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Sanjay Raina (Shayaraina)
 
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Main jahan hoon...... -
6th September 2014, 03:27 AM
Main jahan hoon
Ek paristan' sa nazar aata hai.. Mausam-e-ishq mein Tera naam nazar aata hai.... Azal sey raah talaashi thi yahan aaney ki Yahan Ghalib ka bhi deewaan nazar aata hai... Arsh pey baitha hoon key dekhoon yeh nazaara bhi Farsh pey kaisa gulistan nazar aata hai..... Chamakta hai chaand timtimaata hain taarey *Baadalon mein toofaan kyun nazar aata hai... Baada Nashi ka tareeka aisa dekha na kahin Sabki aankhon mein yahan jaam nazar aata hai... Main jahan hoon Ek paristan' sa nazar aata hai.. Mausam-e-ishq mein Tera naam nazar aata hai.... Mujhsey mohabbat karney ka... Har lafz mein intazaam hai, Mere tabhiyat sey marney ka...." (SR)c&p www.sanjayraina.com https://www.facebook.com/groups/377302509090534/ https://twitter.com/sanjayraina |
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8th September 2014, 10:34 AM
Sanjaybhai,
bahot hi khubsurat tehriir rahii... har aashaar apne aap meN purii baat bayaan kar jaati hai... aur har sher pur-asar hai.... dheroN dheroN daad hamaari jaanib se.... duaaoN ke saath Adil ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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Some Mirrors Lie...
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8th September 2014, 11:13 AM
Waaahhh!! Raina jee,
Bohat khooob... ishQ ki chaashni liye yeH nazm be-had pasand aayi..  DherooN daad pesh-e-khidmat hai, Likhte rahiye, Aate rahiye, DuaooN ke saath,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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Sanjay Raina (Shayaraina)
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15th September 2014, 02:27 PM
Thank u so much Adil bhai and Hassan Bhai...
Rgds Mujhsey mohabbat karney ka... Har lafz mein intazaam hai, Mere tabhiyat sey marney ka...." (SR)c&p www.sanjayraina.com https://www.facebook.com/groups/377302509090534/ https://twitter.com/sanjayraina |
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17th September 2014, 12:23 AM
waaaahhhhhh .........bht khubbb nazm hai shayaraina ji
Dard lafzon me pirona chahta hai.. |
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Sanjay Raina (Shayaraina)
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17th September 2014, 10:48 AM
Shukriya Anamika ji...Inaayat!
Ab kisi bhi gham ka zikr na kijiye, Hum hain toe aap koi phikr na kijiye... (SR)c&p Mujhsey mohabbat karney ka... Har lafz mein intazaam hai, Mere tabhiyat sey marney ka...." (SR)c&p www.sanjayraina.com https://www.facebook.com/groups/377302509090534/ https://twitter.com/sanjayraina |
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17th September 2014, 11:41 AM
Very good sanjay ji...too good. ..
Ehsaas behad khoobsurat hain Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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Sanjay Raina (Shayaraina)
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17th September 2014, 12:14 PM
Thank u so much Zainy Ji. God bless.
Mujhsey mohabbat karney ka... Har lafz mein intazaam hai, Mere tabhiyat sey marney ka...." (SR)c&p www.sanjayraina.com https://www.facebook.com/groups/377302509090534/ https://twitter.com/sanjayraina |
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17th September 2014, 03:34 PM
Sanjay ji namaskaar
aaj aapko pehli baar pad rhi hu, bahut accha lga aapko padna...bahut khoobsurat ehsaas. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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Sanjay Raina (Shayaraina)
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17th September 2014, 03:43 PM
Thank u so much Sunita ji. Khushmati hai meri ke aapko accha laga,pl stay in touch.
God bless. Mujhsey mohabbat karney ka... Har lafz mein intazaam hai, Mere tabhiyat sey marney ka...." (SR)c&p www.sanjayraina.com https://www.facebook.com/groups/377302509090534/ https://twitter.com/sanjayraina |
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