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Wink Mein (its me Frens):) - 28th January 2005, 02:55 PM
Hey Frens...Aj meine kuch likha hai ...khud par!


Mein!


Mein kabhi idhar toh kabhi udhar
Mein kabhi zameen pe toh kabhi asmano par...
Mein khoyi khoyi si kabhi...toh kabhi sambhlii hui ghar par..
Mein khamoshi kabhi toh kabhi...Zharno ki zharr..zharr..
Mein kabhi khayal bujha bujha sa toh kabhi hasiN vaadiyon ka manzarr...
Mein kabhi berang maahaul toh kabhi besabab mehekti Nazar
Mein geet tufanni..toh kabhi shhhhhhhhhh.....shaant samandarr
Mein arzu machli machli si..kabhi toh kabhi sehmi hui hulchul
Mein saawwan rimzim kabhi toh kabhi sukhe patton ki sarr sarr...
Mein behti hui badliyaN kabhi ...toh kabhi...thehra hua aanchal
Mein kabhi chhoti si masoom kali..toh kabhi badaa sa bargad..
Mein saaya kabhi sangeet ka toh kabhi rango ka sagar
Mein nadi ka bahav kabhi toh kabhi lehron ki atkhal
Mein halki halki mulayam hawa kabhi toh kabhi bedard patthar
Mein sundar sapna kabhi toh kabhi bhikra hua mukaddar
Mein bechein mahobatt kabhi toh kabhi yaadon ka anchaha assar
Mein kabhi zindagi ZindaDil toh kabhi ruka ruka sa safar!
Mein kabhi ek PrashN? khudpar, toh kabhi khud ek Uttar!

~a tender touch~
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28th January 2005, 03:05 PM
Komal the confused, here we have the philosophical dilemma of "who am I".
Kabi Astavakrageetha pado sab tum hi tum hoge.....

The higher you go, steeper will be the valley and greater will be the fall.

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hi! shashi - 28th January 2005, 03:07 PM
ha ha ha! really i m a form of confusion!
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hi - 28th January 2005, 04:58 PM
komal jee,aap ne khud ko kitne ache tarike se explain kiya hai.
saach acha likha hai aap ne komal jee.very nice

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hi! - 28th January 2005, 05:06 PM
thx arman again for liking it!
takecare
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28th January 2005, 05:43 PM
hi Komal Ji,
Kya baat hai. I guess aapne apko hi define kiya hai lagta hai. Bahut vadiya likha hai.

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hi raj - 28th January 2005, 05:47 PM
hey Raj..gud 2 cu yar..on my post!..thx a lot ..for liking it!..ya i have tried 2 define myself! keep coming i'd also look forward for ur post! take care!
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Hi Komal! - 28th January 2005, 06:04 PM
Hey komal,

Once again one more gem from u...
Excellent work...It's really difficult to define our own
personality..but full marks to u...

Too goooD!


Keep writing........
Bye
Have a wonderful time.......

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hi! - 28th January 2005, 06:53 PM
Thx yash for givin me full marks..yash! m delighted!
take care!

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Re: hi! - 29th January 2005, 09:54 AM
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Thx yash for givin me full marks..yash! m delighted!
take care!

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tumharii kavitaa yaa kalpanaa kahooo ........liked itt
zindagii kee raang rup koo shabdoo mein leekhanaa aurr unhaee dill parr dastakk deenaa koi tumsee seekhaee..
realy itss gudd.veryy gudd andd haaa..khud pee likhaa haii parr tum too veryyy plannedd andd clear cut gall hooo....
   
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27 - 31st January 2005, 01:35 PM
Hi,
Komal H r U
Komal you have a good written, ati sundar aap ne to bahot kuch likh diya ha apne bare me phirbhi kuch baki ha voh hum pura karte ha.

kabhi aap ek natkhat bala to kabhi ek sundar samjota,
kabhi tum shayri me mohabbat to kabhi ek dost,
kabhi tum ho ek kali to kabhi ho tum ek gulab,
kabhi ho tum ek shot dress to kabhi ho tum ek sadi,
kabhi tum ho ek gum to kabhi tum ho ek hunsi,

Kubul kijiyega dost

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hi! - 31st January 2005, 01:41 PM
HI ! irfaan bhai..thx 4 writing few lines for me...payara laga! ..aur apka meri post ko padhan bhi bahot achha laga!
takcecare
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27 - 31st January 2005, 06:41 PM
Aey
kya samajati to apne aapko, me samjau kya, dosti me no sorry, no please, no sukriya koi bhi upkaar ho ya koi bhi galti ho to uske liye koi saja nahi dosti ha bndaas, to fir ma soch raha hu ya bhai kaha se aya any way no problem chahe to aap rakhi bhi bandh sakti ha, jaisi teri merji, bhai banunga to teri sab shariya pehle close karva dunga aur security phool kardunga, isliye dosti tak hi rehna, kya bole to bindaas.

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5th February 2005, 01:45 PM
Hi Komal,

Wondrful thoughts my friend really sweet simple but with a real good feeling

Keep writing

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5th February 2005, 03:48 PM
Hi Komal Ji.
Really Outstanding Creation.
But your poem is very confusing, it has made me confused.
And my confusion is....
Who are you?
Have you described yourself or you have defined LOVE itself?
And I think nobody has an answer to my confusion...do you?

Really wonderful creation...hats off to you.
Keep defining "LOVE" like this.
   
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hi rohin ji! - 7th February 2005, 12:01 PM
rohin ji!.....its fabulaous 2 cu on my post!!..thx alot for replying..i m glad u read this post as i never thought i wd get replys on this post anymore...as its beeen long i posted this... tc
plz keep coming

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nacheez ji! - 7th February 2005, 12:11 PM
Nacheez ji!
Sach kahun... meine toh sirf apne bare mein kuch kehna chaha tha..par apke nazariye ne is post ko Lajawaab" bana diya!...coz its u who read it as a defination ..of "Love"...varana meine toh sirf apne apko define kiya tha!
Shukriya ise ek naya nazariya dene ke liye!....Par ab jab mein ise apke nazariye se padh rahi hun toh lag raha hai...ki Itss me or Love???....again consusion! ha ha ..but its me fren..b'lv me

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