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8th January 2009, 06:51 AM
dharti sari ukhdi ukhdi
ambar poora bezaar hai
subah jukham sham ko khansi
raat ko bukhaar hai
Arti bimar hai .. Arti bimar hai ..
choti choti sanso mai
karti baten badi badi
neend se katti kar baithi
khab se ankhe bhari bhari
palak palak rista ansu
boond boond bhigta rukhsar hai
Arti bimar hai .. Arti bimar hai ..
main thodi buri tum jayda bhale ho
bas ek hi janm ke liye mile ho
usko apna sindoor banau
tum jis mitti mai pale ho
baki ke janm tumhara usse karaar hai
Arti bimar hai .. Arti bimar hai ..
mera kaha kab manti hai
pora karti hai jo thanti hai
use aur thand lag jayegi
pani mai jate hi janti hai
khud se payara rasoi ka kaorbar hai
Arti bimar hai .. Arti bimar hai ..
kalayee ka chooda gumsum gumsum
bindi ki dhanak bhi madhyam madhyam
chand ko bhi iska bukhar laga
noor bhi kal se uska kam kam
kya hoga mareej woh theek
janumanu jiska *teemardar hai
Arti bimar hai .. Arti bimar hai ..
* For my wife Aarti
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8th January 2009, 10:12 AM
Janumanu jee:
namaste!!
aapkii yeh naZm dil ko chhu gayii.. aapne jo apni patni ke liye dil meiN base huye ehsaasoN ko lafzoN meiN peSh kiyaa haii wo sach meN qaabil-e-taareef haii .. naZm meiN aapke dil meiN uNke liye jo pyaar haii wo lafzoN ke zar'iiYe saaf saaf diKhA'ii de raha haii..! mujhe bahot hi KhuShii hotee hai jab maiN seedhe dil se nikle huye lafzoN ko paRhtaa huuN.. aaj aapne yeh mauqaa diyaa mujhe maiN aapkaa ShuKraGuzaar huuN..! YuuNhi liKhate raheN aur mehfil ko rauShan karte raheN aage bhee apni naGhz koShiShoN ke zar'iiye... daad!!
KhuSh raheN... apnaa khayaal rakheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
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8th January 2009, 10:34 AM
Bahut accha likha hai aapne janumanu jee.....dil ko chu gayi aapki ye nazm....har lafz me apni patni ke liye pyaar chalak raha hai,hamari dua hai ke aap dono ka pyar hamesha ayse hi qayam rahe...khuda aap dono ke pyar ko, buri nazar se bachai...
hamesha khush rahiye..
zainy
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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8th January 2009, 03:21 PM
janumanu ji aapka nuzm bahot achha laga hume ....Humesha khus rahiye ...
Diya
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
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8th January 2009, 05:05 PM
Mast likha hai yaar. Awesome.
Khuda se yahi dua hai meri, bas itna uska upkar ho jaye
Tumhare pyare se gulshan me, fir se kayam bahar ho jaaye
Meri har khushi tumhari, har gam tumhare mere ho.n
Theek ho jaaye Aarti tumhari, chahe "Ehsaas" bimar ho jaaye
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9th January 2009, 07:05 AM
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Janumanu jee:
namaste!!
aapkii yeh naZm dil ko chhu gayii.. aapne jo apni patni ke liye dil meiN base huye ehsaasoN ko lafzoN meiN peSh kiyaa haii wo sach meN qaabil-e-taareef haii .. naZm meiN aapke dil meiN uNke liye jo pyaar haii wo lafzoN ke zar'iiYe saaf saaf diKhA'ii de raha haii..! mujhe bahot hi KhuShii hotee hai jab maiN seedhe dil se nikle huye lafzoN ko paRhtaa huuN.. aaj aapne yeh mauqaa diyaa mujhe maiN aapkaa ShuKraGuzaar huuN..! YuuNhi liKhate raheN aur mehfil ko rauShan karte raheN aage bhee apni naGhz koShiShoN ke zar'iiye... daad!!
KhuSh raheN... apnaa khayaal rakheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
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thanx dhaval s'aab ..........................................
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Bahut accha likha hai aapne janumanu jee.....dil ko chu gayi aapki ye nazm....har lafz me apni patni ke liye pyaar chalak raha hai,hamari dua hai ke aap dono ka pyar hamesha ayse hi qayam rahe...khuda aap dono ke pyar ko, buri nazar se bachai...
hamesha khush rahiye..
