|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Shayri.com Moderator
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
|
"MERI JAAN MUJHE MIL HI JAYENGI................" a shayri for her.......with u always -
29th October 2006, 09:07 PM
agar mil jayenga zindagi me tera sahara,
meri zindagi jaise khusiyo se bhar jayengi......
mehsus karo ankho ko bandh kiye apni,
tumhe meri pyaar ki duniya nazar aayengi.....
ye chahat hi to hai meri jo sirf tumse hai,
chahat meri tumhe mere aur kareeb layengi....
agar mil jaye jo is safar me sath tumhara,
meri zindagi pyaar se yun guzar jayengi......
door na hona kabhi tu mujhse zindgi me,
mujhse door jake tu bhi reh nahi payengi......
khuda kare bas meri dua kubul ho jaye,
vishwas hai k meri "jaan" mujhe mil hi jayengi....
A SHAYRI FOR HER....................................
meri jaan mujhe mil hi jayengi.................
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
|
|
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 3,896
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: currntly : Italy and ( home'town : Jaipur )
Rep Power: 33
|
how romentic yaar -
29th October 2006, 09:22 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by dhavalrami4you
agar mil jayenga zindagi me tera sahara,
meri zindagi jaise khusiyo se bhar jayengi......
mehsus karo ankho ko bandh kiye apni,
tumhe meri pyaar ki duniya nazar aayengi.....
ye chahat hi to hai meri jo sirf tumse hai,
chahat meri tumhe mere aur kareeb layengi....
agar mil jaye jo is safar me sath tumhara,
meri zindagi pyaar se yun guzar jayengi......
door na hona kabhi tu mujhse zindgi me,
mujhse door jake tu bhi reh nahi payengi......
khuda kare bas meri dua kubul ho jaye,
vishwas hai k meri "jaan" mujhe mil hi jayengi....
A SHAYRI FOR HER....................................
meri jaan mujhe mil hi jayengi.................
|
oh my god,
ur shayri is too gr8888888888888888888888......supab...........baho t pyara likha hai..........ye "jaan" kon hai
khuda kare apki jaan apko mil jaye. apki dua kabuul ho...............meri daad kabuul kijiye ji........ok ji
grazie
aapki dost
pooja
===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
|
|
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 25
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: lucknow
Rep Power: 0
|
hi -
29th October 2006, 11:47 PM
hi dhaval hope u r fine and remember me still..well i am busy in my 12..so didnt get time to come here anyways read some of ur posts today..i liked them..keep up the good work..belated happy diwali...
bhoomija
|
|
|
|
|
Adhoori Aas
Offline
Posts: 1,543
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: india , shivpuri
Rep Power: 31
|
30th October 2006, 09:20 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by dhavalrami4you
agar mil jayenga zindagi me tera sahara,
meri zindagi jaise khusiyo se bhar jayengi......
mehsus karo ankho ko bandh kiye apni,
tumhe meri pyaar ki duniya nazar aayengi.....
ye chahat hi to hai meri jo sirf tumse hai,
chahat meri tumhe mere aur kareeb layengi....
agar mil jaye jo is safar me sath tumhara,
meri zindagi pyaar se yun guzar jayengi......
door na hona kabhi tu mujhse zindgi me,
mujhse door jake tu bhi reh nahi payengi......
khuda kare bas meri dua kubul ho jaye,
vishwas hai k meri "jaan" mujhe mil hi jayengi....
A SHAYRI FOR HER....................................
meri jaan mujhe mil hi jayengi.................
|
dhaval mere yaar
bahut acchi gazal ban pati agar tune yahan kafiye ka dhyan rakah hota .
main tujhe hamesha kahta hoo.n ki jara sa radeef or kafiya ka dhayan raka kar or koi technical bato.n ka dyan bhale hi na rakah jaye per kam se kam ye to hona hi chahiye........... sorry yaar mujhe kahna pad raha hai ki main aaj thoda sa nirash hoo.n ise padkar.........................................
