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Sabhi hain nakaab meiN....... - 1st August 2015, 01:40 PM
Kise maan looN ki bhala hai aur kise ginoo maiN kharaab mein.
yahi lag raha mujhe aajkal ki yahaaN sabhi haiN nakaab meiN

Meri dost hai ye udasiyaaN mujhe mahfiloN se na kaam ab.
Na hai raat koi sukoon ki na qaraar din me na khwaab meiN.

Mera aaina bhi ye kah raha ki nahi huN mujh me kahiin bhi maiN
Mujhe khud meri hee talaash ab ki sawaal aur jawaab meiN.

Sare raah koi samajh na le mere chehre se mera haal sab
Yahi ek khayaal sata raha ki chhupa lu khud ko hijaab meiN.

Ki sitam ko us ki ada samajh ke laga liya maine seene se
Meri ek zara huyi bhool to vo gina raha hai hisaab meiN

Yahi iltza hai madhu ki bas tera sath mujhko sada mile
Mere rab tujhi se haiN rahteiN duniya ke gam me azaab meiN


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Kise maan looN ki bhala hai aur kise ginoo maiN kharaab mein.
yahi lag raha mujhe aajkal ki yahaaN sabhi haiN nakaab meiN

Meri dost hai ye udasiyaaN mujhe mahfiloN se na kaam ab.
Na hai raat koi sukoon ki na qaraar din me na khwaab meiN.

Mera aaina bhi ye kah raha ki nahi huN mujh me kahiin bhi maiN
Mujhe khud meri hee talaash ab ki sawaal aur jawaab meiN.

Sare raah koi samajh na le mere chehre se mera haal sab
Yahi ek khayaal sata raha ki chhupa lu khud ko hijaab meiN.

Ki sitam ko us ki ada samajh ke laga liya maine seene se
Meri ek zara huyi bhool to vo gina raha hai hisaab meiN

Yahi iltza hai madhu ki bas tera sath mujhko sada mile
Mere rab tujhi se haiN rahteiN duniya ke gam me azaab meiN

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Kise maan looN ki bhala hai aur kise ginoo maiN kharaab mein.

yahi lag raha mujhe aajkal ki yahaaN sabhi haiN nakaab meiN

Meri dost hai ye udasiyaaN mujhe mahfiloN se na kaam ab.
Na hai raat koi sukoon ki na qaraar din me na khwaab meiN.

Mera aaina bhi ye kah raha ki nahi huN mujh me kahiin bhi maiN
Mujhe khud meri hee talaash ab ki sawaal aur jawaab meiN.

Sare raah koi samajh na le mere chehre se mera haal sab
Yahi ek khayaal sata raha ki chhupa lu khud ko hijaab meiN.

Ki sitam ko us ki ada samajh ke laga liya maine seene se
Meri ek zara huyi bhool to vo gina raha hai hisaab meiN

Yahi iltza hai madhu ki bas tera sath mujhko sada mile

Mere rab tujhi se haiN rahteiN duniya ke gam me azaab meiN
bahut khoob likha h madhu jee.............
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Bohat Khoob - 2nd August 2015, 09:51 PM
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Kise maan looN ki bhala hai aur kise ginoo maiN kharaab mein.
yahi lag raha mujhe aajkal ki yahaaN sabhi haiN nakaab meiN

Meri dost hai ye udasiyaaN mujhe mahfiloN se na kaam ab.
Na hai raat koi sukoon ki na qaraar din me na khwaab meiN.

Mera aaina bhi ye kah raha ki nahi huN mujh me kahiin bhi maiN
Mujhe khud meri hee talaash ab ki sawaal aur jawaab meiN.

Sare raah koi samajh na le mere chehre se mera haal sab
Yahi ek khayaal sata raha ki chhupa lu khud ko hijaab meiN.

Ki sitam ko us ki ada samajh ke laga liya maine seene se
Meri ek zara huyi bhool to vo gina raha hai hisaab meiN

Yahi iltza hai madhu ki bas tera sath mujhko sada mile
Mere rab tujhi se haiN rahteiN duniya ke gam me azaab meiN
Umda kalaam hai Madu ji. Daad qubuul farmaayeN.

