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Ajj phir.. -
4th September 2002, 08:59 AM
Ajj phir ek bar, dil nahi lag raha
Ajj teri yaad mein lagta hai mein mara, Shayad is ashiq ki maut likhi hai es tarah, Teri us ek muskan ne ker diya har zakham hara... Majboori ka naam leker, khanjar sine mien uttar diya" "Broken Heart" |
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hi -
6th September 2002, 05:32 AM
hi...dilwale sanam..this is very good written. infactly true. hope u keep on writing more. take care, have a good time
love always payal  Zaneman hum tho sirf tum'se pyaar karte hai |
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Thanks -
6th September 2002, 09:51 AM
Thank you payal ji
aise likhne ka bhi kya fayda jo jhuta lage, aise rang ka bhi kya fayda jo fika lage, Shayri woh hai jo dil se nikle aur jise sunke, Her dil mein thoda sa to dard jage....:P Thanks for ur reply. I will write as long as i have pain in my life. After that i can't promise :P Majboori ka naam leker, khanjar sine mien uttar diya" "Broken Heart" |
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Re:vow -
6th September 2002, 02:48 PM
very well written dard, dard and dard
kya hoob likha hai "Shayad is ashiq ki maut likhi hai es tarah, Teri us ek muskan ne ker diya har zakham hara..." keep up writing bye |
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7th September 2002, 04:13 PM
wah
Kya likha hain! aaj phir se kisi ne aisi baat kahi, jo dil ko chu gayi. Kya baat hain! Bilkul sach kaha aap ne... "Shayri woh hai jo dil se nikle aur jise sunke, Her dil mein thoda sa to dard jage" Keep writing. Amrita |
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wah...............kya baat hai |
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wah...............kya baat hai -
7th September 2002, 05:30 PM
wow.......................i like ur shayri....................and yaar i have just join this site and i was quite impressed with ur shayri............mail me soon....................
jate jate kuch aarz karta hoon mohabbat karta hoon ,mohabbat chahiye mohabbat karne ke liye,mohabbat chahiye ye dua hai meri mohabbat karne walon ko mohabbat karne se pehle apko bhi mohabbat ho jaye............. |
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8th September 2002, 12:17 PM
Thanks everyone.
sorry i am not in good mood so can't reply in "shairy andaz"... Sorry and thanks sunny Majboori ka naam leker, khanjar sine mien uttar diya" "Broken Heart" |
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Hi everyone... -
11th September 2002, 10:25 PM
Thank you everyone for replying and liking my writing. Sorry i wasn't in good mood the other day thats why i couldn't reply in a good way.
I thank you all for your support..... "hum to kuch na the appne bana diya, Itna pyar diya ke jina sikha diya, dard leker hum yaha pe aye the akele, app jaise dost mile aur har gam bhula diya" Majboori ka naam leker, khanjar sine mien uttar diya" "Broken Heart" |
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wow... -
20th September 2002, 02:16 AM
Kya baat kahi yai..............appne banaya....
App likhte bahoot acha hai, abb app kuch bhi kahe kisne banaya lekin jis ne banaya kya khoob banaya........... Likhte rahiye app yunhi subho sham Koi to karega apni zindgi apke naam. keep writeing............... you'll see or hear in someone else. |
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thank you -
22nd September 2002, 01:18 AM
Thank you
hosla afjayi ke liye bahoot bahoot sukerya........ Hume janker bahoot khusi huwe ke kuch logo ko humrara likha acha laga. sukerya ada kerne ko dil kerta hai shabd nahi milte, apka pyar hai aise jaise patjhad mein phool khilte.... Majboori ka naam leker, khanjar sine mien uttar diya" "Broken Heart" |
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