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Zindagi beet-ti chali gayi aur me sochti chali gayi
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Love Zindagi beet-ti chali gayi aur me sochti chali gayi - 2nd February 2003, 05:59 AM

dosto pesh hai..........

Zindagi beet-ti chali gayi aur me sochti chali gayi,
kya khoya kya paaya, bas me khojti chali gayi !!

Aisi huyi khud se anjaan yaaro khud se nadaan uske pyar mein.
Din hai ya raat,chal hai ya kapat,me bin soch samjhe dolti chali gayi !!

laga tha usey bhi hai mujhsey pyar, hai wafa ki uski ummedain,
thi bahut bebas apne hi pyar me magan, hai tujhSey pyar bas yahi bolti chali gayi !!

Thi kami mujhmey ya mere pyaar mein yahi khud se pucha maine,
chain aya nahi jabse tuney muh fera, me bas khud ko tatorti chali gayi..................

Priya.


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2nd February 2003, 06:20 AM

is ghazal meiN aapne kaafiyaa ka sahii isthemaal kiya hai!

Zindagi beet-ti chali gayi aur me sochti chali gayi,
kya khoya kya paaya, bas me khojti chali gayi

-- waah! kya baat sochi hai aapne!

bahot acha likhte haiN aap..

likhte rahiye,
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Thumbs up thanks - 2nd February 2003, 07:57 AM

aman ji thanks that u liked the lines expressed in this shayri
if u like it then anyone would like it. mujhe tumahri pasand par pura aitbaar hai =) jaha tak baat hai kaafiya ka to sikh to aapne hi di hai guru dev ,

thanks again

luv Priya


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2nd February 2003, 07:32 PM

Thi kami mujhmey ya mere pyaar mein yahi khud se pucha maine,
chain aya nahi jabse tuney muh fera, me bas khud ko tatorti chali gayi..................

Wah priya ji..Kya likha hai aapne..Par ik baat kahoonga ,ke khud ko tatolna band kar deejiye kyonki kami aapki mohobat mein nahin hai ye kamnaseebi hai us shakhs ki jisne itna bhar'a Khazana kho diya hai..

Waise 'gurudev' aapki shayri savarne mein Kaafi help kar rahe hai.. Kaafiye ki knowledge hame bhi aman ji se hi hui hai..

Aise hi likhte rahiye..
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hiiii - 24th February 2003, 04:41 AM

wow! achaa likha hai...
i relly liked it!
nice!
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keep writin,
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hi - 27th February 2003, 01:05 AM

dear riddhi ji and varinder shahab
thanks a lot for being here and for the kind words of encouragement!! it means a lot to me
thanks again
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