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yahee meree shayree kee kitab hai -
1st February 2006, 11:03 PM
dil chahata hai aksar
tum ko bahon main bharoon
tum ko bahut pyar karoon
itana kareeb layoon ki dil sharamane lage
ankhon main haya bhar jaye
itana chahoon ki meree sadik
chahat se too jhoot main hee dar jaye
dar jaye ankh band karane lage
shiddat se mera hath pakarane lage
mujhe mai tab khud hee too khud ko bhare
main hee tujh ko muhabbat na karoon
too bhee mujhe pyar kare
dil chahata hai aksar
itana pyar karoon ki ankhon main panee bhar jaye
ne mere pas koyee lafz ho
na too kuch kahe
bas deewanwar mujhe dekhtee rahe
too kya jane mera din tera hai rat teree hai
main jo kah deta hoon zamane ka hai
jo dil main hai woh baat teree hai
mere pyar ke har pal main tera hissa hai
mere sher teree baten hain
mera geet tera kissa hai
apane hee kise hairan see mujh se sunatee hai
too apane hee drakaht kee shakh se phool chuntee hai
ab yahee dil chahata hai
is shakh ke tujh ko sare gulab de doon
ek lafz bhee na mera rahe
tujh ko apnee shayree kee kitab de doon
mere ashar ke har zazbe ko toone pala hai
toone girate huye ek shakh ko sambhala hai
haan jee chahta hai yahee tujhe bahon main bharoon
bahut pyar karoon
mujh ko bhee har soo khud hee khud hee main bhare
main hee tujhe muhabbat na karoon
too bhee mujhe pyar kare
haan yahee dil chahat hai
yahee khwab hai
yahee zindgee kee talkhiyon ka jawab hai
yahee meree shayree kee kitab hai
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2nd February 2006, 06:42 AM
Very nice Anil ji,
Bahut pasand aayi aap ki yeh rachna, likhte rahiyega. tc
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2nd February 2006, 07:13 AM
thanks devangi
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23rd February 2006, 08:36 AM
Anil Bhai Jaan !
likhne se pehle humesha sochta hu , Anil bhai jaan kahu ya Anil bhai saab likhu , bhai jaan ye to kuch haat ke hai , gazab hai, achha likha hai,
likhte rahiye aise hi dil ko khush karte rahiye .
sochta hu tum India ke primeminister ban gaye to kya hoga ? aree bhai kuch nahi hoga , wahi hoga jo manzoor-e- khuda hoga ,
ha ha ha ! bhai mere baat pe gaur mat karna , tum shayar hi achhe ho , primeminister banne ki koshish mat karna , shayad mera shayar dost digad jayega , woh kya haina sangat ka asar tumhe khaa jayega
khoziiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iii.....................
Woh tumhari nayi girlfriend kaisi hai , jiske bate mai aap bata rahe the m behad pyaar hai aapko (( taang kheech raha hu bhai))
You can't buy love, but you can pay heavily for it.
