Sabki apni apni manzil hoti hai
Sath chalney sey koi humsafer nahi hota!
Bohat khoob likha hai aapne meetu ji.. maaf kariyega.. nazar zara der se paRi.. Apne jis khoobi se apne jazbaat bayaan kiye hain... waqai.. mehsus hota hai apka dard...
Aam Aadmi ji, apne bhi jo sher kaha hai.. sach hi kaha.. aksar ji karta hai bas, ab ye zidagi, ye matlabi duniya chhod kar chale jao.. naahi hume iski zaroorat hai, aur naahi ise humaari.. magar akhir hum insaan hi hain.. jeena chahte hain.. isi liye, umeed ki ek kiran hi aksar kaafi hoti hai.. ek nayi aas bandha jaane ke liye.
Khair.. aap dono ne bohat khoob likha hai... tareef kubool kijiyega..