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aapki jaankaari ekdam durust hai Vikram ji... Par maine sirf 'bait-baazi' k lihaaz se kuch modifications ki thi.. Aur jaha tak meri jaankaari hai , k aap aisa kar sakte hain... dhanywaad aapka ..
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hass hass k khuda bande se kehta raha ye umra bhar...
Tu khilona hai mere haath ka.. Naachna padega umra bhar...
Banda b bekhauf samajhta raha ye umra bhar...
Nacha raha hai wo,maine kiya kya hai umra bhar...
   
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Ji aapki baat bahut hadd tak sahi hai, lekin maiN aapko ek naya pehlu se bhi ru-ba-ru karvana chahta hooN,
Jab aap kisi aisi forum meiN likhte haiN jiska vasta hi ek khaas tabiyat aur tahseer ke khayaloN ki adayagi ya byani se ho to aap ye soch ke chalte haiN ki ho sakta hai aapki byani meiN kami reh jaye lekin saamne wala aadmi to aapki kamzor tehreer ko samajh hi jayega.... Lekin baat iss dayre ke Kuch aur bahar ki bhi hai, woh yeh ki aap kisi maths ki forum meiN agar sheyr likhenge to yeh baat zaroor jayaz hogi jo aapne kahi hai....
Ye batane ka mudda faqat itna hai ki main aapke likhne ke tariqe se yeh keh sakta hooN ki aap ki pakad zubaan par achhi hai lekin interpretation ki kami hai, aap thodi si mehnat se ye kami puri kar sakti haiN, Uske baad inshallah aapki tehreer bahut qatil hongi....ye mera aapko padh ke maan na hai....
Baat mukhtasar si itni hai ke, there is subtle distinction between being romantic and being vulgar. That subtle distinction is known as art. I mean to say that if you learn to interpret things it would not only be good for you as a poet but also helpful in your day to day life, I am really very sorry if you don't approve of what ever I have written....I sincerely apologize.

Rahi baat sheyr ki to lijiye isse samjhte haiN:-

Tum ho buut* to tumhe pindaar-e-khudaai* KyoN hai?
*Buut = sudarta ki murat
*Pindaar-e-khudaai = Khuda hone ki galatfehmi

Yaha'n Ghalib saheb ye farma rahe haiN apne mehboob ko ki hum maante haiN ki tu apsara jaisi khoobsurat hai lekin tujhe ye galatfehmi KyoN hai ki tu Khuda hai....
I know and acknowledg that you are the most beautiful women, but what has made you think that you are God.

Tum khudawand* raho Khuda koi aur sahi
*khudawand = Khuda ka banda



Tum khuda ke bande ho Wahi banke raho, Khuda kisi aur ko hi rehne di...
You are a child of that God, so be a child, let him, who actually is, be God.

Agar koi gustaakhi hui ho to sharamsaar hooN.

Apna khayal rakhiyega

Vikram....
Is baar ham aapki baato se bilkul sehmat hai Vikram ji... Aapke andaaz e bayaan se mujh jaisi kamakal to kya koi bina akal wala b samajh jaaye...
aapne theek kaha, ye forum actully me URDU k jaankaaro k liye hai...
Aapka tahe dil se shukriya Vikram ji... Aapne is nacheez ko apne keemti waqt se nawaaza... Waise agar future me mujhe urdu me koi dikkat hui, to kya mai aapki madad le sakti hu ?

aur Vikram ji, aap maane ya na maane, par wo 'pindaar e khudaai' k sher k reply me jo maine sher kaha tha, anjaane me he sahi, par ekdam fit ho gaya wo...

neways.. Aap bhi hamesha khush rahe.N aur ho sake to jab b kabhi aap mujhse mukhatib ho, to hi fi urdu ka istemaal kam keejiyega,nahi to fir uska bracket me matlab b advance me samjha dijiyega...
kuch b aapko ghalat laga ho to muaafi ...