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Kise maan looN ki bhala hai aur kise ginoo maiN kharaab mein.
yahi lag raha mujhe aajkal ki yahaaN sabhi haiN nakaab meiN

waise to puri ghazal bohut achi hai magar ye sher kuch zyada pasand aaya.

isi tarah acha acha likhti raho.

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waahh waahh waaahhhhh bahut hi khoob peshkash........
bahut khushi huyi shaad sahab..ki apko ye mamooli si koshish pasand aayi....aapki tawajjo ka hamesha intzaar hota hai.....
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Kise maan looN ki bhala hai aur kise ginoo maiN kharaab mein.
yahi lag raha mujhe aajkal ki yahaaN sabhi haiN nakaab meiN


sachhi baat ek sawaal aur itne pyaar se aye haye....


Meri dost hai ye udasiyaaN mujhe mahfiloN se na kaam ab.
Na hai raat koi sukoon ki na qaraar din me na khwaab meiN.

na qaraar din me na khwaab mein, ye alag sa andaaz-e-bayaan pasand aaya

Mera aaina bhi ye kah raha ki nahi huN mujh me kahiin bhi maiN
Mujhe khud meri hee talaash ab ki sawaal aur jawaab meiN.

Bahut khoob is sher ke maayine bahut gehre lage....umdaa


Sare raah koi samajh na le mere chehre se mera haal sab
Yahi ek khayaal sata raha ki chhupa lu khud ko hijaab meiN.

wah vo dar vo bechaaini mazaa aa gaya....

Ki sitam ko us ki ada samajh ke laga liya maine seene se
Meri ek zara huyi bhool to vo gina raha hai hisaab meiN

wah Madhu vo ginaa raha hai hisaab mein ..... maar hi daala

Yahi iltza hai madhu ki bas tera sath mujhko sada mile
Mere rab tujhi se haiN rahteiN duniya ke gam me azaab meiN

Makhtaa ise behter shayad ho hi nahi saktaa tha....yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa



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Madhu Bala....bahut khoobsurat likha hai tumne, gazal bahut acchi bani hai...yeh jo pehle wala sher hai, dil ko khaas pasand aaya kyuki yehi sachai hai...pta hi nahi chalta aaj-kal ki kaun naqaab meiN aur aur kaun asal mein hai...ham to aaj-tak logoN ko pehchaan.ne meiN bhool karte aa rhe hai...jo has ke milta hai samaj lete hai ki wahi apna hai...par maximum log opper se kuch aur andar se kuch hote hai...so es sher ko meri taraf se dheroN dher daad yu to sabhi sher bahut khoobsurat hai.

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yahi lag raha mujhe aajkal ki yahaaN sabhi haiN nakaab meiN

waise to puri ghazal bohut achi hai magar ye sher kuch zyada pasand aaya.

isi tarah acha acha likhti raho.
shukriya sarika .....
achcha laga aapko pasand aaya.....

aati rahiyega..
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28th September 2015, 10:51 PM
Bahut achche ehsaas Madhu ji ...mazaaa aa gaya aap ko per ke .

Per ye kalam aap ke style se hat ke tha..Aap bada napa tula likhti haiN,
aur ye kalam meri nazar meiN thora overstretched tha..pls dont mind but
mujhe aisa laga ki aap ne Shad sahib ke style me ghazal likhne ki koshish ki?

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Bahut achche ehsaas Madhu ji ...mazaaa aa gaya aap ko per ke .

Per ye kalam aap ke style se hat ke tha..Aap bada napa tula likhti haiN,
aur ye kalam meri nazar meiN thora overstretched tha..pls dont mind but
mujhe aisa laga ki aap ne Shad sahib ke style me ghazal likhne ki koshish ki?

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Bahut achche ehsaas Madhu ji ...mazaaa aa gaya aap ko per ke .

Per ye kalam aap ke style se hat ke tha..Aap bada napa tula likhti haiN,
aur ye kalam meri nazar meiN thora overstretched tha..pls dont mind but
mujhe aisa laga ki aap ne Shad sahib ke style me ghazal likhne ki koshish ki?

