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Pyar ka Ehsaas! - 5th October 2007, 03:13 PM

pyaar ka meetha "Ehsaas" dhilaney laga hai tu
ab to mujh se muj hi ko churaney laga hai tu

teri chahtoon ka chaya hai saruur iss kadar
har pal har jagah nazar aaney laga hai tu

veeraan thi yeh zindgi tere aaney se pehley
khushiyoon ke sapney mujhey dhikaney laga hai tu

har pal mujhey hota hai bus tera hi Ehsaas
iss kadar meri sansoon mein smaney laga hai tu

ik pal ki bhi durri seh nahi pati hoon mein
hoke masrof kyun mujhey aazmaney laga hai tu

rah chaltey huye aksar hota hai yeh gumaan
ke ban saya sath mere aaney laga hai tu

naam koi bhi lun to naam aaye tera laboon pe
ban ke jadu meri rooh mein smaney laga hai tu

teri yadoon se hi aksar hota hai dil munavar mera
ghul ke sath lahoo ke nas nas mein samney laga hai tu

janey kaun si door hai teri aur khinch le jati hai
mujh ko apna dewana bnanaey laga hai tu

tasvuur mein aksar hota hai yeh mehsoos mujhey
chod ke duniya meri bahoon mein smaney laga hai tu

yeh to bata ke kya naam dun iss dewangi ko
bechen ker ke har lamha mujhey tadpaney laga hai tu

tere khayaloon se mehkney lagti hai zindgi meri
mere zahen-o-dil pe iss kadar chaaney laga hai tu

yeh masumiyaat yeh bholapan yeh sadgi teri
mujh ko har adaa se ab staney laga hai tu

zist ke rahoon mein dhoop thi har taraf
apney pyaar ki barish ko barsaney laga hai tu

kya iss baat ka tujhey Ehsaas hai Jaana
mere har sher mein har Gazal mein aaney laga hai tu !!

With Luv Dhwani............
   
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5th October 2007, 06:54 PM

Dhwani jee:

waah! waah! bohat hii pyaare ehsaas ko aap ne lafzo.n me.n sanjoya hai.. jitni bhii taariif kee jaaye kam hai.. paRh kar lutf aaya aur dil ko sukuun haasil huaa.. aap ka is bazm me.n swaagat hai.. yuu.n hii likhati rahe.n.. ummeed hai aap ko jald dubaara paRhne ka mauqa milegaa... apna khayaal rakhiye..

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12th October 2007, 12:32 PM

Hello g,

Mayank ji hum apse mafi chahte hai lekin ye shayri humne nhi likhi hai.............hum bhi shero shayri karte hai lekin humne abhi tak apni banai hui koi shayri is site par likhi nhi ek dost hai Mohamaad kashif naam hai us dost ka unke kehne par ek apni banai hui shayri mene unhein reply dete hue likhi hai.....uske alwa mene abhi tak koi apni shayri is site par nhi likhi bas mein chahti thi ki ye shayri sab padhe kyuki mujhe bhi nhi pata ki ye kis shayar ne likhi hai...............ye mujhe online hi kisi dusri site parse kisi dost ne bheji thi..........aur is shayri ne mere dil ko chuaa hai isliyee mene ye pyara sa ehsaas sabse batna chaha hai bas..............hum tahe dil se apse maffi chahte hai ki humein yahan specify karna chahiyee tha ki ye shayri kisi aur shayar ne likhi hai...............

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Hello g,

Mayank ji hum apse mafi chahte hai lekin ye shayri humne nhi likhi hai.............hum bhi shero shayri karte hai lekin humne abhi tak apni banai hui koi shayri is site par likhi nhi ek dost hai Mohamaad kashif naam hai us dost ka unke kehne par ek apni banai hui shayri mene unhein reply dete hue likhi hai.....uske alwa mene abhi tak koi apni shayri is site par nhi likhi bas mein chahti thi ki ye shayri sab padhe kyuki mujhe bhi nhi pata ki ye kis shayar ne likhi hai...............ye mujhe online hi kisi dusri site parse kisi dost ne bheji thi..........aur is shayri ne mere dil ko chuaa hai isliyee mene ye pyara sa ehsaas sabse batna chaha hai bas..............hum tahe dil se apse maffi chahte hai ki humein yahan specify karna chahiyee tha ki ye shayri kisi aur shayar ne likhi hai...............

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Dhwani jee:

koii baat nahii.n, hota hai aise..

par yeh forum 'aapki shayri' exclusively own shayri ke liye hi hai.. aap kisii aur kii poetry share karna chaahti hai.n to bhii Theek hai lekin aap usay duusre forum me.n post keejiye, jaise kii shayri-e-dard, ishq, anjuman etc etc.

aur haa.n, hame achchha laga kii aap ne sach batayaa. keep coming, keep posting

mayank



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14th October 2007, 08:37 PM

Dear Dhawani,

Koshish hi sahi, magar ek raah tou khuli. aaj nahi.n tou kal aap bhi apni shayri is site per likhengi. Mayank ji ne saafgoi dikhaayee hai, unhe huk hai. koi tou honaa chaahiye rehbari ke liye. Humne bhi post ki hai apni likhi ghazal ko ghazal section mei.n padkar bataaiyega kaisee lagi.

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