Aapko chuhe aur billi ki kahani sunani hai...
Jisme chuhe ne yaad dilaayi,billi ko nani hai...
lekin chuha bhool gaya tha k wo sapna tha...
aakhir me shamat to chuhe ki he aani hai :D
   
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Is baar ham aapki baato se bilkul sehmat hai Vikram ji... Aapke andaaz e bayaan se mujh jaisi kamakal to kya koi bina akal wala b samajh jaaye...
aapne theek kaha, ye forum actully me URDU k jaankaaro k liye hai...
Aapka tahe dil se shukriya Vikram ji... Aapne is nacheez ko apne keemti waqt se nawaaza... Waise agar future me mujhe urdu me koi dikkat hui, to kya mai aapki madad le sakti hu ?

aur Vikram ji, aap maane ya na maane, par wo 'pindaar e khudaai' k sher k reply me jo maine sher kaha tha, anjaane me he sahi, par ekdam fit ho gaya wo...

neways.. Aap bhi hamesha khush rahe.N aur ho sake to jab b kabhi aap mujhse mukhatib ho, to hi fi urdu ka istemaal kam keejiyega,nahi to fir uska bracket me matlab b advance me samjha dijiyega...
kuch b aapko ghalat laga ho to muaafi ...
Aapki sehmati ke liye bahut bahut Shukriya, aapka jawaabi sheyr bilkul sahi tha...

Maine ye bilkul bhi nahi kaha ke ye site urdu ke jaankaroN ke liye hi hai, uss lihaz se toh mujhe iske aas paas bhi nahi fatakna chahiye tha...hehehe
Aapko bhi mere jaise kaam chalau urdu aa hi jayegi, aa jayegi Kya aapko to aati hai, bas Kabhi Kabhi dusri forums, yani shyari-e-dard, shyari-ishq etc. Par bhi ghoom liya kijiye, wahaN logoN ko pdhengi to bahut Kuch seekhne ko milega. Waise mujhe aapke Yaha'n aane ki wajeh to maloom nahi hai, lekin agar aap sikhne ke liye aayi haiN to bahut theek jagah pe aayee haiN....
Meri dua aapke saath hai, Waise to mujhe Khud ko Kuch ilm nahi hai lekin phir bhi agar kabhi zaroorat mehsoos ho to yaad kijiyega, jo ban pada zaroor share karunga aapke saath...aap jab chahen mujhe PM kar puch sakti haiN ya yahiN puch leN....

Duaon ke saath Ijaazat,
Vikram


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hass hass k khuda bande se kehta raha ye umra bhar...
Tu khilona hai mere haath ka.. Naachna padega umra bhar...
Banda b bekhauf samajhta raha ye umra bhar...
Nacha raha hai wo,maine kiya kya hai umra bhar...

Bahut umda, daad haazir hai Buland shayar saheb,

Arz kiya hai....

Rahiye ab aisi jagah chal kar jahaN koi na ho
Hum-sukhan koi na ho aur hum-zabaaN koi na ho

Be daro deewar sa ek ghar banaya chahiye
Hum saya koi na ho aur paasbaaN koi na ho

Padiye gar bimaar to koi na ho tameerdaar
Aur agar mar jaiye to naukhwaaN koi na ho


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baitbaazi cntnd ....

Humari pehchaan ko samajhne ki koshish na karo...
Khuda khud hame banakar abhi tak hairaan hai....
Husn aur uss pe husnezan reh gayee bulhawas ki sharam
Apne pe aitmaad hai aur ko aazmayeN KyoN?

Husnezan = khushfehmi
Bulhawas = lalchi
Aitmaad = self confidence


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Bahut umda, daad haazir hai Buland shayar saheb,

Arz kiya hai....

Rahiye ab aisi jagah chal kar jahaN koi na ho
Hum-sukhan koi na ho aur hum-zabaaN koi na ho

Be daro deewar sa ek ghar banaya chahiye
Hum saya koi na ho aur paasbaaN koi na ho

Padiye gar bimaar to koi na ho tameerdaar
Aur agar mar jaiye to naukhwaaN koi na ho
aapne bhi kamaal ka likha hai Vikram ji
aur maine aapki aur katil ji ki guftagu b padhi.. Aap wakai ek azeem aur behad he umda khayal insaan hain... Waise mai b aapko yahi kehna chahunga k mera b haath urdu me tang hai to aap is bande ka bhi dhyaan rakhe.N
btw aapne sad icon kyu use kiya mere reply me ? shayad us waqt aapka mood theek nahi hoga...

ab baitbaazi ko 'h' se shuru karu, ya 'y' se

h se likhta hu...

Hai agar shauk tumko, rehne ka veeran me...
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Smile thanx - 30th November 2009, 02:19 PM

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Aapki sehmati ke liye bahut bahut Shukriya, aapka jawaabi sheyr bilkul sahi tha...

