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20th August 2003, 12:19 PM
noor hai jo nazar ka …ussi sey chura leti mein nazar
yeh kaisi khwaish hai
chahti hun bani rahey muskurahat uskey laboon ki jaagir,
mager yeh bhi hai tamanna… bhigoyee wo mere badd meri tasveer,
yeh kaisi khwaish hai.
success is not a goal,but a journey!
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20th August 2003, 05:07 PM
Meetu Jee, khwaish parke achha laga. Hota hein kabhi kabhi.
Pyaar hein toh yeh bhi sath sath hein. Thanks. Likhte rahiyega. Hum parte rahenge.
Take care. God bless.
Shimul.
*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche**
*~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~**
*Pure Love**
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20th August 2003, 05:23 PM
meetu jee yehe bhi bahot khoobsurat hai ...par ise ishq meine bewafyee bahot hai..........Kuch lines llikjhin hain ,gaur farmayega....
"Khwaiish to yehe bhi hain ke hum unke noor-e-nazar hoon
Par ishq meine sabko yehe mukaam nahin milta
Khwaiish to yeh bhi hai ki hum hi unke Dil ke gulfaam hoon
Par ishq meine sabko aisa khoobsurat anjaam nahin milta
Sath chalne ke waade to bahot karte hain Rah-e-ishq pe
Sath jo maut tak nibha jaye aisa unse humeine koi paigham nahin milta"
kya kareine hum??
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20th August 2003, 05:45 PM
Ye kaisi Khwaish Hai ..
Bahut Achhe ..
noor hai jo nazar ka …ussi sey chura leti mein nazar
chahti hun bani rahey muskurahat uskey laboon ki jaagir,
mager yeh bhi hai tamanna… bhigoyee wo mere badd meri tasveer
Bahut KhoobSurat Hai ..
Take Care
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20th August 2003, 05:59 PM
hi meetu ,,aapki feelings padi ,,,,achi lagi ,,,,but humein samjh nahin aaya ,,,,,,ki aisa kyun likha hein ,,,,mere baaad wo aansuon se meri taswir bhigoye,,,,wakai samjh nahin aaya ,,,i hope u dont mind ,,,,,,,samjhaogi to acha lagega,,,,waise abhi bhi acha hi hein,,,,,
keep smiling....and the world will smile with u
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21st August 2003, 04:19 AM
hi meetu ji .apne bahut acha likha hai .khawaish to hamesha khawish reh jati hai, kabhi pure hote dekha hi nahin .ok bye
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21st August 2003, 07:15 AM
nikal aatay hey ansoo hastay hastay,ye kis gham ki mahak hey her kushi me
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21st August 2003, 07:22 AM
"Khwaiish to yehe bhi hain ke hum unke noor-e-nazar hoon
Par ishq meine sabko yehe mukaam nahin milta
Khwaiish to yeh bhi hai ki hum hi unke Dil ke gulfaam hoon
Par ishq meine sabko aisa khoobsurat anjaam nahin milta
Sath chalne ke waade to bahot karte hain Rah-e-ishq pe
Sath jo maut tak nibha jaye aisa unse humeine koi paigham nahin milta"
kya kareine hum??
Ankur Jee, Keya kare keise kare. Sawale toh hein lekin aap khudh hi poocho aapne aapse pehle fhir agar jawab na mile toh poochlena. Ok?
Khub likhha hein aapne. Bohot achha tha.
Keise hein aap?
Keya baat hein? Kuch jiyada hi udash dikhte hein.
Kuch zaroor batayega. Thanks. Take care.
God bless.
Shimul.
*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche**
*~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~**
*Pure Love**
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21st August 2003, 07:23 AM
jatay jatay kis nazar say apnay dehka mujahy, ban gaya tasveer takti rah gahi duniya mujahy
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21st August 2003, 09:59 AM
Shimul jee yehe to humeine khud bhi nahin pata .......Pata hoga to jaroor bataoonga ....