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23rd February 2006, 11:34 AM
thanks for reading aur pasand karanekiye aur haan mere bhayee tang itana kas ka mat kheencho ki tang too hee jaye hehehehe
ANil
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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23rd February 2006, 12:23 PM
anil ji
bhaut sunder ehsas ko sabdo k moti mai piro kar jo kahe diya anmol ho gaya ye
jo samjhana chate the aap umeed hai wo samjh gayi hogi
khozii main bhi tumhare sawal mai sath hoon koun hai wo jiske pyar mai itna asar hai k anil ji samunder se moti lakar shyari bana rahe hain
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23rd February 2006, 02:16 PM
natkhat khozii aur shardha thanks for shayri and dant for ulte seedhe sawal jawab lo
pyae ke kisee pyare pal jaisee hai
jis pe likhta hoon khud ghazal jaisee hai
Anil
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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Re: yahee meree shayree kee kitab hai -
23rd February 2006, 06:16 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by masoomshayer
dil chahata hai aksar
tum ko bahon main bharoon
tum ko bahut pyar karoon
itana kareeb layoon ki dil sharamane lage
ankhon main haya bhar jaye
itana chahoon ki meree sadik
chahat se too jhoot main hee dar jaye
dar jaye ankh band karane lage
shiddat se mera hath pakarane lage
mujhe mai tab khud hee too khud ko bhare
main hee tujh ko muhabbat na karoon
too bhee mujhe pyar kare
dil chahata hai aksar
itana pyar karoon ki ankhon main panee bhar jaye
ne mere pas koyee lafz ho
na too kuch kahe
bas deewanwar mujhe dekhtee rahe
too kya jane mera din tera hai rat teree hai
main jo kah deta hoon zamane ka hai
jo dil main hai woh baat teree hai
mere pyar ke har pal main tera hissa hai
mere sher teree baten hain
mera geet tera kissa hai
apane hee kise hairan see mujh se sunatee hai
too apane hee drakaht kee shakh se phool chuntee hai
ab yahee dil chahata hai
is shakh ke tujh ko sare gulab de doon
ek lafz bhee na mera rahe
tujh ko apnee shayree kee kitab de doon
mere ashar ke har zazbe ko toone pala hai
toone girate huye ek shakh ko sambhala hai
haan jee chahta hai yahee tujhe bahon main bharoon
bahut pyar karoon
mujh ko bhee har soo khud hee khud hee main bhare
main hee tujhe muhabbat na karoon
too bhee mujhe pyar kare
haan yahee dil chahat hai
yahee khwab hai
yahee zindgee kee talkhiyon ka jawab hai
yahee meree shayree kee kitab hai
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kya baat hai aaj kal bahut shayre wayree ho rahi hai..........
bahut hi badiya kya kahu likhte rahiye mehfil sajaya kijiye
meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi
ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main
na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi
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shukriya -
24th February 2006, 11:10 AM
mehul shukriya ye meree sab se pahalee shayree main se hai jo yahan ayee thee tab bas mere nam se na ashana the sab to nazm bhee tanha rah gayee ab dobara log parh rahe hain achha lag raha hai mehul thanks again
Anil
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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24th February 2006, 01:30 PM
Anil Ji,
Again lambi but bohot hi achhi tarah sai aapnai apni feelings ko apnai ehsaas ko shabdon sai sajaya hai.Umeed hai yun hi likhtai rahengai aur humai padnai ka mauka detai rahaingai.
Khayal Rakhain,
~Kavita
"Kavita"...bas ek kavita.
Toota hua dil aur hoton pai hassi.
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Pyaar wo nahi tha jo kisi nai kiya
Pyaar woh hai jo koi nibha raha hai.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Maana ki woh log badnaseeb hotai hai
Jinhai pyaar milta to hai
par woh usai paichaan nahi paatai
par woh log aur bhi badnaseeb hotai hai jinhai pyaar milta hai,woh usai paichaaan bhi jaatai hai par paa nahi saktai.
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Its better to have loved and lost
then to have ever loved before
so what if the heart breaks
at least you will know LOVE.
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kavita -
24th February 2006, 05:08 PM
kavita ab kaise chotee karoon nazm jab tak ek full stop tak naa aye but thanks parhne ke liye samjhne ke liye
achha lagata hai yahan ana tumhara
Anil
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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25th February 2006, 06:05 PM
waah bahaut badhiya anil sahab..........
hmmm bada hi khoobsurat ehsaas hai yeh pyaar........jab hota hai toh duniya badal deta hai..khuhsiyon ke sagar me mohabbat ki lehron me bheegte bheegte bas umar beet jaye yahi jazbaat dil me umadhte hain...
"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."
**~*FaRhAnA*~**
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shukria -
26th February 2006, 06:11 AM
tumhara parhana samjhna achah lagata hai shukriya yahan ane ke liye
Anil
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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28th February 2006, 05:54 AM
Anil ji,
Aapki rachna padhi... kaafi asardaar hai... kaafi acha laga padh kar... yunhi likhte rahiyega....
