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Exclamation koi FARIYAAD tere dil me dabi ho jaise...!! - 2nd June 2009, 10:10 AM
Nacheez ka bazm ko aadaab, ghazal likh bahut waqt ho gaya tha, to fir zainy ji ne kaha ghazal of the month me likhne ko, vahaaN to nahiN likh paaya par haaN yahaaN jarur likh raha huN zainy ji maafi chaahuNga kyuNki do din late huN....!! galtiyoN pe maafi ka talabgaar huN...!!


MaiN jab use lipat gaya, daaman meN uske simat gaya,, do pal meN ho gayi mohabbat, pata na tha aayegi qyamat,, use bhi jab mujhse pyar ho gaya, kambakht tabhi yamdoot meri khatir taiyaar ho gaya,, dil uska vo tod gaya, meri rooh ko uske dard me rota chhod gaya…..


Koi fariyaad tere dil me dabi ho jaise,
Tere dil me meri tasveer bani ho jaise,

Mujhe dekh teri palkeN jhuki ho jaise,
In honthoN ko teri tishnagi ho jaise.

Teri jumbish-e-palak ko jo dekha kiya,
Meri yaad me vo ab bhi khoyi ho jaise.

NaNge paauN galiyoN me tera daudna,
Kisi ne mere aane ki khabar di ho jaise.

Daaman meN fizaaoN ko batorna uska,
Gubaar-e-kushtgaaN* meri uddii ho jaise.

*marne vale ki dhool, ya asthiyaaN.

Dekh ke haal-e-ghayal, ye lage mujhe,
Is Jism me bhi rooh koi rahi ho jaise.


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wow!!......hmmm......mujhe lagta hai ki 15 days time aap sab ko kam padh raha hai......saare late entries aa rahe hain..........kal subah diya ne ek ghazal post ki, sham ko ek aur pm aaya tha, aur aaj aap ne ...dont beleive this...............

ya kahin aysa to nahi ,sirf mera dil rakhne ke liye aap sab ghazal liKhte to ho, per jaan booj ker after last date saamne aate ho.......competetion se darte ho................zainy ji sirf aapki qatir hahaha.......arre bhai maine ye thodi na kaha hai ke mere liye ghazal likhiye.....khair aapki ghazal waqay khabil-e tareef hai.....

simply superb.....har sher bohat accha likha hai aapne.........yuhi likhte rahiye..............per aage se 3-4 din pehle se likhna shuru kijiye, taaki waqt per complete ho jaaye.....

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2nd June 2009, 04:07 PM
Kya baat hai lucky jii,

achcha hota aap bhi compitition mein hote.........

aapki gazal achchi lagi.... achche ahsaas hai Ishq aur dard se labrez..
Keep up....

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MaiN jab use lipat gaya, daaman meN uske simat gaya,, do pal meN ho gayi mohabbat, pata na tha aayegi qyamat,, use bhi jab mujhse pyar ho gaya, kambakht tabhi yamdoot meri khatir taiyaar ho gaya,, dil uska vo tod gaya, meri rooh ko uske dard me rota chhod gaya…..
Awesome start to a masterpiece....

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NaNge paauN galiyoN me tera daudna,
Kisi ne mere aane ki khabar di ho jaise.

Dekh ke haal-e-ghayal, ye lage mujhe,
Is Jism me bhi rooh koi rahi ho jaise.
Bas itna kahunga ki mujhe original toh yaad nahin but woh definitely isse kam nahin toh better bhi nahin ho sakta....

Kisi ne mere aane ki khabar di ho jaise.

Waah... Lucky Bhai. Awesome..

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Nacheez ka bazm ko aadaab, ghazal likh bahut waqt ho gaya tha, to fir zainy ji ne kaha ghazal of the month me likhne ko, vahaaN to nahiN likh paaya par haaN yahaaN jarur likh raha huN zainy ji maafi chaahuNga kyuNki do din late huN....!! galtiyoN pe maafi ka talabgaar huN...!!


MaiN jab use lipat gaya, daaman meN uske simat gaya,, do pal meN ho gayi mohabbat, pata na tha aayegi qyamat,, use bhi jab mujhse pyar ho gaya, kambakht tabhi yamdoot meri khatir taiyaar ho gaya,, dil uska vo tod gaya, meri rooh ko uske dard me rota chhod gaya…..


