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5th September 2004, 01:13 AM
kyoN ek kali khil ke phool ban jati hai?
kyon koi ladki jal ke rakh ban jati hai? kyon asmaan ka rang kala sa lagne laga hai ? kyon her chehra murzhaya sa rehne laga hai? kyon sager ki lehren pinjre mai band panchi ki tarahe lagti hai? kyon swatantra mitti se partantrata ki gandha aati hai? kyon her sandhya ,chaya sager si lambi hoti hai ? kyon her subaha ,ganga ki chader si lambi hoti hai? kyon shama ,daya ,tap,tyag,manobal baste nahi kisi dil mai? kyon sahenshilta ,pavitrata ko puja jata nahi kisi mandir mai? kyon mere kisi sawal ka "koi" jawab nahi de pata? kyon mera her sawal "adhura sa " reh jata? |
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5th September 2004, 01:38 PM
Hi Mayu Ji,
Kaafi acchey lage aap kay sawaal. Inka jawaab dhoondne ki koshish zaroor karenge. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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5th September 2004, 01:49 PM
hello salim ji,
sabse pehle to thanks ruk ke meri kavita padhne ke liye aur jawab dene ke liye . waise to yeh hamara pehla interaction hai ,per ummid kerti hu is safer mai hamara sath lamba hoga. keep writing tc mayuri |
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5th September 2004, 04:46 PM
kya kehnay hai sawal aur jawab ek saath kya kehnay hain
Baat Be Baat Tum Ko Yaad Kya |
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5th September 2004, 07:59 PM
thanks shakil ji ,
shukriya sirf aapki daad ka nahi de rahi hu , maine to sirf sawal hi puche the aapne mere in adhure sawalo mai hi unka jawab bhi dhud diya . wahh !! mere jaisi kachhi khiladi ki taraf se daad kabul kijiye . keep writing tc mayuri |
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i like it -
6th September 2004, 05:51 PM
hi
nice ....................... i like it aapki kavita main jo kuch hai usse aapki soch ki gahryi ka pata lagta hai. plz continue to write like this. aur haan agar main aapke sawalo ka jawab dond saka toh main apko jaroor batonga. plz don,t laugh i know my hindi is poor. luvs sonu |
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6th September 2004, 06:02 PM
hello sunu ,
u r most welcome on this beautiful planet of shayri. aur bahut bahut shukriya kavita pasand kerne ke liye. ji hindi to waise hamari bhi bahut achhi nahi hai, but still trying to improve on it. aur aapka mail padh ker mughe aisa to nahi laga ki aapki hindi achhi nahi , lekin ab kyonki aap bhi is khubsurat dunia ka 1 hissa ban chuke hai ,to bahut jald ummid kerti h u aapki hindi aur urdu dono hi achhi ho jayengi. keep writing tc mayuri |
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7th September 2004, 05:12 PM
hi
first of all a very very warm thanx for a warm welcome but still i have to work hard to v a part of this beautiful world. i think i will do it bcoz jinme kuch karne ka irada hota hai woh kar hi lete hai but still i will aur aap jaise dosto ka shahra bhi saath hona chahiye. najeez, sonu |
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14th September 2004, 03:06 PM
hello mayu....kaisi ho..
sorry bahut dair se yaha pahunchi... Quote:
URS-UDAS ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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15th September 2004, 08:16 PM
hello sunita di,
how r u? well i hope u r good. shukriya in prashno ka positive utter dene ke liye . aap se baat ker ke sorry aap ke post padh ke mughe bahut tassli hoti hai , ki chalo koi to positive energy de raha hai. acha laga aapka reply , thanks again sare jawab dene ke liye . waise yeh kavita maine 8th mai thi tab likhi thi aaj malum nahi tab kya pareshani thi jo yeh likhi. per itne salo bad in anwwers ka milna kya kahu , ittafak ya kuch aur.. jo bhi hai bahut sukhad ehsas hai , samaza nahi paungi. bus yahi sochti thi ki koi samazdar vyakti in kavitao ko padhe aur mughe kuch kahe achha bura kuch bhi per react kare , manoj ji jarur her bar meri ker post per apne comments dete the . pukarta hai kaun chilmano ke us taraf se, kya mere liya bhi koi udas ,bekarar hai. keep writing tc mayuri |
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16th September 2004, 04:57 AM
Hello Hi Salam Namastay
Gustakhi Nahi Hai Yeh Ek Meri Soch Hai ..Shayed Kisi Aur Ki bhi Ho.. mayu ji ne jo likha wo Ek Sunder Dil Per Laga Aehsas Hai . Aur Yeh Sub Insaan Main Yeh Aesaas Paya Jata Hai Jo Jis Tarah Sumjhay .Ager ..Sumajhnay Ki Shakti Ho G Tu ..Baar Haa..UDAS jI tU Hain Udas Aur Un Ki Jo Soch Bhi Hai Kuch Udas ..Aur Humain Buhat Achi Lagi Un Ki Yeh Soch ..aUR hAAN dOSTO yEH sAWAL kE jAWAB aPP kE aNDER hAIN kHUD mAIN tALASH kARO .. Aur Haan Dostoun Khud Ka Khayal Rakhna ..Aur Hameshah Such Likhna Dil Se Likhna Per Soch Sumajh Ke Likhna.Meri Baat Ka Bura Mat Manna .Aur Han Udas Bhi Rehna Aur Khoob Mukurana....bye Baat Be Baat Tum Ko Yaad Kya |
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21st September 2004, 02:49 AM
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Aapne bahut hi oonche darje ke kuch sawaal kar liye yahan.. shaayad inka jawaab to koi bhi poori tarah na de paayega.. shaayad yeh sawaal.. humesha ahdoore hi rahenge.. par aapki koshish bahut pasand aayi mujhe.. Khush rahiye.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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21st September 2004, 08:42 PM
mayu ....
