt bhi de pati hoon.........

shukriya...
Aate rahein...



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Fav.colour
Fav. hobby
Fav .place
Fav .drink
Fav.song
Fav.movie
Fav.word jo aap apni rozaana zindagee mein bahot baar use karte ho


Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

Aapka

Dhaval

Jee zaroor...

Fav. Food..rajma chawal..

Fav colour..moov pink, purple,few shades of green, and..yellow.

Fav. Hobby..shayri..

Fav....place..my home...n peaceful sea beaches..

Fav drink....neembu paani...

Fav. Song...lag ja gale se fir ye hansii raat ho na ho.....many more..

Fav movie...DDLJ,kkhh,anand,abhimaan......many more..

Fav. Word...chup raho....


Ye rahI meri pasand ki fehrist. ....
Shukriya....

Aate rahein..



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hahahahaaha........... ye to mujhe bhii pataa hai.... lol


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Madhu ji bahut hi gehrai se aap her sawal ka jawab de rahi hain.

1.Ghazal likhne ke liye aapko kisi mood ya spl time ki zaroorat mehsoos hoti hai
ya bus khayal aaye man mein aur likh dilye.

2. Ghazal ya nazm likhne mein dil ki ya dimag ji zyada zaroorat hoti hai.

3. Her lekhak ki apni USP hoti hai , ya kagein ek pechan. Aap kaisi chap
chorna chahti.hain apne kalamon se.

4. Aap Zyada sanjeeda mizaz hai ya khush mizaz hain by nature.

5. Aap zindagi ko kaise dekhti hain ..life fullof struggles ya life full of zest.

6. Agar parmatma prakat ho ke aapko 3 wish mangne ko kahe tau ap kya
mangegi......shayri ko chor ke


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[QUOTE=Dhaval;476011]Dhanyawaad madhu jee......aakhir mein aapne chup rehne ka bol diya ab chup rehna padengaa [/

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Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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Madhu ji,

Behad shukrguzaar hoon aap bahut hi karigari se silsilaa badhaa rahi hai kya mehfil jami hai aapke baare mein bahut kuch ubhar kar saamne aa raha hai. Aabhi tak jitni aapki shaksiyaat saamne aayi hai behad aacha lag raha hai aapko jaankar.

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[QUOTE=sameer'shaad';475991][B][I][SIZE="4"]Madhu ji chand sawaal aur pesh karta hoon...............

1) agar shaayaraa na hoteen to kyaa hoteeN........?

Agar shayrana na hoti to bas madhavi hoti... madhu na hoti...



2) hum ko maaloom hai jannat ki haqeeqat lekin
dil ke KHush rakhney ko GHalib ye KHayaal achhaa hai
~Ghalib


is sher ko aap kis nazar se dekhtii hain..... wese bahot se debate hue hain is ek sher me, par main aapka aazaad nazariyaa is sher ke baare me jaannaa chaahungaa......



Bahut shukriya jo is sher ko mere nazariye me janna chaha aapne shaad jee..halan ki main khud ko is kabil nahi samajhti ki meri samajh is sher ko chhoo bhi payegi..par aapne poocha hai to koshish karti hoon....

mere khyaal se iske mayne kuch yoon hai ki...is duniya (jannat)ki asal hakikat yani ki pareshaniyon se wakif hai ye dil...
par ye ummeed bhi kuch kam nahi ki sab theek ho jayega...dil ki tassali ke liye is baat par barosha kar ke dekh liya jaye..



3) ek shaayar ke mizaaj me kyaa cheez common honii chahiye, aapko kyaa lagta hai shaayar kaise hote hain......??

Ek shayar ke paas jo sabse khaas cheez hoti hai vo hai cheezon ko dekhne ka uska alag nazariya....ek sanjeeda dil jo bahut sensitive bhi hota hai..aur vo sab mahsoos kar sakta hai jo normal log shayad nahi kar sakte..aur unhi ehsaason ko alfazon ke jadoo me pesh karne ki ada bhi ek shayar ke paas hee hoti hai..



4.aaj ke shaayaron me kise padhna pasand kartee hain..... ??

Aaj aur kal jaisa kuch differentiate nahi kiya maine kabhi haan kuch female poets hain jinhe padhna pasand karti hoon shayad isliye ki being a woman uhke jazbaat zyada kareeb se mahsoos kar pati hoon..unme se kuch naam hai..praveen shakir jii, ada zafri jee..
baki poets jaise gulzar saheb..sahir ludhiyanwi jii ko bhi padhna achcha lagta hai mujhe...