Take Care
rohin
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28th February 2006, 04:11 PM
intaar rahata tha kabhee tum bhee parho mujhe aaj is intzar ko sil mile bahut achhe lage tumahre vichar meree rachanayon main ate rahana
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mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
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1st March 2006, 06:26 PM
i like the way u express ur feelings
u always make me smile when i read ur post
keep writing ..and sharing
bye TC
Yun Mile Ke Mulakaat Na Ho Saki,
Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki,
Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi,
Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm)
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1st March 2006, 09:43 PM
ashu tumre nam kee tarah tumahree tareef bhee cute hai achha laga sun ke parhte rahana mujhe
Anil
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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23rd April 2006, 12:17 PM
dil chahata hai aksar
itana pyar karoon ki ankhon main panee bhar jaye
ne mere pas koyee lafz ho
na too kuch kahe
bas deewanwar mujhe dekhtee rahe
Anil ji aapki har nazm ko bahut dhyan se padti hun ....har nazm har baar naye arth de jati hai........aap ko apne shabdo ko peerona aur unko bahvo mein dhalna bahut acchi trah se aata hai,aur yahi baat hai ki aapki har nazm dil ko chhoo jati hai .
with best wishes
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shukriya ranajana -
23rd April 2006, 01:57 PM
mere likhne ke baad meree kaviatayon ko sabhee arth nahee milte. unhe bahut pyar se parh kar sahee arth aap dete hain unhe. jab tak aap log pyar se parhte rahenge meree shayree kee sansen chaltee rahengee
Anil
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
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23rd April 2006, 05:06 PM
bahut khoob anilji.itna pyaar bhara hai aapki is rachna mai.bahut hi acha laga ise padhkar.
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23rd April 2006, 09:34 PM
shukriya meree rachana ke pyar ko jane ke liye parhne ke liye yoon hee kabhee kabhee dekh liya karo meree kavitayen
Anil
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
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1st May 2006, 06:21 PM
hi anil
too kya jane mera din tera hai rat teree hai
main jo kah deta hoon zamane ka hai
jo dil main hai woh baat teree hai
mere pyar ke har pal main tera hissa hai
mere sher teree baten hain
mera geet tera kissa hai
wah ye teri shayri ki keetab ke kuchh panne padhke hi maja aa gaya,kua pyar me apana pan jataya he,jese mere sab sukh tere tere sab dukh mere yahi andaz se he ye
good one
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thanks ilesh shah -
1st May 2006, 06:52 PM
meree is chipee nazm ko talash kar ke parh lene ka bahut shurkiya
Anil
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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2nd May 2006, 03:04 AM
anil bhaiya
main aapko bahut dino baad padh raha hun ..... maafi chahunga uske liye ....
aapko aaj padha to purane din yaad aa gaye
wah wah ... karte vo replies yaad aa gaye
aaj bahut khush hun main .. ke aap
aaj phir se hamare saamne aa gaye ........
bahut hi accha likha hai aapne ..
yun hi likhte rahiyega ...