Thank god... Tukka he sahi.. Par lag to gaya

Maine ye bilkul bhi nahi kaha ke ye site urdu ke jaankaroN ke liye hi hai, uss lihaz se toh mujhe iske aas paas bhi nahi fatakna chahiye tha...hehehe

yup, U are Right Vikram ji


Aapko bhi mere jaise kaam chalau urdu aa hi jayegi, aa jayegi Kya aapko to aati hai, bas Kabhi Kabhi dusri forums, yani shyari-e-dard, shyari-ishq etc. Par bhi ghoom liya kijiye, wahaN logoN ko pdhengi to bahut Kuch seekhne ko milega.

aap kya meri har activity track karte hain Vikram ji ?? I mean, aapko kaise pata k mai un forums pe nahi jaati ?
Shayad aapne mera koi reply nahi dekha un forums pe.. Isiliye laga hoga aapko .. Hai na ?



Waise mujhe aapke Yaha'n aane ki wajeh to maloom nahi hai, lekin agar aap sikhne ke liye aayi haiN to bahut theek jagah pe aayee haiN....
Meri dua aapke saath hai, Waise to mujhe Khud ko Kuch ilm nahi hai lekin phir bhi agar kabhi zaroorat mehsoos ho to yaad kijiyega, jo ban pada zaroor share karunga aapke saath...aap jab chahen mujhe PM kar puch sakti haiN ya yahiN puch leN....

Duaon ke saath Ijaazat,
Vikram
[B] aapka tahe dil se shukriya Vikram ji.. Mujhe ab jab b koi prob. Hogi Urdu me, to mai aapko PradhaanMantri kar doongi.. I meam pm kar døongi

tc Vikram ji.. Gbu




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aapne bhi kamaal ka likha hai Vikram ji
aur maine aapki aur katil ji ki guftagu b padhi.. Aap wakai ek azeem aur behad he umda khayal insaan hain... Waise mai b aapko yahi kehna chahunga k mera b haath urdu me tang hai to aap is bande ka bhi dhyaan rakhe.N
btw aapne sad icon kyu use kiya mere reply me ? shayad us waqt aapka mood theek nahi hoga...

ab baitbaazi ko 'h' se shuru karu, ya 'y' se

h se likhta hu...

Hai agar shauk tumko, rehne ka veeran me...
To mehfilo ki raunak, kyu ban rahe ho tum ?
Buland Shayar saheb Aadaab,

Janaab bahut taareef kar di hai aapne, maiN iss layak nahi hooN.
MaiN bhi abhi seekh raha hooN, aaiye aap bhi shamil ho jaaiye mere saath meri koshish meiN aur isse hamari koshish bana deejiye…
JahaN tak bhai Urdu ki baat hai to bas ek hi baat kahunga ki kisi bhi zabaaN ki khoj aapne andar ke ehsaasoN ke byaN ke liye hoti hai, yahiN se kisi zabaaN ki shuruyaat hoti hai, aur usse sikhne ke liye zaroori hai ki hum apne andar ke ehsaasoN ko ba-khoobi samjheN, jab who samajh aa jaayeN unke byaN ka tareeqa bhi khud-ba-khud nikal aata hai, aur aksar yeh tareeqa Urdu ki shaqal meiN hi dikhta hai kyoNki ehsaasoN ki byaani ke liye iss se umda madhyam nahi hai…..Janaab ye meri khud ki rae hai, aap ya koi bhi padhne wala agar iss se mukhtalif rae rakhta ho to wahi theek hoga shayad……

Arre janaab sad icon se mere mood ka to koi lena dena nahi tha lekin wo ash’aar hi kuch aise the ki mujhe laga smiling face isspe bahut kharaab lagega. Varna to maiN hamesha hi rehta hooN....

Baitbaazi continue karte haiN…..

Mere hone pe na ja O be-khabar
Samajh bas ke main hooN ke na hooN…


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waaaaah sameer bhai... Bahut khoob .....

Darbadar ghoom k ye shauk hamne pala hai...
Khiza k phool ko hamne,
ashko se khila dala hai...
Thanks Bhai, aur usi gazal ka dusra sher bhi pesh kar duN .........

