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Jindgi Tan Horan Nu - 9th January 2012, 07:43 PM

Jindgi Tan Horan Nu Hasaundeyan De Beet Gye
Kuj Russe Hoye Sajjna Nu Manudeyan De Beet Gye
Sada Koi Nahi Bin Tere Eh Gal Samjundeyan De Beet Gye
Bada Roye Os Nu Yaad Karke Te Sarri Raat Kud Nu......
Chup Kraundeyan De Beet Gye
   
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9th January 2012, 08:42 PM

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Jindgi Tan Horan Nu Hasaundeyan De Beet Gye
Kuj Russe Hoye Sajjna Nu Manudeyan De Beet Gye
Sada Koi Nahi Bin Tere Eh Gal Samjundeyan De Beet Gye
Bada Roye Os Nu Yaad Karke Te Sarri Raat Kud Nu......
Chup Kraundeyan De Beet Gye


vryyyyyy nyc.....tuhade ahsaas bahut vadiyaaaaa hai, je tusi thoda hor likho taa jayada vadiya lagega...mera matlab ki 4-5 lines to jayada likho...its just my suggestion


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2nd May 2012, 10:15 PM

oh thnax for u sugestions
i will try


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