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15th April 2009, 03:05 PM
Doston Aadab!
Shayari e Sharab may maine kai post padhe kafi umda lage, kai baar is par maine likhne ki koshish bhi ki thi lekin naa kaam raha tha, Bas ab aap logon ke hounsle ne mujhse yeh bhi gustakhi karwa di hai, Gustakhi ke liye maufi chahata hun…. Kal Dry day tha na is liye shayad yeh gustakhi ho gayi. Sang dil zamana ho sakta hai par tu nahi Teri mohobbat ka asar ab bhi hai mujhpe ……………………………………………………………………………………………… Mulayza Farmaiye! Pal do pal ka nahi tujhse, mera har shab ka hai silsila Aisa juda rishta tujhse, mujhe maykhar ka naam milaKab hua may tujhse ga.fiil, tu hi bata e Maykashin Jab bhi mila tujhe bhari mehfil me mila sareaam mila Qatir sirf teri e jaana raha apnose juda juda Hosh na raha mujhe jab bhi tera jaam mila Nikal gaye woh aur aage sang tere chhod mujhe Tha may bulandiyon par, jab tera inaam mila Kabhi ladkhadaye kadam, kabhi kadmo.n me tere gir gaya Tu hi bata e Maikashi, teri chahaat ka kaisa anjaam mila Du.n duhaai teri ke baddua.en bhi dun tujhe Shahon se gurbate haal mila bus ilzam mila Chhod dun tujhe ya chhod dun jiine ki KWAHISH E Dil nashin zindagi se kuch aisa paigham mila Pal do pal ka nahi tujhse, mera har shab ka hai silsila Aisa juda rishta tujhse, mujhe maykhar ka naam mila Kab hua may tujhse ga.fiil, tu hi bata e Maykashin Jab bhi mila tujhe bhari mehfil me mila sareaam mila 
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15th April 2009, 03:20 PM
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Bahot khub Sameer........yuhi likhte rahiyen Regards  Praneeta _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
 Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota Ananthpak |
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16th April 2009, 10:00 PM
bahut hi umda hai. aur kafia to qabil-e-tareef hai. aisi khoobsurat peshkash kabhi kabhi hi padne ki milti hai. likhte rahiye
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17th April 2009, 05:29 PM
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Mujhe shayri ki zyada samajh nahi hai, par meri samajh me jitna aaya, kabil-e-taareef hai. . . Meri urdu b thodi . . . . Thodi kya mai urdu ki a b c bhi nahi janta... Isiliye kuch sher mere upar se nikal gaye, par jo kuch samajh aaya, bahut achha tha... Thanks for inviting me and sharing it . . . Aapka ek pagla sa Dost Buland Raj |
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19th April 2009, 05:31 PM
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Tarif ka shukriya, hounla afzai ka tahe dil se shukriya. Zaroor agar aap ka sath bana raha to yunhi likhte rahenge.
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19th April 2009, 05:36 PM
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Yeh to aapki dil nawazi hai ke is nachiz ka kalam aapko khoobsurat laga. Agar aap logon ka yunhi sath bana raha to likhate rahenge. Ummid karte hai aap hamari mehfil me aate rahenge aur apne kimti rai se nawazte rahenge. Tahe dil se shukra guzar.
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19th April 2009, 05:55 PM
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Zara roshni dal raha hun nazar kar lijiye. Qatir sirf teri e jaana raha apnose juda juda Hosh na raha mujhe jab bhi tera jaam mila oopar se nikal gaya ye wala... Yahan may sharab se hi baat kar raha hun, Sirf tere hi liye raha apnose alag alag yani jab bhi pine ke liye jana hota to dost log ko cut mar dete hai pine wale. madhosh ho gaya jab tera jaam mila, phir kya karta sharab se aur baaten jab nasha hi uska chad gaya Nikal gaye woh aur aage sang tere chhod mujhe Tha may bulandiyon par, jab tera inaam mila is wale ka meaning kuch atpata sa lag raha hai bhai... Jara clear kar de to. . . Yahan bhi may Sharab se keh raha hun Ke mere dost jo mere hi sath the( daulat ke mamleme) tere sath chhod aage nikal gaye, Sharab ke sath chhod aage nikal gaye. jab may naamchin hua karta tab tera {inam mila}( sharabse rishta juda) Du.n duhaai teri ke baddua.en bhi dun tujhe Shahon se gurbate haal mila bus ilzam mila samajh nahi aaya mujhe. . . Bhai ye to zara bayan karne me galti hui hai, alfaz mayne khez nahi mile mujhe. Yahan may kehta hun sharab se.. Teri tarif karun ya baddua dun tujhe, May raja ki tarha tha ab faqeer hal hua hun mujh par ilzam lag rahe hai sab teri wajah se. Ummid karta hun bhai tumhare sawalon kejawab mukkammal hua, Apna kimti waqt nikal aapne meri shayari par roshni dali is ka tahe dil se shukra guzar hun. Yun hi aate rahiye aur apna sath banaye rakhiye.
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19th April 2009, 09:44 PM
Sameer Bhai 1st of all Thanks k aapne keemti waqt se mujh nasamajh ko tafseel se bataya...
Ab jab mujhe aapki ghazal samajh aa gayi hai to mai aapse kuch kehna chahta hu.... Ummeed hai aap bura nahi maanenge... Aapki rachna shayri ki drishti se kaafi gehraayi liye hue hai aur bahut he umda hai... Ek Dost ki drishti se mujhe aapka 'SHARAAB' pe shayri likhna pasand ni aaya... Real life me Mai Na to Peeta hu aur na he apne Dosto ko Peene deta hu... Ummeed hai aap meri Baat samajh gaye honge... Aasha karta hu k aap apne chote bhai ki ek 'KHWAISH' JARUR POORI KARENGE... Agar aap peete ho to ho sake to mere liye EK GHOOT KAM PEE LENA... Basss Zyada to nahi maanga na maine aapse... |
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19th April 2009, 11:40 PM
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Ye sab sirf ek Gazal hai bhai usme haqikhat lane ki mayne bus koshish ki hai. Huo.n junooni par itna bhi nahi may dost Ke intehan ho jaye aur khabar bhi na ho
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19th April 2009, 11:56 PM
Arey Bhai, mai to sirf ye dekhna chah raha tha ki aap ka reaction kya hota hai...
mai to pagal hu, kuch b bolta rehta hu, aap meri baato ko seriously mat liya kijiye... Waise ek baat kahu... Kuch shero me aapne apni mehbooba ko sharaab se exchange kar diya hai  aap sada khush raho... Aapka pagal Dost Buland Raj |
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20th April 2009, 11:26 PM
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Sach hai ke mayne apne shayari ke kuch sheron me hi nahi balki puri Gazal me apni mehbooba ko sharab se exchange kiya hai....... Thanks for comments and your are really intelligent person.
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