per hamesha ki tarah main fir bhi yahi kahoo.nga ki ehsas bade hi pyare hain keep it up keep and keep enjoy dost great
bye
" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab
Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya
|
|
|
|
|
Moderator
Offline
Posts: 15,199
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Chandigarh (Mohali)
Rep Power: 63
|
30th October 2006, 02:46 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by dhavalrami4you
agar mil jayenga zindagi me tera sahara,
meri zindagi jaise khusiyo se bhar jayengi......
mehsus karo ankho ko bandh kiye apni,
tumhe meri pyaar ki duniya nazar aayengi.....
ye chahat hi to hai meri jo sirf tumse hai,
chahat meri tumhe mere aur kareeb layengi....
agar mil jaye jo is safar me sath tumhara,
meri zindagi pyaar se yun guzar jayengi......
door na hona kabhi tu mujhse zindgi me,
mujhse door jake tu bhi reh nahi payengi......
khuda kare bas meri dua kubul ho jaye,
vishwas hai k meri "jaan" mujhe mil hi jayengi....
A SHAYRI FOR HER....................................
meri jaan mujhe mil hi jayengi.................
|
dear dhaval
bahut badiya likha kahi kahi kafiya se chuk gaye ho par jo bhi hai mujhe tumharey ahsaas bahut acchey lagtey hai.n, accha likhtey ho. yu hi dil lagga kar likhtey raho aur pls request hai ki thoda thoda sa pad bhi liya karo, abhi shayri se jayada jaroori tumhari study hai. us par dhayan diya karo aur kuch samey shayri ko diya karo. samjey.......chottu bhai.
lots of love
tumhari didi
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
|
|
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 57
Join Date: Sep 2006
Rep Power: 18
|
30th October 2006, 11:56 PM
acha laga padhke dhavalji
khuda hafiz.......
khwahish--Ek safar teri Zindagi ka...
|
|
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 458
Join Date: Oct 2006
Rep Power: 18
|
31st October 2006, 12:19 AM
bahut hi acha likha hai
it's too good dhavalji
apki dost
sandhya
|
|
|
|
|
Shayri.com Moderator
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
|
31st October 2006, 09:42 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by pooja4588
oh my god,
ur shayri is too gr8888888888888888888888......supab...........baho t pyara likha hai..........ye "jaan" kon hai
khuda kare apki jaan apko mil jaye. apki dua kabuul ho...............meri daad kabuul kijiye ji........ok ji
grazie
aapki dost
pooja
|
"jaan " jaan hai
aur ha abhi maine aapki fir sedard wali peshkas padhi aapko samjhane se kuch fayda nahi is peshkas se ye pata chalta hai
don worry likhti raho dhaval ko to bolne ki aaadat hai aapko kya fark padta hai
aap yaha aayi aapka bahot bahot shukriya pooja ji
main aapka bahot hi shukraguzar hu k aap apna kimti wqt nikal kar yaha tasreef layi
khus rahiye
aapka dost
dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
|
|
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 3,896
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: currntly : Italy and ( home'town : Jaipur )
Rep Power: 33
|
31st October 2006, 10:35 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by dhavalrami4you
"jaan " jaan hai
aur ha abhi maine aapki fir sedard wali peshkas padhi aapko samjhane se kuch fayda nahi is peshkas se ye pata chalta hai
don worry likhti raho dhaval ko to bolne ki aaadat hai aapko kya fark padta hai
aap yaha aayi aapka bahot bahot shukriya pooja ji
main aapka bahot hi shukraguzar hu k aap apna kimti wqt nikal kar yaha tasreef layi
khus rahiye
aapka dost
dhaval
|
kimti waqt apno ke liye nikala jata hai, lekin aaj to.................
vo shayri meine likhi lekin khud pe nahi. agar koi dard likhe to iska matlab ye to nahi ki use real me dard hai mein to sirf likhti hu aur usme mere ehasaas hote hai meri life meri ziindagi nehi hoti.
