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ankhon main kuch naya nahee hai sab sawan jane pahchae - 4th March 2006, 06:34 PM
kabhee kabhee main aur meree kavita ghanton baithe baten karte hain. main is pagli ko bahut kuch samjhata rahata hoon batata rahata hoon nahee suntee kuch. jo kahana hai wahee kahana hai jaise kahana hai waise hee kahana hai tab kabhee kabhee main meree kavita par kavita likhta hoon aisee hee ek rachana hai ye.main janata hoon mere sare shayer dost kabhee na kabhee is dard se guzrate hain samjh jayenge dil kee baat
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ye muzre kee bastee hai
aur teree peera meera ke geet
kyon too dekh rahee hai preet
kahan milega tujh ko meet
tere ansoo ram hee samjhe
tere dukh ko sham hee jane

dharkan kee nazuk shakh par
yadon ke phir par gaye jhoole
isee per se gire the ik din
isee shakh par phir tum jhoole
asamn pe phir woh chehra
indrdhanush ko kab tum bhoole
ankhon main kuch naya nahee hai
sab sawan jane pahchae
tere ansoo ram hee samjhe
tere dukh ko sham hee jane

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4th March 2006, 06:46 PM
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4th March 2006, 07:48 PM
anil bhaiya kaafi ahcha likha hai aapneaur sabse badi baat shudh hindi me likha hai.aur jahan tak mera maan.na hai sudh hi me likhna kaafi kathin hota hai.aur doosri baat sudh hindi ki rachnayen bhi bahut kam hi padhne ko mil paati hain.aapse bas umeed hai ki aap yunhi apne kalaamon ki chataa se hume sushobhit karte rahenge.

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4th March 2006, 08:05 PM
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4th March 2006, 08:48 PM
dharkan kee nazuk shakh par
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asamn pe phir woh chehra
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ankhon main kuch naya nahee hai
sab sawan jane pahchae
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tere dukh ko sham hee jane

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4th March 2006, 10:38 PM
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shukriya - 5th March 2006, 09:46 AM
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aur mehul tumahree tareef meree shayree ko kabile tareef banatee rahtee hai shukriya
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Hi - 5th March 2006, 12:13 PM
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thanks - 5th March 2006, 03:40 PM
mehul bahut bahut shukriya ke aap ko bahut achee lagee ye rachana apana khayal rakhana aur achha achha likhte rahana tum bhee
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udas palon main - 5th March 2006, 03:45 PM
ghayal shukriya main aur meree kavita udas palon main baithe the tumhara chale ana achha laga. achha laga tumhre meree ye rachana achee lagee aur is kee bhasha bhee
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thanks - 5th March 2006, 03:46 PM
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shukriya - 5th March 2006, 03:47 PM
achha hai mere sukh dukh ko samjhne kee kosish karne kee jan gayeen tum bhee sukh dukh ram hhee jane
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Re: ankhon main kuch naya nahee hai sab sawan jane pahchae - 5th March 2006, 04:48 PM
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kabhee kabhee main aur meree kavita ghanton baithe baten karte hain. main is pagli ko bahut kuch samjhata rahata hoon batata rahata hoon nahee suntee kuch. jo kahana hai wahee kahana hai jaise kahana hai waise hee kahana hai tab kabhee kabhee main meree kavita par kavita likhta hoon aisee hee ek rachana hai ye.main janata hoon mere sare shayer dost kabhee na kabhee is dard se guzrate hain samjh jayenge dil kee baat
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ye muzre kee bastee hai
aur teree peera meera ke geet
kyon too dekh rahee hai preet
kahan milega tujh ko meet
tere ansoo ram hee samjhe
tere dukh ko sham hee jane

dharkan kee nazuk shakh par
yadon ke phir par gaye jhoole
isee per se gire the ik din
isee shakh par phir tum jhoole
asamn pe phir woh chehra
indrdhanush ko kab tum bhoole
ankhon main kuch naya nahee hai
sab sawan jane pahchae
tere ansoo ram hee samjhe
tere dukh ko sham hee jane
aapne bahaut hi accha likkha hai..aapka aaghaaz mujhe pasand aaya...
dil ko khushi milti hai jab jab aapko padhti hoon bhale hi aapke kavitaon me pyaar ke cheetein ho ya dard ki silwatein.
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Re: ankhon main kuch naya nahee hai sab sawan jane pahchae - 5th March 2006, 05:26 PM
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kabhee kabhee main aur meree kavita ghanton baithe baten karte hain. main is pagli ko bahut kuch samjhata rahata hoon batata rahata hoon nahee suntee kuch. jo kahana hai wahee kahana hai jaise kahana hai waise hee kahana hai tab kabhee kabhee main meree kavita par kavita likhta hoon aisee hee ek rachana hai ye.main janata hoon mere sare shayer dost kabhee na kabhee is dard se guzrate hain samjh jayenge dil kee baat
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ye muzre kee bastee hai
aur teree peera meera ke geet
kyon too dekh rahee hai preet
kahan milega tujh ko meet
tere ansoo ram hee samjhe
tere dukh ko sham hee jane

