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us parwaane ke liye.. -
15th July 2002, 11:44 PM
Us parawane ke khaatir humne rab ko yaad kiyaa,
Jis parawaane ne humko dar dar ka mohataaj kiya, Kayaa khataa hui humse jo usane humko barbaad kiyaa, Rab ko chod kar humne mahakhaane ko yaad kiyaa. "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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dil na todna kabhi -
19th July 2002, 11:03 AM
meine roka usey toka use samjhaya bhi
deke vaasta apni yari ka manaya bhi kaanta bana pathar bana mein uske raste ka kabhi banke phool uske samne murjhaya bhi.. woh to chal diya hai leke baharein dahej mein chod gaya akeyla na kabhi mujhe kuch bataya bhi... magar mujhe yakeen hai ke mein aur nikhar jaonga |
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phool ke murjhaane par.. -
24th July 2002, 11:48 PM
Phool ke murjhaane par kali dkehi nahi jaati,
Do dilon ke darmiyan doori dekhi nahi jaati. Khuda unke hisse ke gham bhi mujhko de de, Ki un masoom aankhon mein nami dekhi nahi jaati. "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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thanx -
18th July 2004, 07:26 PM
thanx chahat
u also written well...i appriciate you tarun magar mujhe yakeen hai ke mein aur nikhar jaonga |
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19th July 2004, 06:19 PM
Vaaaaaahhhhhooooooooooo!!!!!!!!
Tarun ji Aapne itna puraana sher saamne la diya... Ek baar to jab padha.. to laga arre yeh mere naam se kaise kisine kuch post kar diya.. yeh to jaana pehchaana nahi hai... hahaha.. phir date dekhi... Can't recollect is it really written by me, may be not. I'm sure about the second one.. that's one of my fav's but not mine.. but Just can't recollect the first one.. Thankyou soo much.. ki aapne itni puraani yaadein taaza karva di...  Khush rahiye! ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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wah priyaji |
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wah priyaji -
20th July 2004, 04:40 PM
Bahut khub likha he aapne,wakhi aapki ungliyon me jadoo he jub chalti he kagaj pe to ek yaadgar najm chod jati he,wah.keep it up lovely work.
"Her mod pe miljate he Humdard mujhe! Shayad humari basti me he adakar bahut!! Love, Mukesh |
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are chahat |
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are chahat -
20th July 2004, 05:59 PM
arey meine kuch nahi kiya yaar...............i have written just nothing else ...any way mujhe bahut acha lagta hai yeh...................................
tarun magar mujhe yakeen hai ke mein aur nikhar jaonga |
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20th July 2004, 06:59 PM
Mukesh ji,
Bahut khoob likha hai aapne.. "Her mod pe miljate he Humdard mujhe! Shayad humari basti me he adakar bahut!! Aapka bahut bahut shukriya jo aapne mujhe reply kiya! Khush rahiye! Tarun ji! Aapne kuch na keh ke bhi bahut kuch keh diya tha... itna puraana sher jab padha hoga... khair... Mujhe bhi bahut acha laga ise ek baar phir padh ke.. woh guwra zamaana phir aa gaya mere saamne... Thankyou very much! Khush rahiye.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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Kesi baate kerti he aap? |
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Kesi baate kerti he aap? -
21st July 2004, 03:31 PM
Priya ji,
Ishme shukriya kesa reply to mujhe aapko kerna hi tha kiyunki kisi bhi adakar ki tarif na kerna gustakhi hoti he,aur hum ki nigah me gustakh nahi banna chahte he. "He sukhanwar* aur bhi bahut duniya me! Lekin kehte he Priya ka andaj-e-bayan kuch aur he!!" *sukhanwar: Achcha bolne aur likhne wale Love Mukesh |
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21st July 2004, 05:49 PM
Mukesh ji,
Ab aapko thankyou kahungi to aap phir se mujhe tokenge.. to ab aap hi bataaiye ki shukriya ada karna chaahti to kaise karun, bina shukriya shabd ka istemaal kiye?? Khush rahiye! ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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hi -
21st July 2004, 08:15 PM
priya here are some shares for you:-
har mod pe mil jatey hain wafa jatane wale shayad meri basti mein kalakaar bahut hai...... ajj ke daur mein jis se bhi ki wafa ki ummeed aakar ussi ke haath ka pathar laga mujhe...... laute hain aaj biyabaan se badi shaan se hum apne hi ghar mein nazar aate hain mehmaan se hum....... kaise lagey batana zaroor tarun magar mujhe yakeen hai ke mein aur nikhar jaonga |
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Re: hi -
21st July 2004, 08:24 PM
Sabse pehle to aapk Shukriya ada karna chaahungi Tarun ji, jo aapne apni shayri yahan likhi...
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"Wafa ki usne bahut, par yeh kya main hi wafa na kar paayi.. Jud gaya mera naam bhi kalakaaron mein.. e-khuda main ab bewafa kehlaayi" Quote:
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Aapke sabhi sher mujhe behad pasand aaye! Aise hi mehfil sajaate rahiye.. Khush rahiye.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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Ohh -
22nd July 2004, 08:21 PM
Priyaji,
Sorry mene aapko confuse ker diya,aap humare naam ke sath ji hata dijiye hum samjhenge aapne shukriya keha aur hum accept kerlenge.Kitna aasan bana diya aapki muskil ko????keep it up gud sprit. Love, Mukesh |
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24th July 2004, 01:52 AM
Aasaan to bana diya.. lekin yeh ji hataan zara mushkil hai..
lolz.. Koshish karungi.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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24th April 2007, 02:53 AM
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namaskar, kya likha hai, bahut acha aur unique likha hai. bahut acha laga ise padkar. ab hum b kuch likhna chahnge....umeed hai aapko padand ayega..... RAB to mujhe marne ke baad milega sharaab ne mujhe jeene ki himaat di hum to to bass mandir ko jah rahe the baad mein paatha chala yhe MAHAKHANA ki raah thi kaisa laga yhe appko? Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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24th April 2007, 09:29 AM
dear chahat bahut acchey sher likhey hain aap sabhi ne....majja aa gaya padkar....
.....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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25th April 2007, 02:27 AM
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Bahut bahut shukriya.. itne puraane sher ko phir se saamne rakhne ke liye.. Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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25th April 2007, 02:29 AM
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   Kya?????????? pehchaana nahi kaun hai?????? pehle to kabhi bhi chaahat nahi bulaaya.. to aaj kaise... zaroor aapko pata nahi chala ki main hun.. jaao main aapse baat nahi karti... katti ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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