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aapka bahut shukriyaaa ..............
itni duaon ke liye
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janumanu ji aapka nuzm bahot achha laga hume ....Humesha khus rahiye ...
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thank u so much jiya
be happy ........................
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Mast likha hai yaar. Awesome.
Khuda se yahi dua hai meri, bas itna uska upkar ho jaye
Tumhare pyare se gulshan me, fir se kayam bahar ho jaaye
Meri har khushi tumhari, har gam tumhare mere ho.n
Theek ho jaaye Aarti tumhari, chahe "Ehsaas" bimar ho jaaye
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11th January 2009, 10:35 PM
janu manu jiii............aapki yeh nazm maine kai baar padi aur har baar pad kar lout gaye mere paas lafz nahi haiN aapki poetry aur ahsaaso.n ke tareef karne ke liye....! bahgwaan aap dono ki jodi banaye rakhe
es nazm par aapko reps ++++
en reps. points se aapko andaza lag gaya hoga ki hume kis had tak pasand aaye hai aapki nazm.
kush rahiye
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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JI Ji bahut bahut shukriyaaaaaaaa
aur ye reps ++++ what does it mean
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JI Ji bahut bahut shukriyaaaaaaaa
aur ye reps ++++ what does it mean
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janu manu jiii.....reputation points ke bare mein poori jaankari es link se padiye.....
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=58250
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
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13th January 2009, 04:25 AM
Well mujhe ab bhi samjh ni aaya....
waise b reputation se apna kya talluk
Sannu saadi apni fakeeri jogga rehn de
sohrataan ne keeta hai badnaam mere dosta
Guru Gurdas man
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Well mujhe ab bhi samjh ni aaya....
waise b reputation se apna kya talluk
Sannu saadi apni fakeeri jogga rehn de
sohrataan ne keeta hai badnaam mere dosta
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wow......................................too good
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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16th January 2009, 01:33 PM
wow..nahi ye nahi kah sakti kisi ki bimari par..
lekin nazm ke liahz se bakai me acchi hai..
mera kaha kab manti hai
pora karti hai jo thanti hai
use aur thand lag jayegi
pani mai jate hi janti hai
khud se payara rasoi ka kaorbar hai
Arti bimar hai .. Arti bimar hai ..
sach hai..kuch bhi ho..rasoi to jana hi jana hai..
take care..
bye..
..♥♥..Mera Tumhara..kya Rishta hai..kuch bhi Nahi..
Agar kabhi..Gujarta dekho..kya Tum Mujhe..bulaoge..
Shayad Nahi..
Agar jo phir Hum..kabhi na Mile to..
Kya Tum yaad aaogoge..Nahi..
Kiuki..Tum Mere..koi Nahi..
Main janti hun..Magar..
Ho jab Mere koi Nahi..kiu lagte ho Mujhko Paraye nahi....♥♥..
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17th January 2009, 07:26 AM
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wow..nahi ye nahi kah sakti kisi ki bimari par..
lekin nazm ke liahz se bakai me acchi hai..
mera kaha kab manti hai
pora karti hai jo thanti hai
use aur thand lag jayegi
pani mai jate hi janti hai
khud se payara rasoi ka kaorbar hai
Arti bimar hai .. Arti bimar hai ..
sach hai..kuch bhi ho..rasoi to jana hi jana hai..
take care..
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Thank u so much ji
Rasoi to jana hi jana hai ....!!
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17th January 2009, 10:00 PM
very well written janumanu.......................................
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28th January 2009, 05:58 PM
thanx ji thanx ..............................
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30th January 2009, 07:27 PM
bahut khoob janumanu jiiii....behtarin ehsaas hai....muje reply karne me bahut der ho gayi,i hope ab tak to aap ki AARTI thik bhi ho gfayi hogi...hai na???.......
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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bahut khoob janumanu jiiii....behtarin ehsaas hai....muje reply karne me bahut der ho gayi,i hope ab tak to aap ki AARTI thik bhi ho gfayi hogi...hai na???.......