Koi fariyaad tere dil me dabi ho jaise,
Tere dil me meri tasveer bani ho jaise,

Mujhe dekh teri palkeN jhuki ho jaise,
In honthoN ko teri tishnagi ho jaise.

Teri jumbish-e-palak ko jo dekha kiya,
Meri yaad me vo ab bhi khoyi ho jaise.

NaNge paauN galiyoN me tera daudna,
Kisi ne mere aane ki khabar di ho jaise.

Daaman meN fizaaoN ko batorna uska,
Gubaar-e-kushtgaaN* meri uddii ho jaise.

*marne vale ki dhool, ya asthiyaaN.

Dekh ke haal-e-ghayal, ye lage mujhe,
Is Jism me bhi rooh koi rahi ho jaise.


hey LUCKY........................its awesome dude.....i m speechless....kya khoob ehsaason ko zubaan di hai....bahut khoob....dil se daad...

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2nd June 2009, 06:52 PM
This is nice try yaar,

ye sher to mujhe bahut achchha lagaa.

NaNge paauN galiyoN me tera daudna,
Kisi ne mere aane ki khabar di ho jaise.


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Nacheez ka bazm ko aadaab, ghazal likh bahut waqt ho gaya tha, to fir zainy ji ne kaha ghazal of the month me likhne ko, vahaaN to nahiN likh paaya par haaN yahaaN jarur likh raha huN zainy ji maafi chaahuNga kyuNki do din late huN....!! galtiyoN pe maafi ka talabgaar huN...!!


MaiN jab use lipat gaya, daaman meN uske simat gaya,, do pal meN ho gayi mohabbat, pata na tha aayegi qyamat,, use bhi jab mujhse pyar ho gaya, kambakht tabhi yamdoot meri khatir taiyaar ho gaya,, dil uska vo tod gaya, meri rooh ko uske dard me rota chhod gaya…..


Koi fariyaad tere dil me dabi ho jaise,
Tere dil me meri tasveer bani ho jaise,

Mujhe dekh teri palkeN jhuki ho jaise,
In honthoN ko teri tishnagi ho jaise.

Teri jumbish-e-palak ko jo dekha kiya,
Meri yaad me vo ab bhi khoyi ho jaise.

NaNge paauN galiyoN me tera daudna,
Kisi ne mere aane ki khabar di ho jaise.

Daaman meN fizaaoN ko batorna uska,
Gubaar-e-kushtgaaN* meri uddii ho jaise.

*marne vale ki dhool, ya asthiyaaN.

Dekh ke haal-e-ghayal, ye lage mujhe,
Is Jism me bhi rooh koi rahi ho jaise.


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2nd June 2009, 08:32 PM
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Lucky ji ! aapki ye Ghazal jaha piyar ka ehsaas karati hai....wahi dard bhi bada de jaati hai.....very nice creation....

mujhe aapke in do shero ne bahut mutasir kiya....

Mujhe dekh teri palkeN jhuki ho jaise,
In honthoN ko teri tishnagi ho jaise.

NaNge paauN galiyoN me tera daudna,
Kisi ne mere aane ki khabar di ho jaise.

mujhe aapki nayi Ghazalo ka itezaar rehta hai.....younhi aate rahiyega.....



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
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3rd June 2009, 07:38 AM
hi lucky jeee

kaise hain aap?

wow ...itz amazing ... aapne bahut pyaari ghazal pesh ki hain ....

yu hi likhte rahye

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Nacheez ka bazm ko aadaab, ghazal likh bahut waqt ho gaya tha, to fir zainy ji ne kaha ghazal of the month me likhne ko, vahaaN to nahiN likh paaya par haaN yahaaN jarur likh raha huN zainy ji maafi chaahuNga kyuNki do din late huN....!! galtiyoN pe maafi ka talabgaar huN...!!


MaiN jab use lipat gaya, daaman meN uske simat gaya,, do pal meN ho gayi mohabbat, pata na tha aayegi qyamat,, use bhi jab mujhse pyar ho gaya, kambakht tabhi yamdoot meri khatir taiyaar ho gaya,, dil uska vo tod gaya, meri rooh ko uske dard me rota chhod gaya…..


