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14th February 2010, 12:59 PM
Jaise ki aaj Valentine day manaya jata hai aur is din ko mohabbat karne wale khaas samjahte hai.........bas main bhi isi mauke par ek bohat mamuli kalam aap sabki nazar kar raha hu. Shayri ke aitbaar se yeh kalam bohat mamuli hain.........is kalam me bas mere jazbaat hai mere ehsas hai.......
Hai meri hum_nashee hum_nawaa.Z, woh mera humsafar bhi hai
Kya bataoo main kya tujhe pata nahi, kya meri chahto ki khabar bhi hai
Aa mere paas aa aur pass aa, mujhe jaan le meri jaan tu
Mera yaqeen kar meri janeman nahi aib sirf, mujhme hunar bhi hai
Kabhi chal diya kabhi ruk gaya kabhi thak gaya, kisi mod par
Tanha nahi tu mere humsafar, tere sath mera safar bhi hai
Kajal ki hain bindiya ki hai kangan ki hai darpan ki hai
Hain mujhse hi shrin_gaar tera, kya meri tujhko kadar bhi hai
Tujhe sab mila mujhe kuch nahi, pardes ki tanha raat hai
Kar faisla aur bata mujhe, kya mujhsa tujhme sabar bhi hai
Mausam ki hai shabnam ki hai yovan ki hai aagan ki hai
Aye meri jaan-e-jaan meri dilruba, kya meri tujhko fikar bhi hai
Taro pe hain nazaro pe hain duniya ki har baharo pe hai
Sara jahaan teri nazar kya Ghayel par teri nazar bhi hai
-Sajid Ghayel-
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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17th February 2010, 04:54 AM
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Originally Posted by sajid_ghayel
Jaise ki aaj Valentine day manaya jata hai aur is din ko mohabbat karne wale khaas samjahte hai.........bas main bhi isi mauke par ek bohat mamuli kalam aap sabki nazar kar raha hu. Shayri ke aitbaar se yeh kalam bohat mamuli hain.........is kalam me bas mere jazbaat hai mere ehsas hai.......
Hai meri hum_nashee hum_nawaa.Z, woh mera humsafar bhi hai
Kya bataoo main kya tujhe pata nahi, kya meri chahto ki khabar bhi hai
Aa mere paas aa aur pass aa, mujhe jaan le meri jaan tu
Mera yaqeen kar meri janeman nahi aib sirf, mujhme hunar bhi hai
Kabhi chal diya kabhi ruk gaya kabhi thak gaya, kisi mod par
Tanha nahi tu mere humsafar, tere sath mera safar bhi hai
Kajal ki hain bindiya ki hai kangan ki hai darpan ki hai
Hain mujhse hi shrin_gaar tera, kya meri tujhko kadar bhi hai
Tujhe sab mila mujhe kuch nahi, pardes ki tanha raat hai
Kar faisla aur bata mujhe, kya mujhsa tujhme sabar bhi hai
Mausam ki hai shabnam ki hai yovan ki hai aagan ki hai
Aye meri jaan-e-jaan meri dilruba, kya meri tujhko fikar bhi hai
Taro pe hain nazaro pe hain duniya ki har baharo pe hai
Sara jahaan teri nazar kya Ghayel par teri nazar bhi hai
-Sajid Ghayel-
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Ishq par liknaa shuru kar diyaa Ghayel , yaa zakhm sab bhar gaye?
ता उम्र रहा इक रोज़-ए -मुकम्मल का इंतज़ार
किसी में शाम न मिली तो किसी में सहर नहीं
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17th February 2010, 10:09 AM
Romaniat ehsaason se labrez aur jis kisi ke pyar me bhi aapne yeh ghazal likhi hai....bahut khubsurat bani hai....har ashaar dil ki gehraai se nikala hua lagta hai...nice creation...aapka yeh romani rang dil ko bahut bhaaya janab...
Yeh sher aapki taza halaat ko bayaan karta laga mujhe....bahut khub
Tujhe sab mila mujhe kuch nahi, pardes ki tanha raat hai
Kar faisla aur bata mujhe, kya mujhsa tujhme sabar bhi hai
yunhi likhte rahen...dil se daad hazir hai....khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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17th February 2010, 10:26 AM
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Originally Posted by sajid_ghayel
Jaise ki aaj Valentine day manaya jata hai aur is din ko mohabbat karne wale khaas samjahte hai.........bas main bhi isi mauke par ek bohat mamuli kalam aap sabki nazar kar raha hu. Shayri ke aitbaar se yeh kalam bohat mamuli hain.........is kalam me bas mere jazbaat hai mere ehsas hai.......
