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teri chaahat karta hooN MUQADDAR se chup chup ke...!! -
2nd June 2009, 09:24 AM
AasiqoN ki mehfil me aaj muddatoN baad shirkat ki hai is paagal aashiq ne, kuch bahut purana sa dikh gaya to socha sabko dikhata chalooN, umeed karta hooN jyada niraash nahiN kiya hoga....!!
Rona fir hansna aur fir se rona,, bas kuch aisa hi hai apna bichona,, tanha aur deewanaa,, hothon pe hansi aur palkon pe ashq samanaa,, khoob sara gum,, par aankhen na hon num,, dil tukdon me bikhar sa gaya hai,, is zindagi ka har lamha jaise bigad sa gaya hai,, tu meri na ho saki, par main tumhara ho gaya,, bachate bachate v dil humara kho gaya hai…! Wo milna humara un dino har nazar se chup-chup ke, Intezaar un shabnami raaton ka seher se chup-chup ke… Dariya-e-ashq taqdeer hai,mere dil me teri tasveer hai, Samandar me ashq milanaa saagar se chup-chup ke… Jo dikhe uski ek jhalak,to sahil ban jati ahi meri palak, Sahil ka wo ashq bahaana har leher se chup-chup ke… Tu dard ka ek ehsash hai,mere dil ki adhoori pyas hai, Dil me tujhe basaaya hai,dil-e-muztar se chup-chup ke… Tu nahi kismat me meri,par tu to hai ibadat me meri, Teri chaahat karta hoon,muquaddar se chup-chup ke… Yaadon ka chalta karwaa.N,hai is “ghayal” ka aashiyaa.N, Firta hoon teri galiyon me bashar se chup-chup ke… ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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2nd June 2009, 09:35 AM
Mashallah....................... Luckyjee, shayad mera aaj ka din bahot achaa guzarnewala hai..........  aap ki itni khubsurat ghazal jo padhne mil gayi hai subah subah......... Tu nahi kismat me meri,par tu to hai ibadat me meri, Teri chaahat karta hoon,muquaddar se chup-chup ke… wah Janaab wah........ Yunhi likhte rahiye...... aap ki dost purvi  ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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2nd June 2009, 02:35 PM
Luckii jii Aadab!
Bhai yahaN aaya aaj aur dekha aapka kalam woh bhi mehfile Ishq mein, fir to replly dena lazmi hai.... Hum to aapke shayarii ke fan se ho gaye hai janab.................. Aapki koi gazal aisi nahi lagi jiski tarif na ki jaye kynki aap dil ke ahsaas se likhate hai.. Wo milna humara un dino har nazar se chup-chup ke, Intezaar un shabnami raaton ka seher se chup-chup ke… Kya baat hai... Chup ke milne ke liye seher se shab ka intezar bahot khub, gehra ahsaas hai behad lamba guzarta hoga diN hai Naa! Dariya-e-ashq taqdeer hai,mere dil me teri tasveer hai, Samandar me ashq milanaa saagar se chup-chup ke… Bahut gehra hai... Thoda samjhna chahunga... aap yahan kis saagar se murad hai Pani wala ya sharab wala... Jo dikhe uski ek jhalak,to sahil ban jati ahi meri palak, Sahil ka wo ashq bahaana har leher se chup-chup ke… Bhai jab uski jhalak dikhane ke baad aapki pallken sahil ban jati hai to phir in sahiloN per khushiyoN ke ashq aate hai ya phir gham ke...... kuch ulajh gaya hun bataiyenga.. Tu dard ka ek ehsash hai,mere dil ki adhoori pyas hai, Dil me tujhe basaaya hai,dil-e-muztar se chup-chup ke… That's like a master stroke...... SuperB.. Tu nahi kismat me meri,par tu to hai ibadat me meri, Teri chaahat karta hoon,muquaddar se chup-chup ke… Kya baat hai, per yeh pyar karne walon ka shayad muqaddar hi hota hai....... Yaadon ka chalta karwaa.N,hai is “ghayal” ka aashiyaa.N, Firta hoon teri galiyon me bashar se chup-chup ke… Behad umda maqta la jawab laga.... bahut hi gehra likha hai Luckii jii....... Luckii jii main itna gazal ka knowlege nahi rakhata hun jitna aap isliye is nacheez ki Baaton ko dil per naa le... Bus yeh mere khayal the jisse aapke ruberu karaya... Waqt mile toh samjha dena is kaam akhal ko.... Waise is behtreen gazal per dil se daad kabool kareN... likhate rahiye... Khush Rahiye ... Khuda Hafez..... 
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2nd June 2009, 02:41 PM
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hahaha.........sameer saheb...........kyu taang kheeNch rahe haiN aap lucky jee ki...bechare itne dino baad to kuch ishq per likha hai inhone,........waise bhi aapke sawalon ke jawaab thodi na denge woh.......  ...lucky jee.........ye bhi ghazal bohat khoob rahi............as always........superb.... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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2nd June 2009, 02:56 PM
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Phir mujh mein aisi aadat nahi hai ke kisi ko jaan bujh ker dukhauN ................ So plz don't think about that... And Luckii jIi agar aapko meri baten Buri lagi ho to aap bura naa mane plz... Aisi galat fahmi mein base hua gahr ujad jate hai..............
