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Sad matlab - 28th January 2008, 06:25 PM

eh nai k sukke rukhaa nu sooraj nai chahida.
eh v nai k dubde sooraj nu purab nai chahida.
j ishq hunda ta aini chaplusi na kardi,
eh nai k ohnu "deep" to koi matlab nai chahida.
   
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29th January 2008, 09:26 AM

Deep ji unwaan bahut achaa hai. Bas ik benati hai ki agar ho sakey taaN akhri do lines badal deo. Tuhadey kol hunar hai. Bas pehliaaN do lines lai ke ik nazm banaa deo. Ummeed hai gaur karogey.

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29th January 2008, 09:33 AM

eh nai k sukke rukhaa nu sooraj nai chahida.
eh v nai k dubde sooraj nu purab nai chahida.

Es di kismat hi hai NainaaN ChoNN dhull jaanaa
Eh nahi ki palkaaN nu eh moti nahi chahida


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29th January 2008, 01:22 PM

thanx ji mehrbani...........bahut sohna likhia ji..............par ehi ta farak hai soch soch da...........kise di changi kise di maadi
   
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deep ji bhut achha , bas likhde rho
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