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21st August 2009, 01:31 PM
mujhe dekh kar jab apni nazren yu jhuka di tumne kya hai meri qiimat teri nazar mein, bata di tumne har kadam par, chahat ka silaa sirf daga di tumne dil toh pahele hi tadapta tha, ruh bhi rula di tumne bujhatey sholon, ko kyu iss tarah hawa di tumne kuraid kar zakhamon ko khud, fir dawa di tumne pyaar jo palta tha, dil mein ussay daba di tumne nazar phair kar humse fir berukhi, jata di tumne dili khwaaish, ko mere dil hi mein jala di tumne gairon par mere hissay ka pyar kyu luta di tumne thi ummid jo bhi, meri zindagi se mita di tumne bebasi ki lakir mere hateliyon par sajja di tumne _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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21st August 2009, 03:31 PM
Pari Sweety,
bahot hi dukh hua is ghazal ko parh kar......aisi kya khata hui mujhse jo aapne yeh ghazal dedicate kar diya ........aapki dost list mein main bhi saamil hun na dear  maine kabhi nahi chaha ki aapko koi dukh ho ya dard mile bahot hi dard bhara ghazal kahi hai aapne afsosh hai ki aapko aise dost SDC per mile maiN khud ki safai mein bas ehi kahoongi khusi meiN guraze jo do pal vo kam nahiN kal mile ya Na mile hum koi gham nahiN roz roz karte raheiN aapkii sikayat sabse parii aise dostoN meiN samil Hum nahiN humesha khus raho har dard se dur raho aapki Diya  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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21st August 2009, 04:11 PM
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kya yaar yeh tum kya soch kar baith gayi haa yeh ghazal maine apne doston ko dedicate ki hai aur haa yeh bhi sach hai ki aap meri ek bahot achchi dost ho.....par meri dost yeh bilkul galat soch hai aapki ki jo dard meri ghazal mein hai vo mujhe SDC par mili.... iss ghazal ko SDC par mere doston ko dedicate karne ka matalb yeh hai ki aap doston ki wajah se, aapki compliments, comments aur encouragement ki wajah se main apni dukh ghazalon mein likh kar apana dil halka kar leti hun...mujhe aur bhi achcha mehsus hota hai jab aap jaise dost mujhe padhte hai....compliment karte hai...mere hissab se yeh meri sab se dard bhari ghazal hai toh main issay apne doston ke sang share karna chahti hun. mere doston ne..matlab ki aap Diya Doll...aap doston ne kafi maddat ki hai mujhe apna gum bhulane mein...waise bhuli nahi par halka zarur huwa hai dil aur lagta hai ki duniya akhir mein utni buri bhi nahi hai jitni SDC join karne se pahele lagti thi...ab lagta hai ki zindagi jeene ke layak hai toh mere dost mujhe isi tarah apna saath dete rahiyen aur please mujhe galat mat samajhiyen love n regards  _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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21st August 2009, 04:15 PM
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Meri Pyari Paaro ..............hum etne bure haiN kya hum to yehi chahtey haiN ki sabko Khushi miley, humne kabhi nahi chaha ki aapko ya kisi aur member ko kabhi hum hurt kareN, kabhi anjane mein tumhe dukh diya ho to hum sharamsaar haiN. shayri ke hisaab se tumhari gazal acchi hai. dua hai ki hamari paaro hamesha kush rahe aur next time jab bhi hume kuch dedicate kare to bahut pyar bhara kare  pyar ke saath tumhari diii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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21st August 2009, 04:32 PM
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pyari diiii please aap iss line ko delete kar dijiyen "Dedicated to all my friends on SDC...". yeh line kuch confusion create kar rahi hai. aap mante ho naa ki maine yeh achchi ghazal likhi hai?...toh mere kahene ka matlab hai ki meri improvement aur success in writing, aap doston ki wajah se hai. isi liye yeh ghazal aap ko dedicate kiya hai...baaki ghazal ke ik ik shabd koi aur ke liye hai jinhe SDC se koi lena dena nahi hai....balki unhe pata bhi nahi ki unki wajah se main ghazals likhti hun please aap dost yeh na soche ki meri ghazals ke words aap logo ke liye hai....aap ko toh main aapni writing dedicate kar rahi hun. aage bhi apna saath dijiyega hume....shukriya dii aur sorry aap ko hurt karne ke liye love n regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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21st August 2009, 04:39 PM
pari Sweet
Ghazal to Dil ka dard bayaan kar rahi hai aapki har sher mein sikayat hai ..isiliye humne samjha ki jarur koi gunah ho gaya hai humse................ sikayat unse hi hota hai jo apne hai with love Diya Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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21st August 2009, 04:45 PM
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diya doll sahi kaha apne ki shikayat apno se hi hoti hai toh jab bhi koi shikayat hogi main bejhijhak kahe dungi...filhaal toh guzarish hai ki apna saath banaye rakhiyen aur please meri baat ko samjhiyen...main aap ko apna writing dedicate kar rahi hun uska dard nahi....dard toh sabhi ko hota hai par ussay baya karna har kisi ko nahi aata....aap mere dard ko mehsus kar rahi hai toh matlab main apna dard baya karne main safal hui hun. ab yeh safalta mujhe aap doston ki wajah se mili hai toh isi liye maine apni sab se aziz ghazal aap doston ko dedicate ki hai. ghazal mein jo dard hai vo mera hai aur uski wajah aap bilkul bhi nahi hai...chaliyen ab muskura dijiyen agar meri baat se aap ko dukh hua ho toh sorry take care love _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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21st August 2009, 05:23 PM
