Ruksath is jahan say lengay jabh hum...
Ek pyaar bhara kafan to odadenay tum...
Dil ko yeah sukun to hoga.....
Jeetay ji jo pyaar na mila ....
Martay he uska de-dar to hua.....
well sher baki mast ahe ha tuza. ha tuza swatahacha ahe ka ga/re? if it is so then it is really good! if it is'nt, eventhen it is good. coz memorising shers is also a skill. keep it up.
take care
rahul(sagar)
wo mere dil ko kuchal ke chala gaya
anjane me muzko wo shayar bana gaya