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[B] aapka tahe dil se shukriya Vikram ji.. Mujhe ab jab b koi prob. Hogi Urdu me, to mai aapko PradhaanMantri kar doongi.. I meam pm kar døongi

tc Vikram ji.. Gbu
You are most welcome.....

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Aapne theek kaha Vikram ji... Mai aapki tehreer se mukhtalif vichaar nahi rakhta... Completlly agree with u Janaab
aur shayad meri andar ki bhaavnaaye us darje tak nahi pahuchi ab tak k jaha mujhko bhaari bhaari urdu k lafz samajh aaye
waise aap bahut he chun chun k lafz laate hain janaab.. Aapki feelings ki kadr karte hain ham.. Aur hamari khushnaseebi hai k aapse mulaqaat hui.. Aur Aapki zarranawazi ka shukriya Vikram ji..
aapka manmoon ho k aap hamari baato ka reply bhi karte hain...
kuch ghalatbayani ki ho to mazrat janaab

nw coming to bait baazi..
1st Vikram ji...

Hame teri khabar ho k na ho...
Fark isse kuch padta nahi..
Zindagi tujhse karti hai wafa..
Par zindagi se wafa tu karta nahi...


letter ==> 'h'

nw for Sameer bhai

dekh kar mujhko kya karna chahte ho...
Khud ka b socho,kya ban'na chahte ho....


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Aapne theek kaha Vikram ji... Mai aapki tehreer se mukhtalif vichaar nahi rakhta... Completlly agree with u Janaab
aur shayad meri andar ki bhaavnaaye us darje tak nahi pahuchi ab tak k jaha mujhko bhaari bhaari urdu k lafz samajh aaye
waise aap bahut he chun chun k lafz laate hain janaab.. Aapki feelings ki kadr karte hain ham.. Aur hamari khushnaseebi hai k aapse mulaqaat hui.. Aur Aapki zarranawazi ka shukriya Vikram ji..
aapka manmoon ho k aap hamari baato ka reply bhi karte hain...
kuch ghalatbayani ki ho to mazrat janaab

nw coming to bait baazi..
1st Vikram ji...

Hame teri khabar ho k na ho...
Fark isse kuch padta nahi..
Zindagi tujhse karti hai wafa..
Par zindagi se wafa tu karta nahi...


letter ==> 'h'

nw for Sameer bhai

dekh kar mujhko kya karna chahte ho...
Khud ka b socho,kya ban'na chahte ho....


letter ==> 'h'
ab jo b bait bazi kare.. 'h' se shuru kare
Janaab aap zarre ko aaftaab kar rahe haiN Iske siwa asal meiN aisa Kuch nahi hai....
Apna khayal rakhiye aur kush rahiye.
Meri khush-kismati ke aap se dosti hui... Umm'eed hai yeh sada barkraar rahegi...

chaliye ab Bait baazi ho jaye, Waise aapne Mudda Kuch Kuch hal hi kar diya...dona sheyr h se khatam kar
Dono sheyrs ke liye daad haazir hai....
Arz kiya hai....

Haif uss char girah kapde ki Kismat 'Ghalib'....
Jiski Kismat meiN ho aashiq ka garebaaN hona...


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Janaab aap zarre ko aaftaab kar rahe haiN Iske siwa asal meiN aisa Kuch nahi hai....
Apna khayal rakhiye aur kush rahiye.
Meri khush-kismati ke aap se dosti hui... Umm'eed hai yeh sada barkraar rahegi...

chaliye ab Bait baazi ho jaye, Waise aapne Mudda Kuch Kuch hal hi kar diya...dona sheyr h se khatam kar
Dono sheyrs ke liye daad haazir hai....
Arz kiya hai....

Haif uss char girah kapde ki Kismat 'Ghalib'....
Jiski Kismat meiN ho aashiq ka garebaaN hona...
yahi to mai b keh raha hu Vikram ji.. K aap zarre ko aaftaab bana rahe ho ...
Waise ye sahi hai, aap ulti ganga chadha rahe ho.. Janaab khushkismati to meri hai k aapne Mujhe Dost kaha aur Zindgi bhar Dosti rehne ki dua b kar di..
aapka dil bahut bada hai Vikram ji.. Thanx

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yahi to mai b keh raha hu Vikram ji.. K aap zarre ko aaftaab bana rahe ho ...
Waise ye sahi hai, aap ulti ganga chadha rahe ho.. Janaab khushkismati to meri hai k aapne Mujhe Dost kaha aur Zindgi bhar Dosti rehne ki dua b kar di..
aapka dil bahut bada hai Vikram ji.. Thanx

waise ye 'haif' kya hota hai ?