aapka apna
cute sa ashu
Yun Mile Ke Mulakaat Na Ho Saki,
Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki,
Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi,
Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm)
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2nd May 2006, 03:14 PM
kahan the ashu? itne din baad ksie thanks for reading me agin
anil
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17th March 2008, 09:59 PM
dil chahata hai aksar
tum ko bahon main bharoon
tum ko bahut pyar karoon
itana kareeb layoon ki dil sharamane lage
ankhon main haya bhar jaye
itana chahoon ki meree sadik
chahat se too jhoot main hee dar jaye
dar jaye ankh band karane lage
shiddat se mera hath pakarane lage
mujhe mai tab khud hee too khud ko bhare
main hee tujh ko muhabbat na karoon
too bhee mujhe pyar kare
dil chahata hai aksar
itana pyar karoon ki ankhon main panee bhar jaye
ne mere pas koyee lafz ho
na too kuch kahe
bas deewanwar mujhe dekhtee rahe
too kya jane mera din tera hai rat teree hai
main jo kah deta hoon zamane ka hai
jo dil main hai woh baat teree hai
mere pyar ke har pal main tera hissa hai
mere sher teree baten hain
mera geet tera kissa hai
apane hee kise hairan see mujh se sunatee hai
too apane hee drakaht kee shakh se phool chuntee hai
ab yahee dil chahata hai
is shakh ke tujh ko sare gulab de doon
ek lafz bhee na mera rahe
tujh ko apnee shayree kee kitab de doon
mere ashar ke har zazbe ko toone pala hai
toone girate huye ek shakh ko sambhala hai
haan jee chahta hai yahee tujhe bahon main bharoon
bahut pyar karoon
mujh ko bhee har soo khud hee khud hee main bhare
main hee tujhe muhabbat na karoon
too bhee mujhe pyar kare
haan yahee dil chahat hai
yahee khwab hai
yahee zindgee kee talkhiyon ka jawab hai
yahee meree shayree kee kitab hai
LOVE IS LIFE..... & MY LIFE IS PRECIOUS.....
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18th March 2008, 08:59 PM
Apne hotho ki hasi tere naam kar denge,
Har khushi tum par qurbaan kar denge,
Jiss din hogi kami mere pyaar me,
Uss din zindagi maut ke naam kar denge.
Depak jugnu chand sitare aik sey hain
yunhi sare ishq ke marey aik sey hain
Hijer ki shab dekh tu aa ke mere chand
mere aansoo aur yeh tare aik sey hain
Darya hoon, main beedh bhau kiya janon
mere liye tu duno kinare aik sey hain
Meri kashti kis ne dobui kia maloom
sari lehrein sare dharey aik sey hain
Kuch apne kuch beghaney aur main khud
meri jaan ke dushman sare aik sey hain
Abh batlau hamein kis sey feryaad karein
qatil hakeem munsif sare aik sey hain
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18th March 2008, 09:00 PM
itna samjh chuki thi main us kay mezag ko
wo ja raha tha aur main hayran bhi na thi
aarasta to khair na thi zindigi kabhi
per tujh say qabal itni parayshan bhi na thi
jis ja makeen ban nay kay dekhay thay main nay khawab
us ghar main ek sham ki mehman bhi na thi
duniya ko dekhti rahi jis ki nazar say main
us ankh main meray ley pehchan bhi na thi
rooti rahi agar to main majbor thi bhut
wo rat katni koi asaan bhi na thi
naqad-e-wafa ko chasham-e-kharidar kiya milay
is jinss kay ley koi dukaan bhi na thi
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18th March 2008, 09:02 PM
kaheen ek masom, nazuk se larki
bhut khobsurat magar sanvali si
mujhay apnay khaboon ki bahoon main pa kay
kabhi neend main muskurati to ho ge
usi neend main kasmasa kasmasa kar
serhanay say taqeey girati to ho ge
wohi khawab din ki mundairoon pay aa kay
usay maan he maan main lobhatay to hoon gay
kaee saz seenay ki khamoshiyon main meri yad say jhanjhanatay to hoon gay
wo baysakhta dheemay dheemay suroo main meri dhoon main kuch gun gunati to ho ge
chalo khat likhain jee main ata to ho ga
magar ungleeyan kapkapati to hoon ge
kalam hath say choot jata to ho ga
omangain kalm phir utha ti to hoon ge
mera nam apni kitaboon pay likh kar wo dantoo main ungli dabati to ho ge
zaban say kabhi uffff nikalti to ho ge
badan dhemmay dheemay sulagta to ho ga
kaheen kay kaheen paon partay to hoon gay
zameen per doobata latakta ta ho ga
kabhi subha ka sham kehti to ho ge
kabhi rat ko din batati to ho ge
kaheen ek mason nazuk se larki
bhut khobsurat magar sanvali se ..
