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Nazarandaaz karne ka ye........ - 20th November 2014, 10:54 AM

Nazarandaaz karne ka ye andaaz badal dena !
Suriley hoN to rakhna warna saaz badal dena !!

Izhaar-e-mohobbat ko aaina ho gar dikhana !
Padhne se pahele khat ke alfaaz badal dena !!

Guroor-e-husn tera kabhi tanhaaiyon me ho !
Berukhi ke mujhse sabhi riwaaz badal dena !!

Itna to asar meri duaaon me kabhi hoga !
Tujhe ishq na hua to lafz-e-namaaz badal dena !!

Roshan rahengi mehfileN ghazlon se meri lekin !
Tum door reh ke raqs-e-mizaaz badal dena !!

Jo lutf kisi ko apni dastaan-e-aashiqui me aaye !
Seene me dafan saare tum raaz badal dena !!

Mera wazood mujhse ruswa kabhi na hoga !
Tum bhi safar ka apne aagaaz badal dena !!


Bahut gumraah karna chahta hai aaina mujhko !
Magar wo apni hi fitrat se hardam haar jaata hai !!
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20th November 2014, 12:20 PM

Izhaar-e-mohobbat ko aaina ho gar dikhana !
Padhne se pahele khat ke alfaaz badal dena !!



waaahhh bahot khoob peshkash pannkaj ji.......... likhte rahen

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21st November 2014, 03:50 PM

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Izhaar-e-mohobbat ko aaina ho gar dikhana !
Padhne se pahele khat ke alfaaz badal dena !!



waaahhh bahot khoob peshkash pannkaj ji.......... likhte rahen

Shaad...

Shukriya shaad sahab.........bahot bahot shukriya......


Bahut gumraah karna chahta hai aaina mujhko !
Magar wo apni hi fitrat se hardam haar jaata hai !!
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21st November 2014, 04:29 PM

Pankaj mushra saaheb

Namaste

Bhai waah...kya Ghazal peSh kee hai aapne bazm meiN...mazaa aa gayaa..dil se daad hi daad

Khush rahiye...apnaa khayaal rakhen

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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21st November 2014, 04:42 PM

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Nazarandaaz karne ka ye andaaz badal dena !
Suriley hoN to rakhna warna saaz badal dena !!

Izhaar-e-mohobbat ko aaina ho gar dikhana !
Padhne se pahele khat ke alfaaz badal dena !!

Guroor-e-husn tera kabhi tanhaaiyon me ho !
Berukhi ke mujhse sabhi riwaaz badal dena !!

Itna to asar meri duaaon me kabhi hoga !
Tujhe ishq na hua to lafz-e-namaaz badal dena !!

Roshan rahengi mehfileN ghazlon se meri lekin !
Tum door reh ke raqs-e-mizaaz badal dena !!

Jo lutf kisi ko apni dastaan-e-aashiqui me aaye !
Seene me dafan saare tum raaz badal dena !!

Mera wazood mujhse ruswa kabhi na hoga !
Tum bhi safar ka apne aagaaz badal dena !!
Pankaj ji...........bahut hi khoobsurat ehsaas....muje behadddd pasand aaye yeh gazal...dil se daad hazir hai.

aur en khoobsurat ehsaasoN ke liye aap reps point deserve karte hai.

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21st November 2014, 05:20 PM

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Pankaj mushra saaheb

Namaste

Bhai waah...kya Ghazal peSh kee hai aapne bazm meiN...mazaa aa gayaa..dil se daad hi daad

Khush rahiye...apnaa khayaal rakhen

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

Aapka

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Dhaval ji !!!!!!!!.......bahut shukriya .........aap bhi apna khayaal rakhna.......


Bahut gumraah karna chahta hai aaina mujhko !
Magar wo apni hi fitrat se hardam haar jaata hai !!
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21st November 2014, 05:21 PM

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Pankaj ji...........bahut hi khoobsurat ehsaas....muje behadddd pasand aaye yeh gazal...dil se daad hazir hai.

aur en khoobsurat ehsaasoN ke liye aap reps point deserve karte hai.

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23rd November 2014, 04:52 PM

Pankaj bhai ,
Bada hi umda likha hai aapne...
Kya khub likha hai apne ..dil khush ho gaya

Yunhi likhte rahiye...



mera kya hai main to deewana hu
kya bataoo tumko baare mein apne
mein to khud se hi begaana hu

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Pankaj bhai ,
Bada hi umda likha hai aapne...
Kya khub likha hai apne ..dil khush ho gaya

Yunhi likhte rahiye...
Thank you vinay ji..........bahut shukriya


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