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aabaadi meN rehne waale saaNp baRe zehreelay thay! - 5th September 2015, 06:54 AM

dosto! Aaj ik munfareed Ghazal se aap ko saraahtaa huuN.
aap ki tavajjo is ki behtareen kaafiyahbandi ki aur rahegi to aap ziyaadh lutfandoz hoNge.




Ghazal

shauq barahnah-paa chaltaa thaa, aur raste pathreele thay
ghiste-ghiste ghis gaye aaKhir, kaNkar jo nokeele thay

Khaar-e-chaman thay shabnam-shabnam, phuul bhi saare geelay thay
shaaKh se TuuT ke girne waale patte phir bhi peele thay

sard havaa'oN se to thay saaHil ki ret ke yaaraane
luu ke thapeRe sahne waale saHraa'oN ke Teele thay

taabindah taaroN kaa toHfah, subH ki Khidmat meN pahuNchaa
raat ne chaaNd ki nazr kiye jo taare kam chamkeele thay

saare sapere viiraanoN meN ghuum rahe haiN been liye
aabaadii meN rahne waale saaNp baRe zahreele thay <===

tum yuuN hii naaraaz hu'e thay, varnah mai-Khaane kaa pataa
ham ne har us shaKhs se puuChhaa, jis ke nain nasheele thay <===

kaun :Ghulaam MuHammad "Qaasir":, be-chaare se kartaa baat
chaalaakoN ki bastii thii, aur yeh Hazrat sharmeele thay. <=== :laugh:


~Ghulam Mohammed "Qasir"

(courtesy: Naseer saahab -@ A.L.U.P.)

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5th September 2015, 09:24 AM

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dosto! Aaj ik munfareed Ghazal se aap ko saraahtaa huuN.
aap ki tavajjo is ki behtareen kaafiyahbandi ki aur rahegi to aap ziyaadh lutfandoz hoNge.




Ghazal

shauq barahnah-paa chaltaa thaa, aur raste pathreele thay
ghiste-ghiste ghis gaye aaKhir, kaNkar jo nokeele thay

Khaar-e-chaman thay shabnam-shabnam, phuul bhi saare geelay thay
shaaKh se TuuT ke girne waale patte phir bhi peele thay

sard havaa'oN se to thay saaHil ki ret ke yaaraane
luu ke thapeRe sahne waale saHraa'oN ke Teele thay

taabindah taaroN kaa toHfah, subH ki Khidmat meN pahuNchaa
raat ne chaaNd ki nazr kiye jo taare kam chamkeele thay

saare sapere viiraanoN meN ghuum rahe haiN been liye
aabaadii meN rahne waale saaNp baRe zahreele thay <===

tum yuuN hii naaraaz hu'e thay, varnah mai-Khaane kaa pataa
ham ne har us shaKhs se puuChhaa, jis ke nain nasheele thay <===

kaun :Ghulaam MuHammad "Qaasir":, be-chaare se kartaa baat
chaalaakoN ki bastii thii, aur yeh Hazrat sharmeele thay. <=== :laugh:


~Ghulam Mohammed "Qasir"

(courtesy: Naseer saahab -@ A.L.U.P.)

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BGM ji..........nihayat khoobsurat gazal padne ka mokka diya aapne...en ehsaasoN ko hamare saath share karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.

regards


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5th September 2015, 08:13 PM

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dosto! Aaj ik munfareed Ghazal se aap ko saraahtaa huuN.
aap ki tavajjo is ki behtareen kaafiyahbandi ki aur rahegi to aap ziyaadh lutfandoz hoNge.




Ghazal

shauq barahnah-paa chaltaa thaa, aur raste pathreele thay
ghiste-ghiste ghis gaye aaKhir, kaNkar jo nokeele thay

Khaar-e-chaman thay shabnam-shabnam, phuul bhi saare geelay thay
shaaKh se TuuT ke girne waale patte phir bhi peele thay

sard havaa'oN se to thay saaHil ki ret ke yaaraane
luu ke thapeRe sahne waale saHraa'oN ke Teele thay

taabindah taaroN kaa toHfah, subH ki Khidmat meN pahuNchaa
raat ne chaaNd ki nazr kiye jo taare kam chamkeele thay

saare sapere viiraanoN meN ghuum rahe haiN been liye
aabaadii meN rahne waale saaNp baRe zahreele thay <===

tum yuuN hii naaraaz hu'e thay, varnah mai-Khaane kaa pataa
ham ne har us shaKhs se puuChhaa, jis ke nain nasheele thay <===

kaun :Ghulaam MuHammad "Qaasir":, be-chaare se kartaa baat
chaalaakoN ki bastii thii, aur yeh Hazrat sharmeele thay. <=== :laugh:


~Ghulam Mohammed "Qasir"

(courtesy: Naseer saahab -@ A.L.U.P.)

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Waaahhh....kamaal ki ghazal share ki hai aapne BGM sahab ..bahut achcha laga ise padhkar...aise hee bemisaal kalaam aage bhi late rahiyega........

Khush rahein...



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5th September 2015, 08:30 PM

sard havaa'oN se to thay saaHil ki ret ke yaaraane
luu ke thapeRe sahne waale saHraa'oN ke Teele thay


Masha Allah...... sau daad is akele ek shher ke liye........... behad shukriyaa hazrat jo aap tashreef laaye is umdah kalaam ke saath......

Shaad....


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