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hii i am deepalii -
16th July 2009, 11:31 AM
aankh m yaad rehti h,
unki tamanna bankar,
jab wo pass nahi h,
to aankhon se aansu bahte h,
unki wafa bankar.
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Uski yaad kahoon ya uska intezaar(Deepalii) -
16th July 2009, 02:40 PM
USki yaad kahoon ya uska intezaar
Uski yaad kahoon ya uska intezaar,
jo har pal rehta hai dil ke pass,
Waise to dur hain usse hum,
Per karib paate h usko hum,
Na jane kyon mil nahi pate,
Per itna pata h ki unki aawaj se hi jindgi h roshan,
Yun to log kehte h ki pyar mat karna,
Per jab koi itna pyaar karne wala ho to uska saath ****e hi kaise, uski yaad kahoon ya uska intezaar bas hum to jiye ja rahe h tamanna me unki.
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Mausam -
16th July 2009, 02:42 PM
Ye kaisa mausam aaya, jo uski yaad laya
Har pal sambhala hamne dil ko ,
Phir bhi wo yaad aaya,
Kisse kahen, kisse karen dil ki baat,
Jab wo hi saath na nibha paya,
Kehne ko kuch baaki hi nahi,
Gunah to hamara hi tha,
Jo use itna pyar kiya.
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17th July 2009, 08:14 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Deepalii
USki yaad kahoon ya uska intezaar
Uski yaad kahoon ya uska intezaar,
jo har pal rehta hai dil ke pass,
Waise to dur hain usse hum,
Per karib paate h usko hum,
Na jane kyon mil nahi pate,
Per itna pata h ki unki aawaj se hi jindgi h roshan,
Yun to log kehte h ki pyar mat karna,
Per jab koi itna pyaar karne wala ho to uska saath ****e hi kaise, uski yaad kahoon ya uska intezaar bas hum to jiye ja rahe h tamanna me unki.
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bahut aacha likha hai deepali ji aapne
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18th July 2009, 01:50 PM
verry NICE mai toh maan gaya ki aap bhi shayer ho ager aapne ye khud likha hai toh.verna pasand achhi hai.
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18th July 2009, 01:59 PM
HI I am firoz ali frod Delhi.
ye kaisi manzil hai,
ye kaisa mukaam hai,
dil mai hai koi aur or honto par kisi or ka naam hai.
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zindgi ka salam -
22nd July 2009, 11:47 AM
Har subah usse, har sham usse,
Zindgi ka har salam use,
Deep h wo jo Roshni deta h sabko,
Per khud phir bhi reh jata h gam me,
Ham to chahte h sirf itna ki, usko hum
Roshan kar de deepawali banke
Har subah usse har sham usse,
Zindgi ka har salam use.
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Tamanna -
22nd July 2009, 11:51 AM
Uski yaad kyon dil se jati nahi,
Kyon bas jati h wo yaadein banker,
Aur kyon satati h wo sapno m aakar,
Jakar tum jara unse keh do ki,
Khuabo m yun na aaya karo, aur aakar
Hame yun na sataya karo, phir……..
Is tarah hum unki tamanna na karenge........
per dur hoker bhi hum unhe yaad jarur karenge.........
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zarurat -
23rd July 2009, 10:52 AM
uska hona is tarah ban gaya.........
jaise koi pyasa paani ki talash m nikal gaya........
na jane usme na koi swad h, na jane usme koi rang h,
per phir bhi ek wo hi h, jo zindgi ki zarurat h.........
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23rd July 2009, 10:57 AM
har pal ek ehsaas rehta h,
jaine kyon to dil ke itna pass rehta h.......
dil kehta h ki ek baar dekh to le use,per
na jane kyon main ruk jata hun............
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hi -
26th July 2009, 01:22 AM
hi dipali i m salman mujhse dosti karengi aap
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27th July 2009, 12:12 PM
Ye ishq hi h jisme intezaar bhi hota h, aur ahsaas bhi…..lekin ye jaruri to nahi ki har kisi ko dekhna ishq hi ho…..yu to milte h roj ishq ke paigam,per ye ishq hi to h zindgi…….jo har bar nahi miltaaaaaa…………..
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27th July 2009, 12:15 PM
log kehte h mohabbat mat karna…….Is dil ko yun na rulana………. chahat me kisi ki yun na bhatakna………yun ratoin me aansuo se usse na pukarna………phir hamne socha ki aisa kyon kehte h wo…….samjh me aaya ki bewafa hote h kuch log……..!!!!!
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Paigam -
27th July 2009, 12:17 PM
na jane kyon duniya ka dar…….na jane kyon aapno ka dar…….**** deta h har koi, yun samundar ke beech…….jaise is duniya m usse badhkar koi h hi nahi……yun tum na dubo samunder m jake………aur lado tum un gamo ke andhero se………bas ek nayi roshni ki talash karo……..aur phir apni zindgi hasin karo………
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koi samajh na paya -
16th February 2010, 11:19 AM
Chalo aaj kuch likhun ki kya h ye deewangi
Kabhi aansu aur kabhi khushi h ye deewangi
Na usse samajh aati h aur na hi hame
Par dur hone par dard deti h ye deewangi
Har lamha wo saath rehta h par phir bhi
Ye aankhen rokar unhe gunhegar batati h…
Hum de pate har khushi usse
Jane kyon ye sawal lakh karti h…..
Jab wo saath na ho to ye phir bhi uska
intezaar kyon karti h deewangi……
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Taareef ke kaabil -
7th June 2010, 02:01 PM
Deepali ji
aapki ye rachnaye bahut hi khoob hai aachi koshis ki hai aapne aise hi likhte rahiyega.
nice work. good luck
meri dua aapke sath hai
aankh m yaad rehti h,........................... Nice
Uski yaad kahoon ya uska intezaar, ................Nice
Ye kaisa mausam aaya, jo uski yaad laya.................. Very nice
ajay nidaan
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Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi
par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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