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18th March 2008, 09:03 PM
jaane kyun log flurt kertay hain
jaane kyun woh affairs chalatay hain
jaane kyun...jaane kyun.....
jaane kyun jaane kyun^jaane kyun ?????
affair bin jeenay main rakha kiya hai
affair jiska nahin woh tanha hai
affair soo rang leker aata hai
affair he zindagi sajaata hai
Log chup chup ker affair chalatay hain,
Aur sab k saamnay friends ban jaatay hain!
jaane kyun...jaane kyun....
jaane kyun^jaane kyun^jaane kyun ?
affair best-friends main larai kerata hai
affair main banda pagal hojaata hai
affair na chahtay huway bhi chal jaata hai
affair bohat badnaami kerata hai....
Akhir affair her larai ki BASE ban jaata hai!
jaane kyun....jaane kyun....
jaane kyun^jaane kyun^jaane kyun^ ?
Laikin^kabhi- kabhi affair pyaar main convert hojaata hai
jhoota her such aur sucha her jhoot hojaata hai
zindagi ko bhi ek naya start mil jaata hai
Aur pyaar ki gari main 4th gear lag jaata hai
Aur Yehe Affair Zindagi^Ka^Safar^ Ban^Jaata^ Hai
Jaane kyun.....jaane kyun...
Jaane kyun^jaane kyun^jaane kyun^ ?
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18th March 2008, 09:08 PM
I AM NOT YOUR FRIEND IF,
You have to think before You speak to me!
I AM NOT YOUR FRIEND IF,
My presence ever makes You feel uncomfortable.
I AM NOT YOUR FRIEND IF,
You have to thank me for everything i do for You.
I AM NOT YOUR FRIEND IF,
You don't realise how Your smile brightens up my day.
I AM NOT YOUR FRIEND IF,
You would rather keep quiet when You really wanna talk!
I AM NOT YOUR FRIEND IF,
You take too much time to tell me what i mean to You
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18th March 2008, 10:19 PM
wonderful bro
i am speechless.how r u?
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19th March 2008, 04:34 PM
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Originally Posted by krazzy03
itna samjh chuki thi main us kay mezag ko
wo ja raha tha aur main hayran bhi na thi
aarasta to khair na thi zindigi kabhi
per tujh say qabal itni parayshan bhi na thi
jis ja makeen ban nay kay dekhay thay main nay khawab
us ghar main ek sham ki mehman bhi na thi
duniya ko dekhti rahi jis ki nazar say main
us ankh main meray ley pehchan bhi na thi
rooti rahi agar to main majbor thi bhut
wo rat katni koi asaan bhi na thi
naqad-e-wafa ko chasham-e-kharidar kiya milay
is jinss kay ley koi dukaan bhi na thi
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Bohat he acha likha hai mere pass lafz nahi hai kahne ko khush raho (aysa dubara na likhna) mazak ker raha hon sorry keep sharing
EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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26th March 2008, 01:54 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by masoomshayer
dil chahata hai aksar
tum ko bahon main bharoon
tum ko bahut pyar karoon
itana kareeb layoon ki dil sharamane lage
ankhon main haya bhar jaye
itana chahoon ki meree sadik
chahat se too jhoot main hee dar jaye
dar jaye ankh band karane lage
shiddat se mera hath pakarane lage
mujhe mai tab khud hee too khud ko bhare
main hee tujh ko muhabbat na karoon
too bhee mujhe pyar kare
dil chahata hai aksar
itana pyar karoon ki ankhon main panee bhar jaye
ne mere pas koyee lafz ho
na too kuch kahe
bas deewanwar mujhe dekhtee rahe
too kya jane mera din tera hai rat teree hai
main jo kah deta hoon zamane ka hai
jo dil main hai woh baat teree hai
mere pyar ke har pal main tera hissa hai
mere sher teree baten hain
mera geet tera kissa hai
apane hee kise hairan see mujh se sunatee hai
too apane hee drakaht kee shakh se phool chuntee hai
ab yahee dil chahata hai
is shakh ke tujh ko sare gulab de doon
ek lafz bhee na mera rahe
tujh ko apnee shayree kee kitab de doon
mere ashar ke har zazbe ko toone pala hai
toone girate huye ek shakh ko sambhala hai
haan jee chahta hai yahee tujhe bahon main bharoon
bahut pyar karoon
mujh ko bhee har soo khud hee khud hee main bhare
main hee tujhe muhabbat na karoon
too bhee mujhe pyar kare
haan yahee dil chahat hai
yahee khwab hai
yahee zindgee kee talkhiyon ka jawab hai
yahee meree shayree kee kitab hai
Anil
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Aadab anil ji,
kaise hai aap?