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namaskaar sanjay ji...pahle to aapka bahut shukriya ki aap hamesha vaqt nikal kar mera hausla badhane aate hain...mujhe sach bahut khushi hoti hai...

Achcha laga jo aapne apni rai di...sach kahoon to likhna hee nahi aata abhi to mujhe..bas jo dil me aaya vo aap sab ke beech rakh diya...par aapne itni tawajjo di aur samjha ki main kaisa likhti hoon uska shukriya...
Shaad sahab ka naam liya aapne to kahna chahoongi ki agar unke jaisa style laga is ghazal me aapko to iska matlab kuch dhang ka likha hai.....khair...shaad sahab ki ghazalon ko padhna mujhe behad pasand hai unke ehsaas aur andaaz mujhe hamesha bhate hain...sdc me pahle din se maine unhe padha hai..aur seekhne ki koshish bhi ki hai...magar unki ya kisi aur ki style me likhne ki koshish aaj tak nahi ki..ye mere bas ki baat bhi nahi sanjay ji ki unke jaise umda shayar ke andaaz ko main chhoo sakoon....

Ye aap sab ka sneh aur badappan hai jo mujhe padhte hain aur sarahte hain....main aage bhi aapse isi sath ki ummeed karti hoon...
Apna khayaal rakhiye..
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Umdaah, bohot aala kalaam madhu ji... Hamesha ki tarah.

Baar baar paDha yeh kalaam maine aur har baar aur bhi zyaada tamanna huyi isko paDhne ki.

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Kise maan looN ki bhala hai aur kise ginoo maiN kharaab mein.
yahi lag raha mujhe aajkal ki yahaaN sabhi haiN nakaab meiN


sachhi baat ek sawaal aur itne pyaar se aye haye....


Meri dost hai ye udasiyaaN mujhe mahfiloN se na kaam ab.
Na hai raat koi sukoon ki na qaraar din me na khwaab meiN.

na qaraar din me na khwaab mein, ye alag sa andaaz-e-bayaan pasand aaya

Mera aaina bhi ye kah raha ki nahi huN mujh me kahiin bhi maiN
Mujhe khud meri hee talaash ab ki sawaal aur jawaab meiN.

Bahut khoob is sher ke maayine bahut gehre lage....umdaa


Sare raah koi samajh na le mere chehre se mera haal sab
Yahi ek khayaal sata raha ki chhupa lu khud ko hijaab meiN.

wah vo dar vo bechaaini mazaa aa gaya....

Ki sitam ko us ki ada samajh ke laga liya maine seene se
Meri ek zara huyi bhool to vo gina raha hai hisaab meiN

wah Madhu vo ginaa raha hai hisaab mein ..... maar hi daala

Yahi iltza hai madhu ki bas tera sath mujhko sada mile
Mere rab tujhi se haiN rahteiN duniya ke gam me azaab meiN

Makhtaa ise behter shayad ho hi nahi saktaa tha....yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa
mast ji....aapne itne dil se ise padha main kin shabdon me shukriya kahun...jaise jaise har sher par apki rai padhti gayi...khushi se aankh nam ho gayi....ye baat bilkul sach hoti dikhayi di...ki padhne wale ki nazar qalaam me jaan daal deti hai....

Kahne ki zaroorat nhi ki aage bhi har koshish pe aapka intzaar rahega.....

Salamat rahein....

Madhu...



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27th October 2015, 11:31 PM
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kise maan loon ki bhala hai aur kise ginoo main kharaab mein.
Yahi lag raha mujhe aajkal ki yahaan sabhi hain nakaab mein

meri dost hai ye udasiyaan mujhe mahfilon se na kaam ab.
Na hai raat koi sukoon ki na qaraar din me na khwaab mein.

Mera aaina bhi ye kah raha ki nahi hun mujh me kahiin bhi main
mujhe khud meri hee talaash ab ki sawaal aur jawaab mein.

Sare raah koi samajh na le mere chehre se mera haal sab
yahi ek khayaal sata raha ki chhupa lu khud ko hijaab mein.

