Aapki pehli kaavish padhne ke baad isme nirasha haath lagi, uske muqaable ye kuch v nahiN hai...!! aur fir si baat pe tazzub hua ki yahaaN kitne reples haiN, likhte rahiye aur umda likhiye yahi dua rahegi...!!
Aapki pehli kaavish padhne ke baad isme nirasha haath lagi, uske muqaable ye kuch v nahiN hai...!! aur fir si baat pe tazzub hua ki yahaaN kitne reples haiN, likhte rahiye aur umda likhiye yahi dua rahegi...!!
sukriya aapne isko dekhe ...yeh meri peheli nagme hain....mujhe Hindi urdu dono itna maloom nehin ...yeh baat main sunita ji ko is thread main bata chuki hun....ismain pehela line hi galat thi ......per baad main fir usko theek ki ...itna post log sayad isiliye diye hain kyunki unko lagta hai mere galti ko samjhu main aur aage se khayal rakhun is baat ka ...aapke mata mat keliye sukriya .........
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Jab maine likhna shuru kiya tha to halki si hindi aur zero urdu aati thi, maine vo correction sunita d ka aur uspe aapke reply dono padha, par hum sab yahaaN seekh rahe haiN, aaj theek thak hindi aur halki si urdu aati hai mujhe...!! aaru kichu koite laagbo ne ki...?? i knw wat troubles u have in hindi when u r from bengal, dont worry, read old shayars n learn, u cud find some very gud writers here...!! keep writing...!!
Jab maine likhna shuru kiya tha to halki si hindi aur zero urdu aati thi, maine vo correction sunita d ka aur uspe aapke reply dono padha, par hum sab yahaaN seekh rahe haiN, aaj theek thak hindi aur halki si urdu aati hai mujhe...!! aaru kichu koite laagbo ne ki...?? i knw wat troubles u have in hindi when u r from bengal, dont worry, read old shayars n learn, u cud find some very gud writers here...!! keep writing...!!
sukriya Ghayal ji aapne humare problem ko samjhe hum koshish karenge ki achhe nagme likhe aur is site main sabse kuchh kcuhh sikhein........
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Bahat kuchh kho chuka hun
ab tujhe pana chahati hun
apne baho main bharlo
sar rakhke tere dil pe rona chahati hun
sardiyon ke mousam main
Ek chaddar ke niche
Tere seene pe sar rakh kar
Sukun Ki neend sona chahati hun
aap ko pasand aaye to pls reply .............
vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah shama kijyega hume tarif karni nahi aati
humrai zindagi do lubzo men bayan ho gai un k
ek lum he ne puri kitab bhar di
behad accha likhte hai aap -
19th August 2008, 01:55 PM
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Originally Posted by Diya_Jale
Bahat kuchh kho chuka hun ab tujhe pana chahati hun apne baho main bharlo sar rakhke tere dil pe rona chahati hun sardiyon ke mousam main Ek chaddar ke niche Tere seene pe sar rakh kar Sukun Ki neend sona chahati hun
aap ko pasand aaye to pls reply .............
bahkhoob, app ke kaafe kisse/shayri pade hai hamne.
Kya aap shayar hai.
khair aap se ek guzarish thi.
Agar aap kubool kare toh ham agli baar likhenge.
Ishq ki baazi kabhi hum se lagaa ke dekhiye Ek baar toh aankhein mila ke dekhiye
Dhadkano ki iss machalti raagini par aap bhi Dheeme dheeme gungunaa ke dekhiye
Aap ki aankhon mein yeh bechainiyaan kiske liye Chhodiye bazm-e-jahaan ko hum pe chaa ke dekhiye
Intezaar-e-yaar mein jo lutaf hai Aap bhi lutaf utha ke dekhiye
Husn-e-gul kaise nikharta hai batau kya bhala Bas meri aagosh mein samaa ke dekhiye
Not mine.....................
mujhe pahle Rule pata nahin thi isiliye kuchh shairi jo meri khud ki Qalam se nahin usko younhi post kar di thi ....galti keliye Muaafi chahati hun
Bekhabar Uss Seh Agar Hum Hai Toh Batlao Zara Phir Usse Kon Ofaq Par Se Taka Karta Hai Awaleen Naqsh Mohabbat Bhi Ajeeb Shai Hai Akhri Saans Talak Hum Seh Wafa Karta Hai..nm
kar ke khayal tumhari baato ka.... hum dil ko tasalli de lete hain....... tum nahi ho paas to kya hua........ bin dhadkan ke hum kaise bhi jee lete hian.......nm
Tere aane ke baad zindigi kitni haseen ho jaati hai...... jaise mano zindigi ki saari khushi mujhe mil jaati hai........ tere aankhon mein pyar ki jhalak aati hai....... jo mujhe jeete jee pagal sa kar jaati hai...........nm
jab kabhi andhera saath ho hume yaad karna roshni keliye humare dil ko jalate rehena kabhi tanhai jo sataye tumko sajaan hume satane ka naye naye tarika sochte rehena ..nm
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
Last edited by Diya_Jale; 12th October 2008 at 07:23 PM..