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Haan ji ab theek hain aapki dua se
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31st January 2009, 01:24 PM
Janumanu Ji,
Achcha likha hai,
May God give her health soon
With best wishes
Rashid
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dharti sari ukhdi ukhdi
ambar poora bezaar hai
subah jukham sham ko khansi
raat ko bukhaar hai
Arti bimar hai .. Arti bimar hai ..
choti choti sanso mai
karti baten badi badi
neend se katti kar baithi
khab se ankhe bhari bhari
palak palak rista ansu
boond boond bhigta rukhsar hai
Arti bimar hai .. Arti bimar hai ..
main thodi buri tum jayda bhale ho
bas ek hi janm ke liye mile ho
usko apna sindoor banau
tum jis mitti mai pale ho
baki ke janm tumhara usse karaar hai
Arti bimar hai .. Arti bimar hai ..
mera kaha kab manti hai
pora karti hai jo thanti hai
use aur thand lag jayegi
pani mai jate hi janti hai
khud se payara rasoi ka kaorbar hai
Arti bimar hai .. Arti bimar hai ..
kalayee ka chooda gumsum gumsum
bindi ki dhanak bhi madhyam madhyam
chand ko bhi iska bukhar laga
noor bhi kal se uska kam kam
kya hoga mareej woh theek
janumanu jiska *teemardar hai
Arti bimar hai .. Arti bimar hai ..
* For my wife Aarti
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2nd February 2009, 09:31 AM
really good creation from u....jaanu maanu..aarti ji jaldi thik ho jayegi..god bless u and aarti ji.... best wishes....
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2nd February 2009, 12:21 PM
Hi Jaanumaanu,
Aapke poem mei pyar aur dard dono bahot saaf mehsoos hota hai, its really very touching, it shows very clearly tht ur wife is ur inspiration............Praying to GOD for ur wife to get wel soon.........KEEP IT UP
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Janumanu Ji,
Achcha likha hai,
May God give her health soon
With best wishes
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shukriyaa rashid
padhne ke liye
also thanx for wish
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really good creation from u....jaanu maanu..aarti ji jaldi thik ho jayegi..god bless u and aarti ji.... best wishes....
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Thanx dear for reading ....
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28th June 2010, 08:57 AM
Fir se aarti bimaar hai ......................
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28th June 2010, 10:55 AM
Don't worry jaanumaanu ji.....
pehle ki tarah 'fir se' aarti ji theek ho jaayengi....
Bass aap apni 'teemardaari' me kasar na chhoriyega
God bless you 'both' ( or may be three or fours till now )
Aapko chuhe aur billi ki kahani sunani hai...
Jisme chuhe ne yaad dilaayi,billi ko nani hai...
lekin chuha bhool gaya tha k wo sapna tha...
aakhir me shamat to chuhe ki he aani hai :D
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29th June 2010, 04:16 PM
vikas bhai
radhe radhe
dua karte hain prabhu se ki aarti jald swasth ho
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Vikas ji
Bhagwaan aap dono ko sda khush rakhe. aur meri dua hai ki aarti bhabhi jaldi se swasth ho jaaye.
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29th June 2010, 09:09 PM
Vikas Ji......mujhe maalum hai ...... aaj kal aarti Ji beemaar hai......aur unka iilaaz chal raha hai........aap yeh nazm sunaakar unhe aur taqleef na de......jo kal se unohne dawaa shuru ki hai....usse woh jald theek ho jayegi.....beemaari aati toh bahut jaldi hai.....theek hone me thoda waqt leti hai........aise dil chhota naa kare.....aarti ji dekhna kal parsoN tak ekdam swasth ho jayengi....aisa mera vishwaas hai......aur prabhu se duaa bhi hai.....haari beemari toh aati rehti hai......jaise aati hai ...vaise chali bhi jaati.....
Aarti ji....aapse vishesh taur par keh raha hu......aap bilkul na ghabaraayeN ....kuch nahi hua hai... thodi kamzori hai.....aap time se dawaa leti rahe.....kal parson tak ekdam theek ho jayengi...
haa ......vikas ji....aapki rachna ........bataati hai.....aap aarti se kitna gehraa prem karte hai.....yeh mohabbat humesha aise hi barqaraar rahen....
dil se likhi iss rachna ko dil se daad...... !
Mera aap dono se nivedan hai.....koi fikR naa kare.... !
aap unka theek se khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath.....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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