Ki sitam ko us ki ada samajh ke laga liya maine seene se
meri ek zara huyi bhool to vo gina raha hai hisaab mein

yahi iltza hai madhu ki bas tera sath mujhko sada mile
mere rab tujhi se hain rahtein duniya ke gam me azaab mein
waah ! Bahut khoob ashaar hain

ashardaar peshkash

dilee mubaaraqbaad mdhu ji !!!!!!!!!!!



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ahchi kosish rahi madhu ji, par mujhe yakeen hai ki aap isse behtar likh sakti haiN... umeed hai aage zor-e-kalam aur jiyada hoga...
Aapke yakeen aur sath ka bahut shukriya taish ji...
Aage bhi hausla afzai karte rahiyega....

Takecare
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Madhu Bala....bahut khoobsurat likha hai tumne, gazal bahut acchi bani hai...yeh jo pehle wala sher hai, dil ko khaas pasand aaya kyuki yehi sachai hai...pta hi nahi chalta aaj-kal ki kaun naqaab meiN aur aur kaun asal mein hai...ham to aaj-tak logoN ko pehchaan.ne meiN bhool karte aa rhe hai...jo has ke milta hai samaj lete hai ki wahi apna hai...par maximum log opper se kuch aur andar se kuch hote hai...so es sher ko meri taraf se dheroN dher daad yu to sabhi sher bahut khoobsurat hai.

likhti rho, khush rho
Sahi kaha di..insaan ko pahchanne me ek umra nikal jati hai....aur kahhi kabhi jab koi apna dil ko thes pahuchata hai tab aise khayaal aate hai.....par fir bhi yakeen hai..duniya itni buri bhi nahi.....

Aapke sath aur pyar ka behad shukriya.
Aati rahiyega..

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Bahut umda likha hai ahsason ke saath gahraiya bhi kafi hain ... jo shyad dil ko chhu gai keep writing


Anish ........

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Umdaah, bohot aala kalaam madhu ji... Hamesha ki tarah.

Baar baar paDha yeh kalaam maine aur har baar aur bhi zyaada tamanna huyi isko paDhne ki.

Likhte rahiye.
Adaab sagar sahab...

Aap to sdc ka rasta hee bhool gaye hain lagta hai...

Aapko padhe huye bahut vaqt ho gaya...aur apni har koshish pe Apki rai ka intzaar bhi hota hai mujhe...

Behad shukriya aapke sath ka ...

Aate rahiyega..
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waah ! Bahut khoob ashaar hain

ashardaar peshkash

dilee mubaaraqbaad mdhu ji !!!!!!!!!!!
aapka bahut abhaar naresh ji.........

aage bhi apna sneh aur sath banaye rakhiyega..

apna khyaal rakhein...

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Thank u arvind..........

Bas kabhi kabhi aise bhi khayaal aa jate hain....

Aate rahiyega..

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Kise maan looN ki bhala hai aur kise ginoo maiN kharaab mein.
yahi lag raha mujhe aajkal ki yahaaN sabhi haiN nakaab meiN

Meri dost hai ye udasiyaaN mujhe mahfiloN se na kaam ab.
Na hai raat koi sukoon ki na qaraar din me na khwaab meiN.

Mera aaina bhi ye kah raha ki nahi huN mujh me kahiin bhi maiN
Mujhe khud meri hee talaash ab ki sawaal aur jawaab meiN.

Sare raah koi samajh na le mere chehre se mera haal sab
Yahi ek khayaal sata raha ki chhupa lu khud ko hijaab meiN.

Ki sitam ko us ki ada samajh ke laga liya maine seene se
Meri ek zara huyi bhool to vo gina raha hai hisaab meiN

Yahi iltza hai madhu ki bas tera sath mujhko sada mile
Mere rab tujhi se haiN rahteiN duniya ke gam me azaab meiN



Purani hai magar shabdon ki chayan bohot hi acchi hai madhu ji....

उन बीते लम्हों के याद ना दिलाया करो
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bahot shukriya phoenix ji.............................


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