bohot dino baad apne parivaar me aaye hai,
or aate hi ek khubsurat nazam se wabista hue,
sach aapki nazam bohot hi khubsurat,or mukammal hai,
is behtarin koshish k liye,dili daad kabul kijiye.
khush rahiye,
apna khayal rakhiye
ALLAH HAFIZ
Apki dost
Sweet HASSONI,
( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi )
()""""()()""""()
( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' )
(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!
**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
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3rd April 2008, 04:43 PM
munfairy
abhut bahut shukriya
Anil
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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21st May 2008, 10:31 AM
roop bahut bahut shukriya tumhara shukriya rah gaya tha
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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28th September 2008, 10:50 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by masoomshayer
dil chahata hai aksar
tum ko bahon main bharoon
tum ko bahut pyar karoon
itana kareeb layoon ki dil sharamane lage
ankhon main haya bhar jaye
itana chahoon ki meree sadik
chahat se too jhoot main hee dar jaye
dar jaye ankh band karane lage
shiddat se mera hath pakarane lage
mujhe mai tab khud hee too khud ko bhare
main hee tujh ko muhabbat na karoon
too bhee mujhe pyar kare
dil chahata hai aksar
itana pyar karoon ki ankhon main panee bhar jaye
ne mere pas koyee lafz ho
na too kuch kahe
bas deewanwar mujhe dekhtee rahe
too kya jane mera din tera hai rat teree hai
main jo kah deta hoon zamane ka hai
jo dil main hai woh baat teree hai
mere pyar ke har pal main tera hissa hai
mere sher teree baten hain
mera geet tera kissa hai
apane hee kise hairan see mujh se sunatee hai
too apane hee drakaht kee shakh se phool chuntee hai
ab yahee dil chahata hai
is shakh ke tujh ko sare gulab de doon
ek lafz bhee na mera rahe
tujh ko apnee shayree kee kitab de doon
mere ashar ke har zazbe ko toone pala hai
toone girate huye ek shakh ko sambhala hai
haan jee chahta hai yahee tujhe bahon main bharoon
bahut pyar karoon
mujh ko bhee har soo khud hee khud hee main bhare
main hee tujhe muhabbat na karoon
too bhee mujhe pyar kare
haan yahee dil chahat hai
yahee khwab hai
yahee zindgee kee talkhiyon ka jawab hai
yahee meree shayree kee kitab hai
Anil
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wow anil jee.....ab aap hi batao ki aise ahsaas kahan mileNge aur....aapki shayri aapki hi hai....har ahsaas bahut masoom sa hai....
