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saans lena bhi ab to sazaa saa lagey
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Bahut khoob saba ji....

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saans lena bhi ab to sazaa saa lagey
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Ab zamaana mujhe be-wafa keh bhi ley
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Ishq mai milti shauhrat bhi ruswaayi bhi
Dard toh hai magar lutf- e -tanhaayi bhi(mujahid)

First sher
us ki baaton pe kyo ker yakeen ho humey
voh to mosum ke jaisa hey harjaayi bhi
(sabaa)

2nd sher
Mujh pe rakhtey hai voh nazr-e-tanqeed par
Waqt dar waqt kartey pazeeraayi bhi
(Mujahid)

3rd sher
Vo nibhayega kya sath is daur me
Chhod kar ja juki mujhko parchhaii bhi.(madhu)
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Ab zamaana mujhe be-wafa keh bhi ley
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bahut khoob...mast sahab aur shaad sahab ka intzaar hai mahfil mein....

aur doston aap apni muqammal ghazal apki shayri frum me zaroor padhein....
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Behar: Behar-e-mutadaarik musammam salim
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212, 212, 212, 212

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Ishq mai milti shauhrat bhi ruswaayi bhi
Dard toh hai magar lutf- e -tanhaayi bhi (mujahid)

1st sher
us ki baaton pe kyo ker yakeen ho humey
voh to mosum ke jaisa hey harjaayi bhi (sabaa)

2nd sher
Mujh pe rakhtey hai voh nazr-e-tanqeed par
Waqt dar waqt kartey pazeeraayi bhi (Mujahid)

3rd sher
Vo nibhayega kya sath is daur me
Chhod kar ja juki mujhko parchhaii bhi (madhu)

4th sher
saans lena bhi ab to sazaa saa lagey
uske bin soona aangun bhi purwaayi bhi (sabaa)

5th sher
Ab zamaana mujhe be-wafa keh bhi ley
Roz-e-mahshar ko hoga ye sunwaayi bhi (mujahid)

6th sher
kahkashaa.o.n se badhaaii gayi guftguu
tanhaa sa lagta hai tera saudaa.ii bhi (mast)


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Ab zamaana mujhe be-wafa keh bhi ley
Roz-e-mahshar ko hoga ye sunwaayi bhi(Mujahid)
Waah...bahut khoob mujahid ji......

Sunwayi ke liye hoga ki jagah hogi karein to zyada sahi rahega.....

Roz e mahshar ko hogi ye sunwayi bhi...

Ek baar dekh lein..


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Bahut shukriya janaab...aapki aamad se mahfil khushnuma ho jati hai....

Aur Waah!!
Bahut hee khoob sher pesh kiya.....

Likhte rahein.....


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Waah...bahut khoob mujahid ji......

Sunwayi ke liye hoga ki jagah hogi karein to zyada sahi rahega.....

Roz e mahshar ko hogi ye sunwayi bhi...

Ek baar dekh lein..

Shukriya madhu sahiba iss naseehat ke liye

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Shaad sahab ab aapka intezaar hai

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Buhet achee ghazel hui hey sub ney buhet acha likha ma siwa shadd saheb aor madhu ji key
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Aglee beher ka intezar rahe ga
Aapne shayad dhyan nahi diya 3rd sher pesh kiya hai hamne aapki khidmat me.......


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Kya ye ghazal yahaa mukammal hoti hai

Ek baar elaan kar dijiye madhu ji

Ji bilkul mujahid sahab.. aap chahein to nayi behr de sakte hain .......

..aur shaad sahab thoda sa busy hain...fursat milte hee hamare sath honge....


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1st sher
khud ko hi bhulaa raha hoon mera junoon hai
mujh pe na sahi yakee.n kar mere kalaam pe (Mast)


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Kyu karu mai ab gila apney ikhtataam pe (MUJAHID)

1st sher
khud ko hi bhulaa raha hoon mera junoon hai
mujh pe na sahi yakee.n kar mere kalaam pe (Mast)

Waaah...khoob sher pesh kiye hain aap dono ne


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MATLA
Laayi zindagi hamey phir ussi maqaam pe
Kyu karu mai ab gila apney ikhtataam pe (MUJAHID)

1st sher
khud ko hi bhulaa raha hoon mera junoon hai
mujh pe na sahi yakee.n kar mere kalaam pe (Mast)

2nd sher
Muflisi ne badle hain dost yun bhi aaj kal
Kaam kya hai poochte hain mere salaam pe(madhu)

Meri taraf se koshish pesh hai kuch khami ho to zaroor kahein..


