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Thumbs up "MERI JAAN MUJHE MIL HI JAYENGI................" a shayri for her.......with u always - 29th October 2006, 09:07 PM

agar mil jayenga zindagi me tera sahara,
meri zindagi jaise khusiyo se bhar jayengi......

mehsus karo ankho ko bandh kiye apni,
tumhe meri pyaar ki duniya nazar aayengi.....

ye chahat hi to hai meri jo sirf tumse hai,
chahat meri tumhe mere aur kareeb layengi....

agar mil jaye jo is safar me sath tumhara,
meri zindagi pyaar se yun guzar jayengi......

door na hona kabhi tu mujhse zindgi me,
mujhse door jake tu bhi reh nahi payengi......

khuda kare bas meri dua kubul ho jaye,
vishwas hai k meri "jaan" mujhe mil hi jayengi....




A SHAYRI FOR HER....................................


meri jaan mujhe mil hi jayengi.................


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how romentic yaar - 29th October 2006, 09:22 PM

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agar mil jayenga zindagi me tera sahara,
meri zindagi jaise khusiyo se bhar jayengi......

mehsus karo ankho ko bandh kiye apni,
tumhe meri pyaar ki duniya nazar aayengi.....

ye chahat hi to hai meri jo sirf tumse hai,
chahat meri tumhe mere aur kareeb layengi....

agar mil jaye jo is safar me sath tumhara,
meri zindagi pyaar se yun guzar jayengi......

door na hona kabhi tu mujhse zindgi me,
mujhse door jake tu bhi reh nahi payengi......

khuda kare bas meri dua kubul ho jaye,
vishwas hai k meri "jaan" mujhe mil hi jayengi....




A SHAYRI FOR HER....................................


meri jaan mujhe mil hi jayengi.................
oh my god,

ur shayri is too gr8888888888888888888888......supab...........baho t pyara likha hai..........ye "jaan" kon hai

khuda kare apki jaan apko mil jaye. apki dua kabuul ho...............meri daad kabuul kijiye ji........ok ji

grazie

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hi - 29th October 2006, 11:47 PM

hi dhaval hope u r fine and remember me still..well i am busy in my 12..so didnt get time to come here anyways read some of ur posts today..i liked them..keep up the good work..belated happy diwali...

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agar mil jayenga zindagi me tera sahara,
meri zindagi jaise khusiyo se bhar jayengi......

mehsus karo ankho ko bandh kiye apni,
tumhe meri pyaar ki duniya nazar aayengi.....

ye chahat hi to hai meri jo sirf tumse hai,
chahat meri tumhe mere aur kareeb layengi....

agar mil jaye jo is safar me sath tumhara,
meri zindagi pyaar se yun guzar jayengi......

door na hona kabhi tu mujhse zindgi me,
mujhse door jake tu bhi reh nahi payengi......

khuda kare bas meri dua kubul ho jaye,
vishwas hai k meri "jaan" mujhe mil hi jayengi....




A SHAYRI FOR HER....................................


meri jaan mujhe mil hi jayengi.................

dhaval mere yaar
bahut acchi gazal ban pati agar tune yahan kafiye ka dhyan rakah hota .
main tujhe hamesha kahta hoo.n ki jara sa radeef or kafiya ka dhayan raka kar or koi technical bato.n ka dyan bhale hi na rakah jaye per kam se kam ye to hona hi chahiye........... sorry yaar mujhe kahna pad raha hai ki main aaj thoda sa nirash hoo.n ise padkar.........................................
per hamesha ki tarah main fir bhi yahi kahoo.nga ki ehsas bade hi pyare hain keep it up keep and keep enjoy dost great
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30th October 2006, 02:46 PM

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agar mil jayenga zindagi me tera sahara,
meri zindagi jaise khusiyo se bhar jayengi......

mehsus karo ankho ko bandh kiye apni,
tumhe meri pyaar ki duniya nazar aayengi.....

ye chahat hi to hai meri jo sirf tumse hai,
chahat meri tumhe mere aur kareeb layengi....

agar mil jaye jo is safar me sath tumhara,
meri zindagi pyaar se yun guzar jayengi......

door na hona kabhi tu mujhse zindgi me,
mujhse door jake tu bhi reh nahi payengi......

khuda kare bas meri dua kubul ho jaye,
vishwas hai k meri "jaan" mujhe mil hi jayengi....