dharkan kee nazuk shakh par
yadon ke phir par gaye jhoole
isee per se gire the ik din
isee shakh par phir tum jhoole
asamn pe phir woh chehra
indrdhanush ko kab tum bhoole
ankhon main kuch naya nahee hai
sab sawan jane pahchae
tere ansoo ram hee samjhe
tere dukh ko sham hee jane


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shukriya - 5th March 2006, 10:16 PM
pulkit jab aap ne jis dil se likha usee dil se koyee parh le to achha lagata hai mere bhee dil ke khas hisse main rahtee hain ye panktiyan jo tum ko achee lageen achhee lagee tumahree vyakhya
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thanks ashu tumhe maza aya parh ke to meree likhne ko ek bal milega na achha laga
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Re: ankhon main kuch naya nahee hai sab sawan jane pahchae - 6th March 2006, 12:07 PM
Anil bhai

Bilkul sahi baat kahi hai aapne...Vaise hamesha hi samjhane wali baat likhte hai......


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kabhee kabhee main aur meree kavita ghanton baithe baten karte hain. main is pagli ko bahut kuch samjhata rahata hoon batata rahata hoon nahee suntee kuch. jo kahana hai wahee kahana hai jaise kahana hai waise hee kahana hai tab kabhee kabhee main meree kavita par kavita likhta hoon aisee hee ek rachana hai ye.main janata hoon mere sare shayer dost kabhee na kabhee is dard se guzrate hain samjh jayenge dil kee baat
Anil

ye muzre kee bastee hai
aur teree peera meera ke geet
kyon too dekh rahee hai preet
kahan milega tujh ko meet
tere ansoo ram hee samjhe
tere dukh ko sham hee jane

dharkan kee nazuk shakh par
yadon ke phir par gaye jhoole
isee per se gire the ik din
isee shakh par phir tum jhoole
asamn pe phir woh chehra
indrdhanush ko kab tum bhoole
ankhon main kuch naya nahee hai
sab sawan jane pahchae
tere ansoo ram hee samjhe
tere dukh ko sham hee jane

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Re: ankhon main kuch naya nahee hai sab sawan jane pahchae - 6th March 2006, 12:25 PM
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kabhee kabhee main aur meree kavita ghanton baithe baten karte hain. main is pagli ko bahut kuch samjhata rahata hoon batata rahata hoon nahee suntee kuch. jo kahana hai wahee kahana hai jaise kahana hai waise hee kahana hai tab kabhee kabhee main meree kavita par kavita likhta hoon aisee hee ek rachana hai ye.main janata hoon mere sare shayer dost kabhee na kabhee is dard se guzrate hain samjh jayenge dil kee baat
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ye muzre kee bastee hai
aur teree peera meera ke geet
kyon too dekh rahee hai preet
kahan milega tujh ko meet
tere ansoo ram hee samjhe
tere dukh ko sham hee jane

dharkan kee nazuk shakh par
yadon ke phir par gaye jhoole
isee per se gire the ik din
isee shakh par phir tum jhoole
asamn pe phir woh chehra
indrdhanush ko kab tum bhoole
ankhon main kuch naya nahee hai
sab sawan jane pahchae
tere ansoo ram hee samjhe
tere dukh ko sham hee jane
namskaar anil ji,
happiness and sorrows are part n parcel in ones life, aur raam hi jaane sukh dukh ke mele ko. bahut hi pyaar bhari kavita ko humare beech share karne ke liye teh dil se shukriya aapka. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters. keep penning down ur thoughts ahead too n keep sharing among us.
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shukriya - 6th March 2006, 01:53 PM
diggaz mere dil ke kareeb hai ye kavita is liye is kee vyakhya karte huye jo tum ne tumahree pankityan likhee hain woh aur bhee pyaree lageen mujhe bas parhte rahana jo bhee achha likhe yahan par
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shukiya - 6th March 2006, 01:58 PM
shukriya kuch ujala kuch roshani meree kavita ke bhgya main bhee thee halan ke tab tak so chukee thee meree nanahee see kavita prateeksha kar kar ke maien jaga ke kaha dekho kaun aya hai aur jab roshani aye samjh lo din ho gaya woh need main bhee muskra dee thanks bhee kaha us ne tumhe pooch rahee thee ye roshni dobara bhee ayengee ya phir gum jayengee? kuch jawab anhee diya maien abs do boond ganga kee meree ankhon main ruk gayee ab in sawalon ke jawab nahee milte mujhe main us nannhee se bachhee ko kya jawab doon is ka?
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Re: ankhon main kuch naya nahee hai sab sawan jane pahchae - 6th March 2006, 05:42 PM
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ye muzre kee bastee hai
aur teree peera meera ke geet
kyon too dekh rahee hai preet
kahan milega tujh ko meet
tere ansoo ram hee samjhe
tere dukh ko sham hee jane