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Laayi zindagi hamey phir ussi maqaam pe
Kyu karu mai ab gila apney ikhtataam pe (MUJAHID)

1st sher
khud ko hi bhulaa raha hoon mera junoon hai
mujh pe na sahi yakee.n kar mere kalaam pe (Mast)

2nd sher
Muflisi ne badle hain dost yun bhi aaj kal
Kaam kya hai poochte hain mere salaam pe(madhu)

Meri taraf se koshish pesh hai kuch khami ho to zaroor kahein..

4th sher
Aye khuda ho kya gaya aaj terey bando ko
Be-zarar pe chalte hai tegh terey naam pe( MUJAHID)

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Buhet achee beher mujahed saheb
Matla bhee buhet acha hey ji

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Ikhtataam= end/anjaam

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too mila mujhey muqaddar kee baat hey sanam
Shukr mai Ada karun Rab ka iss inaam pe
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Aye khuda ho kya gaya aaj terey bando ko
Be-zarar pe chalte hai tegh terey naam pe( MUJAHID)

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Bohat khoob ashaar hue hai ab tak

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Shukr mai Ada karun Rab ka iss inaam pe
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Be-zarar pe chalte hai tegh terey naam pe( MUJAHID)

Be-zarar= innocent
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Mast ji matla mai jo qaafiya istamaal kiya hai voh bar-vazn hai

Maqaam ke م ke upar zabar hai jaise ke nichey likha maine

مَ+ق+ا+م= مقام

Ussi tarah ikhtataam ke ت ke upar zabar hai
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Kyu ki yaha behar ki bandish hai isliye anjaam ki jagah ikhtataam zyada mauzu hai

Ummeed hai aapko mutmaein jawaab de paaya hu

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Mast ji matla mai jo qaafiya istamaal kiya hai voh bar-vazn hai

Maqaam ke م ke upar zabar hai jaise ke nichey likha maine

مَ+ق+ا+م= مقام

Ussi tarah ikhtataam ke ت ke upar zabar hai
ا+خ+تَ+ت+ا+م= اختتام

Kyu ki yaha behar ki bandish hai isliye anjaam ki jagah ikhtataam zyada mauzu hai

Ummeed hai aapko mutmaein jawaab de paaya hu

Koi kotaahi ho toh dil se ma'zirat chahta hu
Mujahid bhai confusion clear karne ka behad shukriyaa


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4th Sher

Ik tamaasha ban gaya aye khuda jahaaN tera
Ke sawaal uth tey hai terey hi nizaam pe(MUJAHID)
5th sher

Aye khuda tu kar ataa kaamil-e-zameer ab
Biktey hai zameer bhi kaudiyo ke daam pe(MUJAHID)
   
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Aakhri sher koi pesh karey taake ghazal mukammal ho sakey

Aur nayi behar ka aaghaaz kar sakey

Aagey bariye dosto
   
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Laayi zindagi hamey phir ussi maqaam pe
Kyu karu mai ab gila apney ikhtataam pe (MUJAHID)

1st sher
khud ko hi bhulaa raha hoon mera junoon hai
mujh pe na sahi yakee.n kar mere kalaam pe (Mast)

2nd sher
Muflisi ne badle hain dost yun bhi aaj kal
Kaam kya hai poochte hain mere salaam pe(madhu)

3th sher
Aye khuda ho kya gaya aaj terey bando ko
Be-zarar pe chalte hai tegh terey naam pe
( MUJAHID)

4 sher
too mila mujhey muqaddar kee baat hey sanam
Shukr mai Ada karun Rab ka iss inaam pe
(Sabaa)