Nazre khuli rehti hain aashiqo ki is wajah se...
K shayad mehboob unka, unki mazaar pe he aaye
Aap bhi Raj bhai kya baat le kar baith gaye? Chhodiye inn rasmo ko aur asal dosti ki taraf badhte haiN, ye taareefoN ka silsila yuN to rukne se raha......

Haif = alas!, afsaus

Chaliye asal kaam yani bait baazi karte haiN

Yeh na thee humari kismat ke visaal-e-yaar hota...!
Agar aur jeete rehte yahi intzaar hota...!!



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Aap bhi Raj bhai kya baat le kar baith gaye? Chhodiye inn rasmo ko aur asal dosti ki taraf badhte haiN, ye taareefoN ka silsila yuN to rukne se raha......

Haif = alas!, afsaus

Chaliye asal kaam yani bait baazi karte haiN

Yeh na thee humari kismat ke visaal-e-yaar hota...!
Agar aur jeete rehte yahi intzaar hota...!!

par aapne he kaha tha Vikram ji... K agar Feelings ko zubaan di jaaye to behtar hota hai.. Isiliye mere Dil me jo aapke liye sam'maan aur izzat hai, unko zubaan dene ki koshish kar raha tha.. Bura laga ho to muaafi...

bait baazi : ta'umra tera intzaar kar lenge...
Par 'haif' k zindagi kam hai...
   
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yahi to mai b keh raha hu Vikram ji.. K aap zarre ko aaftaab bana rahe ho ...
Waise ye sahi hai, aap ulti ganga chadha rahe ho.. Janaab khushkismati to meri hai k aapne Mujhe Dost kaha aur Zindgi bhar Dosti rehne ki dua b kar di..
aapka dil bahut bada hai Vikram ji.. Thanx

waise ye 'haif' kya hota hai ?

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sorry Vikram ji.. Par mera maqsad aapko lajawaab karna nahi tha.. Sorry, if i hurt u in any manner ..
Aap to sharminda kar rahe haiN janaab
'Lajawaab' se mera matlab ek sukhad aashchreya/pleasant surprise se tha....
Matlab ki mujhe khushi hui aapko meri baat pakadta dekh kar.....
Brother please...lets get out of this formality...sometimes it starts suffocating, too...
Hum tab tak ek dusare ko nahi jaan sakte jab tak ye taqaluff beech me rahega...


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par aapne he kaha tha Vikram ji... K agar Feelings ko zubaan di jaaye to behtar hota hai.. Isiliye mere Dil me jo aapke liye sam'maan aur izzat hai, unko zubaan dene ki koshish kar raha tha.. Bura laga ho to muaafi...

bait baazi : ta'umra tera intzaar kar lenge...
Par 'haif' k zindagi kam hai...
Bahut badhiya 'Haif' lagaya hai main bhi koshish Karta hooN...

Hai jo ye zindagi kum to Kuch gham nahi,
'Haif' marne ke baad bhi tujhe har roz nazar aaunga
Hahaha....


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yahi to mai b keh raha hu Vikram ji.. K aap zarre ko aaftaab bana rahe ho ...
Waise ye sahi hai, aap ulti ganga chadha rahe ho.. Janaab khushkismati to meri hai k aapne Mujhe Dost kaha aur Zindgi bhar Dosti rehne ki dua b kar di..
aapka dil bahut bada hai Vikram ji.. Thanx

waise ye 'haif' kya hota hai ?

Nazre khuli rehti hain aashiqo ki is wajah se...
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sorry Vikram ji.. Par mera maqsad aapko lajawaab karna nahi tha.. Sorry, if i hurt u in any manner ..
Aap to sharminda kar rahe haiN janaab
'Lajawaab' se mera matlab ek sukhad aashchreya/pleasant surprise se tha....
Matlab ki mujhe khushi hui aapko meri baat pakadta dekh kar.....
Brother please...lets get out of this formality...sometimes it starts suffocating, too...
Hum tab tak ek dusare ko nahi jaan sakte jab tak ye taqaluff beech me rahega...