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2nd June 2009, 03:17 PM
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Well thatz a typical and distinct quality not everyone has dukhaney wali... |
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5th June 2009, 10:05 PM
hmmm...i'm speechless..really..
Jo dikhe uski ek jhalak,to sahil ban jati ahi meri palak, Sahil ka wo ashq bahaana har leher se chup-chup ke… Tu nahi kismat me meri,par tu to hai ibadat me meri, Teri chaahat karta hoon,muquaddar se chup-chup ke… take care..be haapy happy..  ..♥♥..Mera Tumhara..kya Rishta hai..kuch bhi Nahi.. Agar kabhi..Gujarta dekho..kya Tum Mujhe..bulaoge.. Shayad Nahi.. Agar jo phir Hum..kabhi na Mile to.. Kya Tum yaad aaogoge..Nahi.. Kiuki..Tum Mere..koi Nahi.. Main janti hun..Magar.. Ho jab Mere koi Nahi..kiu lagte ho Mujhko Paraye nahi....♥♥.. ..nm.. ...mahuaa... |
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6th June 2009, 10:49 AM
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Aapka Ghayal ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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11th June 2009, 11:43 AM
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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11th June 2009, 01:53 PM
Teri chaahat karta hoon,muquaddar se chup-chup ke…
Bahut Achchhe Sir, Bahut khoob khayaalaaat haiN, aur usse bhi achchaa andhaaz-e-bayaN hai. Meri taraf se daad-o-mubarakbaad Keep writing, Take care -Rashid Quote:
 Tu AndheroN -ujaaloN me mila kar mujhko Zindagi ab to sawaloN me mila kar mujhko |
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11th June 2009, 06:23 PM
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Lucky ji...yun toh aapki Ghazlo aur nazmo ka koi zawab nahi...is Ghazal ke ye 3 sher mujhe baar baar padhna bahut acha lag raha hai...vaise toh saari ghazal hi bahut achi hai...aap aise hi aate rahiyega...main yun hi aapse milta rahunga......</B>  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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4th August 2009, 09:54 AM
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thanks for d compliments dude, hope dat u will keep on taking d pain to read me...!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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13th August 2009, 10:31 AM
HAANJI JANAAB AADAB
KAISAY HAI AAP AAPKI YEH JO GHAZAL YEH WALI LINE HAI NA Dariya-e-ashq taqdeer hai,mere dil me teri tasveer hai, Samandar me ashq milanaa saagar se chup-chup ke… MAIN KUCH SAMJH NAHIN PA REHA HOON KI JANAAB KEHNA KYA CHAHATAY HAI KEHANAY KA MATLAB YEH HAI BHAI JAAN KI YEHAAN PER SAMANDAR AUR SAGAR EK HI SHABD HAI BEHAR KYA HAI AUR MAQTA KYA HAI AAP JAAN HI GAYE HONGAY NA AUR HAAN JI EK BAAT AUR HAI AAP YEH APNI JHOOTI TARIF MAT SUNOO ACHCHA SHYAIR WAHI HOTA HAI JO APNI ALOCHNA SON SAKAY...ACHCHA AB BAAD MAIN AAPKA BHAI VICHITRA |
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25th August 2009, 03:58 PM
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Jitani tareef ki jaay utani jyda hi tareef ke kabil ho jaati hai yah ghazal.. behtarin andaaz hain aapke.. bahut khushi mili ki maine ese padha.. shubhkamnao sahit, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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18th October 2009, 01:01 PM
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Shukirya muhtarma jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aapko humare alfaaz pasandaaye,umeed karta huN ki aap aage v hume yuNhi padhte rahiyega...!! Aapka GHAYAL...!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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10th November 2009, 01:27 PM
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Rashid bhai ko mera aadaab, is khidmat ko padhne aur pasand karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya umeed karta huN ki aap aage v humari mehfil me yuNhi aane ki jehmiyat uthaate raheNge...!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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10th November 2009, 01:28 PM
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Naresh bhai maafi chahunga ki waqt ki tangi ke kaaran yahaan aana bilkul nahin ho paa raha tha aur main kisi ko javaab tak nahin de paaya tha, par ab itminaan se sabko padhuNga, umeed karta hun ki aap aage v yuNhi saath nibhaate raheNge...!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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10th November 2009, 01:30 PM
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hahahahaah, amaa miyaaN kabhi to sudhar jaao, aapko aur saare puraane membaraan ko pata hai ki mujhe pata hai kaun kaisi tareef karta hai, aur jis sher ka matlab aapne mujhse poocha vo maine aapko pehle hi bata diya hai, to umeed karat huN ki aage v yahaaN mukhatib hote raheNge...!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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10th November 2009, 01:32 PM
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akant bhai muddatoN baaad aapke deedaar hue humari mehfil me yahi bahut khushi ki baat hai humare liye umeed karta huN ki aage v aap humse yunhi mukhatib hote raheNge...!! Aapka Ghayal...!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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