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go zaraa si baat par - Khatir Ghaznavi - 21st July 2014, 04:13 PM

go zaraa si baat par barso.n ke yaraane gaye
lekin itna to hua kuch log pahchaane gaye

garmi-e-mehfil faqat ik naaraa-e-mastaanaa hai
aur wo khush hain ki laa-haasiil* se divaane gaye
(laa-haasiil = fruitless, unproductive)

mai.n ise shoharat kahu.n ya apni ruswaai kahu.n
mujhse pehle us gali mei.n mere afsaane gaye

yu.n to wo meri rag-e-jaan se bhi the nazdik-tar
aa.nsuo.n ke dhu.nd mei.n lekin na pahachaane gaye

vahshate.n kuch is tarah apnaa muqaddar ho gaii.n
hum jahaa.n pahu.nche hamaare saath viraane gaye

ab bhi un yado.n kii khushbuu zehan mei.n mahfus hai
baarha hum jin se gulzaaro.n ko mahkaane gaye

kya qayaamat hai ki ‘Khatir’ kushta-e-shab* bhi the hum
subh jab hui to mujrim hum hi gardaane* gaye
(kushta-e-shab = fit to be killed; gardaane = acknowledged)


-- Khatir Ghaznavi



ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता



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21st July 2014, 05:07 PM

Wah!.................................




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22nd July 2014, 11:14 AM

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Wah!.................................
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25th July 2014, 03:18 PM

one of my favrt ghazal... thanks for sharing bro....................

khush rahiye

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25th July 2014, 03:43 PM

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Outstanding.....thnx for sharing
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one of my favrt ghazal... thanks for sharing bro....................

khush rahiye

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aap dono ka behad shukr guzaar hooN......

Shoaibbhai,
This is also one of my fav ghazals .........
magar ek uljhan hai uske dusre sher ko lekar........
Mehendi Hassan saab ne uske misra-e-saani me lafz istemaal kiya hai "is mehfil se" jab kii maine jab lyrics padhii toh kisii ne "la-hafil" likha tha jiske koii maanee nahi the iis liye mujhe lagaa shaayad "laa-haasil" ho sakta hai kyuN ki wo bhii iis sher se muttafiiq lagaa.... agar aapke paas sahii lyrics ho toh mai.n chaahunga usse aap (atleast 2nd sher) share kare.n

duaago.... Adil



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6th August 2014, 05:41 PM

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go zaraa si baat par barso.n ke yaraane gaye
lekin itna to hua kuch log pahchaane gaye

garmi-e-mehfil faqat ik naaraa-e-mastaanaa hai
aur wo khush hain ki laa-haasiil* se divaane gaye
(laa-haasiil = fruitless, unproductive)

mai.n ise shoharat kahu.n ya apni ruswaai kahu.n
mujhse pehle us gali mei.n mere afsaane gaye

yu.n to wo meri rag-e-jaan se bhi the nazdik-tar
aa.nsuo.n ke dhu.nd mei.n lekin na pahachaane gaye

vahshate.n kuch is tarah apnaa muqaddar ho gaii.n
hum jahaa.n pahu.nche hamaare saath viraane gaye

ab bhi un yado.n kii khushbuu zehan mei.n mahfus hai
baarha hum jin se gulzaaro.n ko mahkaane gaye

kya qayaamat hai ki ‘Khatir’ kushta-e-shab* bhi the hum
subh jab hui to mujrim hum hi gardaane* gaye
(kushta-e-shab = fit to be killed; gardaane = acknowledged)

-- Khatir Ghaznavi
lekin itna to hua kuch log pahchaane gaye

Bahut umda gazal thanx 4 sharing


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7th August 2014, 01:34 AM

Waah amazing ghazal !! Thanks for sharing Aadeil sahab !!


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7th August 2014, 11:08 AM

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lekin itna to hua kuch log pahchaane gaye

Bahut umda gazal thanx 4 sharing
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Waah amazing ghazal !! Thanks for sharing Aadeil sahab !!
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