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~*TeRa PyAr KhAs HaI*~ -
25th September 2007, 07:20 PM
aajkal kisi special one ki wajah se mood accha hai mera isiliye ye likkha hai...
 nazron se durr hai per dil ke paas hai, usko to maloom bhi nahi wo mere liye kitna khaas hai khikhikhikhikhikhikhikhikhikhi ankhon se to tu dur hai per dil ke mere paas hai har pal har waqt ab bas tera ehsaasa hai jaoon chahe mein jaha rehti tere milan ki aas hai sunoo kisi or ko per aati teri hi awaaz hai sochoon kisi ko per dimag mein teri chap hai bhujhaye na bhuje jo yeh kaise teri pyas hai reh nahi sakti ab bin tere mere liye tera pyar khaas hai ankhon se to tu dur hai per dil ke mere paas hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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25th September 2007, 08:18 PM
HI Shweta Ji. Kya baat hai aaj bahut khush nazar aa rahe ho....
Isi baat par ek sher main bhi fenk ke marta hoon... Mulaiza farmaiyega... Dil ki dhakan ka har geet agar 1 gazal nahin hota,,,,,, Na ateet na vartmaan hota na aane wala kal hota,,,,,, kya hota duniya mein mohabbat ka agar 1 mukaam nahin hota,,,,,,, KABRISTAA hota Shahjahan ka ishq, TAJMAHAL nahin hota... |
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26th September 2007, 07:39 PM
di jara bacho
 log sher fenk k maar rahe hai lag jaayega haddi pasli toot jaayegi kahin  anyways mast likha hai ..once there was a time when i also feel d same..kp smiling 
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hi -
27th September 2007, 10:32 AM
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, bahut bahut khoob likhaa hai kuhu kuhu................. yunhee likhate rahe regards manu |
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27th September 2007, 11:24 AM
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hello ji Amit ji accha laga apko yahan apni post per dekhkar... aate raha kijiye aapka sher mujhe bahut pasand aaya... apko meri post pasand aayi jaankar khushi huyi padhte rahiye tc ji  jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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nice -
27th September 2007, 11:32 AM
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Aap ka kalaam to bahut hi khoob laga har ek sher apne aap mein mukammal hai aur ehsaas bahut hi khoob lage dil ko chugaya apka likha unhi likhti rahiye dili mubarakbaad hazir hai kubool ho.............. Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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27th September 2007, 08:21 PM
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Hi anamika arre yeh sher bahut acche hai jise lagey uski waaah waaah hai tumbhi lapak lo khikhikhikhikhikhikhi anyways tumhe yahan dekha khushi huyi aati rehna or apna khayal rakhna ok ji tc ji jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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3rd October 2007, 06:58 PM
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hello ji Manu ji apko yeh post bhi pasand aayi baki posts ki tarah accha laga ,ujhe yeh jaankar bas yun hin padhte rahiye tc ji jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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3rd October 2007, 06:59 PM
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hello ji Kashif ji apko mera kalam pasand aaya.... mera likhna safal hua bas aap yun hin padhte rahiye... mein yun hin likhti rahungi tc ji jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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4th October 2007, 04:59 AM
namaste shweta Ji
kaise hain aap? bahut pyaari si rachna pesh ki hai aapne. har lafz har line, very romantic. yuhin likte rahein aur humesha khush rahein aapka dost manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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5th October 2007, 03:27 AM
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Bahut hi khoobsoorat ehsaas hain.. bahut pasand aayi aapki yeh khoobsoorat rachna.. lekin aapse ek shikaayat hai.. yeh itna acha hai phir bhi aapne ise dard ke section me post kiya.. i mean agar aap ise ishq ke section me post karte to aur bhi rang nikhar aata Khush rahiye! ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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9th October 2007, 12:20 PM
bahut khoob , bahut accha likha hai apne..........
Good One......... Ek patthar to tabiyat se uchhalo yaron. -Dushyant Kumar |
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13th October 2007, 04:27 PM
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hello ji manish ji mein thik hu... aap kaise hai? apko yeh rachna pasand aayi mujhe khushi huyi bas aap yun hin padhte rahiye mein yun hin likhti rahungi tc ji jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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13th October 2007, 04:31 PM
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hello ji Priya ji apko pehli baar dekh rahi hu apni post per apko meri post pasand aayi jankar accha laga apki shikaayat dur kar deti hu... wo kya hai na ki dard section se inna pyar ho gaya hai ki yahin per sari posts post karti hu... ab is ishq wali post ko bhi yahin post kar diya wo kya hai na thori der ke liye mili hai khushi phir se gam mil jaega isiliye no chance for ishq ji.... thts y yahi post kar diya hope ki apki shikayat dur ho gayi hogi aati rahiyega tc ji jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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13th October 2007, 04:33 PM
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hello ji Dheerendra ji glad u lyk my post keep reading tc ji jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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