grazie
aapki dost
pooja
===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
|
|
|
|
|
Shayri.com Moderator
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
|
2nd November 2006, 07:11 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by bhoomija
hi dhaval hope u r fine and remember me still..well i am busy in my 12..so didnt get time to come here anyways read some of ur posts today..i liked them..keep up the good work..belated happy diwali...
bhoomija
|
hi bhoomija wow!!!!!!! aapko yaha dekh ke bahot hi achha laga yaar kya baat hai, aur aap jaisi dost ko kaise bhul sakta hu bhala
aap bahot din baad dikhai di yaha par aur apne resason bhi bataya hai , aur aap ne meri peshkas ko dil se padha aur pasnd bhi kiya bahot hi achha laga bhoomija ji
apne mere liye wqt nikala bahot hi achha laga basaise hi aate rahiye aur padhte rahiyenga
happy belated diwali to you
apna khayal rakhiye
khus rahiye
aapka dost
dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
|
|
|
|
|
Shayri.com Moderator
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
|
6th November 2006, 09:35 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by dilip200
dhaval mere yaar
bahut acchi gazal ban pati agar tune yahan kafiye ka dhyan rakah hota .
main tujhe hamesha kahta hoo.n ki jara sa radeef or kafiya ka dhayan raka kar or koi technical bato.n ka dyan bhale hi na rakah jaye per kam se kam ye to hona hi chahiye........... sorry yaar mujhe kahna pad raha hai ki main aaj thoda sa nirash hoo.n ise padkar.........................................
per hamesha ki tarah main fir bhi yahi kahoo.nga ki ehsas bade hi pyare hain keep it up keep and keep enjoy dost great
bye
|
areeeeeeee sorry kis liye bhai???
mee dost sahi to bola hai kafiya aur radeef me gadbad hai
bilkul sahi yaar aap hamaehs mujhe isi bat ko samjhane kis kosish karte ho par maine last do peshkas me aapki har baton ko dhayan me rakhke hi banayi thi aur sume kuch sudhar jaroor aaya hai
bas asie hi dost ko samjhate rahiyenga taki main kam se kam galtiya karu
khus rahiye
aapka shaitaan
dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
|
|
|
|
|
Shayri.com Moderator
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
|
6th November 2006, 09:41 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sunita virender
dear dhaval
bahut badiya likha kahi kahi kafiya se chuk gaye ho par jo bhi hai mujhe tumharey ahsaas bahut acchey lagtey hai.n, accha likhtey ho. yu hi dil lagga kar likhtey raho aur pls request hai ki thoda thoda sa pad bhi liya karo, abhi shayri se jayada jaroori tumhari study hai. us par dhayan diya karo aur kuch samey shayri ko diya karo. samjey.......chottu bhai.
lots of love
tumhari didi
|
sister pranaam
kaisi hai aap
chhotu bhai ko samjh me aa gaya apane jo samjhaya hai wo
aur main kosish karunga k mujhese kam se kam galti ho aur har shwer mukammal bane
aur aapki bat ko main sada dhayn me rakhunga bas aise hi chhotu bhai ka sath dete rahiyenga.
khus rahiye sister
aapka chhotasa bhai aur dost
dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
Last edited by Dhaval; 6th November 2006 at 09:43 PM..
|
|
|
|
|
Shayri.com Moderator
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
|
6th November 2006, 09:44 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Khwahish
acha laga padhke dhavalji
khuda hafiz.......
|
khawahish ji kais hai aap?
aapka jawab dekh ke bada achha lagta hai bas aise hi is dost ka housla badhate rahiyenga
khuda aapko hamesha khus rakhen
aapka dost
dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
|
|
|
|
|
Shayri.com Moderator
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
|
6th November 2006, 09:46 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Sandhya1
bahut hi acha likha hai
it's too good dhavalji
apki dost
sandhya
|
dear sandhya
bahot hi khusi hoti hai jab aapko meri post pe dekhta hu bas aise hi meri peshkas ko yuhi padhte rahiyenga
khus rahiye aap sada
apna khayal rakhiye
aapka dost
dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
|
|
|
|
|
Shayri.com Moderator
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
|
6th November 2006, 09:48 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by pooja4588
kimti waqt apno ke liye nikala jata hai, lekin aaj to.................
