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sau baar chaman mahakaa sau baar bahaar aa_ii - 8th August 2008, 07:00 PM

sau baar chaman mahakaa sau baar bahaar aa_ii


sau baar chaman mahakaa sau baar bahaar aa_ii
duniyaa kii vahii raunaq dil kii vahii tanhaa_ii

har dard-e-muhabbat se ulajhaa hai Gam-e-hastii
kyaa kyaa hame.n yaad aayaa jab yaad terii aa_ii

dekhe hai.n bahut ham ne hangaame muhabbat ke
aaGaaz bhii rusvaa_ii anjaam bhii rusvaa_ii

[aaGaaz=beginning; anjaam=result/end; rusvaa_ii=disgrace/infamy]

ye bazm-e-muhabbat hai is bazm-e-muhabbat me.n
diivaane bhii saudaa_ii farzaane bhii saudaa_ii

[bazm=gathering; saudaa_ii=crazy; farzaanaa=intelligent/wise]

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8th August 2008, 08:21 PM

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sau baar chaman mahakaa sau baar bahaar aa_ii


sau baar chaman mahakaa sau baar bahaar aa_ii
duniyaa kii vahii raunaq dil kii vahii tanhaa_ii

har dard-e-muhabbat se ulajhaa hai Gam-e-hastii
kyaa kyaa hame.n yaad aayaa jab yaad terii aa_ii

dekhe hai.n bahut ham ne hangaame muhabbat ke
aaGaaz bhii rusvaa_ii anjaam bhii rusvaa_ii

[aaGaaz=beginning; anjaam=result/end; rusvaa_ii=disgrace/infamy]

ye bazm-e-muhabbat hai is bazm-e-muhabbat me.n
diivaane bhii saudaa_ii farzaane bhii saudaa_ii

[bazm=gathering; saudaa_ii=crazy; farzaanaa=intelligent/wise]

-Sufi Ghulam Mustafa Tabassum


Janab Mayank Sahab namaskaar!!!

Gazal to aapne behad hii khoobsurat pesh kii hai. per aapka ise pesh karne ka tareeqa bhee behad shaandaar hai.... poorii gazal ko gungunake jab dekha to badii hi aasaanii ke sath main ise gunguna paya. karan aapne ise itne acche dhang se sajaya hai...........
behad shandar gazal ko yahan pesh karne ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukriyaa..

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Janab Mayank Sahab namaskaar!!!

Gazal to aapne behad hii khoobsurat pesh kii hai. per aapka ise pesh karne ka tareeqa bhee behad shaandaar hai.... poorii gazal ko gungunake jab dekha to badii hi aasaanii ke sath main ise gunguna paya. karan aapne ise itne acche dhang se sajaya hai...........
behad shandar gazal ko yahan pesh karne ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukriyaa..

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Dilip bhaii,

kaise hai.n aap aur kya chal raha hai? kaafi dino.n tak bazm se duur rahe hai.n aap... waapsi mubaarak ho

aap ko yeh Ghazal pasand aayii, jaan kar khushii huii.... aur Ghazal ka mazaa to gungunaa kar paDhne me.n hi hai... Jo Ghazal hame achchhi lagti hai ham koshish karte hain ki usay sab se share kare.n aur isi kaDi me.n yeh Ghazal ham ne yahaa.n haazir kar diya... aap ne paDha achcha laga...

yuu.n hi bazm me.n aate rahe.n

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