Cruiser jee aapki yehe line bahot hi umda hai ,likhte raheyega.........
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21st August 2003, 04:15 PM
Ankur Jee, zaroor bataiyega. Hum intezar karenge.
Sukriya. Take care. God bless.
Shimul.
Lekin yeh Intezar kahi qayamat tak na lejaiyega!!
*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche**
*~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~**
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22nd August 2003, 10:33 AM
Tnx all of u to appreciating this sher.
Rajawar ji bhut kuch is duniya main hai…jo hum samjhna chatey nahi ya samjh ker bhi aanjan baney rehtey hai….hope u get ur reply if not than u cam chk your PM.
Cruiser ji aapki line bhi wakai kabiley tariff hai…
Tnx shimul ji..punnu or kshitiz ji aakir kisi bahaney hi sahi aap ishq section mein aa hi gayee.
Oooooooooooohhhhhhh aam_admi ji aapko kaisey bhul saktey hai hum…aapka yeh sher to mere Sher per bhut bhari nazer aata hai..tnx a lot shayad aapkey is sher ney is section mein narey karam ker k 4-chaand laga diye.
success is not a goal,but a journey!
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22nd August 2003, 02:55 PM
thanx meetu jee ,yehe to pata nahin yehe bhari hai ya halka but jo bhi hai Direct Dil se hai......Ek sher suna tha bahot pehele yahan likh raha hoon ..........
"Armann to itne rakhte hain ,ki har armaan pe Dum nikale
Par jitne bhi nikale mere Armaan ,Sabhi Kam nikale"
Likhte rayeeyega meetu jee.....
Ankur
***Michael Jordan was once told, 'Basketball is a team game and there is no 'I' in the word 'TEAM'.' Jordan quipped back, 'There may be no 'I' in 'TEAM' but there is in 'WIN'.'********
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22nd August 2003, 03:06 PM
Ankur Jee, wah yeh bhi khub hein, achha hien ke aapne suna hein. Bara achha hi suna hein. Likh wale se sunne wale ki kadar jiyada hein. Thanks. Take care. God bless.
Shimul.
Waise football wala baat bhi achha tha.
*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche**
*~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~**
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22nd August 2003, 05:20 PM
ankur ji!
Khwashion/aarmanoon ka daaman pakker ker abhi chalna sekha hai…dekhey yeh rahein humey ley jayeengi kahan???????
Take care!
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22nd August 2003, 05:32 PM
Aie DiL E NaaZ Hume .. Aksar TuJh par naaz Hota Hai
MuQaDDaR Bana Liya jisme Uss WaQT PaR NaaZ HoTa Hai
Humari DhadkaneiN DiL BaN kaR Aapke Sine me Bas jayeiN
AksaR Dil ko AiSi TamannaoN Par NaaZ HoTa Hai
AkSaR SavaR JaTi hai kismat GuM ki viraniyoN me BHi
Ye Qamaal kuch aur NaHi aapka NiGaaH E NaaZ HoTa Hai
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22nd August 2003, 06:33 PM
wah! baat kahi hai aapney kshitiz ji! really its too good.
merey is post mein aapkey or aaam_aadmi ji k jab sher samney aatey hai to mujhey to bhut accha lagta hai...tnx nahi kahun gi aapko because its ur right to post ur composition here.
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31st August 2003, 07:12 PM
noor hai jo nazar ka …ussi sey chura leti mein nazar
yeh kaisi khwaish hai
chahti hun bani rahey muskurahat uskey laboon ki jaagir,
mager yeh bhi hai tamanna… bhigoyee wo mere badd meri tasveer,
yeh kaisi khwaish hai.
yeh kya tha.....????
shayer tha kya???
jo bhi hai bilkul tumahri tarah hai.....
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1st September 2003, 07:11 PM
...mohit ji yahan kuch to meri tereh hai...aab aapka kya hai yahan zara yeh batney ka kastt karen gayee to bdi merbani hogi...
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