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something i wrote... - 12th January 2006, 03:28 PM

something i wrote ...don rem when...


aik arse se hamne shaam nahin dekhi
aaj alam yeh hai ki rehmat ke farishte
darwazon se laut jaya karte hain...
hame in dooriyon ka ehsaas dilaya karte hain...
yun to hum dono zinda the intezaar main
yeh batein reh gayi sirf hamare khayal main...

hamare raste us modmod se pehle
hi kahin kho jayenge
jab hame do alag alag raste nazar aayenge

aaj aik baar phir jee bhar ke baat kar lo,
kal se kya pata ,ham sirf khwabon main hi nazar aa payege!!!!!!


"sanam" chahe zindagi se bas itna
aik mutthi main kaid kar loon,
yeh aasman hai jitna!"
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12th January 2006, 04:00 PM

aaj aik baar phir jee bhar ke baat kar lo,
kal se kya pata ,ham sirf khwabon main hi nazar aa payege!!!!!!



Bahut khoob....!

YooNhi likhte rahiyega


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17th January 2006, 01:10 PM

chaand jiiiiiiiiiii
thank u so much for replyin!
i have always been a grtt fan of yours on this site and u were the first person whose shayri i read some i guess 3-4 yrs back,i don rem that
but it was that one-kuuch to khabar de ae chandni mujhko,yeh chaand kis kis jharokhe main jhanke aur yunhi apna namm badnaam kare,
it was awesome,
and thank u so much for replyin,u made my day really

u know,there are always some strangers who keep you motivating,thanks


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18th January 2006, 11:25 AM

bahut khoob likha hai ruchika aapne
aaise hi likhiye


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