Koi fariyaad tere dil me dabi ho jaise,
Tere dil me meri tasveer bani ho jaise,

Mujhe dekh teri palkeN jhuki ho jaise,
In honthoN ko teri tishnagi ho jaise.

Teri jumbish-e-palak ko jo dekha kiya,
Meri yaad me vo ab bhi khoyi ho jaise.

NaNge paauN galiyoN me tera daudna,
Kisi ne mere aane ki khabar di ho jaise.

Daaman meN fizaaoN ko batorna uska,
Gubaar-e-kushtgaaN* meri uddii ho jaise.

*marne vale ki dhool, ya asthiyaaN.

Dekh ke haal-e-ghayal, ye lage mujhe,
Is Jism me bhi rooh koi rahi ho jaise.

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wow!!......hmmm......mujhe lagta hai ki 15 days time aap sab ko kam padh raha hai......saare late entries aa rahe hain..........kal subah diya ne ek ghazal post ki, sham ko ek aur pm aaya tha, aur aaj aap ne ...dont beleive this...............

ya kahin aysa to nahi ,sirf mera dil rakhne ke liye aap sab ghazal liKhte to ho, per jaan booj ker after last date saamne aate ho.......competetion se darte ho................zainy ji sirf aapki qatir hahaha.......arre bhai maine ye thodi na kaha hai ke mere liye ghazal likhiye.....khair aapki ghazal waqay khabil-e tareef hai.....

simply superb.....har sher bohat accha likha hai aapne.........yuhi likhte rahiye..............per aage se 3-4 din pehle se likhna shuru kijiye, taaki waqt per complete ho jaaye.....

duaoN ke saath

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[QUOTE=kwahish;357139]Kya baat hai lucky jii,

achcha hota aap bhi compitition mein hote.........

aapki gazal achchi lagi.... achche ahsaas hai Ishq aur dard se labrez..
Keep up....


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Awesome start to a masterpiece....



Bas itna kahunga ki mujhe original toh yaad nahin but woh definitely isse kam nahin toh better bhi nahin ho sakta....

Kisi ne mere aane ki khabar di ho jaise.

Waah... Lucky Bhai. Awesome..

bhai itna v chane ki jhaad pe mat chadhaao ki girne pe haddiyaaN v toot jaayeN, yaar itni tareef ka aadi nahiN huN bhai, isiliye bada ajeeb lagta hai, umeed karta ki aage v aap yuNhi saath nibhaate rahenge...!!


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hey LUCKY........................its awesome dude.....i m speechless....kya khoob ehsaason ko zubaan di hai....bahut khoob....dil se daad...

lamha ji aapki daad humare sar aanhoN pe, aapko ehsashoN ki ye jubaani pasand aayi, jaan kar dil ko tassalli mili, umeed karta hun ki aap aage v yuNhi aati rahiyega hum nacheezoN ki mehfiloN meN...!!


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This is nice try yaar,

ye sher to mujhe bahut achchha lagaa.

NaNge paauN galiyoN me tera daudna,
Kisi ne mere aane ki khabar di ho jaise.


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Lucky ji ! aapki ye Ghazal jaha piyar ka ehsaas karati hai....wahi dard bhi bada de jaati hai.....very nice creation....

mujhe aapke in do shero ne bahut mutasir kiya....

Mujhe dekh teri palkeN jhuki ho jaise,
In honthoN ko teri tishnagi ho jaise.

NaNge paauN galiyoN me tera daudna,
Kisi ne mere aane ki khabar di ho jaise.

mujhe aapki nayi Ghazalo ka itezaar rehta hai.....younhi aate rahiyega.....
naresh bhai aadaab, aaapne humare likhe jazbaatoN pe gaur famaaya, aur unhe pasand kiya humare liye yahi bahut khusnaseebi ki baat hai, umeed karta hooN ki aage v aap yuNhi humara sath nibhaane ki jehmiyat uthaate raheNge....!!

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hi lucky jeee

kaise hain aap?

wow ...itz amazing ... aapne bahut pyaari ghazal pesh ki hain ....

yu hi likhte rahye

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bahot khoob..baki me kamaal hai..
der se reply karne ke liye maafi ka talabgaar huN, waise bahut busy kuch din, aapka pasand aaya, humari khushkismati....!! bas yunhi hume padhti rahiye aap...!!


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simply superb

keep it up dear...

god bless u....

keep smiling...

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