asamn pe phir woh chehra
indrdhanush ko kab tum bhoole
ankhon main kuch naya nahee hai
sab sawan jane pahchae
tere ansoo ram hee samjhe
tere dukh ko sham hee jane
hi
yeh acha likha apne
asamn pe phir woh chehra

keep writing,i am busy in studies,main apki shayri ko save karke baad mein read karti hu,isliye reply nahi karti.sorry
   
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Re: ankhon main kuch naya nahee hai sab sawan jane pahchae - 6th March 2006, 06:10 PM
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ye muzre kee bastee hai
aur teree peera meera ke geet
kyon too dekh rahee hai preet
kahan milega tujh ko meet
tere ansoo ram hee samjhe
tere dukh ko sham hee jane

dharkan kee nazuk shakh par
yadon ke phir par gaye jhoole
isee per se gire the ik din
isee shakh par phir tum jhoole
asamn pe phir woh chehra
indrdhanush ko kab tum bhoole
ankhon main kuch naya nahee hai
sab sawan jane pahchae
tere ansoo ram hee samjhe
tere dukh ko sham hee jane
Anil Ji,
Bahaut, Bahaut aur Bahaut accha laga aapki in panktiyon ko parhkar jinke saath aapki kalpanain baatein karti dikh rahi hain.

Is sunder kriti ke liye mera dhanyavaad sweekaar karein.

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shukriya roop - 6th March 2006, 07:21 PM
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vipin jee - 6th March 2006, 07:25 PM
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Re: ankhon main kuch naya nahee hai sab sawan jane pahchae - 9th March 2006, 10:27 PM
dharkan kee nazuk shakh par
yadon ke phir par gaye jhoole
isee per se gire the ik din
isee shakh par phir tum jhoole
asamn pe phir woh chehra
indrdhanush ko kab tum bhoole
ankhon main kuch naya nahee hai
sab sawan jane pahchae
tere ansoo ram hee samjhe
tere dukh ko sham hee jane

Sach kaha Anil Ji aapne, kitna bhi samjhalo yeh kavita wo hi kahegi jo ise kehna hai...
Sab sawan jane pehchane...mere aansun Ram hi samjhe, mere dukh ko Shyam hi jane.. loved these lines.
Yun hi apne anmol taaron se is aasmaan ko sajate rahiye

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shalini - 10th March 2006, 10:48 AM
baat ye nahee shalini ki kavita ne kya kaha main ye dekh raha hoon shalini ne kitne khoobsoorat dil se parha ise itne emasroof rahane ke baad bhee mujeh tumhre is remark main meree rachana ke liye gahara sa pyar nazar aye shukriya
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wow Anil ji kamal kar diya aapne..........sidha dil mein utar gayi yeh nazm..........

ankhon main kuch naya nahee hai
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ranju - 16th March 2006, 01:25 PM
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tere ansoo ram hee samjhe
tere dukh ko sham hee jane

Sahi hai dost.. Magar jab tumne yeh kaha hai ki usake dard-o-dukh ko ram samajh lega aur shayam jan lega.. To phir..

Mere Aansu ram bhi kyon na samajhe
Mere dukh ko shyam bhi kyon na jane

Dil mera soj-e-niha se bemuhaba jal gaya
Aastish-e-khamosh ki manind goya jal gaya
Dil main jaok-e-vasl-o-yad-e-yar tak baki nahi
aag is ghar main lagi aisi ki jo tha jal gaya
Dil nahi varna dikhata tunko dagon ki bahar
Is chiragan ka kaun kya karfarma jal gaya
Mai hun aur afsordagi ki aarjoo 'Ghalib' ke dil
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wah - 24th April 2006, 07:57 PM
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ankhon main kuch naya nahee hai
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tere ansoo ram hee samjhe
tere dukh ko sham hee jane....wah!

tere dukh ko shaam hi jane..wah!

abb aur kaise tareef karoon?

aapko jitna padha jaye kamm hai...ek baar nahin baar baar padhne ka mann hota hai aapko....aise likhte rahiye....haan agar baat sirf rachna tak hai toh

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