Hai meri hum_nashee hum_nawaa.Z, woh mera humsafar bhi hai
Kya bataoo main kya tujhe pata nahi, kya meri chahto ki khabar bhi hai
Aa mere paas aa aur pass aa, mujhe jaan le meri jaan tu
Mera yaqeen kar meri janeman nahi aib sirf, mujhme hunar bhi hai
Kabhi chal diya kabhi ruk gaya kabhi thak gaya, kisi mod par
Tanha nahi tu mere humsafar, tere sath mera safar bhi hai
Kajal ki hain bindiya ki hai kangan ki hai darpan ki hai
Hain mujhse hi shrin_gaar tera, kya meri tujhko kadar bhi hai
Tujhe sab mila mujhe kuch nahi, pardes ki tanha raat hai
Kar faisla aur bata mujhe, kya mujhsa tujhme sabar bhi hai
Mausam ki hai shabnam ki hai yovan ki hai aagan ki hai
Aye meri jaan-e-jaan meri dilruba, kya meri tujhko fikar bhi hai
Taro pe hain nazaro pe hain duniya ki har baharo pe hai
Sara jahaan teri nazar kya Ghayel par teri nazar bhi hai
-Sajid Ghayel-
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Good to see you in Ishq section Ghayel saheb,...looks like this one is very special for someone very special.....
kalaam behad khoobsurat hai......Aapke dil ke halaat bakhuubi bayaan kar raha hai...bohat sacche aur saade ehsaas haiN...daad qubuul kijiye.....
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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17th February 2010, 04:17 PM
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Originally Posted by sajid_ghayel
Jaise ki aaj Valentine day manaya jata hai aur is din ko mohabbat karne wale khaas samjahte hai.........bas main bhi isi mauke par ek bohat mamuli kalam aap sabki nazar kar raha hu. Shayri ke aitbaar se yeh kalam bohat mamuli hain.........is kalam me bas mere jazbaat hai mere ehsas hai.......
Hai meri hum_nashee hum_nawaa.Z, woh mera humsafar bhi hai
Kya bataoo main kya tujhe pata nahi, kya meri chahto ki khabar bhi hai
Aa mere paas aa aur pass aa, mujhe jaan le meri jaan tu
Mera yaqeen kar meri janeman nahi aib sirf, mujhme hunar bhi hai
Kabhi chal diya kabhi ruk gaya kabhi thak gaya, kisi mod par
Tanha nahi tu mere humsafar, tere sath mera safar bhi hai
Kajal ki hain bindiya ki hai kangan ki hai darpan ki hai
Hain mujhse hi shrin_gaar tera, kya meri tujhko kadar bhi hai
Tujhe sab mila mujhe kuch nahi, pardes ki tanha raat hai
Kar faisla aur bata mujhe, kya mujhsa tujhme sabar bhi hai
Mausam ki hai shabnam ki hai yovan ki hai aagan ki hai
Aye meri jaan-e-jaan meri dilruba, kya meri tujhko fikar bhi hai
Taro pe hain nazaro pe hain duniya ki har baharo pe hai
Sara jahaan teri nazar kya Ghayel par teri nazar bhi hai
-Sajid Ghayel-
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Sajid bhai namaaskaar
bhaut hi khoobsurat likha hai aap ne
tc
Atul Sharma
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18th February 2010, 09:48 AM
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Ishq par liknaa shuru kar diyaa Ghayel , yaa zakhm sab bhar gaye?
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Mayoos saheb apne gamo se ukta na jaoo bas isiliye kabhi kabhar ishqiya kalaam likh lete hai..........
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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18th February 2010, 10:19 AM
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Originally Posted by sajid_ghayel
Jaise ki aaj Valentine day manaya jata hai aur is din ko mohabbat karne wale khaas samjahte hai.........bas main bhi isi mauke par ek bohat mamuli kalam aap sabki nazar kar raha hu. Shayri ke aitbaar se yeh kalam bohat mamuli hain.........is kalam me bas mere jazbaat hai mere ehsas hai.......
Hai meri hum_nashee hum_nawaa.Z, woh mera humsafar bhi hai
Kya bataoo main kya tujhe pata nahi, kya meri chahto ki khabar bhi hai
Aa mere paas aa aur pass aa, mujhe jaan le meri jaan tu
Mera yaqeen kar meri janeman nahi aib sirf, mujhme hunar bhi hai
Kabhi chal diya kabhi ruk gaya kabhi thak gaya, kisi mod par
Tanha nahi tu mere humsafar, tere sath mera safar bhi hai
Kajal ki hain bindiya ki hai kangan ki hai darpan ki hai
Hain mujhse hi shrin_gaar tera, kya meri tujhko kadar bhi hai
Tujhe sab mila mujhe kuch nahi, pardes ki tanha raat hai
Kar faisla aur bata mujhe, kya mujhsa tujhme sabar bhi hai
Mausam ki hai shabnam ki hai yovan ki hai aagan ki hai
Aye meri jaan-e-jaan meri dilruba, kya meri tujhko fikar bhi hai
Taro pe hain nazaro pe hain duniya ki har baharo pe hai
Sara jahaan teri nazar kya Ghayel par teri nazar bhi hai
-Sajid Ghayel-
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sajid bhai
bahut khoobsurat ahsaason ko bade hi sundar shabdon me piroya hai..daad dil se nikli hai kubul farmaayen...aise hi likhte rahen mehfil ki raunak badaate rahen
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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19th February 2010, 11:21 AM
Sajid Sahib,,
Aap ki ishq ghazal phad kar aik khiyaal aaya:-
"ghayal ab aashiq ban giya"
Younhi likhtay rahiye aur humain mehzooz karte rahiye,,
DuaooN k saath,
Aap ka,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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14th March 2010, 01:03 PM
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Romaniat ehsaason se labrez aur jis kisi ke pyar me bhi aapne yeh ghazal likhi hai....bahut khubsurat bani hai....har ashaar dil ki gehraai se nikala hua lagta hai...nice creation...aapka yeh romani rang dil ko bahut bhaaya janab...