5 sher
Ik tamaasha ban gaya aye khuda jahaaN tera
Ke sawaal uth tey hai terey hi nizaam pe(MUJAHID)

6 sher
Aye khuda tu kar ataa kaamil-e-zameer ab
Biktey hai zameer bhi kaudiyo ke daam pe(MUJAHID)

7 sher

roshni me din ki jab rasta nahi dikha
dil ko ab kahaaN se ho ikhtyaar shaam pe(madhu)


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Mubarak ho dosto ghazal ko mukammal karne ke liye

Behad umda ghazal hui hai
Aap sab ke taawun se ek yaadgaar ghazal bani

Umeed hai aaney waale waqto mai aap sab issi shiddat-o-khuloos se shirkat karenge.
   
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5th July 2016, 11:29 PM
Merey azeezo aap sab ki lagan ko dekhtey hue

Pesh-e-khidmat hu mai ek nayi behar ke saath

Umeed hai aap sab kaseer ta'daad mai shirkat karenge

BEHAR: Behar-e-hazaj musammam makhfoof, makhfoof, makhfoof, salim-ul-aakhir

Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lun
Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lun

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Mai ne ishq kiya koee gunehgaar nahi hu mai
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Mubarak ho dosto ghazal ko mukammal karne ke liye

Behad umda ghazal hui hai
Aap sab ke taawun se ek yaadgaar ghazal bani

Umeed hai aaney waale waqto mai aap sab issi shiddat-o-khuloos se shirkat karenge.
Mujahid bhai durust farmaaya aapne sabki mehnat ke anjaam se yeh pur asar ghazal muqammal huyi hai...sabhi doston ko mera salaam yunhi apne sher mehfil mein rakhte rahein


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Merey azeezo aap sab ki lagan ko dekhtey hue

Pesh-e-khidmat hu mai ek nayi behar ke saath

Umeed hai aap sab kaseer ta'daad mai shirkat karenge

BEHAR: Behar-e-hazaj musammam makhfoof, makhfoof, makhfoof, salim-ul-aakhir

Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lun
Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lun

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Mai ne ishq kiya koee gunehgaar nahi hu mai
Magar ishq ke asbaaq se bedaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)

Asbaaq= plural of sabaq i.e lessons
Bahut umdaa aaghaaz kiya hai mujahid bhai umeed hai yeh ghazal bhi utni hi umdaa banegi...


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Merey azeezo aap sab ki lagan ko dekhtey hue

Pesh-e-khidmat hu mai ek nayi behar ke saath

Umeed hai aap sab kaseer ta'daad mai shirkat karenge

BEHAR: Behar-e-hazaj musammam makhfoof, makhfoof, makhfoof, salim-ul-aakhir

Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lun
Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lun

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Mai ne ishq kiya koee gunehgaar nahi hu mai
Magar ishq ke asbaaq se bedaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)

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Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lun
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MATLA
Mai ne ishq kiya koee gunehgaar nahi hu mai
Magar ishq ke asbaaq se bedaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)
1st sheir

Muhabet mein wafa kerna ager jurm hi tehrey toh
Sanam maan lo tum bhi k Khatakaar nahi hu mai
Sabaa


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Merey azeezo aap sab ki lagan ko dekhtey hue

Pesh-e-khidmat hu mai ek nayi behar ke saath

Umeed hai aap sab kaseer ta'daad mai shirkat karenge

BEHAR: Behar-e-hazaj musammam makhfoof, makhfoof, makhfoof, salim-ul-aakhir

Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lun
Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lu, Mufa'ee'lun

مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلن
مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلُ مفاعیلن

1221,1221,1221,1222
1221,1221,1221,1222

MATLA

Mai ne ishq kiya koee gunehgaar nahi hu mai
Magar ishq ke asbaaq se bedaar nahi hu mai(MUJAHID)

Asbaaq= plural of sabaq i.e lessons

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Mai ne ishq kiya koee gunehgaar nahi hu mai
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1st sheir

Muhabet mein wafa kerna ager jurm hi tehrey toh
Sanam maan lo tum bhi k Khatakaar nahi hu mai
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