Chund ashk jane kis liye palkoen mein tahar gaye
Woh Falaah* ki baarish teri aur gumoen* ka dariyaa tera
Hum ne mehfil mein qya chher di aafsane tere
Har shaama jali yahan har shakhs bana parwaana tera
Kis kis ko jane hum ne roka, kis kis se hum ne kaha
Khusboo thi phoolon ki magar, logon ne socha ashiyaana tera
arnab ji bohat acha likha hai aap ne uper wale ashaar main kuch spelling mistakes thin jo theek ki hain umeed hai bura nahi maanainge likhte rahiye..........
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
arnab ji bahut khoob likha hai aapne....ek bahut hi mashahoor gazal ki zameen uthai hai aapne....umda fankaaro.n ki zameen par likhna bahut muskil kaam hai. aapne behtar likha hai...daad hazir hai
god bless u
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
Location: dil mein khud ke..aisa nahi kisi ko mera pata nahi hai mujhe dhundhne ki had tak koi dhundhta nahi hai..un
Rep Power: 34
13th November 2008, 02:35 PM
Arnab Goswami ji
kisi gazal mein hindi shabdo ko urdu me aur urdu ko hindi mein convrt karne se woh gazal mere khyaal se apki likhi nahi ho jati....to pls aap jab ayisa kare usme not mine likhe jarur
aur jo gazal aapne pesh ki hai woh har gazal sunanne wale ki feb gazal hai.achi hai yakeenan
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
kisi gazal mein hindi shabdo ko urdu me aur urdu ko hindi mein convrt karne se woh gazal mere khyaal se apki likhi nahi ho jati....to pls aap jab ayisa kare usme not mine likhe jarur
aur jo gazal aapne pesh ki hai woh har gazal sunanne wale ki feb gazal hai.achi hai yakeenan
sakhi
Yes you are right. I've taken the matla(first 2 lines) to set the context right..But all the asar's are mine...This gazal by basir badar is also my fab one.