Shukriya....abhi ijazat dein....

Madhu..



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[B][I][SIZE="4"]Madhu ji chand sawaal aur pesh karta hoon...............

1) agar shaayaraa na hoteen to kyaa hoteeN........?

Agar shayrana na hoti to bas madhavi hoti... madhu na hoti...



2) hum ko maaloom hai jannat ki haqeeqat lekin
dil ke KHush rakhney ko GHalib ye KHayaal achhaa hai
~Ghalib


is sher ko aap kis nazar se dekhtii hain..... wese bahot se debate hue hain is ek sher me, par main aapka aazaad nazariyaa is sher ke baare me jaannaa chaahungaa......



Bahut shukriya jo is sher ko mere nazariye me janna chaha aapne shaad jee..halan ki main khud ko is kabil nahi samajhti ki meri samajh is sher ko chhoo bhi payegi..par aapne poocha hai to koshish karti hoon....

mere khyaal se iske mayne kuch yoon hai ki...is duniya (jannat)ki asal hakikat yani ki pareshaniyon se wakif hai ye dil...
par ye ummeed bhi kuch kam nahi ki sab theek ho jayega...dil ki tassali ke liye is baat par barosha kar ke dekh liya jaye..



3) ek shaayar ke mizaaj me kyaa cheez common honii chahiye, aapko kyaa lagta hai shaayar kaise hote hain......??

Ek shayar ke paas jo sabse khaas cheez hoti hai vo hai cheezon ko dekhne ka uska alag nazariya....ek sanjeeda dil jo bahut sensitive bhi hota hai..aur vo sab mahsoos kar sakta hai jo normal log shayad nahi kar sakte..aur unhi ehsaason ko alfazon ke jadoo me pesh karne ki ada bhi ek shayar ke paas hee hoti hai..



4.aaj ke shaayaron me kise padhna pasand kartee hain..... ??

Aaj aur kal jaisa kuch differentiate nahi kiya maine kabhi haan kuch female poets hain jinhe padhna pasand karti hoon shayad isliye ki being a woman uhke jazbaat zyada kareeb se mahsoos kar pati hoon..unme se kuch naam hai..praveen shakir jii, ada zafri jee..
baki poets jaise gulzar saheb..sahir ludhiyanwi jii ko bhi padhna achcha lagta hai mujhe...


Shukriya....abhi ijazat dein....

Madhu..


main shukrguzaar hoon aapkaa jo aapne apnaa keemtee waqt diyaa mere sawaalon ke liye..... par yaqeeen maaniye dil behad pursukoon hai aapke jawaabon se....

aapke ek ek jawaab mere dil ke bahot andar tak utre hain.... aur main shaayad aise hi jawaabon ki ummeed kar raha tha aapse.....

In Hassan's word...... hats off to you mam....


Regards,
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Interesting ...

Chalen jee... here goes a rapid fire round...


1) Do you think that you are strong?

Jee haan...bilkul..

2) What is your least favorite thing in the world?

window shopping..


3) Who do you miss most right now?

Achchii neend..

4) Have you ever been on radio or television?

Nahi abhi tak to nahi...

5) Are you a dare devil?

No..

6) Have you ever told a secret you swore you wouldn't?

Naa.kabhi nahi..

7) Have you ever misused a word and it sounded absolutely stupid?

Nahi..

8) Do you think there is a pot of gold at the end of the rainbow?

Bilkul nahi...

9) How do you release anger?

Khud ko kaam me busy rakh ke..

10) What was your favorite toy as a child?

mummy ke unused purse..

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mummy ke unused purse.
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main shukrguzaar hoon aapkaa jo aapne apnaa keemtee waqt diyaa mere sawaalon ke liye..... par yaqeeen maaniye dil behad pursukoon hai aapke jawaabon se....

aapke ek ek jawaab mere dil ke bahot andar tak utre hain.... aur main shaayad aise hi jawaabon ki ummeed kar raha tha aapse.....

In Hassan's word...... hats off to you mam....


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Shaad.....
Aapka bhi shukriya jo aap mere liye itne khoobsurat sawaal chun ke late hain.....
Salamat rahein.....



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Jee....aur vo yadein bhii...........



