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Love Dard - 19th February 2003, 03:37 PM

Tumse miloon to mere dil ka dard aur badhta hai
is liye socha hai ki hum aur tum milna chhod dein
pyaar ki dor jis se zindgi bandhi thi hamaari
ab yahi behtar hai dheere se woh dor tod dein

Mujhe yakeen hai ki tumko mujhse pyaar nahi hai
fir bhi aankhein band karke saath chal rahi hoon main
yeh bhi jaanti hoon tum kar rahe ho mere dil se fareb
fir bhi dil se tumhein pyaar kar rahi hoon main
pyaar ke naam ka ek bharm jo maine dil mein paala tha
ab yahi behtar hai us aakhri bharm ko tod dein
pyaar ki dor jis se zindgi bandhi thi hamaari
ab yahi behtar hai dheere se woh dor tod dein

Pyaar ke naam par jhootha sa ek rishta hai
jiski buniyaad hi dhokhe se rakhi gayee thi kabhi
ki har ek haal mein har kadam pe mere saath tum rahoge
jaane kya sochkar yeh kasam uthaaee gayee thi kabhi
kadam kadam par mujhse kiye thae jo tumne jhoothe vaade
ab yahi behtar hai un vaadon se hum naata tod dein
pyaar ki dor jis se zindgi bandhi thi hamaari
ab yahi behtar hai dheere se woh dor tod dein

Main tum mein nahin magar khud mein kasoor dhoondti hoon
aur baar baar apne dil se yeh sawaal poochti hoon
ki mere pyaar meri wafa mein kya naa paya tumne
kyon bina kasoor bina wajah mujhe itna tadpayaa tumne
bas ab yahi dua hai ki teri yaadein mera peecha chhod dein
pyaar ki dor jis se zindgi bandhi thi hamaari
ab yahi behtar hai dheere se woh dor tod dein

Tumhaare badle hue andaaz mujhe hairaan karte hain
tumhaare badle hue lehze mujhe pareshaan karte hain
main nahi kar sakti hoon tumhaari berukhi ka saamna
saha nahi jaayega mujhse tumhaara thokar maarna
is liye socha hai ki ek dusre se hum moonh mod lein
pyaar ki dor jis se zindgi bandhi thi hamaari
ab yahi behtar hai dheere se woh dor tod dein


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Very Nice Thoughts - 21st February 2003, 02:38 AM

Hi Mahimaji,
Firstly, Many Many Happy Returns of The Day!! Hope u have a blast!!
Bahut hi accha likha hai aapne...keep up the good work...
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hi - 21st February 2003, 05:46 AM

hi mahima ji,

bahut achaa likha hai aapne
keep writing.

Luv Urs4eva


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21st February 2003, 09:54 AM

Mahima ji
Kya baat kahi hai aapne. Bohat accha lika hai aapne. liktey rahiye

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11th April 2003, 02:06 PM

Thanx geetanjli.Ursfoeva and Princess....


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mind blowing - 11th April 2003, 08:38 PM

mahima,
hi!
agar sabd kuch kahne ki ijjajat dete to kahta_tum kahwab hi acche the kyo aaye haqiqat bankarn na aate tum aur na hota ye gam umarbhar.
aapki shyari se aapki soch ki kal;pana karna to bahut muskil hai haa magar itna yakin ho gaya hai ki aap ki soch mein haqiqat
zalkti hai .
sari sochne ki saqti ko aapne nichod liya.har sabd aissa laga jasse agar ek ek sabad ko gahrai se soche to samandar ki gahrai sayad kum lagane lage.
bas itna hi kahna chahata hu---
"sabhi ko pyar mile zindgi mein zaroori to nahi,
har khwab ho pura zindgi ko zarooi to nahi"
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mind blowing - 11th April 2003, 08:40 PM

mahima,
hi!
agar sabd kuch kahne ki ijjajat dete to kahta "tum kahwab hi acche the kyo aaye haqiqat bankar na aate tum aur na hota ye gam umarbhar".
aapki shyari se aapki soch ki kalpana karna to bahut muskil hai haa magar itna yakin ho gaya hai ki aap ki soch mein haqiqat
zalkti hai .
sari sochne ki saqti ko aapne nichod liya.har sabd aissa laga jasse agar ek ek sabad ko gahrai se soche to samandar ki gahrai sayad kum lagane lage.
bas itna hi kahna chahata hu---
"sabhi ko pyar mile zindgi mein zaroori to nahi,
har khwab ho pura zindgi ka zarooi to nahi"
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13th April 2003, 09:40 PM

hi mahima ji

apki yeh lines

Tumse miloon to mere dil ka dard aur badhta hai
is liye socha hai ki hum aur tum milna chhod dein
pyaar ki dor jis se zindgi bandhi thi hamaari
ab yahi behtar hai dheere se woh dor tod dein

bohot achi lagi. ek to judai ka gum mar dalta hai aur agar doobara milo to beeta hua waqt samne aa kar ankhen bar deta hai.... insaan kare bhi to kya kare? jaye bhi to kaha jaye?
keep it up sis! well done!


~~Meena~~


Na kisi apne ki arzoo aab, Na kisi baigane ki talash hai,
Mai to phool hoon tanhaiyon ka, Mujhe bas virane ki talash hai.

   
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reply - 17th May 2003, 11:21 AM

thanx a lot...Khamoshi and Vinaydahiya ji..for encouraging me..


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17th May 2003, 12:10 PM

mahima ji
kaafi accha likhti hain aap ..har line dil ko chhu gayi jaise ....aapke emotion kaafi khubsurti laa dete hain gajal mai...

weldone

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17th May 2003, 07:13 PM

mahima ji
bohat khubsurat ashaar hain aap keh
dil ko choo gaey.
itni taweel alfaz aur itne pur asr, mein bohat kam partaa hoon magar in ashaar ko parha to parhta chala gaya.
please keep writing, now from now i will try to read all your poetry. hope to read more from you.

all the best.
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