Praneeta ji.......Aapne bahut khub kaha hai........ In panktiyon ne mujhe bahut mutassir kiyaa....... bujhatey sholon, ko kyu iss tarah hawa di tumne kuraid kar zakhamon ko khud, fir dawa di tumne pyaar jo palta tha, dil mein ussay daba di tumne nazar phair kar humse fir berukhi, jata di tumne thi ummid jo bhi, meri zindagi se mita di tumne bebasi ki lakir mere hateliyon par sajja di tumne Yuun toh Ghazal ke sabhi sher bahut umda rahe.....aise hi likhte rahiye.....aur khush rahiye........  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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21st August 2009, 08:24 PM
Dearest Pariii,
Kaise ho tum? Jee haan aaj aapki ghazal padhii udaas hogayii thi ki meine kya kiya ab kya ho gaya???..hehehe .  phir thank god I just saw the following replies phir lagta hai mujhe bhi sab ki tarah galat femii ho gayii...:PJii aapki ghazal dard a khoobi se beyaan kar rahi hain .. aur har sher pasand aaya .. Dua karti koi itna zulm kisi per bhi na kaare .. especially pyaari parii per ..aameen keep writing and posting good work! take good care of urself duaon ke saath aapki dost mandeep ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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22nd August 2009, 07:12 PM
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namaste Naresh ji..........shukriya aap ki response ke liye khushi hui aap ko yaha dekh kar yuhi saath nibhaiyenga................thnx again Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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22nd August 2009, 07:49 PM
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ummed hai apke doston me hum bhi shamil hai na....ki nahin? ghazal apki bahut acchi lagi......... qafiyabandi to gazab ki hai............sare ke sare matle...bahut khub.... ek dard bhari kadvi ghazal magar padne me maza aa gaya......... 4-5 baar pad liya ek saans me.....phir jakar rukne ka mann kiya....... bahut khoob..... regards |
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28th August 2009, 10:45 AM
praneeta jee,
namsate: baDi shiddat ke saath aap ne apnii bebasii, dard aur dil ke ghubaar ko lafzo.n ki shakl dee hai, aur is andaaz se aap ne apne ehsaas bayaa.n kiyaa hai ki paDhne waale ke dil par asar kar rahee haii.. kuchh yaad aa rahaa hai aap ke liye... in kaali sadiyon ke sar se jab raat ka aanchal dhalkega jab dukh ke baadal pighlenge jab sukh ka saagar chalkega jab ambar jhoom ke naachega jab dharti naghme gaayegi wo subah kabhi to aayegi wo subah kabhi to aayegi likhti rahe.n ... Mayank |
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28th August 2009, 04:26 PM
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main toh thik hun....aap kaisi hai? achcha hua jo aap ne aage ke replies padh li varna aap ko bhi batana padhta ki mera matlab kya hai ...yeh sach hai dost ki aap logo ki wajah se hi main kuch likh paa rahi hun toh iss liye meri success jo zyada nahi hai par jo bhi hai aap doston ko dedicate karti hun....shukriya mera saath nibhane ke liyelove n regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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29th August 2009, 04:28 PM
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adaab zidd sahab....ummid ki koi gunjaish hi nahi hai kyun ki aap baizzat mere dost hai aur rahenge yeh toh aap ki zarra nawazi hai jo aap ko meri ghazal achchi lagi varna maine toh bas dil ki baat kahi hai.......shukriya 4-5 baar padhne ke liye regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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29th August 2009, 05:00 PM
प्रणीता जी
आपकी रचना पढ़के ऐसा लग रहा है के आपको किसी अपने दोस्त ने धोका दिया है आपने जो कुछ लिखा है उस दर्द में शामिल सभी है मैं तो यहाँ नया हूँ मगर मुझे भी ऐसा लग रहा है के आपके दर्द में मैं भी शामिल हूँ. आपने बहुत अच्छा लिखा है मैं तो इतना ही कहूँगा क्यूँ की मैं दोस्ती करता ही नही हूँ सिर्फ़ दिलासा देता हूँ. Abed Farooqui Jalegi shammaye tere naam se qamar Parwaana hun tera naam jo liya karun |
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5th September 2009, 01:18 PM
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Namaste Mayank ji shukriya aap ke comment ke liye achcha laga aap ko yaha dekh kar bas yahi kahena hai aap ki wo pyari lines ke liye ki kahi aisa na ho ki hum hi na rahe jab... wo suban aayegi par haa........wo suban kabhi to aayegi Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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7th September 2009, 02:46 PM
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aap ko meri rachna pasand aayi yeh jaan kar khushi hui Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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7th September 2009, 10:44 PM
di bahut hi dard bhara likha hai apne. kabhi apko itne dard na mile yahi dua karuga apke liye.