A SHAYRI FOR HER....................................


meri jaan mujhe mil hi jayengi.................
dear dhaval

bahut badiya likha kahi kahi kafiya se chuk gaye ho par jo bhi hai mujhe tumharey ahsaas bahut acchey lagtey hai.n, accha likhtey ho. yu hi dil lagga kar likhtey raho aur pls request hai ki thoda thoda sa pad bhi liya karo, abhi shayri se jayada jaroori tumhari study hai. us par dhayan diya karo aur kuch samey shayri ko diya karo. samjey.......chottu bhai.

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acha laga padhke dhavalji

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bahut hi acha likha hai
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oh my god,

ur shayri is too gr8888888888888888888888......supab...........baho t pyara likha hai..........ye "jaan" kon hai

khuda kare apki jaan apko mil jaye. apki dua kabuul ho...............meri daad kabuul kijiye ji........ok ji

grazie

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"jaan " jaan hai

aur ha abhi maine aapki fir sedard wali peshkas padhi aapko samjhane se kuch fayda nahi is peshkas se ye pata chalta hai

don worry likhti raho dhaval ko to bolne ki aaadat hai aapko kya fark padta hai


aap yaha aayi aapka bahot bahot shukriya pooja ji


main aapka bahot hi shukraguzar hu k aap apna kimti wqt nikal kar yaha tasreef layi

khus rahiye

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31st October 2006, 10:35 PM

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"jaan " jaan hai

aur ha abhi maine aapki fir sedard wali peshkas padhi aapko samjhane se kuch fayda nahi is peshkas se ye pata chalta hai

don worry likhti raho dhaval ko to bolne ki aaadat hai aapko kya fark padta hai


aap yaha aayi aapka bahot bahot shukriya pooja ji


main aapka bahot hi shukraguzar hu k aap apna kimti wqt nikal kar yaha tasreef layi

khus rahiye

aapka dost
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kimti waqt apno ke liye nikala jata hai, lekin aaj to.................
vo shayri meine likhi lekin khud pe nahi. agar koi dard likhe to iska matlab ye to nahi ki use real me dard hai mein to sirf likhti hu aur usme mere ehasaas hote hai meri life meri ziindagi nehi hoti.

grazie

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hi dhaval hope u r fine and remember me still..well i am busy in my 12..so didnt get time to come here anyways read some of ur posts today..i liked them..keep up the good work..belated happy diwali...

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hi bhoomija wow!!!!!!! aapko yaha dekh ke bahot hi achha laga yaar kya baat hai, aur aap jaisi dost ko kaise bhul sakta hu bhala

aap bahot din baad dikhai di yaha par aur apne resason bhi bataya hai , aur aap ne meri peshkas ko dil se padha aur pasnd bhi kiya bahot hi achha laga bhoomija ji


apne mere liye wqt nikala bahot hi achha laga basaise hi aate rahiye aur padhte rahiyenga

happy belated diwali to you

apna khayal rakhiye

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bahut acchi gazal ban pati agar tune yahan kafiye ka dhyan rakah hota .
main tujhe hamesha kahta hoo.n ki jara sa radeef or kafiya ka dhayan raka kar or koi technical bato.n ka dyan bhale hi na rakah jaye per kam se kam ye to hona hi chahiye........... sorry yaar mujhe kahna pad raha hai ki main aaj thoda sa nirash hoo.n ise padkar.........................................
per hamesha ki tarah main fir bhi yahi kahoo.nga ki ehsas bade hi pyare hain keep it up keep and keep enjoy dost great
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areeeeeeee sorry kis liye bhai???

mee dost sahi to bola hai kafiya aur radeef me gadbad hai

bilkul sahi yaar aap hamaehs mujhe isi bat ko samjhane kis kosish karte ho par maine last do peshkas me aapki har baton ko dhayan me rakhke hi banayi thi aur sume kuch sudhar jaroor aaya hai
bas asie hi dost ko samjhate rahiyenga taki main kam se kam galtiya karu

