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~* aap ka cheheraa nazar aayaa *~ -
2nd July 2016, 04:03 AM
Khumaar e maikashii me aap ka cheheraa nazar aayaa, kabhii pat'thar nazar aayaa kabhii sheeshaa nazar aaya. ab ham ko dekhiye, ham they kabhii kaise jawaaN dil ke, aur ab dekheN to apne aap me murdaa nazar aayaa. ye nazmeN aur GazleN haiN kisii zaalim ki sauGaateN, hame shaayar jo kahte hain, na jaane kyaa nazar aaya. naqaab unkaa uThaa jo ek pal ko haae mahfil me.n, yahaaN majnoo nazar aaya, wahaaN raaNjhaa nazar aaya. hame dii thii kisii ne bad'duaa tum yoon hi taDpoge, phir uske baad se saayaa bhi naa apnaa nazar aayaa. ham ashqon ko samajhte they, ke pee jaaenge lahraa ke, magar aye shaad ye qatraa bhii ek dariyaa nazar aayaa. Shaad............. |
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2nd July 2016, 05:13 AM
"ye nazmeN aur GazleN haiN kisii zaalim ki sauGaateN"
shaad miyaaN is misrey ko frame karvaa ke rakh lo, mooNh maaNgi qeemat milegi kisi din ramzaan ka aakhiri jumma tha aaj, qalam par bhi kya khoob rehmat hui hai!! Allah kare.......... khush rahiye is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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2nd July 2016, 05:16 AM
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Bohat dino baad dikhaye diye aap Bohat aala tareen ghazal ki ye misaal hai Ek ajab kashish hai kalaam aapke kalaam hai Allah kare zor-e-kalaam aur ho Koocha-e-kalaam aapka kab se muntazir hai Zara apna bhi rad-e-amal zahir karey Aapke ghazal pe ek sher arz karta hu Hai kitni saadgi aye shaad terey har ghazal mai ab Kalaam-e-ishq ye tera mujhe sachha nazar aaya(MUJAHID) |
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2nd July 2016, 03:48 PM
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bahut khoob shaad bhai...........lajwaab. Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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3rd July 2016, 09:38 AM
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kal se kai baar apki ghazal padhi samajh nahi paa rahi kis sher par khaas daad pesh karoon....ek se badhkar ek ashaar huye hain...bahut khoob andaaz se saja hua kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne..kabhi padkar ankhein nam huyi to kabhi ek muskaan chaa gayi labon pe....... daad qubool farmayein janaab.. hame yun hee apni kalam ke jadu se sukoo.n dete rahiye likhte rahein.. salamat rahein.. madhu. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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5th July 2016, 06:16 PM
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janaab Maikash bhai, aadaab...... aapki aamad kyaa huii bazm saarii mahak uT'hii hai.... aapki nayaab raay meri haqeer ghazal pe kyaa mili yoon lag raha hai goyaa mazdoori ki keemat mil gai hai..... jume ke mubaarak din me Allah ne inaayat kar di jo kuch likh sakaa aur aap sab hazraat ko pasand aa sakaa.... merii dilii tamannaa hai ke jab bhi kuch likhun aapki khidmat me sab se pahle pesh karoon..... aisaa hi kuch naata hai merii ghazlon ka aapki rahnumaai se..... aapki duaaon me hame bhi panaah dete rahen... aur apnaa khayaal rakhiye.... take care.. thanks once again.. Shaad............. |
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5th July 2016, 10:35 PM
Shaad
Beautiful Ghazal.Iss Ghazal mein Lehron sa sama nazer aaya.Hunar ek shayer ka nazer aaya.Too good Keep up the good work Di |
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6th July 2016, 05:43 PM
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aadaab Mujahid saahab..... khushi huii ye jaankar ke nacheez ka adnaa a kalaam aapko pasand aaya... aur beshaq main ise apni khushnaseebi samjhunga jo aap jaisaa aala shaayr ko ye kalaam acchaa laga... duaa me yaad rakhiyegaa.... Shaad........ |
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12th July 2016, 07:50 AM
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aate rahiyegaa Shaad............ |
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12th July 2016, 07:53 AM
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main kayaa kahuN Madhu sahibaa..... aapne jis darjaa tareefon ke pul baandh dilye hain nacheez ke liye main us qaabil thaa bhii nahi ... bas mujhe khushi is baat ki hai , ke aap jaise aalaa shaayraa ko mere haqeer alfaaz pasand aate hain.... bas yahi soch kar kalam bhi chal padtii hai ke shaayd mere kuch dost kalaam ke intzaar me honge.... wrnaa ab to na ehsaas hi bache hain aur na hi alfaaz saath de paate hain.... bahut shukriyaa ek baar phir se.... aatii rahiyegaa... Shaad.......... |
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12th July 2016, 03:23 PM
hame dii thii kisii ne bad'duaa tum yoon hi taDpoge, phir uske baad se saayaa bhi naa apnaa nazar aayaa. Sameer bhai.. itna umdaah kaise likhte ho yaar.. bahut khoob dil kush kr diya is gazal ne.. duaao k sath.. mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm |
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13th July 2016, 12:16 PM
Shaad....bahut hi umda ehsaas...bahut gehri baate...dil par chot karte hue lafz...aik lafz mein kaha jaaye to...bas wahhhhhhhhhhh hi kahungi.
ye nazmeN aur GazleN haiN kisii zaalim ki sauGaateN, hame shaayar jo kahte hain, na jaane kyaa nazar aaya. yeh sher dil ke khaas kareeb rha  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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14th July 2016, 08:18 AM
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pyaari sukanya dee...... bahut bahut khushi ho rahi hai aaj aapko bazm em dekh kar au ye jaan kar ke aapko ye kalaam pasand aayaa..... tahe dil se shukriyaa pesh karta hooon aapko..... aur ye ummeed karta hoon ke aapka yahaan aana ab hota rahega.... shukriyaa..... Shaad... |
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14th July 2016, 11:30 AM
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ye nazmeN aur GazleN haiN kisii zaalim ki sauGaateN, hame shaayar jo kahte hain, na jaane kyaa nazar aaya. Bahut hi umdaa, yunhi likhte rahiye Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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18th July 2016, 08:41 AM
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aage bhi kalam chaltii rahegii insha allah Khush rahiye Shaad..... |
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18th July 2016, 08:45 AM
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aae bhi aapka saath yunhi milta rahe merii yahi tamanna hai..... Shukriyaa Shaad............. |
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