'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
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''Uss forum Pe likhna munasib nahi samjha to aapko aapke page pe ye likh raha hu...''


arey vikram ji, ye page mera kab se ho gaya


Aap to sharminda kar rahe haiN janaab
'Lajawaab' se mera matlab ek sukhad aashchreya/pleasant surprise se tha....
Matlab ki mujhe khushi hui aapko meri baat pakadta dekh kar.....
Brother please...lets get out of this formality...sometimes it starts suffocating, too...
Hum tab tak ek dusare ko nahi jaan sakte jab tak ye taqaluff beech me rahega...
ok, as u wish Vikram ji.. Par i think suffocation tab hoti hai, jab aap kisi ki jhooti taareef kar rahe ho... Aur agar aapko suffocating lagta hai to aap takalluf chor sakte hain, par mere dil me jo aapke liye izzat hai, usko zubaan dene me mujhe koi suffocation mehsuus nahi hoti


ab ek aapke he lafz ka prayog dekhiye janaab...


gar hai tumko pindaar e bhootaai
to kyo karte ho hamse judaai


pindaar e Bhootaai = bhoot hone ki ghalatfehmi

kewal aapki muskurahat banaye rakhne ka irada tha.. Otherwise mat leejiyega..
   
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ok, as u wish Vikram ji.. Par i think suffocation tab hoti hai, jab aap kisi ki jhooti taareef kar rahe ho... Aur agar aapko suffocating lagta hai to aap takalluf chor sakte hain, par mere dil me jo aapke liye izzat hai, usko zubaan dene me mujhe koi suffocation mehsuus nahi hoti


ab ek aapke he lafz ka prayog dekhiye janaab...


gar hai tumko pindaar e bhootaai
to kyo karte ho hamse judaai


pindaar e Bhootaai = bhoot hone ki ghalatfehmi

kewal aapki muskurahat banaye rakhne ka irada tha.. Otherwise mat leejiyega..
Bahut Khoob bhai....jaisa aapko theek lage

Mera khurafati sheyr bhi haazir hai, mulehza farmaayeN.....

Ishq mere maikhwaari se hai to bhoot kehte ho...
Achha tum bhi kahiN mile hoge mujhse subhe-subhe....

Meri muskurahat to aapne khoob barkraar rakhi, meri koshish ka pata nahi...


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Bahut Khoob bhai....jaisa aapko theek lage

Mera khurafati sheyr bhi haazir hai, mulehza farmaayeN.....

Ishq mere maikhwaari se hai to bhoot kehte ho...
Achha tum bhi kahiN mile hoge mujhse subhe-subhe....

Meri muskurahat to aapne khoob barkraar rakhi, meri koshish ka pata nahi...
Vikram ji.. Aapki koshish to har baar mujhe gad'dhe me utarne pe majboor kar deti hai.. U knw.. Deep thinking

waise aapke sher ka matlab mujhe kuch yu samajh aaya k aapko maikhaane se ishq hai aur aap raat ko daaru peete ho aur subhe subhe bhoot jaise dikhayi dete ho am i right? Agar ghalat ho to bata deejiyega janaab

haule haule tera muskurana,
meri jaa mujhpe ghazab dhaye jata hai...
Ik Dost mila hai kuch tere he jaisa...
Meri adna koshisho pe wo b muskuraaye jata hai...
   
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Vikram ji.. Aapki koshish to har baar mujhe gad'dhe me utarne pe majboor kar deti hai.. U knw.. Deep thinking

waise aapke sher ka matlab mujhe kuch yu samajh aaya k aapko maikhaane se ishq hai aur aap raat ko daaru peete ho aur subhe subhe bhoot jaise dikhayi dete ho am i right? Agar ghalat ho to bata deejiyega janaab

haule haule tera muskurana,
meri jaa mujhpe ghazab dhaye jata hai...
Ik Dost mila hai kuch tere he jaisa...
Meri adna koshisho pe wo b muskuraaye jata hai...
Hmm, Achchi khasi masti mazak chal rahi hai.......

Haseena ne chua ek nighaa dal mujhe
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Hmm, Achchi khasi masti mazak chal rahi hai.......

