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jeene ki kala - 5th September 2010, 09:49 PM
jeena ek kala hai pyare
sang jamane jee le
main jaanu tera jakham hai gehra
par hothon ko see le
in par ik muskaan sajaa le
jahir piyale pee le

jeena ek kala hai pyare
sang jamane jee le

man ka darad bataayga
to suun to legi dunia
par fir tere peetth modhte
khoob hansegi dunia
jeewan ka hai saraansh ye
seekh tu is se le le

jeena ek kala hai pyare
sang jamane jee le

sang dil ye tez jamana
chehron ko padh leta
aankhon se bhi chura le jaata
raz ye tere dil ka
man ke bhav tu man me chhupa le
aur aankhon ke rang bata le
ashak bhi apne pee le

jeena ek kala hai pyare
sang jamane jee le

maange se na kuchh bhi milta
bin maange mil jaata
uska jeena bhi kya jeena
huk jo chheen na paata
sar ko jhuka na aur jhukega
sar ko utha ke jee le

jeena ek kala hai pyare
sang jamane jee le

path par kaante bahut hain tere
par manjil par jaana too.ne
dar na jatilata se jeewan ki
isko saral banana too.ne
pasat na hone paye honsle
khud ka sahas khud hi juta le

jeena ek kala hai pyare
sang jamane jee le
main jaanu tera jakham hai gehra
par hothon ko see le
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10th September 2010, 08:24 AM
man ka darad bataayga
to suun to legi dunia
par fir tere peetth modhte
khoob hansegi dunia
jeewan ka hai saraansh ye
seekh tu is se le le

jeena ek kala hai pyare
sang jamane jee le

bahut hi sunder rachna .....khaskar ye panktia....
likhte rhen...
   
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10th September 2010, 11:26 AM
Thanks for writing and sharing this nice poetry, Rashmi Ji...!

Keep it up and take care, ok...?


Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
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11th September 2010, 01:36 PM
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man ka darad bataayga
to suun to legi dunia
par fir tere peetth modhte
khoob hansegi dunia
jeewan ka hai saraansh ye
seekh tu is se le le

jeena ek kala hai pyare
sang jamane jee le

bahut hi sunder rachna .....khaskar ye panktia....
likhte rhen...
shukria laaddo..........................
   
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Jeene ki kala == black of life
   
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Jeene ki kala == black of life
jeene ki kala=art of life na ke black of life.....................

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rashmi ji bhot sundar likha hai apne.....waah kya baat hai....daad kabul kijiye.........

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16th September 2010, 11:18 PM
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Jeene ki kala == black of life
shayad apka dil kuch jiyada hi pareshaan hai jo aapko art of life me bhi black dikhaai deta hai
   
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jeene ki kala=art of life na ke black of life.....................
shukria gudia tune mera kaam kiya

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rashmi ji bhot sundar likha hai apne.....waah kya baat hai....daad kabul kijiye.........
thankyou beta ji.........................................

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jeena ek kala hai pyare
sang jamane jee le
main jaanu tera jakham hai gehra
par hothon ko see le
in par ik muskaan sajaa le
jahir piyale pee le

jeena ek kala hai pyare
sang jamane jee le

man ka darad bataayga
to suun to legi dunia
par fir tere peetth modhte
khoob hansegi dunia
jeewan ka hai saraansh ye
seekh tu is se le le

jeena ek kala hai pyare
sang jamane jee le

sang dil ye tez jamana
chehron ko padh leta
aankhon se bhi chura le jaata
raz ye tere dil ka
man ke bhav tu man me chhupa le
aur aankhon ke rang bata le
ashak bhi apne pee le

jeena ek kala hai pyare
sang jamane jee le

maange se na kuchh bhi milta
bin maange mil jaata
uska jeena bhi kya jeena
huk jo chheen na paata
sar ko jhuka na aur jhukega
sar ko utha ke jee le

jeena ek kala hai pyare
sang jamane jee le

path par kaante bahut hain tere
par manjil par jaana too.ne
dar na jatilata se jeewan ki
isko saral banana too.ne
pasat na hone paye honsle
khud ka sahas khud hi juta le

jeena ek kala hai pyare
sang jamane jee le
main jaanu tera jakham hai gehra
par hothon ko see le

rashmi jee
radhe radhe

kavita ki bhasha shailly aur bhav dono bahut achhe lage

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22nd October 2010, 11:48 AM
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radhe radhe

kavita ki bhasha shailly aur bhav dono bahut achhe lage
radhe radhe, rajinder ji. apkaa bahut bahut shukria jo aapne ise pada aur saraaha aise hi housala badhaate rahe.n.

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