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dear dhaval

bahut badiya likha kahi kahi kafiya se chuk gaye ho par jo bhi hai mujhe tumharey ahsaas bahut acchey lagtey hai.n, accha likhtey ho. yu hi dil lagga kar likhtey raho aur pls request hai ki thoda thoda sa pad bhi liya karo, abhi shayri se jayada jaroori tumhari study hai. us par dhayan diya karo aur kuch samey shayri ko diya karo. samjey.......chottu bhai.

lots of love

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kaisi hai aap

chhotu bhai ko samjh me aa gaya apane jo samjhaya hai wo

aur main kosish karunga k mujhese kam se kam galti ho aur har shwer mukammal bane

aur aapki bat ko main sada dhayn me rakhunga bas aise hi chhotu bhai ka sath dete rahiyenga.



khus rahiye sister

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khuda hafiz.......


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kimti waqt apno ke liye nikala jata hai, lekin aaj to.................
vo shayri meine likhi lekin khud pe nahi. agar koi dard likhe to iska matlab ye to nahi ki use real me dard hai mein to sirf likhti hu aur usme mere ehasaas hote hai meri life meri ziindagi nehi hoti.

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agar mil jayenga zindagi me tera sahara,
meri zindagi jaise khusiyo se bhar jayengi......

mehsus karo ankho ko bandh kiye apni,
tumhe meri pyaar ki duniya nazar aayengi.....

ye chahat hi to hai meri jo sirf tumse hai,
chahat meri tumhe mere aur kareeb layengi....

agar mil jaye jo is safar me sath tumhara,
meri zindagi pyaar se yun guzar jayengi......

door na hona kabhi tu mujhse zindgi me,
mujhse door jake tu bhi reh nahi payengi......

khuda kare bas meri dua kubul ho jaye,
vishwas hai k meri "jaan" mujhe mil hi jayengi....




A SHAYRI FOR HER....................................


meri jaan mujhe mil hi jayengi.................



hello ji
Dhaval ji
sorry for late reply (ek saal baad)
koi padh raha tha isiliye meine bhi padh liya

bahut pyara likha hai
per jiske liye likkha hai us tak pahuncha bhi hai ya nahi
shayad pahunch gaya hoga ab to ik saal ho gaya ji

likhte rahiye yu hin

door na hona kabhi tu mujhse zindgi me,
mujhse door jake tu bhi reh nahi payengi......

khuda kare bas meri dua kubul ho jaye,
vishwas hai k meri "jaan" mujhe mil hi jayengi....

very nice


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dhaval bahut achcha laga aapki yeh shayri paRhni...

thanks for sharing it...

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jai mata di dhaval bhaii

Bhaii aapki ye itni behtareen rachna se hum aaj rubaru hue hai, jo ki aapne ise bhut pehle post kiya tha....

der se hi sahi par aaj dil ko sukun dene wale alfaazoN ko aaj hamari aankho ko dhundh hi liye..

bhai aapka tah-e-dil se sukhriya ki itni gehrai se dil se nikle alfaazon se aapne apni rachna ko sajaya hai..

hamien bahut achchhi lagi aapki ye rachna
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Dhaval ji
sorry for late reply (ek saal baad)
koi padh raha tha isiliye meine bhi padh liya

bahut pyara likha hai
per jiske liye likkha hai us tak pahuncha bhi hai ya nahi
shayad pahunch gaya hoga ab to ik saal ho gaya ji

likhte rahiye yu hin

door na hona kabhi tu mujhse zindgi me,
mujhse door jake tu bhi reh nahi payengi......

khuda kare bas meri dua kubul ho jaye,
vishwas hai k meri "jaan" mujhe mil hi jayengi....

very nice


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SHuKriyaaH aapkaa..

