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"Maa tey Maa" Gujarati -
20th September 2005, 08:09 PM
"Maa tey Maa"
Ek yug thi ankhon taari chabbi ney chey tarsey
Savan na jem taari yaad maa ae varsey!
Sahiney dukhona dungaroney amoney laad ladavya
Hansta hansta ae dukho ney haiyyeh lagadya!
Faryad kadiye dukhoni na aavi zaban per taari
Shun shun na viti pyari “Maa” per amaari!!
Puri kari Ishwarey icchhao darek amaari
Madti nathi amoney bus dua o tamaari!!
Darek bhulo aney gunahoney amara karjo maaf
Em svarg naa dwar amara matey karjo saaf!!
Farishta pan taney karey juki ney salam
Tevo madey taney svargma darajjo aney mukam!!!
Rajan!!!
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20th September 2005, 08:26 PM
Rajan ji,
Tamari Kavitaa vaanchi ne aankh bharaayi aavi. tamari kavita pasand aavi. kharekhar asardaar chhe darek shabd. amari daad kubul karsho. bas vanchyaa j karu aem laage chhe. gujarati ma ane ae pan tamari kavita... shu vaat chhe. I feel lucky!
Bas aamaj lakhta rehsho!
Dhanyvaad, sadaa khush raho.
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Re: "Maa tey Maa" Gujarati -
21st September 2005, 04:04 PM
ek yug se aankhe, tumhari chhavi ko tarasti hai
saavan ki tarah tumhari yaad mai wo barasti hai
sah kar dukho ke pahaad, humko laad ladaye
haste haste oon dukho ko hriday se lagaye
fariyaad kabhi dukho ki n aayi jubaan tumhare
kya kya na biti pyari maa par humari
poori ki bhagwaan ne humari sabhi chahte
milti nahi bas humae aapki duaa-ae
harek galti or gunaah karna humare maaf
is tarah swarg ke dar karna humare liye saaf
faristae bhi tumhe kare juk kar salaam
is kadar mile tumhe swarg mai makaam.
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21st September 2005, 04:05 PM
rajan,
maa maate na ahesaas badal aapne abhinandan.
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21st September 2005, 04:14 PM
Bahout hi soundar kavita hai...Rajan Ji ! Hum ko bahout pasand
aayi...!
Thank you so much!
Meena Ji...!
Iss ka anuvaad karne ke liye aap ka dil se shukriya...!
Apna khayaal rakhiyega
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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21st September 2005, 04:24 PM
ek yug se aankhe, tumhari chhavi ko tarasti hai
saavan ki tarah tumhari yaad mai wo barasti hai
sah kar dukho ke pahaad, humko laad ladaye
haste haste oon dukho ko hriday se lagaye
Very beautiful words...!
fariyaad kabhi dukho ki n aayi jubaan tumhare
kya kya na biti pyari maa par humari
poori ki bhagwaan ne humari sabhi chahte
milti nahi bas humae aapki duaa-ae
Nicely said...!
harek galti or gunaah karna humare maaf
is tarah swarg ke dar karna humare liye saaf
faristae bhi tumhe kare juk kar salaam
is kadar mile tumhe swarg mai makaam.
Beautifullll...!
Rajan bhai!
Ek bara fir aapke shabd aur aapki soch dil ko chho gaye hain... bahut hi pyaara likha hai aapne is baar bhi.. Accha laga ise padhkar...Aise hi likhte rahiye...apna khayal bhi rakhiyega....
Didi... main hindi version ka intezzar hi kar raha thha
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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21st September 2005, 06:19 PM
Parul Ji,
Tamey always mari post karel rachnao ney vancho cho, pasand karo cho aney tamaro tey bra maa abhipray pan aapo cho, bahuj khushi thai chey aney pachi tey maney kaink lakhva matey prarit karey chey!! "Matusri" matey jetlu lakhai tetlu ochoo chey - Janeta tey Janeta j, tetli niswarth vahal ni asha anya pasethi rakhi naa shakay!!
Tamaro abhaar!
Rajan!!
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21st September 2005, 06:26 PM
Meena Bahen!!
Saras anuvaad karel chey! Tamey vanchyoo hashey key Pulkit Ji ney pan tamara tarafthi anuvaad ni asha hati!!! Tamara help matey ghano j abhaar!
