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"agle janam mohe bitiyaa hi keejo" - 21st November 2014, 10:19 AM

Dosto,

kuChh arse pehle, Hindi TV par ik Drama baRaa hi popular hu`aa thaa, Title thaa,
“Agle Janam mohe biTiya hi keejo”

kuChh usii samay darmyaan, Washington,DC ke ilaaqe meN ik mushaa`iraa hu`aa aur wahaaN ik muqaami shaa`ir, janaab Yusuf Raahat saahab ne ik nazm paRhii, jis kaa unvaan bhi yehii thaa.

Nazm kaa mauzuu to puraanaa hai magar jaise k, Saifuddin “saif” ne ik she`r meN kahaa hai kih,

“Saif” andaaz-e-bayaaN rang badal deta hai
varnah duniya meN ko`ii baat nayii baat nahiiN”

To aap bhi dekhiye k, Janaab Yusuf Raahat saahab kaa yeh andaaz-e-bayaaN aap ko kaisaa lagaa?

Nazm Haazir-e-Khidmat hai.

(Is meN kaafii alfaaz Hindi ke haiN, to agar Romanization meN ko`ii Ghalati ho to aap se guzaarish hai k, nishaandehi farmaayeN)
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Nazm

Agle janam mohe biTiyaa hi keejo

biTiya banii to dard se do-chaar hu`ii maiN
zindah jalee kabhii, kabhi koThe pe bikee maiN
Khud ke balaatkaar pe doshii bhi rahii maiN
A(h)tyaa ke jitney ruup haiN saaroN se milee maiN
Iksha miri jo puuChho to phir bhi yeh kahuuNgii
Naari huuN, har janam meN maiN biTiyaa hi banuuNgii

Anyaay hi anyaay mire saath hu`aa hai
Majbuur reh ke chup kaa zahar maiN ne piyaa hai
Jo nark se badtar thaa woh jeevan bhi jiyaa hai
karnaa jo nah chaahaa thaa wohi haNs ke kiyaa hai
Jab jab ko`ii puuChhegaa parantuu yeh kahuuNgii
Naari huuN, har janam meN maiN biTiya hi banuuN gii

didee bhi huuN, maataa bhi huuN, ChhoTi bahan bhi maiN
beTi huuN kisii ki to kisii ki dulhan bhi maiN
huuN prem kaa saagar bhi, Khushi ki kiran bhi maiN
phir bhi qadam qadam pe huuN ik apshagun bhi maiN
peeChhe bhi jhel aa`ii huuN, aage bhi sahuuNgii
naari huN, har janam meN maiN biTiya hi banuuNgi

ik shubh ghaRii bhi aayegi, yeh jaanti huuN maiN
meri bhi suni jaayegi, yeh maanti huuN maiN
duniya jo hai paChhtaayegi, yeh jaanti huuN maiN
hatyaa miri rang laayegi, yeh jaanti huuN maiN
us daur ke Khaatir maiN zamaane se laRuuNgii
naari huuN, har janam meN maiN biTiya hi banuuNgii


~Yusuf Raahat ( 5/30/2010)

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21st November 2014, 10:47 AM

kyaa baat hai............................... bahot hi accchi sharingki hai aapne BGM saahab.....

ek mashwaraa hai ke, khud ko bachaa ke rakhiyegaa bazm me..... aajkal log choree ho jaate hain...... lol


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21st November 2014, 10:47 AM

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Dosto,

kuChh arse pehle, Hindi TV par ik Drama baRaa hi popular hu`aa thaa, Title thaa,
“Agle Janam mohe biTiya hi keejo”

kuChh usii samay darmyaan, Washington,DC ke ilaaqe meN ik mushaa`iraa hu`aa aur wahaaN ik muqaami shaa`ir, janaab Yusuf Raahat saahab ne ik nazm paRhii, jis kaa unvaan bhi yehii thaa.

Nazm kaa mauzuu to puraanaa hai magar jaise k, Saifuddin “saif” ne ik she`r meN kahaa hai kih,

“Saif” andaaz-e-bayaaN rang badal deta hai
varnah duniya meN ko`ii baat nayii baat nahiiN”

To aap bhi dekhiye k, Janaab Yusuf Raahat saahab kaa yeh andaaz-e-bayaaN aap ko kaisaa lagaa?

Nazm Haazir-e-Khidmat hai.

(Is meN kaafii alfaaz Hindi ke haiN, to agar Romanization meN ko`ii Ghalati ho to aap se guzaarish hai k, nishaandehi farmaayeN)
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Nazm

Agle janam mohe biTiyaa hi keejo

biTiya banii to dard se do-chaar hu`ii maiN
zindah jalee kabhii, kabhi koThe pe bikee maiN
Khud ke balaatkaar pe doshii bhi rahii maiN
A(h)tyaa ke jitney ruup haiN saaroN se milee maiN
Iksha miri jo puuChho to phir bhi yeh kahuuNgii
Naari huuN, har janam meN maiN biTiyaa hi banuuNgii

Anyaay hi anyaay mire saath hu`aa hai
Majbuur reh ke chup kaa zahar maiN ne piyaa hai
Jo nark se badtar thaa woh jeevan bhi jiyaa hai
karnaa jo nah chaahaa thaa wohi haNs ke kiyaa hai
Jab jab ko`ii puuChhegaa parantuu yeh kahuuNgii
Naari huuN, har janam meN maiN biTiya hi banuuN gii

didee bhi huuN, maataa bhi huuN, ChhoTi bahan bhi maiN
beTi huuN kisii ki to kisii ki dulhan bhi maiN
huuN prem kaa saagar bhi, Khushi ki kiran bhi maiN
phir bhi qadam qadam pe huuN ik apshagun bhi maiN
peeChhe bhi jhel aa`ii huuN, aage bhi sahuuNgii
naari huN, har janam meN maiN biTiya hi banuuNgi

ik shubh ghaRii bhi aayegi, yeh jaanti huuN maiN
meri bhi suni jaayegi, yeh maanti huuN maiN
duniya jo hai paChhtaayegi, yeh jaanti huuN maiN
hatyaa miri rang laayegi, yeh jaanti huuN maiN
us daur ke Khaatir maiN zamaane se laRuuNgii
naari huuN, har janam meN maiN biTiya hi banuuNgii


~Yusuf Raahat ( 5/30/2010)

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behad nazuk ehsaas hai, dil ko chu gye yeh ehsaas...share karne ke liye shukriya.


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21st November 2014, 03:49 PM

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28th November 2014, 10:16 PM

Naari hoon har janam me bitiya hi banoongi..

Haqiqat se rubaru karate huye ehsaas....
thanks for sharing BGM shahab.



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