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kya kahiye.... - 3rd September 2015, 02:00 PM


roye kyun zaar zaar kya kahiye..
gam mile beshumaar kya kahiye..

mujhko saugateiN sab jahaaN ki miliN
ek zaraa kam hai pyaar kyaa kahiye..

kal talak jo habiib mera rahaa
Aaj dushman hai yaar kya kahiye.

bewafa vaqt kab kisi ka hua
ispe kyun aitbaar kya kahiye.

char pal zindagi ke rab se mile
hamko shikwe hazaar kya kahiye.

kyun ho mayoos gar haNse duniya
baat ab hadd se paar kya kahiye.

daaNv par apna dil laga hai madhu
kaisi ye jeet haar kya kahiye..



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roye kyun zaar zaar kya kahiye..
gam mile beshumaar kya kahiye..

mujhko saugateiN sab jahaaN ki miliN
ek zaraa kam hai pyaar kyaa kahiye..

kal talak jo habiib mera rahaa
Aaj dushman hai yaar kya kahiye.

bewafa vaqt kab kisi ka hua
ispe kyun aitbaar kya kahiye.

char pal zindagi ke rab se mile
hamko shikwe hazaar kya kahiye.

kyun ho mayoos gar haNse duniya
baat ab hadd se paar kya kahiye.

daaNv par apna dil laga hai madhu
kaisi ye jeet haar kya kahiye..

Madhu ji...Wah bahutt Khubsurat Ghazal Inayat Ki Appne. Dili Daad Qubool Kijiye. Likhte Rahiye Aur Khush Rahiye....
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roye kyun zaar zaar kya kahiye..
gam mile beshumaar kya kahiye..

mujhko saugateiN sab jahaaN ki miliN
ek zaraa kam hai pyaar kyaa kahiye..

kal talak jo habiib mera rahaa
Aaj dushman hai yaar kya kahiye.

bewafa vaqt kab kisi ka hua
ispe kyun aitbaar kya kahiye.

char pal zindagi ke rab se mile
hamko shikwe hazaar kya kahiye.

kyun ho mayoos gar haNse duniya
baat ab hadd se paar kya kahiye.

daaNv par apna dil laga hai madhu
kaisi ye jeet haar kya kahiye..
Uttam, ati uttam, Madhu Ji...! Khayaal aur bayaani behad acche lage, hamari taraf se dher saare badhaaiyaN iss shaayri ke liye...!

Apna khayaal rakhiyega, ok...?

DuaaoN ke saath




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roye kyun zaar zaar kya kahiye..
gam mile beshumaar kya kahiye..

mujhko saugateiN sab jahaaN ki miliN
ek zaraa kam hai pyaar kyaa kahiye..

kal talak jo habiib mera rahaa
Aaj dushman hai yaar kya kahiye.

bewafa vaqt kab kisi ka hua
ispe kyun aitbaar kya kahiye.

char pal zindagi ke rab se mile
hamko shikwe hazaar kya kahiye.

kyun ho mayoos gar haNse duniya
baat ab hadd se paar kya kahiye.

daaNv par apna dil laga hai madhu
kaisi ye jeet haar kya kahiye..

madhu bala....bahut khoobsurat likha hai tumne, sabhi sher aik se badkar aik hai....khhobsurat gazal par dil se mubarakbaad kabool kijiye

duaoN ke saath
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Bahut khushi huyi ki aapko ghazal pasand aayi..
Yun hee Aapki daad milti rahe...taki likhne ka hausla bana rahe.....yahi dua hai..

Shukriya...
Aate rahiye...