Yeh sher aapki taza halaat ko bayaan karta laga mujhe....bahut khub
Tujhe sab mila mujhe kuch nahi, pardes ki tanha raat hai
Kar faisla aur bata mujhe, kya mujhsa tujhme sabar bhi hai
yunhi likhte rahen...dil se daad hazir hai....khush rahen...
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath...
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Badi meharbani Naresh Saheb jo aapne apna waqt diya........aur jo sher aapko pasand hai woh mera bhi fav. hai.......
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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16th March 2010, 10:47 PM
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Jaise ki aaj Valentine day manaya jata hai aur is din ko mohabbat karne wale khaas samjahte hai.........bas main bhi isi mauke par ek bohat mamuli kalam aap sabki nazar kar raha hu. Shayri ke aitbaar se yeh kalam bohat mamuli hain.........is kalam me bas mere jazbaat hai mere ehsas hai.......
Hai meri hum_nashee hum_nawaa.Z, woh mera humsafar bhi hai
Kya bataoo main kya tujhe pata nahi, kya meri chahto ki khabar bhi hai
Aa mere paas aa aur pass aa, mujhe jaan le meri jaan tu
Mera yaqeen kar meri janeman nahi aib sirf, mujhme hunar bhi hai
Kabhi chal diya kabhi ruk gaya kabhi thak gaya, kisi mod par
Tanha nahi tu mere humsafar, tere sath mera safar bhi hai
Kajal ki hain bindiya ki hai kangan ki hai darpan ki hai
Hain mujhse hi shrin_gaar tera, kya meri tujhko kadar bhi hai
Tujhe sab mila mujhe kuch nahi, pardes ki tanha raat hai
Kar faisla aur bata mujhe, kya mujhsa tujhme sabar bhi hai
Mausam ki hai shabnam ki hai yovan ki hai aagan ki hai
Aye meri jaan-e-jaan meri dilruba, kya meri tujhko fikar bhi hai
Taro pe hain nazaro pe hain duniya ki har baharo pe hai
Sara jahaan teri nazar kya Ghayel par teri nazar bhi hai
-Sajid Ghayel-
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bahut badhiya ghayal saheb..
i'se tez gati se padh kar bahut maza aata hai....aapka yeh kalaam bahut baar padha phir reply kiya......aapka hi signature sheyr ....jhoot keh duN......i'sliye reply karne se pehle dekhna chahta tha ki kya gehrayee hai i'ski, aur mujhe behad gehra aur u'mda kalaam laga yeh.....daad..hi ...daad...janaab....
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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17th March 2010, 10:57 AM
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Jaise ki aaj Valentine day manaya jata hai aur is din ko mohabbat karne wale khaas samjahte hai.........bas main bhi isi mauke par ek bohat mamuli kalam aap sabki nazar kar raha hu. Shayri ke aitbaar se yeh kalam bohat mamuli hain.........is kalam me bas mere jazbaat hai mere ehsas hai.......
Hai meri hum_nashee hum_nawaa.Z, woh mera humsafar bhi hai
Kya bataoo main kya tujhe pata nahi, kya meri chahto ki khabar bhi hai
Aa mere paas aa aur pass aa, mujhe jaan le meri jaan tu
Mera yaqeen kar meri janeman nahi aib sirf, mujhme hunar bhi hai
Kabhi chal diya kabhi ruk gaya kabhi thak gaya, kisi mod par
Tanha nahi tu mere humsafar, tere sath mera safar bhi hai
Kajal ki hain bindiya ki hai kangan ki hai darpan ki hai
Hain mujhse hi shrin_gaar tera, kya meri tujhko kadar bhi hai
Tujhe sab mila mujhe kuch nahi, pardes ki tanha raat hai
Kar faisla aur bata mujhe, kya mujhsa tujhme sabar bhi hai
Mausam ki hai shabnam ki hai yovan ki hai aagan ki hai
Aye meri jaan-e-jaan meri dilruba, kya meri tujhko fikar bhi hai
Taro pe hain nazaro pe hain duniya ki har baharo pe hai
Sara jahaan teri nazar kya Ghayel par teri nazar bhi hai
-Sajid Ghayel-
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Ghayalji,
Mazaa aa gaya sahib!!!
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19th March 2010, 11:48 PM
Aapne meri mamuli peshkash ko saraha meri hausla afzaiee ki uske liye aapka bada mamnoon hu Zainy Jee......
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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