vo shayri meine likhi lekin khud pe nahi. agar koi dard likhe to iska matlab ye to nahi ki use real me dard hai mein to sirf likhti hu aur usme mere ehasaas hote hai meri life meri ziindagi nehi hoti.
grazie
aapki dost
pooja
|
its ok
khus rahiye
aapka dost
dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
|
|
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 2,269
Join Date: Jul 2005
Location: New Delhi.(India)
Rep Power: 37
|
22nd October 2007, 07:22 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by dhavalrami4you
agar mil jayenga zindagi me tera sahara,
meri zindagi jaise khusiyo se bhar jayengi......
mehsus karo ankho ko bandh kiye apni,
tumhe meri pyaar ki duniya nazar aayengi.....
ye chahat hi to hai meri jo sirf tumse hai,
chahat meri tumhe mere aur kareeb layengi....
agar mil jaye jo is safar me sath tumhara,
meri zindagi pyaar se yun guzar jayengi......
door na hona kabhi tu mujhse zindgi me,
mujhse door jake tu bhi reh nahi payengi......
khuda kare bas meri dua kubul ho jaye,
vishwas hai k meri "jaan" mujhe mil hi jayengi....
A SHAYRI FOR HER....................................
meri jaan mujhe mil hi jayengi.................
|
hello ji
Dhaval ji
sorry for late reply (ek saal baad)
koi padh raha tha isiliye meine bhi padh liya
bahut pyara likha hai
per jiske liye likkha hai us tak pahuncha bhi hai ya nahi
shayad pahunch gaya hoga ab to ik saal ho gaya ji
likhte rahiye yu hin
door na hona kabhi tu mujhse zindgi me,
mujhse door jake tu bhi reh nahi payengi......
khuda kare bas meri dua kubul ho jaye,
vishwas hai k meri "jaan" mujhe mil hi jayengi....
very nice
tc ji
SHWETA
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai
uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
wo pyar deewana hota hai
kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
wo kalaam shayraana hota hai
jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai...
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
duniya mein kitna gam hai
apna gam phir bhi kam hai
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
|
|
|
|
|
trail of thoughts
Offline
Posts: 387
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: in the hopes of my family
Rep Power: 22
|
23rd October 2007, 06:32 AM
dhaval bahut achcha laga aapki yeh shayri paRhni...
thanks for sharing it...
regards
aarya
khwaabo.n ke par kabhii kaTne na denaa
inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii
lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii
ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa
inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii
regards aarya
|
|
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 1,008
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: India (Surat)
Rep Power: 21
|
25th October 2007, 10:22 AM
jai mata di dhaval bhaii
Bhaii aapki ye itni behtareen rachna se hum aaj rubaru hue hai, jo ki aapne ise bhut pehle post kiya tha....
der se hi sahi par aaj dil ko sukun dene wale alfaazoN ko aaj hamari aankho ko dhundh hi liye..
bhai aapka tah-e-dil se sukhriya ki itni gehrai se dil se nikle alfaazon se aapne apni rachna ko sajaya hai..
hamien bahut achchhi lagi aapki ye rachna
yuhi mehfil mein ujala karte rahiyega
aapka dost
Merul
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du,
Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha.
Merul~~~~~~~~~~>
|
|
|
|
|
Shayri.com Moderator
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
|
26th October 2007, 09:42 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by kuhulika
hello ji
Dhaval ji
sorry for late reply (ek saal baad)
koi padh raha tha isiliye meine bhi padh liya
bahut pyara likha hai
per jiske liye likkha hai us tak pahuncha bhi hai ya nahi
shayad pahunch gaya hoga ab to ik saal ho gaya ji
likhte rahiye yu hin
door na hona kabhi tu mujhse zindgi me,
mujhse door jake tu bhi reh nahi payengi......
khuda kare bas meri dua kubul ho jaye,
vishwas hai k meri "jaan" mujhe mil hi jayengi....
very nice
tc ji
|
Shweta jee :
aik saal ke baad hi sahii aapne DhooNDh ke ees peShkaSh ko paRhaa kuch yaadeN taazaah ho gaYii.. maiN SHuKraGuzaar huuN aapkaa.. aur ab mere paas ussey siwaay duaaoN ke aur kuch hai nahiiN dene ko..
