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Dil ka ujdaa hua nagar dekho - 18th October 2014, 03:19 PM

Dil ka ujdaa hua nagar dekho
Meri janib bhi ek nazar dekho

janib- Towards

Koun bekal hai tumse milne ko
Mud ke ek baar tum idhar dekho

Bekal- Anxious

Is ne hum dono ko milaya hai
Hai haseeN kitni eh seher dekho

haseeN – Beautiful, Seher- Morning

Be rukhii meri jaan lelegi
kar ke tum chaho to asar dekho

Be rukhii - Negligence

Mere kuch tohfe ko na dekho bhi
meri chahat ko tum magar dekho

Tum ko hii dhoondte milenge hum
Shher men chahe tum jidhar dekho

Is pe Parwaaz bhi hai aamadah
Tum mita kar use agar dekho

Aamadah- Agreed



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18th October 2014, 08:35 PM

Waaaahhhhh jaise kisii ne is bazm me surkhaab ke par lagaa diye hoN......

chahak uthhi hai ye bazm aaj Mujeeb saahab aapke is khoobsurat kalaam se.....

balaa ka khoobsurat.... balaa ka roomaaniii...... roohani taseer hai is kalaam me Mujeeb saahab......

Merii jaanib jo aap agar dekho,
merii jhuktee huii nazar dekho....

Daad hi daaad aur behad mubaarakbaad aapko....

Shaad....


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19th October 2014, 12:51 AM


Mujeeb Sahaab Aadaab ... !

Masha Allaah janab aapki dusri kalaam se rubaru hone ka mouqa mila aur dil shaad ho gaya is khoobsurat kalaam se rubaru hokar ...

Behad dilkash aur pur asar ashaar rahe janab ...
Aapki kalam meiN woH taaseer hai ke na chaahne waala bhi chaah leN...

Is khoob peshkash par meri dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ...
Bazm meiN apni khoobsurat kalaam se Parwaaz karte rahiye ...

Shaad O aabaad rahiye ...
Khuda Hafez ....



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19th October 2014, 09:21 AM

Parwaz Sahib ,

Aap nein tau Roshni bhikhra dee char su .. Bahut achchi lagi apki nazm ..

Tum ko hii dhoondte milenge hum
Shher men chahe tum jidhar dekho

ye sher bahut pasand aya mujhe ..

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27th October 2014, 11:38 AM

Bohut bohut shukriya...Sameer Sb.

Der se hazir hone ke liya maazrat chahta hun.

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27th October 2014, 11:42 AM

Adaab Kwahish ji

Der se mukhatib hua hun....Muaaf kariyega.
Aap ki tareef ke lofzon se mere kalaam ki pazirayi hui hai...Bohut bohut shukriya.
Khush rahiye aur yun hi saath dete rahiye.

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27th October 2014, 11:46 AM

Shukriya Sanjay Sb,

Aap ne mere ek sher ko pasand kiya....mere qalam ki izzat nawazi hui hai.

Ek baar phir teh dil se shukriya ada karta hun.

Yun hi saath dete rahiyega.
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27th October 2014, 11:47 AM

Bohut bohut shukriya N@zneen Saheba.
Yun hi saath dete rahiyega.

Duaon ke saath
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27th October 2014, 12:16 PM

Mujib ji...bahut umda nazm kahi aapne...bahut accha likha hai aapne.

Tum ko hii dhoondte milenge hum
Shher men chahe tum jidhar dekho


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28th October 2014, 12:33 PM

Adab Sunita ji

Aap ko meri Ghazal pasand aayi.....bohut bohut shukriya.

Yun hi saath dete rahiye.
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