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roye kyun zaar zaar kya kahiye..
gam mile beshumaar kya kahiye..

mujhko saugateiN sab jahaaN ki miliN
ek zaraa kam hai pyaar kyaa kahiye..

kal talak jo habiib mera rahaa
Aaj dushman hai yaar kya kahiye.

bewafa vaqt kab kisi ka hua
ispe kyun aitbaar kya kahiye.

char pal zindagi ke rab se mile
hamko shikwe hazaar kya kahiye.

kyun ho mayoos gar haNse duniya
baat ab hadd se paar kya kahiye.

daaNv par apna dil laga hai madhu
kaisi ye jeet haar kya kahiye..
dard se labrez kalaam pesh kkiya hai aapne madhu saahibaa........
muaafi chahtaa hoon takheer se haaziri ke liye, asal me zara masrufiyat ka daur chal raha hai to aanaa thoda kam ho gaya hai.....

magar aat ehi ssaath apaki is pyaari ghazal pe jo nazar gayee to dil ke andar tak utartee chalee gayee ye ghazal..... dard se saraabor yun lagaa aapne apnaa dil nikaal kekaagaz pe rakh diyaa aur khoon ki syaahi se ye kalaam likha hai.... dua hai ke Allah aapko sukoon de.....
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roye kyun zaar zaar kya kahiye..
gam mile beshumaar kya kahiye..

mujhko saugateiN sab jahaaN ki miliN
ek zaraa kam hai pyaar kyaa kahiye..

kal talak jo habiib mera rahaa
Aaj dushman hai yaar kya kahiye.

bewafa vaqt kab kisi ka hua
ispe kyun aitbaar kya kahiye.

char pal zindagi ke rab se mile
hamko shikwe hazaar kya kahiye.

kyun ho mayoos gar haNse duniya
baat ab hadd se paar kya kahiye.

daaNv par apna dil laga hai madhu
kaisi ye jeet haar kya kahiye..
Alfaazon mein kehna mushkil hai ... kya kahiye ...... is qalam ke har lafz se girtaa aansu mujhe nam kar gaya...



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Apna khayaal rakhiyega, ok...?

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Aate rahiyega...
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Itne vaqt ke baad aaj aapko apni thread pe dekhkar kaisa mahsoos kar rahi hoon..bayaan kar pana mushkil ho raha hai....vo yadein taza ho gayiin jab shuruaat me main kuch bhi post karti thi aur us par aapka" good one madhu ji."...dekhkar dil khush ho jata tha.......aapki daad pakar aaj vahi khushi hasil ho rahi hai........

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roye kyun zaar zaar kya kahiye..
gam mile beshumaar kya kahiye..

mujhko saugateiN sab jahaaN ki miliN
ek zaraa kam hai pyaar kyaa kahiye..

kal talak jo habiib mera rahaa
Aaj dushman hai yaar kya kahiye.

bewafa vaqt kab kisi ka hua
ispe kyun aitbaar kya kahiye.

char pal zindagi ke rab se mile
hamko shikwe hazaar kya kahiye.

kyun ho mayoos gar haNse duniya
baat ab hadd se paar kya kahiye.

daaNv par apna dil laga hai madhu
kaisi ye jeet haar kya kahiye..

Waah Madhu ji

Kya Ghazal kahi hai aapne. "Aapke ye asha'ar kya kahiye"

Yahi kahooNga.

Aaapki shayri aur fikr meiN din ba din aata nikhar dikhayee de raha hai. Aapki mehnat aapke sheroN meiN jhalak rahi hai. Sada bayani lekin bohat koob. Har sher behtareen hai.

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madhu bala....bahut khoobsurat likha hai tumne, sabhi sher aik se badkar aik hai....khhobsurat gazal par dil se mubarakbaad kabool kijiye

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Bahut bahut shukriya ishq ji...
Sath dete rahiyega......

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28th October 2015, 12:37 AM

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roye kyun zaar zaar kya kahiye..
gam mile beshumaar kya kahiye..

mujhko saugateiN sab jahaaN ki miliN
ek zaraa kam hai pyaar kyaa kahiye..

kal talak jo habiib mera rahaa
Aaj dushman hai yaar kya kahiye.

bewafa vaqt kab kisi ka hua
ispe kyun aitbaar kya kahiye.

char pal zindagi ke rab se mile
hamko shikwe hazaar kya kahiye.

kyun ho mayoos gar haNse duniya
baat ab hadd se paar kya kahiye.

daaNv par apna dil laga hai madhu
kaisi ye jeet haar kya kahiye..

bahut umdaah ghazal huii Madhu ji ... waah

asardaar ashaar se bharpoor

dilee mubaaraqbaad !!!!!!!!!!!!!