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Namste Madhu ji,,,
Maaf kijiyega madhu ji,,kaaam me bahot zyaada bsy hoone ke karan SDC pe aane ka time hi nae mil paraha hae,,,, Mae is thread ko pura o nahi padha lekin mere bas 2 sawal hain.
1) Aapke nazdeeki Dooston ke baare me bataiye jo dil ke bahot hi kareeb hai aur kyun?
2) Agar Se aap Kisiko Dil se sorry bolna chahengi to kisse aur kyun? aur shukriya kehna chahengi to kisse aur kyun?

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Madhu ji bahut hi gehrai se aap her sawal ka jawab de rahi hain.

1.Ghazal likhne ke liye aapko kisi mood ya spl time ki zaroorat mehsoos hoti hai
ya bus khayal aaye man mein aur likh dilye.

2. Ghazal ya nazm likhne mein dil ki ya dimag ji zyada zaroorat hoti hai.

3. Her lekhak ki apni USP hoti hai , ya kagein ek pechan. Aap kaisi chap
chorna chahti.hain apne kalamon se.

4. Aap Zyada sanjeeda mizaz hai ya khush mizaz hain by nature.

5. Aap zindagi ko kaise dekhti hain ..life fullof struggles ya life full of zest.

6. Agar parmatma prakat ho ke aapko 3 wish mangne ko kahe tau ap kya
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Jee..special time ki zaroorat hoti hai jab kisi ki fikra na ho..sukoon se baithoon bas main hoon aur shayri ho...

2..dil ki zaroorat se koi inkaar nahi hai....
par agar aap naye hain is safar me aur muqammal kalaam chahte hain to dimaag to lagega hee aisa main manti hoon..

3.Dilkash soft ramantic kalaam jinse dil khush ho jaye...

4.sanjeeda hoon jo log pahli baar milte hain unke liye...par ye bataiye..ssanjay jee sanjeeda dikhne wale log khushmijaz nahi hote aisa bhi hai kya....

5.no doubt struggle hhai..par uska bhi apna lutf hai....

6.parmatma ke samne awaaz bhi na niklegi shayad...hosh raha to kuch maangoongi...
vaise to socha nahi is baare me..

Fir bhi..
1.ye ki vo surat aankhon me hamesha ke liye basi rahe..

2.jahaan me har taraf sukoon aur muhabbat ho..

3..mere jaane ke baad mujhe log kisi achche kaam se yaad karein..hamesha sabke dilon me zinda rahoon.

Shukriya......



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Madhu jee....aap bahut sanjeedgi se sabhi sawalon ke jawaab de rahi hain.......
main jyada sawaal nahin poochta.....bas ek ya do...kyonki uai me gadbad ho jati hai.....
Ek sawaal aur hai aapse.....
Apni schooling.friends aur family members ke baare mein kuch bataiye.....



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ahem ahem....

thode aur sawaal aap ki nazar kar raha hoon...

1. Which was the most embarrassing moment of your life?

2. What is the craziest thing that you've ever done?

3. Which is your favourite movie that you never get bored of watching?

4. If you are given a chance to change something in yourself, what would it be?

5. What is the best compliment that you ever received from a boy?
(is sawal ka jawab na bhi dena chahen to it's okay! )


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Namaste


Bachpan mein koi aisi ghatna jab aapko bahot DaaNT yaa maar paDii ho...to wo bataayen

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

Aapka

Dhaval
Namaste dhawal jee...

Papa SE Maar khane ki khush kismti nahi huyi... Haan mummy kee chapat kabhi kabhi pad jati thi...kyon ki kitchen me jana mujhe pasand nahi tha...ek gilaas pani bhi nahi Deti thi kisi ko..aur kabhi kabhi mummy ka cosmetics chhoone par bhi daant padti thi...do bhai bade hain vo bhi Mauka doondhte the tang Karne ka....
Bahut daant wali koi Ghatna nahi hai dhawal jee..Bachpan me badi seedhi bachchi hoti thi main...

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Behad shukrguzaar hoon aap bahut hi karigari se silsilaa badhaa rahi hai kya mehfil jami hai aapke baare mein bahut kuch ubhar kar saamne aa raha hai. Aabhi tak jitni aapki shaksiyaat saamne aayi hai behad aacha lag raha hai aapko jaankar.

Pata nahi aapne pehle is sawaal ka jawaab diya ki nahi par aapke mutaabiq aapki sabse aachi ghazal/nazm ab tak kaunsi hai. Aap hum sabko uska link dijiyegaa.
Shukriya mast jee jo aap is guftguu ko apna kee tu vaqt dekar mere jawaab padte hain...

Apni Sari hee rachnayein pasand hain mujhe par nazm

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=78100

Mujhe bahut pasand hai...

