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Ghazal ye tumhari.... - 8th August 2015, 12:57 AM

Adaab doston..
Aaj kuch aise khyalon ke sath hazir hoon..jo ek shayr ek achche dost aur ek bhai ke liye..mere dil se duaon ki tarah nikle hain..umeed hai aap sab ko pasand ayenge..


Tumhara hee aks hai ghazal me tumhari
Muhabbat adavat kahiiN bekarari.

kahiiN dard e dil ki udasi likhi hai
KahiiN par bayaaN tere dil ki khumari

Zamane ke gam ka kahiiN aaina hai
Kabhi ye ghazal teri khwaboN se pyari.

LaboN par tabassum koi baat laye
Kisi sher par aaNkh nam ho hamari.

Hai jadugari kuch qalam me he aisi
Fida ek nahi ham hai mahfil ye sari.

Rahe 'shaad' yu hee tu sabke diloN me
LaboN par saje aur ghazal ye tumhari.



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8th August 2015, 01:42 AM

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Adaab doston..
Aaj kuch aise khyalon ke sath hazir hoon..jo ek shayr ek achche dost aur ek bhai ke liye..mere dil se duaon ki tarah nikle hain..umeed hai aap sab ko pasand ayenge..


Tumhara hee aks hai ghazal me tumhari
Muhabbat adavat kahiiN bekarari.

kahiiN dard e dil ki udasi likhi hai
KahiiN par bayaaN tere dil ki khumari

Zamane ke gam ka kahiiN aaina hai
Kabhi ye ghazal teri khwaboN se pyari.

LaboN par tabassum koi baat laye
Kisi sher par aaNkh nam ho hamari.

Hai jadugari kuch qalam me he aisi
Fida ek nahi ham hai mahfil ye sari.

Rahe 'shaad' yu hee tu sabke diloN me
LaboN par saje aur ghazal ye tumhari.
Wah Wah ji Wah Wah...umdaa ghazal huyi hai aapke ehsaas aur aapki dua har baar qubool ho upar waale se ye choti si dua mere bhi raheGii



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Wah Wah ji Wah Wah...umdaa ghazal huyi hai aapke ehsaas aur aapki dua har baar qubool ho upar waale se ye choti si dua mere bhi raheGii
Shukriya mast ji...apne mere ehsaas mahsoos kiye khushi huyi....
Yun hee sath dete rahein....
Duaon ka shukriya...



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Adaab doston..
Aaj kuch aise khyalon ke sath hazir hoon..jo ek shayr ek achche dost aur ek bhai ke liye..mere dil se duaon ki tarah nikle hain..umeed hai aap sab ko pasand ayenge..


Tumhara hee aks hai ghazal me tumhari
Muhabbat adavat kahiiN bekarari.

kahiiN dard e dil ki udasi likhi hai
KahiiN par bayaaN tere dil ki khumari

Zamane ke gam ka kahiiN aaina hai
Kabhi ye ghazal teri khwaboN se pyari.

LaboN par tabassum koi baat laye
Kisi sher par aaNkh nam ho hamari.

Hai jadugari kuch qalam me he aisi
Fida ek nahi ham hai mahfil ye sari.

Rahe 'shaad' yu hee tu sabke diloN me
LaboN par saje aur ghazal ye tumhari.

waahhh bahut khoob madhu ji........... kyaa khoob likha hai aapne... aalaa behad aalaa... likhti rahiye... khussh rahiye

shaad....


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waahhh bahut khoob madhu ji........... kyaa khoob likha hai aapne... aalaa behad aalaa... likhti rahiye... khussh rahiye

shaad....

Thank u shaad aapko pasand aayi to likhna safal raha kyun ki ye ghazal ye dua aapke liye hee thi....

Khush rahiye...



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likhti rahen.


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abhari hoon ishq ji.....

aate rahiyega aage bhi....

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bahut khoob

good luck

ham khayaalon me jinke khoye the
vo samne se hamare gujar b gaye


ham to aah bhar- bhar k b jinda hai,
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bahut khoob

good luck

ham khayaalon me jinke khoye the
vo samne se hamare gujar b gaye


ham to aah bhar- bhar k b jinda hai,
mere jaise kitne to mar B gaye
shukriya............

aate rahiyega.......

tkcr
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Love waah - 14th December 2016, 01:34 PM

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shukriya............

aate rahiyega.......

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