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Chand sher - 13th March 2003, 02:48 AM

Dosto, Phir se aap logo ke saamne aane ki himmat ki hai.



"Khatum yeh silsila, na umar bhar ho
Tumhari ho surat, aur hamari nazar ho"


" Dil jalega tho zamane mei ujala hoga
Nazaara jannat ke sitaron se nirala hoga"


" Dil dharaktha hai tho, pehro nahi sone deta
Neend aatee hai tho, ehsaas jaga deta hai"





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13th March 2003, 12:49 PM

there is a sweetness. and softness in your shayri which should not be lost.well said .keep it up....


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Thanks - 14th March 2003, 04:20 AM

Mumtaz ji,
Aap bhi kuch kam sweet nahin hai. Doosre ki tareef karne ke liye bahut bara dil hona chahiye, aur wo khuda ne aapko diya hai.
Tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya.

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