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19th December 2004, 11:38 AM
Ankhen khul jaye aur sapne reh jaye
honth sil jaye aur baathe keh jaye Mehfil mein jaye aur tanha reh jaye doori badh jaye aur kareeb hum ho jaye chot unko lag jaye aur dard ham seh jaye woh na kar jaye aur hum ha sun jaye hum mar jaye aur hamara pyar reh jaye!! I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine} 
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19th December 2004, 05:48 PM
HI Jubin,
Once again a truly beautiful collection of gems from you. This one is the absolute best. Thanx for sharin such luvly pieces with us. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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20th December 2004, 08:55 AM
Hi Jubinji...
Very Nice wordings....very nice feelings...... & very nice shayri...... Bahut acche.....i like it very much..... Bye..Take Care..... Megha |
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20th December 2004, 10:48 AM
thanx candy for always readin my shers
thanx a lot i'll always share it I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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20th December 2004, 04:32 PM
Hi, dard_thesorrow
Aap ne jo farmaya woh kabil e tarif hai. Aaise hi sher post karte rahiye Regards |
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25th January 2005, 04:52 PM
thank u dhawal sahab for u r appreciation
I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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Aankhen khouli ho yea ho bandh...song! -
25th January 2005, 05:33 PM
Ankhen khul jaye aur sapne reh jaye
honth sil jaye aur baate keh jaye Mehfil mein jaye aur tanha reh jaye doori badh jaye aur kareeb hum ho jaye chot Unko lag jaye aur dard ham seh jaye Woh na kar jaye aur hum ha soun jaye hum mar jaye aur hamara Pyaar reh jaye!! Badan hi aaj agar tare tare hain mera Tou ek chak-e-gareeban Siya siya Na siya~Ye aur baat ke Tu har rah-e-khayaal mein hain, Ke Tera Naam zaban se Liya liya Na liya~Mareeze Ishq ka keya hain Jiiya jiiya Na jiiya~Hain Ik saans ka jhagra Liya liya Na liya...Ye ghazal younhi likh gayi...! Aapna jeisa ehsaas laga...**Likhte rahiyega~Daad kuboul karlena  Khush rahiye ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care>>>God bless You. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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25th January 2005, 10:41 PM
hi jubin
ab humein to aapki tareef karne ki aadat si hi ho gayi hai, aap likhte hi itna khoob hain aise hi likhte rahiye sonal |
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Dost jubin, Saach mein kaafi accha likha hai... Har ek pal...har ek elfaaz gawahi de raha hai ki aap ek achhe shayar hai.....Keep it up! Keep writing buddy! Have a excellent time......... Bye : : Dost har lamha saath tumhare hai hum : : Listen to your mind...but follow your heart. "Anyone who believes sunshine brings happiness has never danced in the rain." ---------------------------------------------- : : Yogesh : : |
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26th January 2005, 12:19 AM
Dard ji,
too good very well written. Yunhi likhte rahein mere dost. Thanks Rohin |
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Re: Aankhen khouli ho yea ho bandh...song! -
26th January 2005, 09:02 AM
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thanks shimul ji for taking out time and appreciating my sher thank u aapne char chaand laga diye reply dekar thanks a lot I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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26th January 2005, 09:06 AM
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aap un chuninda logon me se hai jo mera har sher padhte hai aur unme reply dete hai thanks a lot for being there I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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26th January 2005, 09:14 AM
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hum to dil se likhte hai aur hume khushi hai ki humara likha aapko pasand aaya padhte rahiye janaab yaha par humse bhi acche shayar hai to krupya hame sharminda na kare yaha par bade logo ke saamne humara koi sthaan nahi hai salaam khayaal rakhiye aapka jubin I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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keep reading,keep writing I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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Khair, ek baat aur kehna chahoungi Aapse ki Char Chaand lagadiya kehkar Aapne mujhe bohot hi jiyada izzat bakshe hain: Mere khayaal mein Aapko Aapke aur Doston ko ye kehna chahiye, Aapka keya khayaal hain! Shukriya padhne ke liye**Khush rahon ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care>>>God bless You. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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aap humse badi hain to hum izzat se hi pesh aayenge na !! hum bado ki izzat karte hai yaar to ab aap bataiye ki aapka kya khayaal hai ha vo kishore ji ka gaane se to inspire hue hain hum signature ke liye god bless u tooo aap bhi khush rahiye I Love Walking In The Rain Because Nobody Can See Me Crying jootha hi sahi, kaash koi mujhe bhi pyar karta....... «´¨`·..¤-JuBin-¤..·´¨`» (¸.·'´(¸.·'´* ¤ *`'·.¸)`'·.¸) log dil ko dard samajhte hai, ham dard ko dil samajhte hai..... hui humse ye nadani ki teri mehfil me aa baithe, ho ke zameen ki khakh aasmaan se dil laga baithe {nt mine}
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