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namaskaaR.. kaise haiN aap?

aur kahaaN haii aap?? baRe dinoN baaad aapkaa jawaab naseeb huaa merii ko'ii kosiSh ko.. baRii KhuShii hu'ii.. ummid kartaa huuN haMeSHaa ki taraH YuuNhi aage bhee saath miltaa raheNgaa aapkaa..

apnaa Khayaal raKheN..KhuSh raheN

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Bhaii aapki ye itni behtareen rachna se hum aaj rubaru hue hai, jo ki aapne ise bhut pehle post kiya tha....

der se hi sahi par aaj dil ko sukun dene wale alfaazoN ko aaj hamari aankho ko dhundh hi liye..

bhai aapka tah-e-dil se sukhriya ki itni gehrai se dil se nikle alfaazon se aapne apni rachna ko sajaya hai..

hamien bahut achchhi lagi aapki ye rachna
yuhi mehfil mein ujala karte rahiyega
aapka dost
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Merul BHaa'ii :

mere iN alfaazoN ko aapke dil meiN jaGah mili hay mere liye yahi kaafii hay..bas yeH saath YuuNhi banaaye raKhiYeNgaa..ShuKriyaaH dil sey paRhne ke liYe..
jai mata ji..

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aaj teri yeh poetry phir se padi 8 saal pehle ki likhi hue...shayri to acchi hai hi, kai aise review hai es meiN jinko padkar muje akele hi hasi aa rhi hai...


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maiN kyaa kahuuN ab.. aaNkhoN ke saamne guzre huye sabhee pal saamne aa gaye... ik lamba safar aur bahot si yaadoN ke saath... maiN apne aapko bahot hi Khushnaseeb samjhtaa huuN... zindagee ke anmol rishte mujhe is pariwaar ne diye haiN...

Thank you so much .. mere chehre par smile laane ke liye

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Dhaval Bhai Aadaab ... !

Pahle to aameen kahuNga bhai ke aapko aapki jaan mil jaye... May be abtak to mil bhi gayi hoNgi ... yeH kalaam 8 saal purani hai

Wel behad khoobsurat ahsaas O khayaal piroye haiN aapne ...
Sabhi sher tareef ke qabil hai ...

Meri daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ...
Likhte rahiye ... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye ...

Shaad O Aabaad rahiye ...
Khuda Hafez ....


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waahhh dhavaal bhai...... kya khoob kalaam se aapne mahfil ko sajaya hai......

deri se pesh hone ke liye maafi chahenge bhai...... bahot hi accha likha hai aapne....

likhte rahiye

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HAhahaha... dhaval tumhari ye shayri mujheaaj wapas dikhai di ... hahaha sab kuch nazro ke saamne agaya ek flshback ki tarha....

or Sunita di, sahi kaha apne... hansi mujhe bhi agai ye padhke i mean niche ko comments padh ke... bt no regrtz ....

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Pahle to aameen kahuNga bhai ke aapko aapki jaan mil jaye... May be abtak to mil bhi gayi hoNgi ... yeH kalaam 8 saal purani hai

Wel behad khoobsurat ahsaas O khayaal piroye haiN aapne ...
Sabhi sher tareef ke qabil hai ...

Meri daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye ...
Likhte rahiye ... bazm ko roshan karte rahiye ...

Shaad O Aabaad rahiye ...
Khuda Hafez ....
sameer bhaii:

maiN ek dam Theek huuN... bhaii 8 saal beet gaye... aapne saheeh farmaayaa...

aapko merii koshish pasand aayi bahot khushii huii

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likhte rahiye

Shaad.....
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Mujeeb Parwaaz.
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HAhahaha... dhaval tumhari ye shayri mujheaaj wapas dikhai di ... hahaha sab kuch nazro ke saamne agaya ek flshback ki tarha....

or Sunita di, sahi kaha apne... hansi mujhe bhi agai ye padhke i mean niche ko comments padh ke... bt no regrtz ....

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sahee kaha tumne.. hasna hi zindagii haii aur tumhare peele daant dikh rahe hain lagta hai tumhe ab priya didi ko dee huii colgate deni padengi.. main priya didi ko bolta huun tumhe wo colgate de de daant chamkaane ke liye hahaha

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sahee kaha tumne.. hasna hi zindagii haii aur tumhare peele daant dikh rahe hain lagta hai tumhe ab priya didi ko dee huii colgate deni padengi.. main priya didi ko bolta huun tumhe wo colgate de de daant chamkaane ke liye hahaha

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ha haa ..very funny u mr Rami ....

mere daanto ke pichhe mat pdo tum ab ..mere daant ekdam chamchamate hue swasth hain..to ye colgt priya di ke liye hi rakho or main unse kahungi ke wo tumko hi wapas bhej den colgt...hahahaha...roz toothpaste karna...

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