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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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22nd November 2015, 01:36 PM

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Madhu.........

Hamesha Ki tarah bohut simple bohut sacha aur bohut acha.....

Dil se shubh kaamnayen.

Yunhi likhti raho.....
Shukriya sarika....
Hamesha ki tarah mere is kalaam ko bhi apka sath mila achcha laga...
Aati rahna aage bhi...

Takecare..
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22nd November 2015, 01:37 PM

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Lajawaab.

Bohot baDhiya ghazal huyii hai jenab.

yuNhi samaa bandhte rahiye mehfil meN har baar.

khair andesh
Shukriya sagar ji....

Ham to mahfil me aate hee rahte hain...aapse guzarish hai...aap bhi thoda vaqt nikal kar aate rahein...

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15th December 2015, 02:08 PM

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Ise kehte hai shayri .. baqamaal har sher aala hai.. kehna hi padega 'kya kahiye'.. ek accha sa takhallus bhi rakhiye ho sake to .. mubarakbaad is dilfareb qalaam ke liye .. likhte rahiye nikharte rahiye ..

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Aapko yahaan dekhkar bahut achcha laga..aur khushi hai ki aapko ye ghazal pasand aayi...apki rai ka aage bhi intzaar rahega....

Khush rahiye. ..

Madhu.



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dard se labrez kalaam pesh kkiya hai aapne madhu saahibaa........
muaafi chahtaa hoon takheer se haaziri ke liye, asal me zara masrufiyat ka daur chal raha hai to aanaa thoda kam ho gaya hai.....

magar aat ehi ssaath apaki is pyaari ghazal pe jo nazar gayee to dil ke andar tak utartee chalee gayee ye ghazal..... dard se saraabor yun lagaa aapne apnaa dil nikaal kekaagaz pe rakh diyaa aur khoon ki syaahi se ye kalaam likha hai.... dua hai ke Allah aapko sukoon de.....
khush rahiye salaamat rahiye

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Ji..koi baat nahi kabhi kabhi masrufiyat yun hee apno se door rakhti hai....yahi bahut hai ki aapko fir bhi doston ka khayaal hai...apni ghazal pe mujhe hamesha aapka intzaar rahta hai......
Duaon ka tah e dil se shukriya...aate rahiyega

Apna khayaal rakhein...

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Alfaazon mein kehna mushkil hai ... kya kahiye ...... is qalam ke har lafz se girtaa aansu mujhe nam kar gaya...
Gustakhi maaf ho ji..aapki ankhon me nami kabhi nahi chahte ham...magar alfaaz aapka dil chhoo paye ye achcha laga....

Yun hee sath banaye rakhiyega....bas yahi chahti hun..

Khush rahiye...
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Waah Madhu ji

Kya Ghazal kahi hai aapne. "Aapke ye asha'ar kya kahiye"

Yahi kahooNga.

Aaapki shayri aur fikr meiN din ba din aata nikhar dikhayee de raha hai. Aapki mehnat aapke sheroN meiN jhalak rahi hai. Sada bayani lekin bohat koob. Har sher behtareen hai.

Agle kalaam ka intezaar rahega.

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Meri koshish ko tawajjo dene ke liye aur hausla afzai ke liye...aapka tah e dil se shukriya..

Aage bhi aapki rai ka intzaar rahega mujhe..

Apna khayaal rakhein..

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bahut umdaah ghazal huii Madhu ji ... waah

asardaar ashaar se bharpoor

dilee mubaaraqbaad !!!!!!!!!!!!!
bahut bahut shukriya naresh ji......

ashaar aapko pasand aaye hushi huyi..

aate rahiyega...

aabhar
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