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Thumbs up hum mar jaye par pyar reh jaye - 19th December 2004, 11:38 AM

Ankhen khul jaye aur sapne reh jaye
honth sil jaye aur baathe keh jaye
Mehfil mein jaye aur tanha reh jaye
doori badh jaye aur kareeb hum ho jaye
chot unko lag jaye aur dard ham seh jaye
woh na kar jaye aur hum ha sun jaye
hum mar jaye aur hamara pyar reh jaye!!


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log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
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19th December 2004, 05:48 PM

HI Jubin,

Once again a truly beautiful collection of gems from you. This one is the absolute best. Thanx for sharin such luvly pieces with us.


Luvs,

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20th December 2004, 08:55 AM

Hi Jubinji...

Very Nice wordings....very nice feelings......

& very nice shayri......

Bahut acche.....i like it very much.....

Bye..Take Care.....

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20th December 2004, 10:48 AM

thanx candy for always readin my shers
thanx a lot
i'll always share it


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I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
`..-JuBin-..`
(.'(.'* *`'.)`'.)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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Kabiletarif - 20th December 2004, 04:32 PM

Hi, dard_thesorrow

Aap ne jo farmaya woh kabil e tarif hai.

Aaise hi sher post karte rahiye

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25th January 2005, 04:52 PM

thank u dhawal sahab for u r appreciation


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I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
`..-JuBin-..`
(.'(.'* *`'.)`'.)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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Aankhen khouli ho yea ho bandh...song! - 25th January 2005, 05:33 PM

Ankhen khul jaye aur sapne reh jaye
honth sil jaye aur baate keh jaye
Mehfil mein jaye aur tanha reh jaye
doori badh jaye aur kareeb hum ho jaye
chot Unko lag jaye aur dard ham seh jaye
Woh na kar jaye aur hum ha soun jaye
hum mar jaye aur hamara Pyaar reh jaye!!

Badan hi aaj agar tare tare hain mera Tou ek chak-e-gareeban Siya siya Na siya~Ye aur baat ke Tu har rah-e-khayaal mein hain, Ke Tera Naam zaban se Liya liya Na liya~Mareeze Ishq ka keya hain Jiiya jiiya Na jiiya~Hain Ik saans ka jhagra Liya liya Na liya...Ye ghazal younhi likh gayi...! Aapna jeisa ehsaas laga...**Likhte rahiyega~Daad kuboul karlena Khush rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care>>>God bless You.

Keep smilling.......


*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche**
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25th January 2005, 10:41 PM

hi jubin

ab humein to aapki tareef karne ki aadat si hi ho gayi hai, aap likhte hi itna khoob hain

aise hi likhte rahiye

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Dost Jubin! - 25th January 2005, 11:08 PM

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Ankhen khul jaye aur sapne reh jaye
honth sil jaye aur baathe keh jaye
Mehfil mein jaye aur tanha reh jaye
doori badh jaye aur kareeb hum ho jaye
chot unko lag jaye aur dard ham seh jaye
woh na kar jaye aur hum ha sun jaye
hum mar jaye aur hamara pyar reh jaye!!

Dost jubin,

Saach mein kaafi accha likha hai...
Har ek pal...har ek elfaaz gawahi de raha hai ki aap ek
achhe shayar hai.....Keep it up!

Keep writing buddy!

Have a excellent time.........
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26th January 2005, 12:19 AM

Dard ji,

too good very well written.

Yunhi likhte rahein mere dost.

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Re: Aankhen khouli ho yea ho bandh...song! - 26th January 2005, 09:02 AM

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Ankhen khul jaye aur sapne reh jaye
honth sil jaye aur baate keh jaye
Mehfil mein jaye aur tanha reh jaye
doori badh jaye aur kareeb hum ho jaye
chot Unko lag jaye aur dard ham seh jaye
Woh na kar jaye aur hum ha soun jaye
hum mar jaye aur hamara Pyaar reh jaye!!

