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<>*Mere armaanon ne aaj dum toda ha*<>





Khilone sa khelkar chhod jana har bar

Aaj fir usi tarah mera tune dil toda hai



Suljhane ki jagah meri uljhi zindagi me

Ek nayaa taar uljha hua tune aur joda hai



Marhum lagate mere dil pe to kuch baat hoti

Firse use kured k tune ek naasuur chhoda hai



Koi nai baat nahin ..ki hai, tumne meri jaan

Isi tarah har baar tune mera sath chhoda hai



Kahin ki na rahi main ab.. na dil ki na duniya ki

Kuch is tarah mere armanon ne aaj dum toda hai…!!!



Aaj fir dil shayar hona chahta hai..
Dard lafzon me pirona chahta hai..


   
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<>*Mere armaanon ne aaj dum toda ha*<>

Khilone sa khelkar chhod jana har bar

Aaj fir usi tarah mera tune dil toda hai



Suljhane ki jagah meri uljhi zindagi me

Ek nayaa taar uljha hua tune aur joda hai



Marhum lagate mere dil pe to kuch baat hoti

Firse use kured k tune ek naasuur chhoda hai



Koi nai baat nahin ..ki hai, tumne meri jaan

Isi tarah har baar tune mera sath chhoda hai



Kahin ki na rahi main ab.. na dil ki na duniya ki

Kuch is tarah mere armanon ne aaj dum toda hai…!!!

Anamika Ji ... Takhleeq Ke Ehsaas AchChhe HaiN ... !

Mubaaraqbaad !!!




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<>*Mere armaanon ne aaj dum toda ha*<>





Khilone sa khelkar chhod jana har bar

Aaj fir usi tarah mera tune dil toda hai



Suljhane ki jagah meri uljhi zindagi me

Ek nayaa taar uljha hua tune aur joda hai



Marhum lagate mere dil pe to kuch baat hoti

Firse use kured k tune ek naasuur chhoda hai



Koi nai baat nahin ..ki hai, tumne meri jaan

Isi tarah har baar tune mera sath chhoda hai



Kahin ki na rahi main ab.. na dil ki na duniya ki

Kuch is tarah mere armanon ne aaj dum toda hai…!!!



waahhh Anamikaa ji... bahot Khoob.. aaapke likhe lafz lafz se dard ki shiddat Dikhaai padtee hai... Muhabbat ki Khushboo jo ki har Bandish se aazaad hai wo saaf saaf nazar aa rahi hai.. aaapki ye koshish bhi hame Behad paasand aai hai... Aage bhi intezaaar rahegaaa aapke ehsaasoN se milne kaa..
Khush rahiye..


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Anamikaa JI........... Aap Ki Ye GHazal Parh Kr Laga Ke Aap Me Boht Acha Likhnay Ki Qabliyyat Hai......... Bs Thori Mehnat Or Kaant Chhaant Ki Zarurat Hai...........
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waah ji waah ... kya baat kahi hai aapne,

Suljhane ki jagah meri uljhi zindagi me
Ek nayaa taar uljha hua tune aur joda hai

Marhum lagate mere dil pe to kuch baat hoti
Firse use kured k tune ek naasuur chhoda hai

Koi nai baat nahin ..ki hai, tumne meri jaan
Isi tarah har baar tune mera sath chhoda hai

waah ... ye mujhe khaas pasand aaye ...


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1st December 2011, 10:29 PM

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<>*Mere armaanon ne aaj dum toda ha*<>





Khilone sa khelkar chhod jana har bar

Aaj fir usi tarah mera tune dil toda hai



Suljhane ki jagah meri uljhi zindagi me

Ek nayaa taar uljha hua tune aur joda hai



Marhum lagate mere dil pe to kuch baat hoti

Firse use kured k tune ek naasuur chhoda hai



Koi nai baat nahin ..ki hai, tumne meri jaan

Isi tarah har baar tune mera sath chhoda hai



Kahin ki na rahi main ab.. na dil ki na duniya ki

Kuch is tarah mere armanon ne aaj dum toda hai…!!!

Ji behad khoobsurat ehsaas rakhein haiN aapne dil ke. Kisi ke liye tadap or dard ki intehaa dikh rahi hai aapki kavish meiN. Aise hi likhte rahein.

Khush rahein
Apna khyal rakheiN


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<>*Mere armaanon ne aaj dum toda ha*<>





Khilone sa khelkar chhod jana har bar

Aaj fir usi tarah mera tune dil toda hai



Suljhane ki jagah meri uljhi zindagi me

Ek nayaa taar uljha hua tune aur joda hai



Marhum lagate mere dil pe to kuch baat hoti

Firse use kured k tune ek naasuur chhoda hai



Koi nai baat nahin ..ki hai, tumne meri jaan

Isi tarah har baar tune mera sath chhoda hai



Kahin ki na rahi main ab.. na dil ki na duniya ki

Kuch is tarah mere armanon ne aaj dum toda hai…!!!

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