Maa matey kain pan kehvapanoo na hoi!! Maa kharekhar Maa j hoi chey, jem tamey kahyoo tem bhavnao no bhavsagar!!
Abhaar aney sneh sahit,
Rajan!!!
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21st September 2005, 06:30 PM
Amanush Ji,
Aapko yeh Kavita pasand ayi, bahot khushi hui!! Meri mother kaa jab 1989 mai dehant hua tha, jab mainey yek likhi thi!!
Phir sey pasand karney key liye thanks!!
Rajan!!!
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21st September 2005, 06:35 PM
Pulkit Ji,
Aapney yeh Kavita padhi aur aapney pasand bhi ki, bahot bahot shukriya!! Her ek stanza ko le kar aapney taarif ki bahot hi accha laga!!
Meena Ji translate karney may sahayta kartey hai varna yeh ahsas aap tak pahoch naa pata!
Thanks once again Pulkit Ji,
Rajan!!
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17th March 2008, 02:36 PM
rajan,
maa maate na ahesaas badal aapne abhinandan.
wah wah rajan bhai
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20th March 2008, 12:01 AM
Pranaam Rajan jee:
tamaari aa rachna maaraa hraday maa vasi gayii.. !
KhuSh raho.. jai Shree kriShnaa..!
aapno
~ Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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21st March 2008, 02:43 AM
Thanks Azizbhai!
Ek "maa" na j raday thi sadantar vahal nu nisvarth zarnu vahetu rahey chey, tevu maru manvu chey....
Take care!
Rajan!!!
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21st March 2008, 03:32 AM
Dhaval Ji!
Kharekhar maa vishey prasansha na shabdo pan ocha padey chey...
tamari lakhel rachnao vanchvano labh madey chey, khubaj saras lakhi shako cho tema koi shanka na madey....
All the best!
Rajan!!!
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7th May 2008, 10:11 PM
badha j frnds ne kem cho? maa ni yaad ma j hati ne aa kavita wanchi, be wars thi india jawayu nathi mari mummi khub yad aawe che ,rajan bhai aankho bhini thai ne na rahi gai warsi warsi ney ma mate tarsi gai.
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7th May 2008, 10:35 PM
ma vishe lakhwa mate aankh kori thati nathi,,,,,,,mane mali shaku ewi koi raah mane malti nathi
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11th May 2008, 04:20 PM
MaansiJi!!
"ma vishe lakhwa mate aankh kori thati nathi,"
Tamey kharoo kahyoo...Aajey Mother's Day naa tamney reply kerta ghani khushi thai chey..."Maa ni toley koi nahin...."
Hamesha khush rehsho!!
Rajan!!
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11th May 2008, 05:01 PM
Saras Lakhyu chhe...
I'm fortunate enough to read it on mother's day...
Keep it up...
-Dr.Ashish
Chhap tilak sab chhin li re moh se naina milay ke.....Le gai hai chain...sukoon...lakhte jigar...saans bhi behti hai to bolti hai...dard-ejigar...dard-e-jigar...dard-e-jigar...Ek ehsaas ho tum...rooh pe tum chhai ho...mein gar banda hoon to Jaan...tum khudaai ho...
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11th May 2008, 11:39 PM
Thanks Ashish Ji!
Rajan!
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15th January 2009, 07:07 PM
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Originally Posted by Pyarali Rajan
"Maa tey Maa"
Ek yug thi ankhon taari chabbi ney chey tarsey
Savan na jem taari yaad maa ae varsey!
Sahiney dukhona dungaroney amoney laad ladavya
Hansta hansta ae dukho ney haiyyeh lagadya!
Faryad kadiye dukhoni na aavi zaban per taari
Shun shun na viti pyari “Maa” per amaari!!
Puri kari Ishwarey icchhao darek amaari
Madti nathi amoney bus dua o tamaari!!
Darek bhulo aney gunahoney amara karjo maaf
Em svarg naa dwar amara matey karjo saaf!!
Farishta pan taney karey juki ney salam
Tevo madey taney svargma darajjo aney mukam!!!
Rajan!!!
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BAHUJ SUNDAR RITE TAMARA EHSAAS DEKHAY CHE AAMAJ LAKHTA RAHO
Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai
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17th January 2009, 10:08 PM
Thanks Nihar Ji!!
Tame pan aavvij reetey protsahit karta rehsho to lakhvu saral thashey....
Rajan!!
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