Badan hi aaj agar tare tare hain mera Tou ek chak-e-gareeban Siya siya Na siya~Ye aur baat ke Tu har rah-e-khayaal mein hain, Ke Tera Naam zaban se Liya liya Na liya~Mareeze Ishq ka keya hain Jiiya jiiya Na jiiya~Hain Ik saans ka jhagra Liya liya Na liya...Ye ghazal younhi likh gayi...! Aapna jeisa ehsaas laga...**Likhte rahiyega~Daad kuboul karlena Khush rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care>>>God bless You.

Keep smilling.......

thanks shimul ji
for taking out time and appreciating my sher thank u
aapne char chaand laga diye reply dekar
thanks a lot


main aur meri tanhayee..............

I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
`..-JuBin-..`
(.'(.'* *`'.)`'.)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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26th January 2005, 09:06 AM

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hi jubin

ab humein to aapki tareef karne ki aadat si hi ho gayi hai, aap likhte hi itna khoob hain

aise hi likhte rahiye

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sonal ji kyu sharminda kar rahi hai aap hume
aap un chuninda logon me se hai jo mera har sher padhte hai aur unme reply dete hai

thanks a lot for being there


main aur meri tanhayee..............

I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
`..-JuBin-..`
(.'(.'* *`'.)`'.)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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Re: Dost Jubin! - 26th January 2005, 09:14 AM

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Dost jubin,

Saach mein kaafi accha likha hai...
Har ek pal...har ek elfaaz gawahi de raha hai ki aap ek
achhe shayar hai.....Keep it up!

Keep writing buddy!

Have a excellent time.........
Bye
thank u yash sahab
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janaab yaha par humse bhi acche shayar hai to krupya hame sharminda na kare
yaha par bade logo ke saamne humara koi sthaan nahi hai
salaam
khayaal rakhiye
aapka jubin


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I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
`..-JuBin-..`
(.'(.'* *`'.)`'.)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
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hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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26th January 2005, 09:19 AM

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Dard ji,

too good very well written.

Yunhi likhte rahein mere dost.

Thanks
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huzoor aapka bahut bahut shukriya aap yaha aaye aur humare sher ki raunaq ko badhaya bahut shukriya

keep reading,keep writing


main aur meri tanhayee..............

I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
`..-JuBin-..`
(.'(.'* *`'.)`'.)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe
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Re: Re: Aankhen khouli ho yea ho bandh...song! - 26th January 2005, 03:30 PM

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thanks shimul ji
for taking out time and appreciating my sher thank u
aapne char chaand laga diye reply dekar
thanks a lot
I forgot to say something: Your signature Jhutha hi sahi~Pal bharke liye koi hamein Pyaar: Kishore Jee ki aawaaz mein wo song yaad diyala... Khair, ek baat aur kehna chahoungi Aapse ki Char Chaand lagadiya kehkar Aapne mujhe bohot hi jiyada izzat bakshe hain: Mere khayaal mein Aapko Aapke aur Doston ko ye kehna chahiye, Aapka keya khayaal hain! Shukriya padhne ke liye**Khush rahon ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care>>>God bless You.

Keep smilling.......


*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche**
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Re: Re: Re: Aankhen khouli ho yea ho bandh...song! - 28th January 2005, 05:52 PM

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I forgot to say something: Your signature Jhutha hi sahi~Pal bharke liye koi hamein Pyaar: Kishore Jee ki aawaaz mein wo song yaad diyala... Khair, ek baat aur kehna chahoungi Aapse ki Char Chaand lagadiya kehkar Aapne mujhe bohot hi jiyada izzat bakshe hain: Mere khayaal mein Aapko Aapke aur Doston ko ye kehna chahiye, Aapka keya khayaal hain! Shukriya padhne ke liye**Khush rahon ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care>>>God bless You.

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shimul ji
aap humse badi hain
to hum izzat se hi pesh aayenge na !!
hum bado ki izzat karte hai yaar
to ab aap bataiye ki aapka kya khayaal hai

ha vo kishore ji ka gaane se to inspire hue hain hum signature ke liye


god bless u tooo
aap bhi khush rahiye


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I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying

jootha hi sahi,
kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta.......
`..-JuBin-..`
(.'(.'* *`'.)`'.)

log dil ko dard samajhte hai,
ham dard ko dil samajhte hai.....

hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe,
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