Haseena ne chua ek nighaa dal mujhe
Tab se meri tabiyat nasaaz si lagti hai
lo g... Bhoot to the he... Beemaar bhi aa gaye
dnt mind sameer bhai.. Join the 'Happy club'

ho agar beemaar to ilaaj b karwaao...
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lo g... Bhoot to the he... Beemaar bhi aa gaye
dnt mind sameer bhai.. Join the 'Happy club'

ho agar beemaar to ilaaj b karwaao...
Haseena ki baate he karte rahoge.. Kabhi mulaqaat b karwaao
Hmm Bimar to hun Bhai isliye late reply kar raha huN,.......

Unki naa puchiye aab mujhe se yaaroN
woh to mere bhi khaboN se pare ho gaye


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Hmm Bimar to hun Bhai isliye late reply kar raha huN,.......

Unki naa puchiye aab mujhe se yaaroN
woh to mere bhi khaboN se pare ho gaye
arey Sameer bhai... Aap to kha m kha serious ho gaye...


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Hmm Bimar to hun Bhai isliye late reply kar raha huN,.......

Unki naa puchiye aab mujhe se yaaroN
woh to mere bhi khaboN se pare ho gaye
arey Sameer bhai... Aap to kha m kha serious ho gaye...
Aur agar late reply karne wale beemaar hote hain to fir to . . . . . . . . . . khair choro...

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arey Sameer bhai... Aap to kha m kha serious ho gaye...
Aur agar late reply karne wale beemaar hote hain to fir to . . . . . . . . . . khair choro...

yu halke se mazaak ko dil se na lagao yaaro...
K zara c baat k afsaane ho gaye...
Yeh gumaan nahi tujhe Ishq hai mujh se
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Is bharam me hi jeene dijiye hame ....
ab to aadat si ho gayi hai akele rahne me.........


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aap se to aisi ummeed na thi Neha g...

Aap to sabko rules batati hain, aur khud he bhool gayi.. Beherhaal... Aap pehli martbaa baitbaazi me padhaari hain to ham aapko bataye dete hain k sher jis hindi akshar pe khatm hua ho, aapko usi akshar se start karna hai.. Its like antakshri .. Ok.. Ab mai continue karta hu...
Aapke sher ka last letter tha 'me' so now i'll start like this...

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Aap to sabko rules batati hain, aur khud he bhool gayi.. Beherhaal... Aap pehli martbaa baitbaazi me padhaari hain to ham aapko bataye dete hain k sher jis hindi akshar pe khatm hua ho, aapko usi akshar se start karna hai.. Its like antakshri .. Ok.. Ab mai continue karta hu...
Aapke sher ka last letter tha 'me' so now i'll start like this...

Mai hoon ek khiza ka khar aur tu hai ek bahaar...
Tum gul khilate ho,
mai unhe bachata hu....

ab aapko 'h' se start karna hai...
hehehehehe....

haay dekhiye ke kya gazab kismat hai humari...!
duniya bache jis say'yaad se hai ussi se humari yaari...!


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hehehehehe....

haay dekhiye ke kya gazab kismat hai humari...!
duniya bache jis say'yaad se hai ussi se humari yaari...!


rahne do jhagda, Rehne do maara maari...
K huzur Kabhi-2 khud shikar ho jata hai shikari
   
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rahne do jhagda, Rehne do maara maari...
K huzur Kabhi-2 khud shikar ho jata hai shikari
ruko! na chhedo, hme kuch tanhai chahiye...!
sochne do, shikaar hone ke liye hme kaisa shikaari chahiye...!


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ruko! na chhedo, hme kuch tanhai chahiye...!
sochne do, shikaar hone ke liye hme kaisa shikaari chahiye...!

yeh hi dil tha ke tarasta tha marasim ke liye,
ab yeh hi tark e tauluq ke bahane maange,,,

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yeh hi dil tha ke tarasta tha marasim ke liye,
ab yeh hi tark e tauluq ke bahane maange,,,

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ki kare taziyate-mehro-wafa mere baad...!


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gham meiN marta hooN ki itna nahi duniya meiN koi....
ki kare taziyate-mehro-wafa mere baad...!
Do lafzoN mein usne khud se hume judaa kar diya
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yaad usko b aati hogi, tere jaane k baad...
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Uske ankhoN ko meri yaadoN ka marz naa mile
wowww... Bahut khoob Sameer bhai...

lekar haath me talwar tum ladte nahi ho...
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lekar haath me talwar tum ladte nahi ho...
Baate karte ho pyaar ki par karte nahi ho....
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