Regards
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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28th September 2008, 11:10 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by masoomshayer
dil chahata hai aksar
tum ko bahon main bharoon
tum ko bahut pyar karoon
itana kareeb layoon ki dil sharamane lage
ankhon main haya bhar jaye
itana chahoon ki meree sadik
chahat se too jhoot main hee dar jaye
dar jaye ankh band karane lage
shiddat se mera hath pakarane lage
mujhe mai tab khud hee too khud ko bhare
main hee tujh ko muhabbat na karoon
too bhee mujhe pyar kare
dil chahata hai aksar
itana pyar karoon ki ankhon main panee bhar jaye
ne mere pas koyee lafz ho
na too kuch kahe
bas deewanwar mujhe dekhtee rahe
too kya jane mera din tera hai rat teree hai
main jo kah deta hoon zamane ka hai
jo dil main hai woh baat teree hai
mere pyar ke har pal main tera hissa hai
mere sher teree baten hain
mera geet tera kissa hai
apane hee kise hairan see mujh se sunatee hai
too apane hee drakaht kee shakh se phool chuntee hai
ab yahee dil chahata hai
is shakh ke tujh ko sare gulab de doon
ek lafz bhee na mera rahe
tujh ko apnee shayree kee kitab de doon
mere ashar ke har zazbe ko toone pala hai
toone girate huye ek shakh ko sambhala hai
haan jee chahta hai yahee tujhe bahon main bharoon
bahut pyar karoon
mujh ko bhee har soo khud hee khud hee main bhare
main hee tujhe muhabbat na karoon
too bhee mujhe pyar kare
haan yahee dil chahat hai
yahee khwab hai
yahee zindgee kee talkhiyon ka jawab hai
yahee meree shayree kee kitab hai
Anil
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janab masoom sahab kehne k liye word nahi hai, aapki qitaab k liye per phir bhie do line aapki qitaab ki line mein kehna chahunga, GUSTAAKHI K LIYE MUAAFI,lekin meine nahi likhi
" kaash k tu qitaab hoti toh padhte padhte so jaata ,
jab yaad tumhari aati toh seene per rakhke so jaata...
bahut khoob masoom sahab hume aise hi behetreen aash'aar se NAVAAZ re rahiye,
tahir kkkhan
shayer mit jaate hain jahaa se magar unka qall fanaah nahi hota,
Tanhaai bhie tanha hoti hain magar,TAHIR tanha nahi hota................./
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29th September 2008, 06:53 AM
shukiya tahir tumhara ana bahut achha laga
Anil
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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29th September 2008, 01:12 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by masoomshayer
dil chahata hai aksar
tum ko bahon main bharoon
tum ko bahut pyar karoon
itana kareeb layoon ki dil sharamane lage
ankhon main haya bhar jaye
itana chahoon ki meree sadik
chahat se too jhoot main hee dar jaye
dar jaye ankh band karane lage
shiddat se mera hath pakarane lage
mujhe mai tab khud hee too khud ko bhare
main hee tujh ko muhabbat na karoon
too bhee mujhe pyar kare
dil chahata hai aksar
itana pyar karoon ki ankhon main panee bhar jaye
ne mere pas koyee lafz ho
na too kuch kahe
bas deewanwar mujhe dekhtee rahe
too kya jane mera din tera hai rat teree hai
main jo kah deta hoon zamane ka hai
jo dil main hai woh baat teree hai
mere pyar ke har pal main tera hissa hai
mere sher teree baten hain
mera geet tera kissa hai
apane hee kise hairan see mujh se sunatee hai
too apane hee drakaht kee shakh se phool chuntee hai
ab yahee dil chahata hai
is shakh ke tujh ko sare gulab de doon
ek lafz bhee na mera rahe
tujh ko apnee shayree kee kitab de doon
mere ashar ke har zazbe ko toone pala hai
toone girate huye ek shakh ko sambhala hai
haan jee chahta hai yahee tujhe bahon main bharoon
bahut pyar karoon
mujh ko bhee har soo khud hee khud hee main bhare
main hee tujhe muhabbat na karoon
too bhee mujhe pyar kare
haan yahee dil chahat hai
yahee khwab hai
yahee zindgee kee talkhiyon ka jawab hai
yahee meree shayree kee kitab hai
Anil
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Anil Ji namaskar,
peheli bar aapke nagme padh rahi hun...bahot achha likha hai aapne ...
too kya jane mera din tera hai rat teree hai
main jo kah deta hoon zamane ka hai
jo dil main hai woh baat teree hai
mere pyar ke har pal main tera hissa hai
mere sher teree baten hain
mera geet tera kissa hai
yeh kuchh lines hume behet pasand aayi......khus rahiye SDC pe apna nagme bhejte rahiye ...taki hume bhi aapko padhne ki mouka mile
Diya
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
Diya
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