khush rahiye hamesha, apka bhai dinu AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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11th September 2009, 01:16 PM
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jai shree krishan bhai kaise ho aap? shukriya aap ki comment aur wishes ke liye apna khayal rakhiyen love n regards ur di _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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30th September 2009, 02:57 PM
Dost,
Tumhari is ghazal ka sher bahot gahere dard ko bayan karta hai..... Sweety, is ghazal ke liye tum ko dil se daad........... ummid karti hoon tumhari kalam se aur bhi umda ghazal padhne milengi khush raho tumhari dost... purvi  ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
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2nd October 2009, 07:29 PM
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pari ji ko aadaab pari ji aap nay bahout hi umda likha hai har shayr lajawaab hai ..............aise hi likhtay rahyega aapka vichitra Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer...... Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi..... Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............ |
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9th October 2009, 04:54 AM
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sorry 4 late reply just wana say........ keep on touch love n regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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9th October 2009, 05:03 AM
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hi sweetheart.....kaha ho yaar tum in dino? missing ya heaps! thnx 4 cuming here pliz keep cuming love n regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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9th October 2009, 09:53 AM
Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah....
Kia baat hai Pari Jii, Bas itna hi kahon ga...Boht hi zaberdast... GOD BLESS YOU, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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19th October 2009, 09:47 AM
Praneeta JI
Happy Deewaali aapne in shabdo ko saadagi aur khoobsurat ke sath pesh -e- nazar kiya hai vo apane aap me ek kamaal ki koshish hai, wakai me insaan me sirf vichaar hi hote hai aur kuch nahi jis vo kis tarah se present karata hai , ye baat uske shabdo ke gyan pa nibhar karti hai kyoki jitna zyada shabdo ka gyan hoga utna hi ham apni soch ke aache se pesh kar paayege. bahut aacha feel hua padhakr aapki rachna. goodluck.........agli rachna ke liye.... ajay nidaan http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan  Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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19th October 2009, 01:01 PM
haans ke sare gham chupayee ro ker sab ko na bataye ...
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19th October 2009, 01:04 PM
hii how r u dear nice shayriii
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30th October 2009, 02:30 PM
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shukriya aapki hausla bhari reply ka aap ko pasand aayi yeh ghazal mujhe behadh khushi hui saath nibhaane ke liye shukriya Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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30th October 2009, 02:49 PM
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shukriya shukriya shukriya shukriya shukriya kya jawab hai Hassan sahab bas itna hi kahungi...............bahot khushi hui Warm Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota Ananthpak |
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~"REBELLIOUS IN LOVE"~
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9th November 2010, 03:55 AM
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maafi chaungi der se reply karne ke liye pichle diwali ko aap ne yaha post kiya tha main iss diwali ko aap ko reply kar ahi hun...sorry  shukriya aap ka ye thread padhne ke liye mujhe bhasha aur shabdon ka zyada gyan nahi toh maafi chahungi agar kich galat likha ho khushi hui ye jaan kar ki aap ko achcha mehsus hua ye padh kar thnx 4 ur wishes best wishes 2 u 2 Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota Ananthpak |
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RADHE RADHE
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9th November 2010, 11:34 AM
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radhe radhe bahut khoob kitna dard bhara hai is ghazal me padhne ke baad mehsoos ho raha hai daad dil se kubul karen duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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