Ghazal...jo pahli Mukammal ghazal likhi maine behr ke lihaaz se uski khushi kuch alag hai isiliye vo pasand hai..
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Iske Alawa....
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=78100

Ye ghazal DIL ke bahut Kareeb hai kyon ki..ise likhne ke liye zyada waqt nahi dena pada mujhe...bas yoon kahe ki bas khyaal aaye aur likh diye bilkul vaise hee...

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Shukriya mast jee jo aap is guftguu ko apna kee tu vaqt dekar mere jawaab padte hain...

Apni Sari hee rachnayein pasand hain mujhe par nazm

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=78100

Mujhe bahut pasand hai...

Ghazal...jo pahli Mukammal ghazal likhi maine behr ke lihaaz se uski khushi kuch alag hai isiliye vo pasand hai..
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=78100

Iske Alawa....
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=78100

Ye ghazal DIL ke bahut Kareeb hai kyon ki..ise likhne ke liye zyada waqt nahi dena pada mujhe...bas yoon kahe ki bas khyaal aaye aur likh diye bilkul vaise hee...

Shukriya.....
Madhu ji behad shukriya yeh share karne ka, par kuch gadbad lag rahi hai teeno link ek hi post ke de diye shayad aapne. Lagta hai copy/paste error hai waqt ijaazat de to mujhe dusre links bhi dijiyeGaa



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Madhu ji behad shukriya yeh share karne ka, par kuch gadbad lag rahi hai teeno link ek hi post ke de diye shayad aapne. Lagta hai copy/paste error hai waqt ijaazat de to mujhe dusre links bhi dijiyeGaa
Jee sahi kaha maaf kijiyega maine dhyaan nahi diya..
yahaan par link post kar rahi hoon fir se..

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=78767
behr me likhi pahli ghazal hone ki vajah se dil ke behad kareeb hai ye...

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=78790
aur ye ghazal dil se nikli hai bas kuch khaas mehnat nahi ki isme par bhi bahut pasand hai mujhe..

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Jee sahi kaha maaf kijiyega maine dhyaan nahi diya..
yahaan par link post kar rahi hoon fir se..

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=78767
behr me likhi pahli ghazal hone ki vajah se dil ke behad kareeb hai ye...

http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=78790
aur ye ghazal dil se nikli hai bas kuch khaas mehnat nahi ki isme par bhi bahut pasand hai mujhe..

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apne to mere dil ki baat keh daali, agar aapki likhi kareebi ghazal padhe to woh post hote ki maine aapse kaha tha ki this is your best so far.

aacha laga jaan kar ki maine itni badi baat kehne mein koi gustaakhi nahi ki.

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Namste Madhu ji,,,
Maaf kijiyega madhu ji,,kaaam me bahot zyaada bsy hoone ke karan SDC pe aane ka time hi nae mil paraha hae,,,, Mae is thread ko pura o nahi padha lekin mere bas 2 sawal hain.
1) Aapke nazdeeki Dooston ke baare me bataiye jo dil ke bahot hi kareeb hai aur kyun?
2) Agar Se aap Kisiko Dil se sorry bolna chahengi to kisse aur kyun? aur shukriya kehna chahengi to kisse aur kyun?

Aaapke Jawaboon ka intezaar rahega,,
.namaskaar sabhat jee...bahut shukriya jo vaqt nikaal kar aap guftguu me aaye...
1.bahut sare dost hain mere sabhat jee kisi ek ka naam lekar doosre ko naraz nahi kar sakti.......haan ek school freind hai jisse ab jaldi milna nahi hota par ab bhi bina bole ham ek doosre ke dil baat samajh sakte hain....main khushkismat hoon ki jitne bhi dost mile bahut achche mile....sab mujhe bahut pyaar dete hain...aur mere dil ke kareeb hain kyon ki hamare beech expectations kam hain...kkhushiyaan bhale hee ham sath baant nahi pate ab is busy life me..par jB bhi udaas hoti hoon to vo hamesha sath hote hain....

2.is sawaal ka jawaab pahle bhi diya hai maine shaad jee ke question me...par fir se bata deti hoon ek hostel mate se naraaz ho gayi thi aur vo mujhse...aaj tak baat nhi huyi par use ek baar milkar dil se sorry bolna chahti hoon main...

Aur shukriya us rab ka jisne itne pyaare dost diye mujhe jin par main yakeen kar sakti hoon.....

Ummeed hai jawaab se santusht honge aap...
aate rahiye...
khyaal rakhein...



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