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tere ghar ke log - 15th May 2007, 10:43 PM

Kyu mudj se djalte hai,
kyu nafrat karte hai,
kyu harana chaahte hai mudjhe ,
kyu mitana chaahte hai mudjhe,
Mudjhe chain se djine nahie dete hai,
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Tum se mai haa kahoe ja naa
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Tere galti ki sazaa mudjhe dete hai
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Aap ham se mohobet karte hai
wo ham se nafrat karte hai
Oenke armaan hai ke hame ilzaam deker
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Mujhe duniya ki nazar me girane ke liye
na djaane kya kya karte hai
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Wo apni khushi ke liye
meri khushiyo ka djanaaza chaahte hai
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15th May 2007, 11:33 PM

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Kyu mudj se djalte hai,
kyu nafrat karte hai,
kyu harana chaahte hai mudjhe ,
kyu mitana chaahte hai mudjhe,
Mudjhe chain se djine nahie dete hai,
tere ghar ke log

Tum ne hamse pyaar kiya
is me hamara kya kasoor hai
Tum se mai haa kahoe ja naa
magar itna to zaroor hai
Tere galti ki sazaa mudjhe dete hai
tere ghar ke log

Aap ham se mohobet karte hai
wo ham se nafrat karte hai
Oenke armaan hai ke hame ilzaam deker
mahvil se nikaal de
Mujhe duniya ki nazar me girane ke liye
na djaane kya kya karte hai
tere ghar ke log

Wo apni khushi ke liye
meri khushiyo ka djanaaza chaahte hai
Dekhte dekhte is duniya se
mera djanaaza nikal djaayega
kyu ki :
MUDJHE CHAIN SE DJINE NAHIE DETE HAI
TERE GHAR KE LOG

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bahut khub dhadkan g, pehli dafa pada apko, bahut achi koshish hai apki. aap aise hi likthe rahien.

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dost agar yeh aapka aapna likha hua hai to behad khoobsurat hai, bas kahi kahi kuch spelling mistake hai.n, jiski vajja se kuch kuch samjne mei.n dikkat hue...vaise ek badiya koshish hai....yu hi likhtey rahiye.

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thanx - 16th May 2007, 03:22 PM

Thanx, I'll keep trying my best!


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4th December 2010, 04:18 PM

Kyu mudj se djalte hai,
kyu nafrat karte hai,
kyu harana chaahte hai mudjhe ,
kyu mitana chaahte hai mudjhe,
Mudjhe chain se djine nahie dete hai,
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Tere galti ki sazaa mudjhe dete hai

tere ghar ke log …


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wah reshma ji. kis saadagi aur sachchaee se itna dil todane waalaa fasaanaa keh diya. bahaut khoob. daad aur dua ke saath. zarraa
   
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