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Jisee Dushman Samajhta hoon -
26th August 2003, 06:51 PM
aap sabhi hazraat ko mera salaam...doston yeh ghazal ek barr phir munavvar rana sahab ki hai...jo ke mujhe pasand aayee to meine socha aap logon ki nazarr karoon...nazrr-e-karam..farmaiiye
Jise dushman samajhta hoon wohi aapna nikalta hai, ke har patthar ka mere sar se kuch rishta nikalta hai. Zara sa chuhtputa jate hi chupp jataa hai suraj bhi, magr ek chand hai jo shabb mein bhi tanha nikalta hai. kisi ke pass aate hai, to darya sookh jata hai, kisi ki edhiyon se ret mein chasma nikalta hai. jise tum jurm-e-gaddari mein aksarr qatL karte ho, ussi ki jebb se kyoon mulq ka jhanda nikalta hai. fiza mein ghol di hai naftaren ehel sihasat ne, magar pani kuenn se aaj tak mitha nikalta hai. duaen MAA ki pohchaane ko milo-mil jati hai, ke jab pardesh jane ke liye beta nikalta hai. ummid hai pasand aayi hogi...yeh ghazal Allah hafiz.. Talib. |
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Re: Jisee Dushman Samajhta hoon -
26th August 2003, 07:11 PM
Jise dushman samajhta hoon wohi aapna nikalta hai,
ke har patthar ka mere sar se kuch rishta nikalta hai. jise tum jurm-e-gaddari mein aksarr qatL karte ho, ussi ki jebb se kyoon mulq ka jhanda nikalta hai. fiza mein ghol di hai naftaren ehel sihasat ne, magar pani kuenn se aaj tak mitha nikalta hai. duaen MAA ki pohchaane ko milo-mil jati hai, ke jab pardesh jane ke liye beta nikalta hai. wah talib bhai kya kehne....ek baar phir apne aap ko roke nahi saka "wah wah" kehne se...kya khoob gehrayee bayan ki hai shayar ne,,kuch waqt laga goya nikalne mein. aap ka shukriya ki ek baar phir aap ne itna umda kalaam hamare saath baata... -Manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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manoj ji -
26th August 2003, 08:01 PM
ji haan kafi khoobsurat kalaam hai ...aur bhi kayee ghazal likhi huee hai iss kitaab mein "badan saray" naame hai iss kitab ka...lekin kuch chuninda ghazal pasand aaye mujhe..to aap logon ke kidhmat mein pesh kardi basss....batware ke shikar hai yeh shayar "munavvar rana" inki kitab ka saransh padhe layak hai..aap koshish karen agar kahi mil jaye to...ek nazar dalne ke layak hai yeh kitab....
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Re: manoj ji -
26th August 2003, 08:12 PM
shukriya talib bhai..
shaayar aur unki kitaab ke baare mein aap se bataya...mein jaroor yeh kitaab khojunga...parantu ek baat bataiyee yeh kitaab kis language mein hai..? agar urdu mein hai to hamen to urdu padhni nahin aati...agar hindi yaa english mein hi to bahot acha hai.. -Manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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manoj jee -
26th August 2003, 08:45 PM
janaab urdu to mujhe bhi nahi aati...yeh kitaab urdu aur hindi dono zabano mein maujood hai.....meine hindi copy kharidi thi....ek dost ko di thi..unhone wapass nahi lautayee.....aap padhna zaroor
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23rd September 2003, 01:17 PM
Assalam u alaikum
Aapki pasand waqai lajawab hai Talib bhai.Apni pasand yun hi share kerte rahiye. Allah hafiz smile n make others also smile those sparkling eyes A 100 watt smile the majestic walk the cheerful talk truly charming personality Guess,thats enough abt me :D |
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Khushi Jee -
23rd September 2003, 01:31 PM
Khushi jee..
Khushii ko hamari pasand, pasand aaye yeh jaan ke Khushi huee...Rafta qayam rahe iss umeed ke saath....Allah Hafiz. Talib. |
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