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kab se hooN, kya bataaooN - Ghalib -
18th October 2013, 03:37 PM
Hum Ghalib saab ke iis ghazal ko yahaa'n iis liye pesh kar rahe hain, kyun ki iis me Ghalib saab ka ek alag andaaz dekhne ko milta hai.
Bahot se ustaadon ne matla-e-avval aur husn-e-matle ka bayaan kiya hai, magar bahut kam shayr hain jinho ne iss ka sahi maaiine me istemal kiya ho. Ye qalaam usee ki misaal hai... Dekhne ki baat ye bhi hai ke ye ghazal matla-e-avval se nahi par log husn-e-matla se pechante hai. miltee hai KHoo-e-yaar se naar iltihaab meiN kaafir hooN gar na miltee ho raahat 'azaab meiN kab se hooN, kya bataaooN jahaan-e-KHaraab meiN? shab haaye hijr ko bhee rakhooN gar hisaab meiN taa fir na intezaar meiN neeNd aaye 'umr bhar aane ka 'ahad kar gaye aaye jo KHwaab meiN qaasid ke aate-aate KHat ik aur likh rakhooN maiN jaanta hooN jo woh likhenge jawaab meiN mujh tak kab unkee bazm meiN aata tha daur-e-jaam saaqee ne kuchch mila na diya ho sharaab meiN jo munkir-e-wafa ho fareb us pe kya chale? kyooN badGHumaaN hooN dost se dushman ke baab meiN? maiN muztarib hooN wasl meiN KHauf-e-raqeeb se Daala hai tumko weham ne kis pech-o-taab meiN mai aur haz'z-e-wasl, KHudaa_saaz baat hai jaaN nazr denee bhool gaya iztiraab meiN hai tevaree chaDee huee andar naqaab ke hai ik shikan paDee huee tarf-e-naqaab meiN laakhauN lagaav, ik churaana nigaah ka laakhauN banaav, ik bigaaDna itaab meiN woh naala_dil meiN KHas ke baraabar jagah na paaye jis naale se shigaaf paDe aaftaab meiN woh sehar muddaa talbee meiN na kaam aaye jis sehar se safina ravaaN ho saraab meiN 'GHalib' chutee sharaab, par ab bhee kabhee-kabhee peeta hooN roz-e-abr -o- shab-e-maahtaab meiN.. ~Mirza Ghalib  ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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18th October 2013, 03:44 PM
Aadeil saahab aadaab.. kyaa besh keemti tohfaa lekar aayehain aap mehfil me.. waahhhhh tareef shaayad kamm pad jaaye is nayaab kareegarii ke liye...
is ghazal ke kai aashar ne mujhe mutassir kiyaa hai magar sabse zyaada ye sher mujhe raas aaya hai... waah kya takhayyul aur bayaani hai.. qaasid ke aate-aate KHat ik aur likh rakhooN maiN jaanta hooN jo woh likhenge jawaab meiN Ghalib saahab ko allah bakshe aur jannat me aala muqaam de.. aameen Shaad... |
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18th October 2013, 04:27 PM
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Aapki iis dua pe Ghalib saab ke hi vichar bayaan karta huun. Aapko shaayad pataa na ho par Ghalib saab ilm se alag the. Unhon ne ek baar kahaa tha ki -- Jannat me mujhe sahar hote sharaab to mil jayegi, par raat ko wo dost kahaan milenge jo mere saath dagmaae? Wahaan gar khazaan nahi hai to bahaar kaise aayegi? Gar whaa husn pari hi hai to wo masukaa kaise milegi jo dil tod kar bhaag jayegi? -- Ek alag soch rakhte the wo. To dua yun karte hai ki wahan bhi unhe wo aish mile jo unhon ne yahaan payee thi  ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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18th October 2013, 05:34 PM
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Mere khayaal me  Jaise maine bataayaa, me koee master nahi huun Unkee philosophy ko iis sheyr ke zariye bayaan karna chahunga. Shaayad ghazal bhi ban jaaye!? Arz hai... aisA nahi'n ki duniyA me tera wajud nahi'n phirtA hU'n liye tasvIr terI gUmrAh jaHAn hai ~Aadeil ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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18th October 2013, 08:43 PM
Is azeem shayar ki ye azeem ghazal ko pesh karne ka shukriya Aadeil ji
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12th March 2014, 12:45 PM
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 to ye bayaan pe khud se zillat huee....  so I am really really sorry on such a comment  ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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28th March 2014, 02:22 PM
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Main zidd bhai, Mishraji aur aap jaise faazil dostoN ka shukra guzaar hooN. Aap logoN se hi hamne ghazal kaise likhee jaati hai wo jaana hai sach men yahaaN aane se pehle hum kuch bhee likh dete the aur use ek ghazal samajh lete the. ab hum dhire dhire kuch samajhne lage hai aur hum chahenge ki aap hamaare qalaam pe bhee tabdeer kareN. isee ummeed ke saath........... Adil ka salaam. ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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28th March 2014, 02:38 PM
jee janaab.... main poori koshish karunga..... shukriyaa izzat afzaai k liye.
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3rd April 2014, 11:06 AM
waah waaah bahot umdaa ghazal....zabardast peskas.aadeil ji......dil se daad.............................!!!
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3rd April 2014, 11:35 AM
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aate rahiye..... ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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