SHuKriyaaH aapkaa..
apnaa Khayaal raKheN.. KhuSh raheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
Last edited by Dhaval; 26th October 2007 at 09:47 PM..
|
|
|
|
|
Shayri.com Moderator
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
|
26th October 2007, 09:45 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by aarya
dhaval bahut achcha laga aapki yeh shayri paRhni...
thanks for sharing it...
regards
aarya
|
Aarya didi :
namaskaaR.. kaise haiN aap?
aur kahaaN haii aap?? baRe dinoN baaad aapkaa jawaab naseeb huaa merii ko'ii kosiSh ko.. baRii KhuShii hu'ii.. ummid kartaa huuN haMeSHaa ki taraH YuuNhi aage bhee saath miltaa raheNgaa aapkaa..
apnaa Khayaal raKheN..KhuSh raheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat... jai Shree kriShnaa
aapka
~ Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
|
|
|
|
|
Shayri.com Moderator
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
|
26th October 2007, 09:50 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Merul
jai mata di dhaval bhaii
Bhaii aapki ye itni behtareen rachna se hum aaj rubaru hue hai, jo ki aapne ise bhut pehle post kiya tha....
der se hi sahi par aaj dil ko sukun dene wale alfaazoN ko aaj hamari aankho ko dhundh hi liye..
bhai aapka tah-e-dil se sukhriya ki itni gehrai se dil se nikle alfaazon se aapne apni rachna ko sajaya hai..
hamien bahut achchhi lagi aapki ye rachna
yuhi mehfil mein ujala karte rahiyega
aapka dost
Merul
|
Merul BHaa'ii :
mere iN alfaazoN ko aapke dil meiN jaGah mili hay mere liye yahi kaafii hay..bas yeH saath YuuNhi banaaye raKhiYeNgaa..ShuKriyaaH dil sey paRhne ke liYe..
jai mata ji..
KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal rakheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
|
|
|
|
|
Moderator
Offline
Posts: 15,199
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Chandigarh (Mohali)
Rep Power: 63
|
17th October 2014, 02:42 PM
Dhaval.....
aaj teri yeh poetry phir se padi 8 saal pehle ki likhi hue...shayri to acchi hai hi, kai aise review hai es meiN jinko padkar muje akele hi hasi aa rhi hai...
love u chottu
sister
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
|
|
|
|
|
Shayri.com Moderator
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
|
17th October 2014, 06:11 PM
sister...
pramaam
maiN kyaa kahuuN ab.. aaNkhoN ke saamne guzre huye sabhee pal saamne aa gaye... ik lamba safar aur bahot si yaadoN ke saath... maiN apne aapko bahot hi Khushnaseeb samjhtaa huuN... zindagee ke anmol rishte mujhe is pariwaar ne diye haiN...
Thank you so much .. mere chehre par smile laane ke liye
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
ChhoTu
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
|
|
|
|
|
An Incomplite Dream
Offline
Posts: 3,017
Join Date: Mar 2009
Rep Power: 30
|
18th October 2014, 01:01 AM
Dhaval Bhai Aadaab ... !
Pahle to aameen kahuNga bhai ke aapko aapki jaan mil jaye... May be abtak to mil bhi gayi hoNgi ... yeH kalaam 8 saal purani hai
Wel behad khoobsurat ahsaas O khayaal piroye haiN aapne ...
Sabhi sher tareef ke qabil hai ...
Meri daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ...
Likhte rahiye ... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye ...
Shaad O Aabaad rahiye ...