 oh meri mayu kya hai ye.... yar paglon ki bat ka koi jawab nahi hota...  hehehehehe(just kidding)  mayu meri jan tumne to wakai mujhe rula hi diya bola tha na tention nahi lena itna chalo tumhare sawalon ke jawab dhundte hai... udas ji ki tarah.... kyoN ek kali khil ke phool ban jati hai? kyon koi ladki jal ke rakh ban jati hai? HAR SUBAH KA DASTOOR YAHI HOTA HAI.. JALTI HAI TABHI TO NAM ISKA ROSHNI HOTA HAI... kyon asmaan ka rang kala sa lagne laga hai ? kyon her chehra murzhaya sa rehne laga hai? GHAM KE BADAL KA RANG KALA HI HOTA HAI... BHEEGE SAB USI ME TABHI HAR CHEHRA RANG KHOTA HAI kyon sager ki lehren pinjre mai band panchi ki tarahe lagti hai? kyon swatantra mitti se partantrata ki gandha aati hai? RAKHTA HAI DHAYAN SABKA TABHI WO TEHRA HOTA HAI.... BIKTI HAI MITTI YAHAN TABHI AISA GUMAN HOTA HAI... kyon her sandhya ,chaya sager si lambi hoti hai ? kyon her subaha ,ganga ki chader si lambi hoti hai? INTZAAR MAIN JAB SOORAJ DHALTA NAHI HOTA... SUBAH TAK JAGI AANKON KA SAPNA TOOTA NAHI HOTA kyon shama ,daya ,tap,tyag,manobal baste nahi kisi dil mai? kyon sahenshilta ,pavitrata ko puja jata nahi kisi mandir mai? JISKE PAS KHUD KE GUNAHO KA BAYAN NAHI HOTA... WOH KHUDA KE DAR PE KABHI KHDA NAHI HOTA.... kyon mere kisi sawal ka "koi" jawab nahi de pata? kyon mera her sawal "adhura sa " reh jata? KAISE DEJAWAB KOI ITNA KOI SAMAJHDAR NAHI HOTA... YE BHI SACH HAI HAR SAWAL KA JAWAB NAHI HOTA.... //Sacccha_(¯¥¯)_Pyar ---»(kunal) har dil main SACCHA_PYAR hota hai... phir kyun chup ke KUNAL tu rota hai.... |
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22nd September 2004, 05:13 PM
Hello Mayuri ji..
Kaisi haiN aap? Well..Jawaab tou nahi depaaungaa filhaal.. Par aap ne qalam achchha chalaaya hai.. Kayi jagah swaal adhureN haiN jo kabhi pure nahi ho sakte.. aur baaki sawaal ka jawaab mai dooN tou aap ko adhuraa lagegaa.. Isiliye maine jawaab nahi diya… Take care.. Keep writing.. MayanK |
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5th October 2004, 02:04 AM
kyon mere kisi sawal ka "koi" jawab nahi de pata?
kyon mera her sawal "adhura sa " reh jata? -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Mayu ji.. Aapne bahut hi oonche darje ke kuch sawaal kar liye yahan.. shaayad inka jawaab to koi bhi poori tarah na de paayega.. shaayad yeh sawaal.. humesha ahdoore hi rahenge.. par aapki koshish bahut pasand aayi mujhe.. Khush rahiye.. ~Priya hi priya first of all sorry 4 being so late in replying. per aaj bahut dino baad itni fursat se is site per aayi hu.ha thxs ruk ker meri is koshish ko waqt dene ki jo ki sabse jyada kimti hai aaj kal shayad hamesha se  any ways kaise ho ??? hope goood in sawalo ke kabhi koi utter nahi ho sakte priya kyonki yaha yeh sawal hi adhure hai... mera to her sawal hi adhura reh gaya shayed isi der se ki janti thi koi jawab nahi hai uska hum sabhike pass aise kai prashna hai aur sari umr inhi prashno ke utter dhundete reh jate hai .. aapne inhe padha thxs again keep writing take care mayuri |
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5th October 2004, 02:07 AM
Hello Mayuri ji..
Kaisi haiN aap? Well..Jawaab tou nahi depaaungaa filhaal.. Par aap ne qalam achchha chalaaya hai.. Kayi jagah swaal adhureN haiN jo kabhi pure nahi ho sakte.. aur baaki sawaal ka jawaab mai dooN tou aap ko adhuraa lagegaa.. Isiliye maine jawaab nahi diya… Take care.. Keep writing.. MayanK ------------ Kuch Paloon Ki Mohalat Hai, Mil Ke Do Ghadi Jii Lein, Ranjisho Ke Saaye Mein Umar Kya Bitaana Hai.. Sochte HaiN yahaaN kise raazdaar banaaye hum.. SaahiloN ko sajishoN ki dastaaN sunana hai.. manna padega mayank ji aapko intelligent hai aap , adhure sawalo ko chod diya aur kuch ke adhure jawab hai yeh kehker chod diya, thts gr8 aabhi sachhi sachhi bataiyega kitni badam khate hai rojana jo yeh akal pai hai keep writing mayuri |
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