Khuda Hafez ....
|
|
|
|
|
~$uper M0der@tor~
Offline
Posts: 8,417
Join Date: Feb 2006
Rep Power: 61
|
18th October 2014, 09:52 AM
waahhh dhavaal bhai...... kya khoob kalaam se aapne mahfil ko sajaya hai......
deri se pesh hone ke liye maafi chahenge bhai...... bahot hi accha likha hai aapne....
likhte rahiye
Shaad.....
|
|
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 409
Join Date: Nov 2006
Rep Power: 26
|
18th October 2014, 11:49 AM
Achchi peshkash aap ki Dhavalji
Mubarak ho
Mujeeb Parwaaz.
|
|
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 3,896
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: currntly : Italy and ( home'town : Jaipur )
Rep Power: 33
|
18th October 2014, 05:09 PM
HAhahaha... dhaval tumhari ye shayri mujheaaj wapas dikhai di ... hahaha sab kuch nazro ke saamne agaya ek flshback ki tarha....
or Sunita di, sahi kaha apne... hansi mujhe bhi agai ye padhke i mean niche ko comments padh ke... bt no regrtz ....
Pooja
===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
|
|
|
|
|
Shayri.com Moderator
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
|
18th October 2014, 09:28 PM
sameer bhaii:
maiN ek dam Theek huuN... bhaii 8 saal beet gaye... aapne saheeh farmaayaa...
aapko merii koshish pasand aayi bahot khushii huii
saath dete rahiye
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
|
|
|
|
|
Shayri.com Moderator
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
|
18th October 2014, 09:30 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
waahhh dhavaal bhai...... kya khoob kalaam se aapne mahfil ko sajaya hai......
deri se pesh hone ke liye maafi chahenge bhai...... bahot hi accha likha hai aapne....
likhte rahiye
Shaad.....
|
shaad bhai
bahot bahot shukriyaah merii yeh koshish aapko pasand aayi
duaaon ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
|
|
|
|
|
Shayri.com Moderator
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
|
18th October 2014, 09:31 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by mujib66
Achchi peshkash aap ki Dhavalji
Mubarak ho
Mujeeb Parwaaz.
|
shukriyaah mujeeb bhaii
saath dete rahiyegaa aage bhee
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
|
|
|
|
|
Shayri.com Moderator
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
|
18th October 2014, 09:34 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by pooja_d
HAhahaha... dhaval tumhari ye shayri mujheaaj wapas dikhai di ... hahaha sab kuch nazro ke saamne agaya ek flshback ki tarha....
or Sunita di, sahi kaha apne... hansi mujhe bhi agai ye padhke i mean niche ko comments padh ke... bt no regrtz ....
Pooja
|
pooja
sahee kaha tumne.. hasna hi zindagii haii aur tumhare peele daant dikh rahe hain lagta hai tumhe ab priya didi ko dee huii colgate deni padengi.. main priya didi ko bolta huun tumhe wo colgate de de daant chamkaane ke liye hahaha
comments padh ke sach me hansi aayi chehre par..
khush raho
tumhara dost
~Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
|
|
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 3,896
Join Date: Jul 2006
Location: currntly : Italy and ( home'town : Jaipur )
Rep Power: 33
|
22nd October 2014, 01:56 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Dhaval
pooja
sahee kaha tumne.. hasna hi zindagii haii aur tumhare peele daant dikh rahe hain lagta hai tumhe ab priya didi ko dee huii colgate deni padengi.. main priya didi ko bolta huun tumhe wo colgate de de daant chamkaane ke liye hahaha
comments padh ke sach me hansi aayi chehre par..
khush raho
tumhara dost
~Dhaval
|
ha haa ..very funny u mr Rami ....
mere daanto ke pichhe mat pdo tum ab ..mere daant ekdam chamchamate hue swasth hain..to ye colgt priya di ke liye hi rakho or main unse kahungi ke wo tumko hi wapas bhej den colgt...hahahaha...roz toothpaste karna...
or bolo ab
Pooja
===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
|
|
|
Thread Tools |
|
Display Modes |
Rate This Thread |
Linear Mode
|
|
Posting Rules
|
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
HTML code is Off
|
|
|
Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5 Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com
|
|